續(xù)寫微技能--心理描寫四公式小專題導學案學習時間

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續(xù)寫微技能——心理描寫四公式課型寫作【必備詞匯】情感類名詞：excitement;disappointment;relief;joy;delight;embarrassment;sorrow;despair;abashment;anxiety;uneasiness;fright;fear;anger;annoyance;amazement......情感類形容詞：excited;disappointed;delighted;embarrassed;sad;desperate;ashamed;guilty;depressed;upset;anxious;nervous;frightened;angry;annoy;irritation;amazed;surprised.....【必備句型】句式1：Toone’s

＋情感名詞，

sb.…（1）令他驚訝的是，這個病人就是15年前救他的醫(yī)生。

Tohis_____________,thepatientwasthedoctorwhosavedhim15yearsago.（2）令她詫異的是，她被兩個孩子的甜蜜祝福迎接。

Toher________________,shewas_____________bythesweetwishesfromtwokids.

句式2：情感類形容詞，

sb

＋動作．（1）沮喪又絕望,

David

說不出一句話。________________________________,Davidcouldn’t______________aword.

（2）又害怕又震驚，

Betty

躲在大樹后面，屏住呼吸。

__________________________,Betty________behindabigtree,holdingherbreath.（3）不知道接下來要怎么做，她躺在一塊石頭旁邊，反思她所做的一切。

___________________whattodonext,she_______besideastone,reflectingoneverythingshehaddone.句式3：sb.isoverwhelmed/seizedbyastrongsenseof

＋心情．（1）看到這個混亂的廚房，父親非常生氣。________________________thismesskitchen,myfatherwas_________________byasenseof___________________.（2）我非常地害怕，大聲地哭喊道：“救救我，老公?！盻___________________byasenseof___________,Icriedinaloudvoice,

“Helpme!Dear.

”句式4.Astrongsenseof

＋心情

welledupinmymind.

Afloodof

＋心情

crowdedintomymind（1）當我聽到這個令人激動的消息的時候，幸福感涌上心頭。WhenIheardtheexcitingnews,astrongsenseof__________________________inmymind.Hearingtheexcitingnews,Ifeltasenseof_____________________________inmymind.【心理描寫具體化】比一比，找不同，寫一寫1.

【2021新高考1卷】看到這個混亂的廚房，父親非常生氣?！?021新高考1卷】看到這個臟亂不堪的廚房，父親氣到眼里閃爍著怒火。

Themomentthefathersawthe____________kitchen,he________________________________________________.2.

令她詫異的是，她被兩個孩子的甜蜜祝福迎接。令媽媽驚訝的是，她醒來迎接她的是兩個小孩的早餐，然后嘴巴張的很大。Tomom’s_________________,shewas____________withthedelicatebreakfast,____________hermouth____________.3.

【2020新高考I卷】經(jīng)歷了三個小時的努力，爆米花終于做成了。我們開心地跳了起來。Afterthree-hour’s________，

thepopcornwaseventually____________,___________________.【學以致用】嘗試把今天講的四個句型運用到寫作中?！?021新高考1卷】

AMother'sDaysurpriseThedreamswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningformother'sday.Howpleasedandproudmotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.There

was

nothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymaketheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Janafoundthebreadandputtoslicesintotheeggmixture.NextJeffturnonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedflyingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime，sheturneddownthefire,soitcooknicely.

ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandlidstartingtoshake.Thenextminutetheporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestonewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandstouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.

Oh,dear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________人物：時態(tài)和人稱：第一段寫作大思路：小思路：1.

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【必備句型】句式1（1）surprise（2）amazement；greeted句式2（1）Frustratedanddesperate；say（2）Scaredandshocked；hid（3）Notknowing；lay句式3（1）Seeing；o