01試題原題第二節(jié)：讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Nature,whilebeautiful,couldalsobeunpredictableandmerciless.Butmostimportantly,webearinmindthatinthedarkesttimes,there’salwaysalightattheendofthetunnel,just

likeMrs.Evans’

cabinlight.Onebrightsummerday,myfriendPeterandIdecidedtoventureintotheunexploredtrailsoftheGreatSmokyMountains.

Blessedwithrichbiodiversityandfascinatinglandscapes,thenationalparkseemedaperfectgetaway.Littledidweknowthatourcasualhikewouldsoonturnintoanunexpectedpersonalincident,foreverengravedinourmemories.Wesetoffearlyinthemorning,equippedwithourbackpacksandamapthatwassupposedtoguideusthroughthewindingtrails.Thesunwasup,castinglongshadowsontheforestflooraswesetoffonourjourney.Wetrekked(艱難行走),laughed,andmarveledatthebeautyofnaturearoundus.Aswetrekkedthroughthedenseforests,takinginthenaturalwondersaroundus,wecouldn’thelpbutfeelasenseofadventurecoursingthroughourveins.Thetrailwasrugged

anduneven,butweperseveredthroughthechallenginglandscape.Midwaythroughourexpedition,westumbleduponabreathtakingwaterfall,itsglisteningwaterscascadingdowntherocksinaquietandpeacefulmelody.Wesatdownbythewater’sedge,takingamomenttogetlostinthebeautyofnature.Thecoolmistfromthewaterfallenvelopedus,andwefeltrefreshedandenergetic.Asthedayworeon,weventureddeeperintothewilderness,eagertoexploreeverycornerofthisnaturalparadise.Weweresoabsorbedinthebeautyofnaturethatjustdidn’tnoticeourwayanditseemedthatwecouldnotfindthewaybacktothefamiliarpartoftheforest.Panicking,wescrambledtofindourwaybackbutthedensevegetationandwindingtrailsonlyservedtoconfuseusfurther.Wetriedtorememberanypossiblesignsthatmightleadusback.Nosoonerhadwecelebratedourreturntothecleartrailsthansomethingworsehappened.注意：1.

所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.

請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Suddenly,theweathertookanabruptturn.

Justwhenwewereabouttogiveup,afaintlightflickeredinthedistance.

02試題分析●寫作分析1.主要人物?

I：?

Peter：myfriend2.前文情節(jié)某個(gè)夏日，我跟朋友Peter去theGreatSmokyMountains徒步，背個(gè)背包，帶了張地圖，就去那兒徒步了。進(jìn)入森林后，我們被絕美的景觀所吸引。后來，不知怎么就迷路了。我們驚慌失措，奮力尋找回去的路，但茂密的植被和蜿蜒的小路卻讓我們更加困惑。雖然后來我們回到了清爽的小路上，但更糟糕的事情卻發(fā)生了。......3.續(xù)寫安排第一段：Suddenly,theweathertookanabruptturn.①（與前一句銜接）到底天氣發(fā)生了什么變化②我們是怎樣應(yīng)對(duì)的③（與下文開頭句銜接）我們感到很絕望第二段：Justwhenwewereabouttogiveup,afaintlightflickeredinthedistance.①（與前一句銜接）我們的反應(yīng)②結(jié)果如何③（主題升華）與前文第一段如何呼應(yīng)03語言積累1.記在心/腦里2.冒險(xiǎn)進(jìn)入..3.有幸擁有4.永遠(yuǎn)扎根在我的記憶里5.配備，武裝...6.蜿蜒的小道7.投下長長的影子8.對(duì)...驚嘆9.觀賞/欣賞大自然的杰作10.情不自禁地做..11.(情感)在全身血管中流動(dòng)12.堅(jiān)韌不拔穿過那有挑戰(zhàn)性的風(fēng)景13.偶然發(fā)現(xiàn)讓人驚嘆的瀑布14.在旅途半路中15.感到神清氣爽，精力充沛16.(時(shí)間)消逝17.沉醉于自然的美麗中18.努力去做某事19.起到做...的作用20.慶祝我們的回歸對(duì)照英語表達(dá)：1.bear/keep...inmind2.ventureinto..3.beblessedwith..4.foreverengraved/planted/imprintedinmymemory5.beequippedwith...6.thewindingtrail/path7.cast/throwlongshadows8.marvelat...9.takeinthenaturalwonders10.can'thelpbutdo.../can'thelp/resistdoing11....coursethroughone'sveins12.perseverethroughthechallenginglandscape13.stumbleonthebreathtakingwaterfall14.halfwaythroughtheadventure15.feelrefreshedandenergetic16.wearon17.belost/absorbedinthebeautyofnature18.scramble/try/strivetodo...19.servetodo...20.celebrateourreturn04下水作文

Suddenly,theweathertookanabruptturn.Darkcloudswasgatheringwithwindroaringviolently,bringingusagreatsenseofhorror.Itwasclearthatwecoulddonothingbutwaitforourgoodluck.Itwasnotlongbeforetheheavyrainpoureddown.Sohelplesswerewethatwebothcurledupintwotightballswithkneestuckedupatthechinsagainstabigrock.Densecoldraindropsbeatingusanditgettingdarker,wefeltgreatregretforourhastydecisionandinadequatepreparation.Weweretrappedintheendlessdesperation.(90words)

Justwhenwewereabouttogiveup,afaintlightflickeredinthedistance.Hopeflashedinourminds.Exhaustedandstarvingaswewere,wegatheredallofourstrength,movingtowardsthefaintlight.Luckcametous.Strugglingthroughthedensevegetationwithgreateffort,wefinallystoodbeforeasmallwoodcabin,throughwhosewindowthefaintbutwarmlightshone.Afterknowingwhatwe’dsuffered,Mrs.Evans,anelderlyandelegantwoman,welcomedusintothecabin.Notonlydidsheofferusfoodandagoodshelter,wealsoenjoyedhermarvelouslifestory,whichinspiredusforthebetterlife.(93words)05參考范文

Suddenly,theweathertookanabruptturn.

Darkcloudsshroudedthesky,andaheavydownpourensued.Thecomfortingforestsoundsquicklyturnedintoaterrifyingsymphonyofthunderandwind.Thetrailthatwasoncesoclearbecameamuddymess,makingitimpossibletocontinue.Wetriedtoconsultourmap,butitwastoolate;wewerelostinthewildness.Hourspassed,andourattemptstofindthetrailprovedtobeinvain.Withthecoldcreepingin,despairstartedtosetin.

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