14LuckytoBeAlive

一、請根據(jù)兩個(gè)提示句進(jìn)行故事續(xù)寫，150詞左右。

Maria,agentle,soft-spokenwomanofseventy,hadalwaysmanagedtoviewtheworldwitha

child'ssenseofwonderment.Shegreetedthedawnofeachnewdaywiththebrightnessofthesun

itselfandfoundjoyinthesmallestofthings.

Marialivedaloneinarun-down（破敗的）neighborhoodinDeerfieldBeach,Florida.Oneday

whileouttendingthesmallgardeninfrontofherhome,Mariahadbeeninjuredinadrive-byshooting.

Thebullethadgonethroughherleg.Cryingoutinseverepain,shehaddroppedtothesidewalk.When

themailmanfoundherunconscious（失去知覺的）nearlyanhourlater,herinjuredleghadbeen

bleedingheavily.She'dmadeittothehospitaljustintimeandlater,thedoctorhadtoldMariashe

wasluckytobealive.

Returninghome,Mariadidn'tfeelsolucky.Beforetheshooting,theelderlywomanhadalways

beengratefulthatshewashealthyforherage.Nowjustgettingthedailymailrequiredahugeeffort.In

addition,hermedicalbillsweremountingalarmingly,straining（過度使用）herlowincome.Anold

womanwithnothingtodoandnowheretogo,Mariafeltfrightened,aloneanddefeatedforthefirst

timeinherlife.

WhenMaria'sfriendVeracametopickupherforhercheckup（體檢）atthemedicalcenter,she

hardlyrecognizedheroldfriend.Maria'ssoftbrowneyesheldahaunting（嚇人難忘的）sadness.

TheywerealittleearlyforMaria9sappointment,sototrytocheerupMaria,Veratookalonger,

morescenicroute.TheywerestoppedataredlightwhenMariasuddenlyshoutedinterror."Lookat

thatcat!Ifstryingtorunacrossthestreet!"

Veralookeduptoseeasmallblack-and-whitecatboundingoutintothemiddleoftraffic.Both

womenscreamedastheysawonecar,thenanother,andfinallyathird,hitthecat.Thecatlaywithout

moving,itssmallbodyflung（猛扔）intothegrass.Carsslowed,butnoonestoppedtohelp.

“Wemustsavethatpoorcreature,wsaidMaria.

Whilethecatwasattheclinic,Mariawenttocheckonhimeveryday.

二、原作品讀

Maria,agentle,soft-spokenwomanofseventy,hadalwaysmanagedtoviewtheworldwitha

child'ssenseofwonderment.Shegreetedthedawnofeachnewdaywiththebrightnessofthesun

itselfandfoundjoyinthesmallestofthings.

Awidow,Marialivedaloneinarun-downneighborhoodinDeerfieldBeach,Florida.Oneday

whileouttendingthesmallgardeninfrontofhermodesthome,Mariahadbeeninjuredinadrive-by

shooting.Thebullethadpiercedthroughherskin.Cryingoutinagony,shehaddroppedtothe

sidewalk.Whenthemailmanfoundherunconsciousnearlyanhourlater,herinjuredleghadbeen

bleedingprofusely.She'dmadeittothehospitaljustintimeandlater,thedoctorhadtoldMariashe

wasluckytobealive.

Returninghome,Mariadidn'tfeelsolucky.Beforetheshooting,theelderlywomanhadalways

beengratefulthatshewashealthyforherage.NowjustgettingthedailymailrequiredaHerculean

effort.Andalthoughshehadwatchedtheneighborhooddeteriorate,somehowthingshadseemed

safeinthedaylight-butnotanymore.Forthefirsttimeinherlife,Mariafeltfrightened,aloneand

vulnerable.

“Ifeeldefeated/9shehadtoldherfriendVera."I'mjustanoldwomanwithnothingtodoand

nowheretogo.”

WhenVeracametopickupMariaforhercheckupatthemedicalcenter,shehardlyrecognized

heroldfriend.

TheywerealittleearlyforMaria9sappointment,sototrytocheerupMaria,Veratookalonger,

morescenicroute.

TheywerestoppedataredlightwhenMariasuddenlyshrieked."Lookatthatcat!Ifstryingto

runacrossthestreet!"

Veralookeduptoseeasmallblack-and-whitecatboundingoutintothemiddleoftraffic.Both

womenscreamedastheysawonecar,thenanother,andfinallyathird,hitthecat.Thecatlay

motionless,itssmallbodyflungintothegrass.Carsslowed,butnoonestoppedtohelp.

“Wemustsavethatpoorcreature,"saidMaria.

Verapulledover,gotoutofthecarandwenttothehurtanimal.Miraculously,itwasstillalive,

butbadlyinjured.

“Takemyjacketandwrapthekittyinit,“saidMaria.Veracarefullyputthecatontheseatbetween

them.ItlookedupatMariaandgaveheraplaintive,barelyaudible-meow.

"Everythingwillbeallright,mylittlefriend,"Mariasaidtearfully.

Findingananimalclinic,theywentinsideandtoldthereceptionistwhathadhappened.

'Tmsorry,“shesaid,“butwecannotacceptstrayanimals."

Itwasthesameatthenextclinic.Finally,atthethirdclinic,akindveterinarian.Dr.Susan

Shanahan,agreedtohelpandquicklystartedworkingonthecat.

“Thislittleguyisluckytobealive,"shetoldMariaandVera.

Whilethecatwasattheclinic,Mariawenttocheckonhimeveryday.Shespokesoftlytohim

andgentlystrokedhischinwithherlittlefinger.Asthedayspassed,thecatbegantopurrandthe

sparklereturnedtoMaria'seyes.

Thedayarrivedforthecattocomehome.AsexcitedasalittlegirlonChristmasmorning,Maria

smiledbrightlyasshewalkedintotheclinictopickhimup.

“Whathaveyoudecidedtonamethecat?”askedDr.Shanahan.

Cradlingthecatinherarms,Mariaansweredhappily,“I'mgoingtocallhimLucky,because

togetherwehavefoundanewlife/9

I.Wordsforunderstanding（加粗的單詞為熟記單詞，其它認(rèn)識即可）：

單詞音標(biāo)詞性釋義單詞音標(biāo)詞性釋義

manage「maenidV.設(shè)法做成recognize「rek.0g.naiz]V.認(rèn)出

3d]

dawn[do：n]n.黎明;拂曉scenic['si：nik]adj.風(fēng)景優(yōu)美的

run-downLrAn'daadj.衰敗的shriekUri：k]vi.尖叫

Un]

tend[tend]v.照料bound[baund]Vi.跳躍著跑

injure「Ind3a(rv.傷害scream[skri:m]V.尖叫

)]

drive-by['draivadj.飛車槍擊motionless「moujnhs]adj.一動不動的

bal]的

bullet['bulit]n.子彈fling[flig]vt.猛扔

pierce[pias]vi.穿透miraculousl[mi'raekjalssadv.奇跡般地

yli]

agony['aegsni]n.極大的痛苦plaintive['pleintiv]adj.哀怨的

unconscio[An'kDnJadj.昏迷的audible[10:dobl]adj.聽得見的

us0S]

bleed[bli:d]V.流血meow[mi'au]n.嘀（貓叫聲）

profusely[pro'fju：siadv.大量地stray[strei]a（y.走失的

i]

require[n*kwaiorV.需要veterinarian[,vetori1nen.獸醫(yī)

]orion]

Herculean[.h3:kjuadj.艱巨的stroke[strouk]vt.輕撫

'li：on]

deteriorate[di'tloriovi.變壞;惡化chin[tfIn]n.下巴

reit]

frighteneda<y.害怕的purr[p3：(r)]vi.（貓）愜意地打呼

['frai.tond]嚕

vulnerable['VAIn0r0badj.脆弱的sparkle['spa：kl]n.閃爍（或閃耀）的

1]光

checkup['tf￡k,n.檢查;體檢cradle['kreidl]vt.輕輕抱著

AP]

短語釋義短語釋義

pullover靠路邊停車makeit獲得成功；準(zhǔn)時(shí)到達(dá)

makeittothehospital及時(shí)趕到醫(yī)院takesbaside把某人拉到一邊

III.Readtoappreciate:FillintheblanksaccordingtoChinesetranslations

1.她痛苦地哭著，倒在人行道上。

Cryingout,shehaddroppedtothesidewalk.(Emotion+Action)

2.在將近一個(gè)小時(shí)后,郵遞員發(fā)現(xiàn)她昏迷，受傷的腿一直在大量出血。

Whenthemailmanfoundhernearlyanhourlater,herinjuredleghadbeenbleeding

profusely.(Action)

3.當(dāng)瑪麗亞突然尖叫起來時(shí)，他們在紅燈前停了下來。

TheywerestoppedataredlightwhenMariasuddenly.

4.貓一動不動地躺在地上，它的小身體被扔到草地上。

Thecatlaymotionless,itssmallbodyintothegrass.(Action)

5.維拉把車停在路邊，下了車，走向受傷的動物。

Vera,gotoutofthecarandwenttothehurtanimal.(Action)

6.她溫柔地對他說話，用小指輕輕地?fù)崦南掳汀?/p>

Shespokesoftlytohimandhischinwithherlittlefinger.(Action)

7.瑪麗亞把貓抱在懷里，高興地回答著……

thecatinherarms,Mariaansweredhappily.(Action+Emotion)

8.瑪麗亞有生以來第一次感到害怕、孤獨(dú)和脆弱。

Forthefirsttimeinherlife,Mariafeltfrightened,aloneand.(Emotion)

9.意識到這有多么重要，沙納漢博士跪著握住瑪麗亞的手。

howimportantthiswas,Dr.ShanahanandtookMaria'shandsinhers.

(Thinking+Action)

10.瑪麗亞像小女孩一樣興奮，在圣誕節(jié)早上，她燦爛地笑著走進(jìn)診所去接他了。

AsexcitedasalittlegirlonChristmasmorning,Mariaasshewalked

intotheclinictopickhimup.(Emotion+Action)

IVLanguageinuse

(l).Applicationofthekeywords:FillintheblanksaccordingtotheChinesesentences

1.埃迪忙著照料花園。Eddiekepthimselfbusythegarden.

2.她感到怒火從心頭燃起。Shefelttheangerupwithinher.

3.他沖出水面，使勁吸氣。Hebursttothesurface,forair.

4.我的心因期待而怦怦跳。Myheartwithexpectations.

5.湯姆跪了下來，看著米格的眼睛。TomandlookedintoMigueFseyes.

6.她的眼睛里閃爍著激動的光芒。Hereyeswithexcitement.

7.她猛地/突然摟住他的脖子。Sheherarmsaroundhisneck.

8.他跌倒在地，模模糊糊地覺得塔拉就站在他旁邊。

Hefell,andwasvaguelyofTarastandingoverhim.

（2）.Imitationofthescenes

1.Cryingoutinagony,shehaddroppedtothesidewalk.Sensinghowterriblethesituationwas,she

wasawarethatherinjuredleghadbeenbleedingprofusely.Besides,herhandsshookwithfear.She

feltfrightened,aloneandvulnerable.uIfeeldefeated/9shehadtoldherfriendVera.66I'mhelpless

withnothingtodoandnowheretogo.”

仿寫：請描寫考試失敗后沮喪的心情。（多場景適用）

2.Whilethecatwasattheclinic,Mariawenttocheckonhimeveryday.Shespokesoftlytohimand

gentlystrokedhischinwithherlittlefinger.Asthedayspassed,thecatbegantopurrandthesparkle

returnedtoMaria'seyes.

模仿：（我是轉(zhuǎn)校生，對新環(huán)境非常不熟悉）Emily每天和我交流，帶我參加各種聚會和學(xué)校

活動。后來，我開始適應(yīng)學(xué)校和團(tuán)體，臉上笑容又多了起來。

Key:

一、讀后續(xù)寫

Verapulledover,gotoutofthecarandwenttothehurtanimal.Miraculously,itwasstillalive,

butbadlyinjured.Findingananimalclinic,theywentinsideandtoldthereceptionistwhathad

happened.Thereceptionistsaidsorrytothembecausetheycouldnotacceptanimalsthathaveno

owner.Itwasthesameatthenextclinic.Finally,atthethirdclinic,akindvet,agreedtohelpand

quicklystartedworkingonthecat.ThevettoldMariaandVerathatthislittleguywasluckytobe

alive.

Whilethecatwasattheclinic,Mariawenttocheckonhimeveryday.Shespokesoftlyto

himandgentlytouchedhischinwithherlittlefinger.Asthedayspassed,thecatbegantoutteraquiet

buthappylowvoiceandthehappinessreturnedtoMaria'seyes.Thedayarrivedforthecattocome

home.Asexcitedasalittlegirl,Mariasmiledbrightlyasshewalkedinto