書面表達(dá)高分策略NMET書面表達(dá)評(píng)分原則1、先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定檔次。第五檔：21~25分第四檔：16~20分第三檔：11~15分第二檔：6~10分第一檔：0~5分語言地道，規(guī)范覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)2、主要內(nèi)容：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；詞匯和語法的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性；上下文的連貫；語言的得體性應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯有效地使用了語句間的連接成分3、拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。4、詞數(shù)少于100和多于140的，從總分中減去2分。5、如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。Howcanwewritesuchanexcellentcompositioninlimitedtime?AsampleTipOne:謀篇布局考試大綱中明確規(guī)定少寫提綱或者篡改提綱是要嚴(yán)重扣分的，因此依據(jù)提綱來謀篇布局成為寫作的首要任務(wù)?！翱?分-總”的三段式結(jié)構(gòu)是高考寫作的萬能結(jié)構(gòu)。TooshortToolongunplannedPerfectTothepointNomistakesClearstructureGoodhandwritingTiptwo:遣詞造句

遣詞造句是寫作的基礎(chǔ)。既要注意用詞的準(zhǔn)確無誤，又要注意句式的豐富多變，還要注意語句之間的連接自然合乎邏輯。

在整篇文章中，避免單詞簡單重復(fù),多使用高級(jí)詞匯.

●詞匯要準(zhǔn)1.喜歡，喜愛Inordertoreleasethestress,35%ofuslikelisteningtomusic,45%likeplayingfootball.whiletherestliketurningtoteachers.likeLike,love,adore,enjoy,beinterestedin,befondof,bekeenon,bedelightedin,takedelightin,beinto,Inordertoreleasethestress,35%ofusenjoylisteningtomusic,45%arefondofplayingfootball.whiletheresttakedelightinturningtoteachers.2.一….就…assoonasOn/upondoing,immediately,directly,instantly,themoment,theinstant,thesecond,assoonas,hardly..when,nosooner…than…他一到那里就打電話給父母.____hisarrivalthere,hephonedhisparents.=Hephonedhisparents__________________hearrivedthere.=Hephonedhisparents_________________hearrivedthere.=Hephonedhisparents__________________hearrivedthere.=________hadhearrivedthere______hephonedhisparents.=____________hadhearrivedthere_____hephonedhisparents.On/Uponimmediately/directly/instantlyassoonasthemoment//instant/secondHardlywhenNosoonerthan1.Learningaforeignlanguageisveryuseful.

Learningaforeignlanguageis____________.2.Ithankhimforhiskindnessandconsiderationsomuch.I____________hiskindnessandconsiderationsomuch.3.Iwanttogethelpfromyou.I_______________togethelpfromyou.4.Onhiswayhome,hefoundanoldmansittingbytheroad,lookingworried.Onhiswayhome,hefoundanoldman_______bytheroad,lookingworried.Practice:使用高級(jí)詞匯替換劃線部分的內(nèi)容ofgreatuseappreciateameager/anxiousseated5.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable._______________thegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.6.Weallthinkheisagreatman.Weall___________________him.7.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.___________hespoke,__________excitedhefelt.Practice:使用高級(jí)詞匯替換劃線部分的內(nèi)容thinkhighlyofThankstoThemorethemore●句式要變?cè)谡恼轮?，避免只使用一兩個(gè)句型，要靈活運(yùn)用各種語法結(jié)構(gòu)。運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝并最終獲得高分。Whatsb.usetoreleasethestressis…Sb.holdtheidea/point/viewthat…Whatsb.think/believe/supposeisthat…35%ofusthinkthatsportsareagoodwaytoreleasethestress.But45%

believethat

musicisagoodway,whichisgoodforus.Atlast,20%supposewe’dliketoturntoourteachersifconvenient.同位語從句主語從句表語從句1970年，周群飛出生在湖南省一個(gè)小山村,她非常聰明勤奮。雖然家里很窮，她卻意志堅(jiān)強(qiáng)。她初中畢業(yè)后，不得不放棄學(xué)業(yè)。從那以后，周群飛來到深圳，在深圳大學(xué)旁找了份工作。為了盡量多掌握謀生技能，她白天去打工，晚上去讀夜校。自助者天助。2003年，她成了藍(lán)思科技公司的創(chuàng)始人。是她自己的努力和她的團(tuán)隊(duì)的合作，使得她終于取得了成功?，F(xiàn)在據(jù)信她成了中國的女首富。Task:使用較豐富的句式1970年，周群飛出生在湖南省一個(gè)小山村,非常聰明勤奮。

ZhouQunfei,whowasborninasmallvillageinHunanprovincein1970,wasverysmartanddiligent.

方法一.把定語從句改為非謂語動(dòng)詞使句子更簡潔ZhouQunfei,borninasmallvillageinHunanprovincein1970,wasverysmartanddiligent.雖然她很貧窮，卻意志堅(jiān)強(qiáng)。Poorthough/asshewas,shewasstrong-willed/strong-determined.方法二.使用省略和倒裝使句子生動(dòng)Although/Thoughshewaspoor,shewasstrong-willed/strong-determined.Although/Thoughpoor,shewasstrong-willed/strong-determined.省略倒裝方法三.使用名言諺語自助者天助。Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.更多的名言諺語Practicemakesperfect.Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.Knowledgeispower.Romewasnotbuiltinaday.熟能生巧。事實(shí)勝于雄辯。知識(shí)就是力量。羅馬不是一日建成的。Itishereffort/diligenceandherteam’scooperationthatmakehersucceedfinally.

方法四.使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型使句子明朗是她自己的努力和她的團(tuán)隊(duì)的合作，使得她終于取得了成功。方法五.使用被動(dòng)語態(tài)，特殊句式據(jù)信她成了中國的女首富。ItisbelievedthatshehasbeentherichestfemaleinChina.類似句式Itissaidthat…Itisreportedthat…Itisannouncedthat…Itissuggestedthat…sampleZhouQunfei,borninasmallvillageinHunanprovincein1970,wasverysmartanddiligent.Poorasshewas,shewasstrong-willed.Aftergraduatingfromherjuniorschool,shehadnochoicebuttodropout.Fromthenon,shewenttoShenzhenandfoundajobnearShenzhenUniversity.Inordertolearnasmanylivingskillsas

possible,sheworkedinthedayandwenttonightschooltofurtherstudyatnight.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.In2003,shebecamethefounderofLansiTechnologyCompany.Itisherdiligenceandherteam’scooperationthatmakehersucceedfinally.NowitisbelievedthatshehasbeentherichestfemaleinChina.●邏輯要強(qiáng)從行文需要出發(fā)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞、過渡詞可以使文章增色不少。使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞能使整篇文章銜接自然、渾然一體、文句流暢。

1.

表示遞進(jìn);在同一話題上補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容另外，還有：What’smore;besides;also;furthermore;moreover;inaddition,aswellas2.表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系但是，然而，相反：高考大綱中常用的連接詞：but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;onthecontrary;nevertheless3.表示因果關(guān)系因?yàn)?，因此，所?4.表示條件關(guān)系如果，只要:

除非:否則:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;

if;oncondition(that);aslongasunlessor；otherwise

5.表示時(shí)間關(guān)系

當(dāng)…的時(shí)候:

在…之后:

在…之前:

直到:

一…就…:

后來，然后:

不久:

近來:

自從…:從那時(shí)起:when;while;as

after

beforeuntilassoonas;nosooner…than;hardly…whenlater;

afterwardssoon; lately;

recentlysincefromthenon表示特定的順序關(guān)系首先,最主要的:

其次:

然后:最后:7.換一種方法表述換句話說:

aboveall，inthefirstplace,mostimportantofall,firstlysecondly,secondthen;next

finally;intheend,lastbutnotleastinotherwords,thatistosay;8.進(jìn)行舉例說明例如，比如:

9.用于陳述事實(shí)實(shí)際上:

跟你說實(shí)話:

forinstance;forexample;like;suchasinfact;actually;asamatteroffacttotellyouthetruth;tobehonest,honestlyspeaking,franklyspeaking10.

對(duì)一個(gè)話題進(jìn)行總結(jié)總而言之，總的來說:

onthewhole;inshort;allinall;ingeneral;inaword,generallyspeakingPractice

請(qǐng)?zhí)钌锨‘?dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞或短語。XiaoMingwaswalkinginthestreet___________heheardsomeonecryforhelp.2.HeadvisedthatIhireacar__________Icouldtravelaroundinthewest.3.Itwasnotlong_______thepolicecame.___________heheardthecryforhelp,hejumpedintothewatertosavethegirl.wheninorderthatbeforeAssoonas

5.Doyouagreewithmyarrangement?________,dowritetomesoon.6.Isharedthecostofthegaswithmyfriends.___________,Isaved$80.7.Eatingsugarisbadforourteeth.________,itmaymakeusfat.Ifnot/soAsaresultWhat’sworseTipthree:語法正確文章的語法要求使用正確、準(zhǔn)確。文章中存在語法錯(cuò)誤必然會(huì)影響最終的得分。所以，大家在平時(shí)寫作時(shí)要養(yǎng)成時(shí)時(shí)提醒自己盡量不犯語法錯(cuò)誤的習(xí)慣，特別是要盡量避免由于粗心引起的錯(cuò)誤.

常見語法錯(cuò)誤分析1.句子謂語Thebuildinglikeamatchbox.Helpthemwhentheyareneedhelp.

SomestudentslikethebooksthatwaswrittenbyLuXun.Itisthebusinessman’sdeedthatreallymakepeopleangry.2.主謂不一致is/looksweremakes3.時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤

AbigcharityisheldtohelpthepoorsickstudentinC1220inourschoolyesterday.was4.短語誤用

Toourproud,ourcampusissobeautifulthatitlookslikeabiggarden.pride類似結(jié)構(gòu)toone’ssurprise;toone’ssatisfactiontoone’sexcitement5.冠詞誤用

WehadgoodtimeintheorangegardenonasunnySundaylastterm.a2015,04,19,ourschoolhappenedamovingthing.Therearemanystudentscomplainthatthehomeworkissoheavy.Tostudents,ownamobilephoneisfashionable.6.中式英語

AmovingthinghappenedinourschoolonApril19th,2015.complainingowningManywho嘗試使用高級(jí)詞匯代替一般詞匯增加表現(xiàn)力靈活使用多樣化的句型凸顯特色添加恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞和過渡詞

使行文流暢盡可能的避免出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤減少失分Homework

Polishyourwriting.

聯(lián)合國教科文組織某考察團(tuán)正在我國某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是接待人員,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示以發(fā)言稿的形式簡要介紹這個(gè)村的情況：

1)大小：近100戶人家，約500口人。

2)變化：過去很窮，78年后變化很大。人們生活比以前好多了。現(xiàn)已舊貌換新顏。

3)教育：原來的學(xué)校很小，現(xiàn)已經(jīng)過改建。新建的教學(xué)樓有4層，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有學(xué)齡兒童在此免費(fèi)就讀。注意：1）要點(diǎn)齊全，前后連貫。

2）詞數(shù)：100-120之間。Practice書面表達(dá)：Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.大家看，這篇書面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)正確，但語言平淡，表達(dá)方式單一，邏輯性差，它很難在考試的評(píng)分中得到較高檔次。如果我們能使用一些恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，盡量使用較高級(jí)、較復(fù)雜的語法結(jié)構(gòu)，就使這個(gè)平淡的文章有很大改觀，甚至?xí)兊酶?。①用介詞短語作定語或用含定語從句的主從復(fù)合句。②語句間缺少連接成分。③表現(xiàn)作者對(duì)現(xiàn)在鄉(xiāng)村的發(fā)展的喜悅心情，也起到承上啟下作用。④較高級(jí)詞匯。Ladiesandgentlemen,

Welcometoourschool!Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②Ithaschangedalotsince1978③.Peoplehere④arericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.①Thisvillageisasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.

Itusedtobeverypoor.②However,

ithaschangedalotsince1978③

andhasbeendevelopingveryfast.

Peoplehere④liveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.Nowitistaking

onanewlook.

Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤.⑥Nowithasbeenrebuilt.⑦Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys⑧.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.⑩Thankyou.

Inthepast,theschoolherewas