1、2021屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)讀后續(xù)寫題型的寫作兵法三招：轉(zhuǎn)折語言詞庫學(xué)案2021屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)讀后續(xù)寫題型的寫作兵法三招：轉(zhuǎn)折語言詞庫學(xué)案PAGE PAGE 192021屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)讀后續(xù)寫題型的寫作兵法三招：轉(zhuǎn)折語言詞庫學(xué)案讀后續(xù)寫題型的寫作兵法三招：轉(zhuǎn)折,語言，詞庫目前英語卷的題型的改革力度是夠大的，說來就來。這不，各種證據(jù)證明,未來作文會變成文章續(xù)寫，即：給一篇350詞左右的記敘文給你，結(jié)尾沒有，讓考生自由發(fā)揮。限制是：需要用上文章里給定的五個(gè)左右的詞語。目前浙江已經(jīng)明確在考試說明中說了，后面的高考就要采用這種形式。（孫三五)這種改革給考生一種恐慌,為什么

2、呢？因?yàn)閺奈磳戇^這樣的文章，而且續(xù)寫聽起來好高大上。但是，我看來,這種作文最好發(fā)揮。我給出的技巧是:內(nèi)容上要注意兩個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折；語言上要注意倒裝和非謂語動詞；另外，我給考生們準(zhǔn)備了萬能的九個(gè)小詞庫。一、何為內(nèi)容上的兩個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折寫記敘文，英漢是同理的。故事要有曲折即：twist。而高考作文150作文只能讓你寫頂多兩個(gè)曲折.曲折分：情節(jié)曲折和心理變化的曲折。英語作文畢竟和語文作文有差別,我們的曲折不要一味追求離奇，而是講究邏輯的連貫。二、語言的運(yùn)用記敘文是動作和語言的干活，不需要你寫復(fù)雜句，這是文體的需要。常用的是：非謂語動詞和倒裝句。為什么呢？因?yàn)橹挥羞@兩種語法結(jié)構(gòu)句子才能表達(dá)動作的多樣性。三、關(guān)于九個(gè)小

3、詞庫我認(rèn)為記敘文的心情描寫是伴隨著動作一起的，你有什么樣的心情就有什么樣的動作。筆者平時(shí)有摘抄各種文學(xué)作品的佳句和詞塊的習(xí)慣。僅挑選一小部分，省略了伴隨心情的手、腳、臉等詞庫，進(jìn)行粗線條的概括.雖然不多,但我認(rèn)為也足夠應(yīng)付高考了.我將它們分為九大類：一、如何表達(dá)決心和注意力的集中:二、如何表達(dá)同情和關(guān)心三、如何表達(dá)輕松四、如何表達(dá)生氣、不耐煩等不愉快的心情五、如何表達(dá)膽小、害怕六、如何表達(dá)害怕、害羞和尷尬七、如何表達(dá)悲傷八、如何表達(dá)疲勞九、如何表達(dá)疼痛四、實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練（這道題是浙江考試說明上的例子，但沒有給答案）步驟一：第一個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折：The young man; suitcases in the b

4、ack seat；loud noise of an alarm; the bank； robbery; the shouts; people; the bank thief報(bào)警：群眾攔阻;警察趕到心情：害怕;困惑;疼痛第二個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折：真相：一箱書；趕往學(xué)校報(bào)到心情：生氣；輕松;關(guān)心步驟二：He dared not stop and dashed to the crowd。He was struck dead with terror. His heart was beating painfully fast and banging against his ribs。 However， hearing

5、 the shouts, several strong young men in front of the bank blocked and arrested him. Now, every nerve in Authurs body warned him not to go any further. “I doubt that guy is the bank thief.” said Authur, pointing the man behind。用非謂語動詞 The anger had returned like a hard lump at the back of his throat.

6、Luckily， just then up came the policemen倒裝句。 Authur began to calm down， his breathing growing slower。用非謂語動詞 He could feel the blood surging round his body and releasing the tension. When the suitcases were opened， many books came in sight. The young man gave Authur a look of concern， saying“I really

7、 hope you are not hurt. Maybe we can be friends.” Both of them smiled.（劃線部分都是來自九小詞庫）五、九小詞庫【以下均摘自文學(xué)作品,部分詞匯需要你查詞典理解】一、如何表達(dá)決心和注意力的集中：詞語：Nouns Thoughts， concentration， determination Verbs Felt, tried， resolved， determined Heard, remembered 詞塊：* Deep in thought* Lost in her own thoughts* Tried desperatel

8、y to remember Heard little of what was being said around her* Nothing was going to stop him now* Felt a hard ball of determination tightening in his stomach佳句:She tried desperately to remember where she had seen him before。She was deep in thought and heard little of what was being said around her.He

9、 shuddered and tensed, as a hard ball of determination tightened in his stomach.二、如何表達(dá)同情和關(guān)心詞語:Nouns Face, mouth， smile, eyebrows Concern， sympathy, comfort， warmth Adjectives Soft, warm， calm, sympathetic, comforting Verbs Gave, flashed Drew， turned 詞塊： Face turned soft and sympathetic* Gave her a l

10、ook of concern* Drew her eyebrows together Mouth turned down at the corners Flashed a comforting smile佳句:His face turned soft and sympathetic and his voice sank to a murmur.She drew her eyebrows together and turned her mouth down in a look of concern.三、如何表達(dá)輕松詞語：Nouns Heart, pulse， blood Chest， head,

11、 brow， scalp， sweat Adjectives Calm， grateful Verbs Eased， slowed, calmed, released ached 詞塊：* Pounding eased in her chest Breathing slowed* Rapid beat of her heart became calmer* Sweat dried on her brow Blood surged round her body* Released the tension in her body Grateful for his narrow escape佳句:S

12、he began to calm down and her heart started to slow, but the panic had left an ache in her head and a ringing in her ears。Slowly, the pounding eased in her chest and the sweat dried on her brow。She could feel the blood surging round her body and releasing the tension.Her breathing grew slower, as a

13、new calm settled over her。四、如何表達(dá)生氣、不耐煩等不愉快的心情詞語：Nouns Heart, pulse， breath， throat Anger, rage， fury， temper, wrath， disgust， contempt， resentment Adjectives Cross, furious, raging Jealous, envious, resentful Irritating, frustrating Bitter， vicious, poisonous Breathless, sweating Verbs Swept, poured

14、Pounded, exploded, erupted Shook, trembled, writhed Raced， hammered Clenched, gripped 詞塊： Red mist Spitting bundle of rage* Vicious flash of temper* Hard lump at the back of her throat* Left him breathless* Made his heart race Hammered in his head Swept through him like a tidal wave* Burning with ra

15、ge Wrath exploded like a volcano* Poured from her like an acid* Surrounded him like a foul stench* Poisoned the air around him佳句:He was sweating and burning with rage.She saw his face through narrowed eyes and a fog of rage。Her reply fuelled his anger and he erupted like a volcano。The anger had retu

16、rned like a hard lump at the back of her throat.His fury knew no limits one vicious flash of temper after another.Her rage swept through her like a tidal wave, surrounding her like a foul stench。五、如何表達(dá)膽小、害怕詞語:Nouns Fear, dread， panic， terror， horror， turmoil Thoughts, instinct Heart, chest， pulse， b

17、lood Head, brain, temples, forehead Breath， throat, windpipe， cheeks, tongue, bile Stomach, gut, cramps Skin， hair， shivers， tingle， prickle Adjectives Numb, sick, nervous, uneasy Dry, tight， thick， heavy Long， deep， short， shallow Unsteady， shuddering, rasping Quick， fast, painful Cold， tingling Ho

18、t， sweaty Verbs Felt, thought， urged， warned， paralysed Rose, grew， swept, surged， seized Bubbled， gripped， clutched, choked, strangledBreathed, blew, hissed, sucked， gulped， gasped， tasted Beat， leapt, raced, banged， throbbed， pounded, hammered, quickened Crept， crawled, prickled, scuttled Ran, tor

19、e, pumped， drenched Dropped, fluttered, squeezed， tightened, gripped， stabbed 詞塊：* Sick with fear* Throat was dry and tight* Tongue felt thick and heavy in his mouth* Fear was like a bitter bile at the back of his throat* Cold sweat* Prickle of fear in the bottom of his spine* Like an electric shock

20、* Like a lead ball in his stomach* Numb and paralysed by fear* Dread swept through him like a tidal wave* Fear settled on him like a dark fog* Struck dead with terror* Terror surged through her* Fear seized him in its jaws Thought of the consequences urged him on Instincts screamed at him to 。 。 .*

21、Every nerve in his body warned him not to 。 . .* Could taste the fear in the back of his throat* Gulped air* Let out a gasp Blew out her cheeks to stop herself howling Took long, shuddering breaths* Panic rose in his chest Panic bubbled in her throat Fear choked him with its murderous hands* Snaked

22、round his windpipe* Heart pounded* Pulse raced* Missed a beat Banged against his ribs* Heart abandoned his chest to pound in his throat Squeezed her heart like a vice Blood pounded in her temples Drenched in sweat Cold sweat poured down his forehead* Skin crawled Hairs prickled on the back of his ne

23、ck* Shivers tore down her spine and racked her body* Like a hundred spiders were scuttling down her back Stomach dropped Like a moth fluttering inside her stomach* Doubled over with cramps* Gripped with anxiety* Like a volcano erupting inside her佳句:Every nerve in his body warned him not to go any fu

24、rther.All his instincts screamed at him to slip away before he was spotted。He was sick with fear， but the thought of the consequences urged him on。Her throat was dry, her tongue thick and heavy in her mouth。Fear choked him with its murderous hands。 It gripped at his throat and strangled his breath i

25、nto short, shallow gasps。She was struck dead with terror。 Her heart was beating painfully fast and banging against her ribs。Her heart missed a beat， squeezed like a vice by the shock.As the blood pounded in her temples, her brain quickened and all her senses were alert。Blowing out her cheeks, she dr

26、ew a long, shuddering breath and tried to dampen the sense of impending doom.He felt uneasy. The hairs on the back of his neck prickled with dread and he was drenched in sweat。Fear settled on her like a dark fog， bringing a chill that crept over her and that no amount of heat could drive away.The fe

27、ar was like an electric shock， pumping shivering waves tearing through his body and making his hair stand on end。He doubled over with cramps。 It was as if a lead ball had been dropped in his stomach and was blocking his gut.Her stomach was gripped with anxiety, like a volcano erupting inside her.Som

28、ething was making her feel very uneasy。 It was gnawing at her stomach and fluttering as if she had swallowed a butterfly.六、如何表達(dá)害怕、害羞和尷尬詞語：Nouns Mind， senses， nerves, confusion, embarrassment Body, heart， breath， throat, tongue， mouth Hands， palms, stomach Adjectives Thick, dry, fuzzy Tense， sharp， a

29、lert Sweaty， breathless Verbs Shook， trembled Pounded, fluttered Gulped， swallowed Shrunk， shrivelled 詞塊: Tongue was thick and fuzzy Throat was dry* Like a nervous rabbit caught in the headlights* Blizzard of nerves and confusion* Heart pounded* Heart fluttered Held their breath* Watched with bated

30、breath Trembled like a nervous rabbit* Butterflies fluttered in her stomach Body was tense and her senses alert Felt as if the whole world was watching Insides shrivelled with embarrassment Mist descended on his mind佳句:Her hands were shaking. Butterflies fluttered in her heart and stomach.A mist des

31、cended on her mind。 She felt as if she was walking in a blizzard of nerves and confusion.She felt her body tense and her senses sharpen， as she watched with bated breath。He tried to speak, but his tongue was thick and fuzzy and pasted to the roof of his mouth.He felt as if the whole world was watchi

32、ng him， and his insides shrivelled with embarrassment.七、如何表達(dá)悲傷詞語：Nouns Sadness， misery, grief， despair, loneliness， regret Heart, throat, lump, sobs Adjectives Cold， hollow Painful， horrible Verbs Filled， welled， choked, broke 詞塊：* Silent， shuddering sobs Heart was swollen and bruised Felt hollow an

33、d cold Huge lump in the back of his throat* Horrible sense of loneliness like a dark fog Sadness erupted inside him* Enveloped her like a dark cloud Spread through his chest like a dull ache* Wild grief was building inside her Despair washed over him Insides curled up and shrivelled* Hopelessness wa

34、shed over him Coldness settled inside him Gripping pain in his heart* Sob welled up in her throat Weight of his grief was crushing his windpipe* His despair tightened around his chest in a vice-like grip* All thought and reason had shut down佳句:The pain of his loss spread through his chest like a dul

35、l ache。A horrible sense of loneliness bled through her.The gripping pain in her heart was reflected in her haunted expression.Sadness filled his chest and erupted in a wail of misery。He buried his head in his hands and tried to block out the sadness erupting inside him.She felt a rush of anguish sur

36、ge into her chest and throat， and flood her eyes with tears。She felt a wild grief building inside her taking her over until she could only break down in an agony of weeping.八、如何表達(dá)疲勞詞語：Nouns Sleep， tiredness, exhaustion Legs， head, eyes Adjectives Tired, sleepy, weary， exhausted Heavy, stiff， corpsel

37、ike Dizzy， faint, light-headed Verbs Sat, lay, dropped, slumped Dragged， staggered詞塊： Lightheaded with exhaustion* Legs were heavy like pieces of wood Sat corpselike Head was swimming with tiredness Dragged down by an irresistible urge to sleep佳句：He didnt think he could go any further。 His legs felt like pieces of wood heavy and stiff.Exhaustion had made him light-headed. He lay on the floor dragged down by an irresistible urge to sleep.九、如何表達(dá)疼痛詞語:Nouns Head, breath, throat， chest Stomach，