Unit4Adversityandcourage作文講解人物描寫一、文體解讀本單元的寫作任務(wù)是描寫一個(gè)有毅力的人物，人物描寫屬于記敘文的范疇，主要記載人物生平事跡以及個(gè)作特征。描寫人物時(shí)，應(yīng)抓住其出生年月、主要事跡、人們的論等進(jìn)行敘述，一般按時(shí)間順序來(lái)寫。二、寫作要點(diǎn)開頭--總體介紹:對(duì)該人物進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)要地介紹，如年齡、性別、出生地、家庭、身份、職業(yè)、教育背景、外表、性格特點(diǎn)和特長(zhǎng)愛好等。主體--詳細(xì)介紹:介紹所描述人物的特點(diǎn)及生平大事(成就)，可以按照時(shí)間順序或在事件中的主次地位進(jìn)行描述。結(jié)尾--簡(jiǎn)要總結(jié):寫出對(duì)人物的評(píng)價(jià)和你的感受。在寫作時(shí)，一要注意內(nèi)容表述上的條理性，重點(diǎn)突出其主要的事跡;二要注意寫作時(shí)用第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主。三、常用句式1.Hewasborninapoorfamily,andonlyreceivedlimitededucationinhischildhood.他出生在一個(gè)貧窮的家庭,在童年時(shí)代接受了有限的教育。2.Growingupinasmallvillage,shebegantoreadatayoungage.在一個(gè)小村莊長(zhǎng)大，她很小就開始讀書。3.Sheisoneofthemostoutstandingpeopleinourtimes,她是當(dāng)代最杰出的人物之一。4,Heissooutgoingandeasytogetalongwiththathoisreadytomakefriendswithothers.因?yàn)樗荛_朗和容易相處，所以他喜歡交朋友。5.Hehasavarietyofinterests,includinglisteningtpopmusicandplayingbasketball.他興趣廣泛，喜歡聽流行音樂(lè)和打籃球。6.Hisscientificachievementhasshapedthefoundntionotoday'scommunication.他的科學(xué)成就為今天的通信奠定了基礎(chǔ)7.Aftergraduation,shewentabroadforfurtherstuky.畢業(yè)之后,她出國(guó)深造。8.ThespiritofLeiFengencouragesustoservethepeopleallthetime.雷鋒精神一直鼓勵(lì)我們要服務(wù)于人民。9.Fromherstory,weknowthattheonlywaytoimproveisthroughhardworkanddoggedperseverance.從她的故事中我們知道了,要更上一層樓唯一的途徑就是艱苦奮斗、不屈不撓。四、寫作素養(yǎng)練（作文句式運(yùn)用）1.無(wú)論是哪項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng),其中總會(huì)有不可思議的事情發(fā)生。Nomatterwhatsportitis,thereisalwaysachancethatsomethingamazingcanhappen.2.老人突然倒下去的時(shí)候，我恰好站在他的身旁IthappenedthatIwasstandiognexstohimwhentheoldmansuddenlyfellontotheground.3.留得青山在,不愁沒柴燒Aslongasthegreenhillsarethere,therwillbefirewood.4.我肯定早就知道閱讀是重要的,因?yàn)槲倚r(shí)候最早的記憶跟書籍有關(guān)。ImusthavealwaysknownreadingwasveryimportantbecausethefirstmemoriesIhaveasachilddealwithbooks.5.在你申請(qǐng)之前去大學(xué)參觀是一個(gè)非常好的主意,因?yàn)樗鼈兊木W(wǎng)站看起來(lái)和聽起來(lái)都一樣It'sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybecausetheirwebsitescanalllookandsoundthesame.6.我們?cè)?jì)劃明天出發(fā),但要是下雨怎么辦?Wehaveplannedtosetouttomorrow,butwhatifitrains?7.因?yàn)樗且粋€(gè)合格的醫(yī)生,所以我相信他在醫(yī)學(xué)問(wèn)題上的建議。Asheisaqualifieddoctor,Itrusthisadviceonmedicalmatters.8.如果沒有現(xiàn)代化的通訊，我們就不得不等好多天才能得到來(lái)自世界各地的消息。Iftherewerenomoderntelecommunications,wewouldhavetowaitfordaystogetnewsfromaroundtheworld.9.由于您的指導(dǎo),最近我的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)展得很順利。IhavebeengettingalongwellwithmyEnglishstudyrecentlyasaresultofyourguidance10.我對(duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)很感興趣，最近一年來(lái)每周上兩次羽毛球課，Ihaveagreatinterestinsportandhavebeentakingbadmintonclassestwiceaweekoverthelastthreeyears.五、范文展示(1)假如你是李華，向某英文報(bào)紙《偉人介紹》欄目投稿。簡(jiǎn)要介紹英國(guó)極地探險(xiǎn)家--歐內(nèi)斯特·沙克爾頓。姓名歐內(nèi)斯特·沙克爾頓(ErnestShackleton)國(guó)籍英國(guó)生卒日期1874~1922主要成就：英國(guó)極地探險(xiǎn)家，曾帶領(lǐng)英國(guó)探險(xiǎn)隊(duì)三次前往南極洲，是南極探險(xiǎn)英雄時(shí)代的主要人物之一。在主要成就他第三次帶領(lǐng)探險(xiǎn)隊(duì)奔赴南極探險(xiǎn)時(shí)，他與“堅(jiān)忍號(hào)”船員們?cè)跇O地700多天的求生經(jīng)歷，創(chuàng)造了20世紀(jì)一次偉大的生還奇跡。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右。2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。ErnestShackletonwasagreatpolarexplorerwholedthreeBritishexpeditionstotheAntarctic.HewasoneoftheleadingfiguresduringtheHeroicAgeofAntarcticExploration.HisthirdexpeditiontotheSouthPolewasanextraordinaryadventure,however.TheirshipEndurancesankafterbeingstuckintheice.ErnestShackletonandhismenmanagedtosurviveaftermorethan700daysinthepolarregion,makingagreatmiracleinthe20thcentury.Iwasinspiredbyhisspirit,knowingthatwemusthavecourageandperseverancewhenfacinganydifficulties.(2)你校正在組織英語(yǔ)作文比賽。請(qǐng)你以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題,寫一篇短文參賽。內(nèi)容包括:1.人物簡(jiǎn)介。2.尊敬和愛戴的原因。ThepersonIrespectTherearemanyrespectablepeoplearourdus.TakemyneighbourUncleLiforexample.HeisavolunteerwhoworksasagateguardinourcommunityduringtheepidemicofCOVID-19,andhismaindutyistotakepeople'stemperatureandcheckthepassesforexitandentry.Regardlessoftheriskofgettinginfected,UncleLiisresponsibleanddevotedtohisjob.Eveninterribleweather,hestillstickstohispostandleavesnooneunchecked.Thankstohiseffortsinepidemicpreventionandcontrol,ourneighbourhoodhasbeeninagoodstate.Actually,therearemanyselflesspeoplelikeUncleLiaroundus,andtheyalldeserveourrespect.(3)你校英文報(bào)正開展關(guān)于“Couraggeanddetermination的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，寫一篇短文投稿，講述你成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中關(guān)于勇氣與毅力的故事.IwillneverforgetthefirsttimewhenIlearnthowtorideabike.Atthebeginning,withdadholdingthebackofthebike,Irodehappilyandsafely.Aftersometime,DadtoldmethathewouldletgoofthebikeandthatIshouldrideindependently.Thoughscared,Itookadeepbreathandgaveitatry.Itwasnoteasy