2025年高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作二輪專(zhuān)題01提高詞句表達(dá)

能力的技巧（練習(xí)）（解析版）專(zhuān)題01提高詞

句表達(dá)能力的技巧

目錄

?考點(diǎn)提高詞句表達(dá)能力的技巧-----------------------------------------------------------2頁(yè)

一、提升句子表達(dá)練習(xí)-------------------------------------------------------------------------2頁(yè)

I.根據(jù)提示提升句子--------------------------------------------------------------------------2頁(yè)

II.用高級(jí)詞匯或短語(yǔ)替換普通詞語(yǔ)-------------------------------------------------------------3頁(yè)

III用高級(jí)句式升級(jí)下列句子-------------------------------------------------------------------4頁(yè)

二、應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作-------------------------------------------------------------------------------6頁(yè)

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■考點(diǎn)01提高詞句表達(dá)能力的技巧

一、提升句子表達(dá)練習(xí)

I.根據(jù)提示提升句子

l.Ourannualautumnouting,（以“通過(guò)勞動(dòng)學(xué)習(xí)”為主題），willbeheld

atthepracticaltrainingbaseonSeptember20th.（with介詞短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ)）

2.Andthereisawidevarietyofactivities（像這里春節(jié)期間的龍舟舞）.（列

舉活動(dòng)讓表達(dá)豐富）

3.Tofacilitatemovementforthemselvesandthefuturegeneration,Yugong,（臨近90多歲

了）,wasdeterminedtoremovethemountains,（一鏟一鏟地）.（運(yùn)用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ)和方式

狀語(yǔ)耳加細(xì)節(jié)，豐富內(nèi)容）

4.1ntheafternoon,we41traveltothecountrysidewhereyoucanenjoy（美麗

的風(fēng)景和各種有機(jī)食品）.（用并列連詞both...and…提升句子品質(zhì)）

5.AsfarasIknow,traditionalChineseculture,（包括剪紙藝

術(shù)、古箏等），hasitsuniquecharacteristics.（用介詞including列舉具體內(nèi)容，讓表達(dá)更具體）

6.（已經(jīng)審閱了你的關(guān)于“保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物”的海報(bào)設(shè)計(jì)競(jìng)賽

的初稿），I'mwritingtooffersomesuggestionsforimprovement.（用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)的完成式提升句子品質(zhì)）

7.WeholdthefirmbeliefthatthevisitorswillknowmoreabouttraditionalChineseculture，

_________________________________________________________________（所以我希望我們學(xué)生在業(yè)余時(shí)間

讀更多關(guān)于中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的書(shū)籍）.（增加希望）

8.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldreviewthearticleandprovideanysuggestionsorcorrections

（提高其整體的清晰度、連貫性和

準(zhǔn)確性）.（用不定式作定語(yǔ)增加細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，讓表達(dá)更具體）

9.Thisactivitywashighlythoughtof,（因?yàn)檫@不

僅產(chǎn)生了作用，而且提高了學(xué)生的參與意識(shí)）.（增加原因）

10.WhenIcamebackhome,Isharedmyexperienceswithmyparents.

（他們?yōu)槲腋械津湴粒?（增加評(píng)價(jià)）

11.Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavethe

earth_（例如，我們可以使用可回

收的塑料袋代替塑料袋，拒絕使用一次性產(chǎn)品，節(jié)約能源）.（用forexample舉例增加細(xì)節(jié)）

12.Atlast,IhopetoplayChinesechesswithyou_____________________________________________________

（這樣我們就可以一起取得進(jìn)步）.（增加結(jié)果）

13.Asforme,［，mpassionateaboutbasketball______________________________________________________

（因?yàn)樗o了我力量去面對(duì)我生活中的挑戰(zhàn)）.（增加原因）

14.YoucanseesomefamouspaintersdrawingChinesepaintingsonthespot,

（我想，這肯定會(huì)吸引游客的目光用非限

制性定語(yǔ)從句增加擴(kuò)展細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容）

15.（常言道）,allworkandnoplaymakesjackadullboy,soyoucanrelieve

yourselffromtheheavystudyloadsfromthis.（用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句增強(qiáng)表達(dá)效果）

【答案】

1.withthethemeof"'LearningthroughLabor"2.likethedragondanceduringtheSpringFestivalhere

3.approachinghis90s;shovelbyshovel4.boththebeautifulsceneryandvariouskindsoforganicfood

5.includingpaper-cutting,guzhengandsoon6.Havingreviewedyourinitialdraftfortheposterdesign

competitionon"'ProtectingWildlife^^7.soIhopewestudentsshouldreadmorebooksabouttraditionalChinese

cultureinoursparetime8.toimproveitsoverallclarity,coherence,andaccuracy9.becauseitnotonlymadea

difference,butalsoraisedthestudents5senseofparticipation10.Andtheywereveryproudofme11.Forexample,

wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,refusetousesingle-useproductsandsaveenergy12.sothat

wecanmakeprogresstogether13.sinceithasbeengivingmestrengthtoconfrontthechallengesinmylife

14.whichIthink,willcertainlyattractthevisitors9eyes15.Asthesayinggoes

II.用高級(jí)詞匯或短語(yǔ)替換普通詞語(yǔ)

l.I'mveryprivilegedtodelivermyspeechhere.ThetopicisaboutGrowUpinLabor.

—I'm_________privilegedtodelivermyspeechhere.ThetopicisaboutGrowUpinLabor.

2.Therestandsabigstadiuminourschool,wheremanysportsactivitiesareheldthere.

—Therestandsabigstadiuminourschool,wheresportsactivitiesareheldthere.

3.Ibelievethatourcountrywillbecomestrongerandstronger.

—Iourcountrywillbecomestrongerandstronger.

4.1wouldappreciateitifyoucanconsidermyslogan.

一Iwouldappreciateitifyoucan.

5.Rememberthatyoushouldavoidgettinghurtduringthetrainingandkeepabalanceddiet.

—thatyoushouldavoidgettinghurtduringthetrainingandkeepabalanceddiet.

6.Aimedtohelpustoknowtheimportanceofworking,anactivitythemed“WorkingisthemostbeautifuF,was

heldlastweek.

—Aimedtohelpustotheimportanceofworking,anactivitythemed“Workingisthemost

beautiful“washeldlastweek.

7.Surroundedbygreentrees,thefarmisatthefootofthehillnearourschool.

-^?Surroundedbygreentrees,thefarmthefootofthehillnearourschool.

8.1shouldbefreeanytimeafterschoolnextweek.

—Ishouldbeanytimeafterschoolnextweek.

9.Asscheduled,weparticipatedinseveralgoodactivities.

一Asscheduled,weparticipatedinseveralactivities.

lO.Hearingthebadnews,theboycriedsadly.

—Hearingthebadnews,theboysadly.

【答案】1.morethan2.alargenumberof/varietiesof3.amconvincedthat4.takemysloganinto

consideration5.Keepinmind6.beawareof7.islocatedat8.available9.instructivelO.burstinto

tears

ni.用高級(jí)句式升級(jí)下列句子

1.Theydidn，trealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectionuntilallthefishintheriverdied.

—R到裝句）

一?雖調(diào)句）

2.Again,Isincerelyinviteyoutogototheexhibitionwithme.Theexhibitionwillleaveadeepimpressiononyou.

一Again,Isincerelyinviteyoutogototheexhibitionwithme,.（定語(yǔ)從句）

3.Theenvironmentwillneverimproveuntileverybodytakescareofit.

—_________________________________________________________________R到裝句）

4.Thetournotonlyinstilledmewithasenseofprideinourscientificadvances,butitalsoplantedinmyhearta

seedofscientificexploration.

-.（倒

裝句）

5.LastweekIengagedinanunforgettableactivity——“ShowGratitudetoOurSchoolthroughLabor^^which

wasorganizedbytheStudentUnion.

一.（過(guò)

去分詞短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ)）

6.IrealizedtheimportanceofEnglishwhenIenteredseniorhighschool.

一______________________________________________________________________________________.（強(qiáng)

調(diào)句）

7.Therearealotoftreesandflowersinourschoolandourschoollookslikeabiggarden.

->L（with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)）

8.Forexample,therearehugeamountsofreferencebooks.Iamoftenconfusedtochoosefromthem.

-.（定語(yǔ)從

句）

9.Wecanenjoythepleasureindoinghouseworkwhenwereallyrealizethegreatsignificanceofdoingit.

T__________________________________________________________________________________R到裝句）

lO.Youshouldmakegooduseofthetimetoimprovemyperformanceatschoolandpreparemyselfwellfor

thefuture.

-：（用虛擬

語(yǔ)氣提出建議）

【答案】l.Notuntilallthefishintheriverdieddidtheyrealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection;It

wasnotuntilallthefishintheriverdiedthattheyrealizedtheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection2.which

willleaveadeepimpressiononyou3.Notuntileverybodytakescareofitwilltheenvironmentimprove4.Not

onlydidthetourinstillmewithasenseofprideinourscientificadvances,butitalsoplantedinmyheartaseedof

scientificexploration5.LastweekIengagedinanunforgettableactivity——“ShowGratitudetoOurSchool

throughLabor“organizedbytheStudentUnion.6.1twaswhenIenteredseniorhighschoolthatIrealizedthe

importanceofEnglish7.Withalotoftreesandflowersinourschool,ourschoollookslikeabiggarden8.For

example,therearehugeamountsofreferencebooksfromwhichIamoftenconfusedtochoose9.Onlywhenwe

reallyrealizethegreatsignificanceofdoinghouseworkcanweenjoythepleasureindoingit.lO.IfIwereyou,I

wouldcertainlymakegooduseofthetimetoimprovemyperformanceatschoolandpreparemyselfwellforthe

future.

二、應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作

1.(2024?福建省漳州市高中畢業(yè)班第二次質(zhì)量檢測(cè))假定你是學(xué)校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部負(fù)責(zé)人李華。你的英國(guó)外教

Andrew詢(xún)問(wèn)你在接下來(lái)的課程中是否需要介紹一些有關(guān)英國(guó)的歷史知識(shí)。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封郵件回復(fù)他。內(nèi)容如

下：

(1)你的態(tài)度；

(2)你的理由；

(3)你的建議。

注意：(1)詞數(shù)80左右；

(2)可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【參考范文】

DearAndrew,

ThankyouforyouraskingmeaboutwhethertointroducesomeknowledgeofBritishhistoryinourupcoming

lessons.However,Ibelievethatitisn'tnecessary.

Ourfocusshouldbeonimprovingstudents5Englishlanguageskills.WhilelearningaboutBritishcultureis

interesting,itmaynotbedirectlyrelevanttotheirlanguagedevelopment.Therefore,Isuggestwecontinuewithour

currentlessonplan.

However,ifthereisaspecificaspectofBritishhistorythatrelatestothelanguageorculture,wecancertainly

incorporateitintoourlessons.Butoverall,ourprimaryobjectiveshouldbetoimprovestudents9language

proficiency.

Bestregards.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國(guó)外教Andrew寫(xiě)一封郵件，就是否需要在接下來(lái)的課

程中介紹一些有關(guān)英國(guó)的歷史知識(shí)表明態(tài)度并提出建議。

1.詞匯積累

感謝：thank-appreciate

應(yīng)該：should一besupposedto

集中于：focuson—concentrateon

建議：suggest—advise

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：ThankyouforyouraskingmeaboutwhethertointroducesomeknowledgeofBritishhistoryinour

upcominglessons.

拓展句：ThankyouforyouraskingmeaboutwhetheryoushouldintroducesomeknowledgeofBritishhistoryin

ourupcominglessons.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]

However,Ibelievethatitisn'tnecessary,（運(yùn)用了that弓|導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句）

[高分句型2]

However,ifthereisaspecificaspectofBritishhistorythatrelatestothelanguageorculture,wecancertainly

incorporateitintoourlessons.（運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句和that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）

2.（2024?湖南省長(zhǎng)沙市高三上學(xué)期1月新高考適應(yīng)性考試）為了豐富校園生活，你校將組織迎新年音樂(lè)會(huì)，

請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一則通知，刊登在學(xué)校英文網(wǎng)站上。內(nèi)容包括：

1.舉辦時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；

2.活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容；

3.活動(dòng)的意義。

注意：詞數(shù)80左右。

Notice

【參考范文】

Notice

Aimedatenrichingourlifeoncampusandspreadingourtraditionalculture,anewyearconcertwillbeheld

ontheschoolsportsfieldnextmonth.WewillinvitetheBeijingChineseTraditionalMusicBandtogivea

performance.Certainly,weneedourownperformers,too.Anyonewithmusicaltalentcanattend.Wearealso

puttingtogetherachoirtosingwiththeband.Thisisawonderfulchanceforyoutosingwithmusicstars,which

canmakeyourelaxedandhappy.Thosewhowanttohelpoutcandosomevoluntarywork.Volunteersofallkinds

arewelcome.Don'thesitatetojoinus.Lefsjointogethertomakethenewyearconcertthebestever.

【解析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫(xiě)一則關(guān)于學(xué)校即將組織迎新年音樂(lè)會(huì)的通知。

1.詞匯積累

目的是做某事：（be）aimedatdoing—beintendedtodo

確實(shí)：certainly一withoutdoubt

極好的：wonderful-excellent

機(jī)會(huì)：chance一opportunity

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Aimedatenrichingourlifeoncampusandspreadingourtraditionalculture,anewyearconcertwillbeheld

ontheschoolsportsfieldnextmonth.

拓展句：Anewyearconcertwillbeheldontheschoolsportsfieldnextmonth,whichaimstoenrichourlifeon

campusandspreadingourtraditionalculture.

【點(diǎn)睛"高分句型1]Thisisawonderfulchanceforyoutosingwithmusicstars,whichcanmakeyourelaxedand

happy.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）

[高分句型2]Thosewhowanttohelpoutcandosomevoluntarywork.（運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句）

專(zhuān)題01提高詞句表達(dá)能力的技巧

目錄

?考點(diǎn)提高詞句表達(dá)能力的技巧-----------------------------------------------------------2頁(yè)

一、提升句子表達(dá)練習(xí)-------------------------------------------------------------------------2頁(yè)

I.根據(jù)提示提升句子--------------------------------------------------------------------------2頁(yè)

II.用高級(jí)詞匯或短語(yǔ)替換普通詞語(yǔ)-------------------------------------------------------------3頁(yè)

IIL用高級(jí)句式升級(jí)下列句子-------------------------------------------------------------------4頁(yè)

二、應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作-------------------------------------------------------------------------------5頁(yè)

考點(diǎn)01提高詞句表達(dá)能力的技巧

一、提升句子表達(dá)練習(xí)

I.根據(jù)提示提升句子

l.Ourannualautumnouting,（以“通過(guò)勞動(dòng)學(xué)習(xí)”為主題），willbeheld

atthepracticaltrainingbaseonSeptember20th.（with介詞短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ)）

2.Andthereisawidevarietyofactivities（像這里春節(jié)期間的龍舟舞）.（列

舉活動(dòng)讓表達(dá)豐富）

3.Tofacilitatemovementforthemselvesandthefuturegeneration,Yugong,（I臨近90多歲

了）,wasdeterminedtoremovethemountains,（一鏟一鏟地）.（運(yùn)用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ)和方式

狀語(yǔ)歸加細(xì)節(jié)，豐富內(nèi)容）

4.Intheafternoon,we'lltraveltothecountrysidewhereyoucanenjoy（美麗

的風(fēng)景和各種有機(jī)食品）.（用并列連詞both...and…提升句子品質(zhì)）

5.AsfarasIknow,traditionalChineseculture,（包括剪紙藝

術(shù)、古箏等），hasitsuniquecharacteristics.（用介詞including列舉具體內(nèi)容，讓表達(dá)更具體）

6.（已經(jīng)審閱了你的關(guān)于“保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物”的海報(bào)設(shè)計(jì)競(jìng)賽

的初稿），I'mwritingtooffersomesuggestionsforimprovement.（用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)的完成式提升句子品質(zhì)）

7.WeholdthefirmbeliefthatthevisitorswillknowmoreabouttraditionalChineseculture,

（所以我希望我們學(xué)生在業(yè)余時(shí)間

讀更多關(guān)于中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的書(shū)籍）.（增加希望）

8.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldreviewthearticleandprovideanysuggestionsorcorrections

（提高其整體的清晰度、連貫性和

準(zhǔn)確性）.（用不定式作定語(yǔ)增加細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，讓表達(dá)更具體）

9.Thisactivitywashighlythoughtof,（因?yàn)檫@不

僅產(chǎn)生了作用，而且提高了學(xué)生的參與意識(shí)）.（增加原因）

10.WhenIcamebackhome,Isharedmyexperienceswithmyparents.

（他們?yōu)槲腋械津湴粒?（增加評(píng)價(jià)）

11.Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavethe

earth_（例如，我們可以使用可回

收的塑料袋代替塑料袋，拒絕使用一次性產(chǎn)品，節(jié)約能源）.（用forexample舉例增加細(xì)節(jié)）

12.Atlast,IhopetoplayChinesechesswithyou_____________________________________________________

（這樣我們就可以一起取得進(jìn)步）.（增加結(jié)果）

13.Asforme,［，mpassionateaboutbasketball_____________________________________________________

（因?yàn)樗o了我力量去面對(duì)我生活中的挑戰(zhàn)）.（增加原因）

14.YoucanseesomefamouspaintersdrawingChinesepaintingsonthespot,

__（我想，這肯定會(huì)吸引游客的目光）.（用非限

制性定語(yǔ)從句增加擴(kuò)展細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容）

15.（常言道）,allworkandnoplaymakesjackadullboy,soyoucanrelieve

yourselffromtheheavystudyloadsfromthis.（用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句增強(qiáng)表達(dá)效果）

II.用高級(jí)詞匯或短語(yǔ)替換普通詞語(yǔ)

l.I'mveryprivilegedtodelivermyspeechhere.ThetopicisaboutGrowUpinLabor.

—I'm_________privilegedtodelivermyspeechhere.ThetopicisaboutGrowUpinLabor.

2.Therestandsabigstadiuminourschool,wheremanysportsactivitiesareheldthere.

—Therestandsabigstadiuminourschool,wheresportsactivitiesareheldthere.

3.Ibelievethatourcountrywillbecomestrongerandstronger.

—Iourcountrywillbecomestrongerandstronger.

4.1wouldappreciateitifyoucanconsidermyslogan.

—Iwouldappreciateitifyoucan.

5.Rememberthatyoushouldavoidgettinghurtduringthetrainingandkeepabalanceddiet.

7thatyoushouldavoidgettinghurtduringthetrainingandkeepabalanceddiet.

6.Aimedtohelpustoknowtheimportanceofworking,anactivitythemed“WorkingisthemostbeautifuF,was

heldlastweek.

—Aimedtohelpustotheimportanceofworking,anactivitythemed“Workingisthemost

beautifuF,washeldlastweek.

7.Surroundedbygreentrees,thefarmisatthefootofthehillnearourschool.

—Surroundedbygreentrees,thefarmthefootofthehillnearourschool.

8.1shouldbefreeanytimeafterschoolnextweek.

—Ishouldbeanytimeafterschoolnextweek.

9.Asscheduled,weparticipatedinseveralgoodactivities.

一Asscheduled,weparticipatedinseveralactivities.

lO.Hearingthebadnews,theboycriedsadly.

—Hearingthebadnews,theboysadly.

ni.用高級(jí)句式升級(jí)下列句子

1.Theydidn，trealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectionuntilallthefishintheriverdied.

一（倒裝句）

—（強(qiáng)調(diào)句）

2.Again,Isincerelyinviteyoutogototheexhibitionwithme.Theexhibitionwillleaveadeepimpressiononyou.

一Again,Isincerelyinviteyoutogototheexhibitionwithme,.（定語(yǔ)從句）

3.Theenvironmentwillneverimproveuntileverybodytakescareofit.

一