2025年小學(xué)英語(yǔ)畢業(yè)考試模擬試卷：英語(yǔ)寫作能力提升與思路拓展練習(xí)題考試時(shí)間：______分鐘總分：______分姓名：______寫作部分directions:pleasereadthefollowingsituationscarefullyandwriteashortpassageinEnglishaccordingtotheinstructions.Yourpassageshouldbenolessthan60words.Situation1:ImagineyouareLiHua.Yourpenpal,Tom,livesinCanada.HeoftenwritestoyouandasksaboutChinesefestivals.YoudecidetowritehimbackandtellhimabouttheSpringFestival,China'smostimportantfestival.Explainwhenitis,whatpeopleusuallydoduringthefestival(suchashaveabigmeal,giveredenvelopes,setofffireworks),andhowyoufeelaboutit.Situation2:Youandyourfriendsarediscussingyourfavoritehobbies.LiMinglikesplayingbasketballafterschool.WangWeienjoysreadingbooksinhissparetime.Whatisyourfavoritehobby?Writeaboutit.Telluswhyyoulikeitandhowoftenyoudoit.Also,mentionifyouhaveafriendwhosharesthishobbywithyou.SituationalWritingdirections:pleasereadthefollowingsituationandwriteashortpassageinEnglishaccordingtotheinstructions.Yourpassageshouldbenolessthan60words.Situation:SupposeyourschoolisgoingtoholdanEnglishspeechcontestnextmonth.Youareveryinterestedinitbutyouarenotverygoodatpublicspeaking.WriteashortlettertoyourschoolEnglishteacher,Mr.Smith.Inyourletter,youshould:1.Expressyourinterestinjoiningthecontest.2.TellMr.Smithyourmainconcern(e.g.,fearofmakingmistakes).3.Askforhisadviceorhelponhowtoprepareforthecontest.試卷答案寫作部分Situation1:DearTom,I'mverygladtowritetoyouabouttheSpringFestival,themostimportantfestivalinChina.ItusuallyhappensinlateJanuaryorearlyFebruaryaccordingtotheChineselunarcalendar.Duringthefestival,ourfamilyalwaysgetstogetherforabigdinner.Wewearnewclothesandgiveredenvelopeswithmoneytotheyoungones.Intheevening,wesetoffcolorfulfireworksandwatchtheSpringFestivalGalaonTV.IthinktheSpringFestivalisveryhappyandmeaningful.Situation2:Myfavoritehobbyisplayingthepiano.IstartedlearningitthreeyearsagoandIloveitverymuch.Iusuallypracticeforonehoureveryday,usuallyintheafternoonafterschool.It'sveryrelaxingtoplaypiano.Myfriend,ChenXiaoyu,alsolikesplayingthepiano.Weoftenplaytogetherandgiveeachotheradviceonhowtoimprove.Playingthepianohelpsmefeelcalmandhappy.SituationalWritingDearMr.Smith,IamwritingtoexpressmygreatinterestinjoiningtheEnglishspeechcontesttobeheldnextmonth.Ireallywanttoparticipateinit.However,IamalittleworriedbecauseI'mnotverygoodatpublicspeaking.MymainconcernisthatImightmakemistakeswhilespeakinginfrontofmanypeopleandgetnervous.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldgivemesomeadviceorhelponhowtoprepareforthecontest.Maybeyoucouldsuggestsomeusefulexercisesorsharesomeexperiencewithme.Ibelievewithyourguidance,Icanovercomemyfearandmakeagoodspeech.Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.Yours,LiHua每道題解析思路Situation1:*解析思路：1.審題：明確寫信對(duì)象（Tom）、主題（介紹春節(jié)）、身份（LiHua）。要求包含時(shí)間、活動(dòng)、感受，且不少于60詞。2.構(gòu)思：按照春節(jié)的時(shí)間、慶?；顒?dòng)和感受三個(gè)要點(diǎn)來構(gòu)思段落。時(shí)間點(diǎn)明是農(nóng)歷；活動(dòng)突出家庭團(tuán)聚、穿新衣、發(fā)紅包、放煙花等；感受表達(dá)節(jié)日快樂和意義。3.寫作：使用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫兔枋鰰r(shí)間（"Itusuallyhappensin..."）、活動(dòng)（"Duringthefestival,...""Wealways...""Intheevening..."）、感受（"Ithink..."）。注意使用連接詞（"and","During","Intheevening","So"）使段落連貫。4.檢查：檢查時(shí)態(tài)、詞匯、語(yǔ)法、句子結(jié)構(gòu)和書寫是否規(guī)范，確保字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)標(biāo)。Situation2:*解析思路：1.審題：明確寫作對(duì)象（假設(shè)讀者）、主題（介紹自己的愛好）、要求（說明愛好是什么、為什么喜歡、多久一次、是否有同伴）。2.構(gòu)思：圍繞“愛好”這一核心，分點(diǎn)構(gòu)思：①愛好是什么（彈鋼琴）；②何時(shí)進(jìn)行（每天下午放學(xué)后）；③頻率（一小時(shí)）；④原因（喜歡、放松）；⑤關(guān)聯(lián)（朋友也喜歡、一起練習(xí)）。3.寫作：使用簡(jiǎn)單句和稍復(fù)雜的從句（"Istartedlearningitthreeyearsago"）來描述。先點(diǎn)明愛好（"Myfavoritehobbyis..."），再按時(shí)間順序或邏輯順序介紹細(xì)節(jié)（"Iusuallypracticefor...""It'sveryrelaxing...""Myfriend..."）。使用連接詞（"and","but","because","also"）。4.檢查：檢查時(shí)態(tài)（一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)描述習(xí)慣）、主謂一致、詞匯準(zhǔn)確性、句子連貫性和書寫。SituationalWriting*解析思路：1.審題：明確寫信對(duì)象（Mr.Smith）、文體（書信）、身份（LiHua）、目的（表達(dá)參賽意愿、提出擔(dān)憂、請(qǐng)求建議）。要求涵蓋三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，不少于60詞。2.構(gòu)思：按照書信格式，分段構(gòu)思：①段：表達(dá)參賽意愿和稍顯的擔(dān)憂；②段：具體說明擔(dān)憂（緊張、怕犯錯(cuò)）；③段：明確提出請(qǐng)求（給建議或幫助），并表達(dá)感謝。3.寫作：使用書信常規(guī)開頭（"DearMr.Smith,..."）和結(jié)尾（"Yours,""LiHua"）。正文分段清晰：第一段說