Unit5Intothewild—writing（Period1）成都經(jīng)濟(jì)技術(shù)開發(fā)區(qū)實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)

吳春芳LearningobjectivesBytheendoftheclass,youshouldbeableto1.learnsomeexpressionsrelatedtotheanimalfactfiletopic;2.summarizethefeaturesoftheanimalfactfile;3.writeananimalfactfileclearlyandproperly;4.assessyourowndescriptionoftheanimalviaassessmentrequirements;5.liveinharmonywithanimals.1Pre-writing2While-writing

3After-writingCONTENTSPre-writingStep1Lead-in（4mins）:1. Enjoyavideoandbereadytotellmeyourimpressionofthebird.Pre-writing2.Pleasetellmeyourimpressionofthebird.Red-crownedcrane丹頂鶴elegancebeautiful

longlifewhiteandblackluck...Step2Readthepassageandanswerthequestions

(Activity6,P78)

（7mins）Whatsymbolicmeaningdoesthered-crownedcranehaveinChineseculture?Whatdoesitlooklike?Wherecanyoufindit?Wheredoesitmigrateto?Whatdoesiteat?Pre-writingTips:閱讀前，看問題，

劃重點(diǎn)，圈關(guān)鍵。Tips:閱讀中，帶著關(guān)鍵詞閱讀。同時(shí)，劃重點(diǎn)，圈關(guān)鍵。1.What

symbolicmeaningdoesthered-crownedcranehaveinChineseculture?IthasasymbolicmeaningoflonglifeandgoodluckinChineseculture.That’swhysometimeswecanseethered-crownedcranesonyourgrandparents’birthdaycake.Pre-writingInChineseculture,thered-crownedcranehaslongeenregardedasasymbolofhappinessandgoodluck.Itisoneofhelargestcranesintheworlds,standingatabout150cmtall.Thefeathersofthebirdareaswhiteassnowexceptforsomeblackonesonitsface,neckandwings.Itsuniquefeaturefromwhichitgetsitsname,isthebrightredskinonthetopofitshead.Thered-crownedcraneisfoundinChina,Russia,Mongolia,JapanandtheKoreanPeninsula.InChina,itspendsthewarmermonthsintheriversandwetlandsinthenorth-east.Whentheweathergetscold,itmigratestoeast-centralChina.Itsfoodincludesfjsh,snailsandwaterplants.Itonlybreedswherethenaturalhabitatissafe.Thankstoincreasingprotectionmeasures,thenumberofred-crownedcranesinChinaisontherise.Pre-writing2.Whatdoesitlooklike?

Ithaswhitefeathersexceptforsomeblackonesonitsface,neckandwings.Italsohasbrightredskinonthetopofitshead.InChineseculture,thered-crownedcranehaslongeenregardedasasymbolofhappinessandgoodluck.Itisoneofhelargestcranesintheworlds,standingatabout150cmtall.Thefeathersofthebirdareaswhiteassnowexceptforsomeblackonesonitsface,neckandwings.Itsuniquefeaturefromwhichitgetsitsname,isthebrightredskinonthetopofitshead.Thered-crownedcraneisfoundinChina,Russia,Mongolia,JapanandtheKoreanPeninsula.Pre-writing3.Wherecanyoufindit?

ItcanbefoundinChina,Russia,Mongolia,JapanandtheKoreanPeninsula.Thesecountriesarecalledthehabitatofthered-crownedcrane,placeswheretheyarenormallyfound.InChineseculture,thered-crownedcranehaslongeenregardedasasymbolofhappinessandgoodluck.Itisoneofhelargestcranesintheworlds,standingatabout150cmtall.Thefeathersofthebirdareaswhiteassnowexceptforsomeblackonesonitsface,neckandwings.Itsuniquefeaturefromwhichitgetsitsname,isthebrightredskinonthetopofitshead.Thered-crownedcraneisfoundinChina,Russia,Mongolia,JapanandtheKoreanPeninsula.Pre-writing4.Wheredoesitmigrateto?

InChina,itspendsthewarmermonthsintheriversandwetlandsinthenorth-east.Itmigratestoeast-centralChinawhentheweathergetscold.

InChina,itspendsthewarmermonthsintheriversandwetlandsinthenorth-east.Whentheweathergetscold,itmigratestoeast-centralChina.Itsfoodincludesfjsh,snailsandwaterplants.Itonlybreedswherethenaturalhabitatissafe.Thankstoincreasingprotectionmeasures,thenumberofred-crownedcranesinChinaisontherise.Pre-writing5.Whatdoesiteat?Iteatsfish,snailsandwaterplants.

InChina,itspendsthewarmermonthsintheriversandwetlandsinthenorth-east.Whentheweathergetscold,itmigratestoeast-centralChina.Itsfoodincludesfjsh,snailsandwaterplants.Itonlybreedswherethenaturalhabitatissafe.Thankstoincreasingprotectionmeasures,thenumberofred-crownedcranesinChinaisontherise.Pre-writingStep3Summary（6mins）

Whatcanwewriteinafactfileofananimal?InChineseculture,thered-crownedcranehaslongeenregardedasasymbolofhappinessandgoodluck.Itisoneofhelargestcranesintheworlds,standingatabout150cmtall.Thefeathersofthebirdareaswhiteassnowexceptforsomeblackonesonitsface,neckandwings.Itsuniquefeaturefromwhichitgetsitsname,isthebrightredskinonthetopofitshead.Thered-crownedcraneisfoundinChina,Russia,Mongolia,JapanandtheKoreanPeninsula.InChina,itspendsthewarmermonthsintheriversandwetlandsinthenorth-east.Whentheweathergetscold,itmigratestoeast-centralChina.Itsfoodincludesfjsh,snailsandwaterplants.Itonlybreedswherethenaturalhabitatissafe.Thankstoincreasingprotectionmeasures,thenumberofred-crownedcranesinChinaisontherise.SymbolmeaningAppearanceMigration/placeHabitatDiet/foodPre-writinganimalusefulexpressionsIt’s...tall.Itsuniquefeatureare...Itgetsitsnamefrom...Itisfoundin...Itspendsinthewarmermonthsin...Itmigratesto...Itsfoodincludes......asymboleof...AppearanceHabitatMigrationSymbolmeaningDietWhile-writing

Step4Ananimalfactfile(13mins)WriteashortdescriptionofLittleEgret(白鷺)accordingtotheinformationinthetable.Usetheusefulexpressionsyoujustlearnedtohelpyou

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While-writingAnimalLittleegret（白鷺）Appearance大約50厘米高，全身幾乎全是雪白的羽毛；嘴、腿、腳是黑色的，但腳趾是黃色的。Habitat

分布在亞洲、非洲、歐洲。喜歡在湖泊、濕地,沼澤（mashes）和淺灘（shallows）尋找食物Migration

生活在中國(guó)南部以南的地方Diet魚，蝦（shrimp）,蟹（crab是）及昆蟲等Symbolmeaning一種代表著優(yōu)雅、純潔、好運(yùn)和和平的象征After-writing

Step5Sharingandthinking(9mins)1.Self-evaluationExcellent:>20starsGood:16-20starsImprovement:<16starsAfter-writing

Assessments25starstotalCompletecontent☆☆☆☆☆Goodexpressions(spelling,richness…)☆☆☆☆☆Correctgrammar(tenses,cohesive

ties…)☆☆☆☆☆Enoughwords☆☆☆☆☆Nicehandwriting☆☆☆☆☆A(yù)fter-writing2.Shareandhelpeachothertocorrectthemistakesinpairs.It’sbettertogivesomeadvice.3.Showtheanimalfactfilesof2-3studentstotheclass.

After-writing（possibleversion）Littleegretisabout50cminheight.It’sshorterthanthered-crownedcrane.Itsfeathersarenearlyallsnowywhite.Itsmouth,legsandfeetareblackincolourbutitstoesareyellow.LittleegretisusuallyfoundinAsia,AfricaandEurope.Theylookforfoodinlakes,wetlands,mashesandshallowsinthesouthofChina.Theymigratetofurthersouthinwinter.Littleegrethasagoodanddiverseappetite,includingfish,shrimps,crabsandtheinsectsandsoon.InChineseculture,Littleegretisasymbolofelegance,purity,goodfortuneandpeace.After-writing

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Infact,intheworldthereare13kindsofegrets.CanyoulookforL