1、高三作文講評課學(xué)案學(xué)習(xí)目標：通過講評學(xué)生學(xué)會修改和給作文潤色。學(xué)習(xí)重難點：學(xué)生會美化自己的作文，給文章加分。前提測評作文講評如何給作文定檔：ASSESSMENTS (評價標準)Structure 框架結(jié)構(gòu)Is the article divided into parts? Content 內(nèi)容要點Are all the details stated? Are all the details to the point(切題)? Language語言表達 Does the writer use any linking words? Are there any mistakes? 表達錯誤 Is t

2、here any advanced vocabulary or sentence patterns (高級詞匯和句式)?二 結(jié)合此次作文作文要點：Description （about 30words）Key words:in the early 1980sin the 1990saround 2000in 2014時間表達轉(zhuǎn)換：_表達專業(yè)變遷或喜好：Analyze the reasons. (1-2points)Clarify your favourite major and reasons. (1-2points)三 書面表達普遍存在問題審題不仔細，遺漏要點。過渡不自然，單純翻譯。邏輯不恰當

3、，有悖常理。表達不豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)。語言不地道，漢式思維。用詞不貼切，缺乏積累。語法不正確，錯誤不斷。書寫不規(guī)范，多詞少句。四Language：Proper linking words (恰當?shù)倪B詞)時間順序 first, second, then, finally , at last , soon , immediately, suddenly對稱順序for one thing, for the other thing, on one hand, on the other hand轉(zhuǎn)折順序but, yet, however, while, though, otherwise，in realit

4、y, instead , nevertheless, after all.因果順序because, since, as, for, thanks to, as a result ,owing to, due to條件順序as long as, on condition that, if, unless，only if，Provided/Providing/Suppose/Supposing that讓步順序though, as, even if/though, whether , wh- (what,when, where,how)+ever.遞進順序and, whats more, besi

5、des, in addition, furthermore, moreover, to make the matter worse, whats worse過渡性插入語I think, in my opinion, Im afraid, you know, As we all know, As is well known, in a word, to sum up五Language mistakes：There are many reasons account for/answer for the changes of popular university majors.2. Facing t

6、he graduation, in view of our majors, we are never careful enough to choose the right majors3. When it comes to why appear this phenomenon六Advanced sentence patterns: 1. 倒裝句 2. 復(fù)合句（定語從句，名詞性從句） 3. 強調(diào)句型 4. 感嘆句 5. It 作形式主語，形式賓語的句型 6. 被動語態(tài) 7. 非謂語動詞短語 8. 介詞（如：with, on/upon doing ） 9. 固定句型（如，sothat ; Ther

7、e is no doubt that）10.諺語&名言七Have a tryTo his surprise, people tend to ignore the traffic rules.(主語從句)= _ people tend to ignore the traffic rules.He was delayed by the heavy traffic, so he was late for the party.（定語，表語從句）= _ he was late for the party _ he was delayed by the heavy traffic.3) Throwing

8、rubbish at random caused many problems, and they have raised much concern. （非謂語）= The problems _ have raised much concern.4) As the problems were solved, the quality has been improved. （獨立主格）= _, the quality has been improved.5) Although we are tired, we are still happy. （倒裝）= _, we are still happy.6) The pollution was so serious that people dare not go out. （倒裝）= _ people dare not go out.7) When we realize the importance of the environment, we will try to protect it.= _.8) He didnt realize what had happened until he got the news from others.（強調(diào)）=八Home