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第28講生活趣事篇
目錄
知識(shí)點(diǎn)1五大萬能句型2
知識(shí)點(diǎn)2高頻金句3
生活趣事類讀后續(xù)寫通常圍繞家庭聚會(huì)、朋友互動(dòng)等日常場(chǎng)景展開,常見主題包括:
家庭幽默:如錯(cuò)用物品引發(fā)尷尬(如誤戴長(zhǎng)輩眼鏡看書)
社交互動(dòng):朋友間因誤會(huì)或意外產(chǎn)生笑料(如姐弟重逢時(shí)的戲劇性情節(jié))
突發(fā)意外:日常小事引發(fā)連鎖反應(yīng)(如生R聚會(huì)上的意外驚喜)
核心套路
①矛盾塑造:通過意外事件制造幽默效果(如主人公因緊張誤操作)
②情感變化:從尷尬到釋然,最終以溫馨收尾(如家人包容化解誤會(huì))
③人物塑造:突出主人公的應(yīng)變能力和幽默感,展現(xiàn)人際關(guān)系升華(如朋友互助化解危機(jī))
知識(shí)點(diǎn)1五大萬能句型
萬能句式1:日常引入,鋪墊趣事
句式:
Itwasjustanotherdayuntilhappened.
(替換“”可為時(shí)間/場(chǎng)景+意外事件,制造反差)
例句:ItwasjustanotherSaturdayafternoonuntilthedogworemydad'sslipperslikeshoes.
(那只是一個(gè)普通的周六下午,直到狗把爸爸的拖鞋當(dāng)鞋子穿了起來。)
仿寫句1:那只是一個(gè)普通的網(wǎng)課早晨,直到弟弟穿著恐龍睡衣沖進(jìn)了鏡頭。
Itwasjustanotheronlineclassmorninguntilmybrotherranintotheframeinhisdinosaurpajamas.
仿寫句2:那只是我們平常的野餐,直到風(fēng)箏突然飛進(jìn)了鄰居家的泳池。
Itwasjustanotherpicnicuntilthekitesuddenlyflewintotheneighbor'sswimmingpool.
仿寫句3:那只是一個(gè)安靜的自習(xí)課,直到一只蜜蜂飛進(jìn)了教室。
Itwasjustanotherquietself-studyclassuntilabeeflewintotheclassroom.
萬能句式2:意外發(fā)生,打破平靜
句式:Suddenly,wentcompletelywrong,andchaosbrokeloose.
(替換“”為具體事件,突出“失控感”)
例句:Suddenly,thecakebatterexplodedoutofthemixer,andchaosbrokeloose.
(突然,蛋糕糊從攪拌機(jī)里噴了出來,場(chǎng)面頓時(shí)一片混亂。)
仿寫句1:突然,氣球被釘子扎破,所有的裝飾都掉了下來。
Suddenly,theballoonpoppedonanail,andchaosbrokelooseasallthedecorationsfelldown.
仿寫句2:就在他按下播放鍵的瞬間,音響發(fā)出了刺耳的嘯叫。
Suddenly,thespeakerletoutaloudscreechwhenhepressedplay,andchaosbrokeloose.
仿寫句3:她剛站起來發(fā)言,假發(fā)突然滑到了肩膀.已
Suddenly,herwigslippedontohershculderasshestoodup,andchaosbrokeloose.
萬能句式3:趣味發(fā)展,笑料迭出
句式:Everyonetriedtohelp,buttheireffortsonlymadeeven.
(替換"”為問題+程度詞,體現(xiàn)“越幫越忙”的喜劇效果)
例I句:Everyonetriedtohelp,buttheireffortsonlymadethemessevenbigger.
(大家都想幫忙,但他們的努力反而讓混亂更加嚴(yán)重了。)
仿寫句1:我們都想抓住那只逃跑的雞,結(jié)果把它嚇得飛上了屋頂。
Everyonetriedtocatchtheescapedchicken,buttheireffortsonlymadethesituationevenworse.
仿寫句2:他想用膠帶修好書包,結(jié)果把手臂和書包粘在了一起。
Hetriedtofixhisbagwithtape,buthiseffortsonlymadetheproblemevenstickier.
仿寫句3:他們想悄悄關(guān)掉警報(bào),反而按響了更響的鈴聲。
They:ricdtoquietlyturnoffthealarm,buttheireffortsonlymadethenoiseevenlouder.
萬能句式4:爆笑解決,荒誕收?qǐng)?/p>
句式:Intheend,wesolveditnotby,butby—andwecouldn'tstoplaughing.
(用“not...but...”突出荒誕解決方式,增強(qiáng)幽默)
例句;Intheend,wesolveditnotbyskill,butbylettingthecatknockthecookiejarofftheshelf一andwecouldn'tstop
laughing.1最后,我們不是靠技巧解決的,而是讓貓把餅干罐從架子上碰了下來——我們笑得停不下來。)
仿寫句1:最終,我們不是靠工具,而是靠弟弟用玩具吸塵器吸出了鑰匙一然后我們一起大笑。
Intheend,wesolveditnotbytools,butbymybrotherusingatoyvacuumtosuckoutthekey—andwecouldn'tstop
laughing.
仿寫句2:我們不是用梯子,而是用跳繩把風(fēng)箏拽了下來,結(jié)果繩子纏住了樹。
Intheend.wesolveditnotbyladder,butbyusingajumpropetopulldownthekite—andwecouldn'tstoplaughing.
仿寫句3:我們不是靠說明書,而是靠猜按鈕,竟然成功關(guān)掉了跳舞的機(jī)器人。
Intheend,wesolveditnotbyreadingthemanual,butbyguessingthebuttons—andvvecouldn'tstoplaughing.
萬能句式5:感悟升華,溫情收尾
句式:Thatdaytaughtmethatisn'tabout—it'sabout.
(替換后半部分,體現(xiàn)“生活真諦”的升華,適用于結(jié)尾段)
例句:Thatdaytaughtmethathappinessisn'taboutperfection—it'saboutlaughingtogetherwheneverythinggoeswrong.
(那天讓我明白,快樂不在于完美,而在于?切出錯(cuò)時(shí)還能?起大笑。)
仿寫句1:那次經(jīng)歷讓我明白,美好的回憶不在于計(jì)劃周全,而在于意外發(fā)生時(shí)的笑聲。
Thatexperiencetaughtmethatgreatmemoriesaren'taboutperfectplans—they'reaboutthelaughterwhenthingsgo
sideways.
仿寫句2:我終于懂得,家庭的溫暖不在于整潔有序,而在于一起收拾爛攤子時(shí)的默契。
Ifinallyrealizedthatfamilywarmthisn'taboutneatness—it'sabouttheteamworkwhencleaningupthemess.
仿寫句3:現(xiàn)在我明白,童年的樂趣不在于玩具多少,而在于和朋友一起制造的“災(zāi)難”。
Now1understandthatchildhoodjoyisn'tabouthowmanytoysyouhave—it'saboutthe"disasters”youcreatewith
friends.
知識(shí)點(diǎn)2高頻金句
場(chǎng)景一:日常引入
這個(gè)場(chǎng)景是故事的開始,為后續(xù)的趣事埋下伏筆。它通常描述一個(gè)平凡而熟悉的日常生活場(chǎng)景,人物處于放松、好
奇或無聊的狀態(tài),為即將到來的意外做鋪墊。
l.ThefamilywasgatheredaroundthetableforaregularSaturdaynightdinner.
一家人正用坐在桌旁,進(jìn)行一個(gè)普通的周六晚餐。
解析:gatheraround表示“圍坐、聚集“,regular表示“普通的、常規(guī)的
解析:getstuckin表示”卡在...里“,blowaway表示“吹走
9.Sheslippedonabananapeelandalmostfell,butshewavedherarmswildlytokeepbalance.
她踩在一塊香蕉皮上滑了一下差點(diǎn)摔倒,但瘋狂地?fù)]舞手臂以保持平衡。
解析:slipon表示“在…上滑倒”,keepbalance表示"保持平衡”,wildly增加了滑稽感。
lO.Thecomputerscreensuddenlywentblue,andallhisunsavedworkdisappearedinasecond.
電腦屏幕突然藍(lán)屏了,他所有未保存的工作一秒鐘內(nèi)仝消失了.
解析:goblue指“電腦藍(lán)屏”,unsaved表示“未保存的
場(chǎng)景三:趣味發(fā)展
這是故事的主體部分。人物開始手忙腳亂地應(yīng)對(duì)意外,過程中充滿滑稽的動(dòng)作、巧合和誤會(huì),讓人忍俊不禁。不同
性格人物的互動(dòng)也增添了幽默色彩。
11.Weallrushedtohelp,butweonlyendedupgettingineachother'sway.
我們都沖過去幫忙,結(jié)果卻只是互相礙事。
解析:endupdoing表示“最終以…結(jié)束",getinone'sway表示“妨礙某人
12.Hetriedtofixitwithahammer,which,ofcourse,madethesituationevenworse.
他試圖用錘子修理它,這當(dāng)然讓情況變得更糟了。
解析:make(hesituationworse表示“使情況更糟",ofcourse插入語增強(qiáng)了幽默感。
13.1napanic,sheusedsaltinsteadofsugar,makingthecaketasteextremelystrange.
慌亂中,她把鹽當(dāng)成了糖,讓蛋糕吃起來味道怪極了。
解析:inapanic表示"驚慌中",insteadof表示“而不是
14.Theyweretryingtobequiet,buteverymovetheymadeseemedtocreatealoudernoise.
他們?cè)噲D保持安靜,但他們的每一個(gè)動(dòng)作似乎都發(fā)出了更大的響聲。
解析:try2dosth表示“試圖做某事“,seemto表示“似乎
15.1waslaughingsohardthatIcuuldn'lbreadie,letaloneofferanyusefulhelp.
我笑得太厲害,氣都喘不過來了,更別提提供任何有用的幫助了。
解析:laughhard表示“大笑”,letalone表示“更不用說
場(chǎng)景四:爆笑解決
這是故事的高潮部分。所有的誤會(huì)可能在一個(gè)滑稽的場(chǎng)面中被解開,或者眾人的努力最終以一種意外、荒誕的方式
(甚至是失?。┙鉀Q了問題,但結(jié)果卻產(chǎn)生了新的趣味。
16.Finally,thedogranbackwithanemptyplate,lookingverypleasedwithhimself.
最后,狗叼著空盤子跑回來了,看起來對(duì)自己非常滿意。
解析:lookpleasedwithoneself是固定搭配,表示“自我感覺良好、洋洋得意”,非常形象。
17.ltturnedoutthatthe'ghost'noisewasjusttheoldrefrigeratorhumming.
原來,“鬼”的聲音只是老冰箱的嗡嗡聲。
解析:Itturnedoutthat...表示“結(jié)果是...,原來是…“,hum表示“發(fā)出嗡嗡聲
18.Wesolvedtheproblemnotwithskill,butwithalotofluckandevenmorelaughter.
我們解決問題靠的不是技術(shù),而是很多運(yùn)氣和更多的笑聲。
解析:not...but...表示“不是…而是突出了幽默的核心。
19.111theend,weallsatonthefloor,eatingslightlyburntbutdelicioussandwiches.
最后,我們都坐在地板上,吃著有點(diǎn)焦但美味的三明治。
解析:slightlyburnt表示“微焦的”,形成一種反差趣味。
2O.Hisfacewascoveredinflour,andhepresentedthe'cake'whichwasactuallyapizza.
他臉上沾滿了面粉,端出了那個(gè)“蛋糕”,結(jié)果實(shí)際上是個(gè)披薩。
解析:becoveredin表示“覆蓋著...”,present表示“呈現(xiàn)、端上“。
場(chǎng)景五:趣味收尾
風(fēng)波過后,故事以一種輕松、愉快的方式收尾。大家可能會(huì)一起談笑,回憶剛才的滑稽經(jīng)歷,氣氛變得融洽和滿足。
21.Wespenttherestoftheeveningsharingstoriesandlaughingaboutourlittle'adventure'.
我們晚上剩下的時(shí)間都在分享故事,笑談我們這次小小的“冒險(xiǎn)
解析:spendtimedoingsth表示“花費(fèi)時(shí)間做某事",adventure加了引號(hào),指代剛才的趣事。
22.Thatdaybecamealegendarystoryinourfamily,toldandretoldateverygathering.
那天的事戌了我們家的一個(gè)傳奇故事,每次聚會(huì)都會(huì)被反復(fù)講述。
解析:legendary表示“傳奇的",repeatedly表示“反復(fù)地”。
23.Wetookasillygroupphototorememberthemomentforever.
我們拍了一張傻乎乎的合影,以永遠(yuǎn)記住這一刻V
解析:silly表示“傻的、滑稽的”,groupphoto表示“合影”。
24.Eventhoughtheplanfailedcompletely,weallagreeditwasthemostfunwe*dhadinages.
盡管計(jì)劃完全失敗了,但我們都一致認(rèn)為這是很久以來我們玩得最開心的一次。
解析:eventhough引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句,:nages表示“很久”。
25.Wecleanedupthemesstogether,stilljokingaboutwhathadhappened.
我們一起活理了爛攤子,仍然拿剛才發(fā)生的事開玩笑。
解析:cleanupthemess表示“清理爛攤子”,jokeaboul表示“拿…開玩笑”。
場(chǎng)景六:感悟升華
這是故事的結(jié)尾,進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單的感悟升華。主人公從中體會(huì)到樂觀心態(tài)的重要性,或意識(shí)到這些趣事增進(jìn)了彼此的感
情,懂得了珍惜生活。
26.1learnedthatthebestmemoriesoftencomefromthemostunexpectedmoments.
我明白了,最美好的回憶往往來自于最意想不到的瞬間。
解析:comefrom表示“來自于“,unexpected表示“意想不到的
27.lttaughtusthatlaughingtogetheristhebestwaytoovercomeanysmalltrouble.
它告訴我們,一起大笑是克服任何小麻煩的最好方法。
解析:overcometrouble表示“克服麻煩”,動(dòng)名詞短語laughingtogether作主語。
28.Werealizedllialit'snutperfecliun,butimperfecliuiiIhalmakeslifefunandreal.
我們意識(shí)到,讓生活有趣而真實(shí)的不是完美,而是不完美。
解析:強(qiáng)調(diào)句句型Itis...that...,強(qiáng)調(diào)了imperfection(不完美)。
29.Thisfunnyincidentbroughtusclosertogetherthaneverbefore.
這個(gè)有趣的事件讓我們比以前更加親密了。
解析:bringtogether表示“使相聚、使親密”,比較級(jí)closerthaneverbefore表示“比以往任何時(shí)候都更親密”。
30.NowIunderstandthatapositiveattitudecanturnadisasterintoafunstory.
現(xiàn)在我明白了,積極的態(tài)度可以把一場(chǎng)災(zāi)難變成一個(gè)有趣的故事。
解析:tuniAintoB表示“把A變成B”,apositiveattitude表示“積極的態(tài)度
高考真題演練
2025年I月八省聯(lián)考(彪悍機(jī)車黨的柔軟愛心)
IwasinPhiladelphiaforaconferencewhenIsawanadinthehotel.Anearbytheaterwasshowingadocumentary(紀(jì)錄片)
aboutseverallocalanimalsheltersthatwerehelpingtosaveabandoneddogsacrossthecountry.Iloveanimals,andIfeltanurge
togotothisfundraisingevent.However,noneofmyco-workerswouldgowithme,andIwasworriedaboutwalkingonthestreet
aloneatnight.
Iresignedmyselftospendingtheeveninginmyhotelroom,butassoonasIgotbacktomyroomIfeltrestlessandbored.
Thetheaterwheretheeventwastakingplacewasonlyaboutfiveblocksfromthehotel,andtheareaaroundthehoteldidn'tseem
particularlydangerous.So,Idecidedtobraveit.Igatheredupmywalletandroomkeyandsetoff.
Itwasalreadygettingdarkandthestreetswerenearlydeserted.Imanagedtofindthestreetthetheaterwason,butwhenI
turnedthecoiner.Istoppedinshock.Infrontofthetheaterwereagroupofbikers-verybig,tough-lookingbikers.
I'veknownlotsofmotorcycleenthusiastsandmostarenicepeople.However,inthiscase,Iwasawomanallalone,ina
strangeneighborhood,atnight,andthereweretwentyorsoverylargernen-allwearinginsignia(徽章)thatindicatedtheywerein
somesortofclub-standingbeforeme.Warningbellsbegantosoundinmyhead,andmyheartwaspounding.WasIattheright
theater?HadImisreadthedateoftheevent?
AsignoutsidethetheatertoldmethatIwasintherightplaceontherightevening.Nevertheless,IwonderedifIshouldrush
backtomyhotelinsteadofwalkingthrough(hatcrowdofbikers.IfinallydecidedthatIwouldbesaferinsidethetheater.
Hopefully,thebikerswouldhavegoneawayby(hetimethefilmwasover.
注意:
(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;
(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Paragraph1:Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.
Paragraph2:Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.
【范文1】
/hurriedintothetheater、。心tofbidthereweremorebikersinside.MyheartsankandIfeltabilpanicked.ButI
noticedthattheywereallveryorderly.Somewerechattingquietlyaboutthedogstheyhadrescued.Itookadeepbreathand
foundanemptyseatasfarawayfromthemaspossible.Iwasstillabitnervousbuttriedtocalmmyselfdown,waitingforthefilm
tostart.
Whenthefilmbeean,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescue5roep.Theywerehereforthesamereasonasme-
tosupport(helocalanimalshelters.Ifeltsoashamedofmyinitialfear.Asthefilmplayed,Isawtheireffortsinsaving(he
abandoneddogs.Theyweresopassionateandkind.Afterthefilm,Iwentuptothemandapologizedfbrmymisjudgment.They
justlaughedandsaiditwasokay.Weevenexchangedcontactinformationtokeepintouchaboutfutureanimal-savingactivities.
主旨大意
文章主要講述了"我"在費(fèi)城參加會(huì)議期間,因熱愛動(dòng)物想獨(dú)自去觀看一場(chǎng)關(guān)于動(dòng)物救助站的紀(jì)錄片籌款活動(dòng),
途中遇到一群看起來很兇悍的摩托車騎手,盡管害怕但還是決定進(jìn)入劇院,為后續(xù)在劇院內(nèi)的發(fā)現(xiàn)等情節(jié)做鋪墊,
展現(xiàn)出一場(chǎng)因誤解產(chǎn)生緊張又意外的經(jīng)歷。
伏筆
文中提至「有二十個(gè)左右身材高大的男人一一都佩戴著表明他們屬于某個(gè)俱樂部的徽章一一站在我面前",以
及“我〃內(nèi)心的擔(dān)憂和糾結(jié)要不要進(jìn)入劇院等描寫,都為后文揭示這些騎手的真實(shí)身份埋下伏筆,讓讀者也跟著“我〃
…起好奇他們到底是怎樣的群體。
情節(jié)發(fā)展
先是"我''看到活動(dòng)廣告想?yún)⒓訁s因無人陪同而猶豫,最終決定獨(dú)自前往。接著在劇院外看到一群令人生畏的
騎手,一番思想斗爭(zhēng)后進(jìn)入劇院,發(fā)現(xiàn)里面還有更多騎手,最后在電影開始時(shí)才明白他們?cè)瓉硎莿?dòng)物救援團(tuán)體,
情節(jié)層層遞進(jìn),充滿意外感。
情緒變化
從一開始對(duì)活動(dòng)的期待,到獨(dú)自出行時(shí)的些許不安,看到騎手后的極度緊張、害怕,再到進(jìn)入劇院后的忐忑,
最后得知真相后的釋然,情緒變化豐富且符合情節(jié)發(fā)展邏輯,使讀者能很好地代入"我"的視角感受整個(gè)過程。
主題句
1."Don'tjudgeabookbyitscover,asthosewhoseemintimidatingmighthaveakindheart."
不要以貌取人,那些看似令人生畏的人或許有著善良的心。
2."Appearancescanbedeceiving,andunexpectedkindnessmayconicfromthemostunlikelypeople."
外表可能具有欺騙性,意想不到的善意或許來自最不可能的人。
3."Oneshouldnevermakeassumptionsbasedonlooksalone,forthere'softenmorethanmeetstheeye."
人們絕不應(yīng)該僅憑外表就妄下論斷,因?yàn)橥泻芏鄡?nèi)在的東西是看不到的。
4."Underneathatoughexteriorcouldlieawarmandcaringsoul,justasthosebikersdid."
在強(qiáng)硬的外表之下可能藏著一顆溫曖且有愛心的靈魂,就像那些騎手一樣。
5."Weshouldlookbeyondappearancestodiscover(hetruenatureofothers,asthebikers'storyshows."
我們應(yīng)該透過外表去發(fā)現(xiàn)他人的真實(shí)品性,正如那些騎手的故事所展示的那樣。
【范文2】
/hurriedintothetheater,onlytofndtherewereevenmorebikersinside.MyheartsankandIfeltlikeIhadwalked
intoalion'sden.Theywerechattingloudlyandseemedtofilleverycorneroftheplace.Iquicklyfoundanemptyseatinacorner,
tryingtomakemyselfasinconspicuousaspossible.Ikeptstealingglancesatthem,stillfeelingextremelynervous.
Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.TheywerehereforthesamereasonasI
was-tosupporttheanimalshelters.Theyhadorganizedthiseventtoraisefundsandawarenessfortheabandoneddogs.AsI
watchedthemwatchingthefilmwithsuchpassionandcareintheireyes,Itcltashamedofmyinitialjudgment.Iwastouchedby
theirloveforanimalsandgladthatIhadn'tletmyfearstopmefromcoming.
生詞歸納:
1.“inconspicuous":形容詞,意為“不顯眼的;不引人注意的“,例句“Hetriedtomakehimselfinconspicuousinthecrowd.”
(他試圖在人群中讓自己不引人注意。)
2?tinitialM:形容詞,意思是“最初的;開始的“,例如"Herinitialreactionwasoneofshock."(她最初的反應(yīng)是震驚。)
高級(jí)句式解析:
1.uonlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside”是不定式作結(jié)果狀語,表示意料之外的結(jié)果,生動(dòng)地體現(xiàn)出“我”進(jìn)入
劇院后看到更多騎手時(shí)那種糟糕乂意外的心情。
2.“Ifeltashamedofmyinitialjudgment”使用了"beashamedoF’這一短語,表示“為.感到羞愧”,準(zhǔn)確地傳達(dá)出"我”
得知真相后對(duì)自己一開始僅憑外表判斷他人的慚愧心理。
【范文3】
Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.Ifrozeforamoment,mypalmssweatingand
mymindracingwithallkindsofworst-casescenarios.ButsinceIwasalreadyinside,Itookadeepbreatiiandwalkedslowly
towardsanemptyrow,constantlyawareofiheirpresencearoundme.
Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.Ilturnedoutthattheywereusingtheir
club'sinfluencetoadvocateforthesepooranimals.Theyweretheoneswhohadputalotofeffortintoorganizingthisfundraising
event.Watchingthemsoengrossedinthedocumentary,Icouldn'thelpbutsmile.Iwasrelievedthatmyunfoundedfearshadbeen
justIhat-unfounded.AndIwastrulyinspiredbytheirdedicationtothecauseofhelpinganimals.
生詞歸納:
1.“scenarios”:名詞,復(fù)數(shù)形式,意為“設(shè)想;方案;情節(jié)",如"Weneedtoconsiderdifferentscenariosbeforemakinga
decision"(在做決定之前我們需要考慮不同的設(shè)想情況。)
2.“engrossed":形容詞,“全神貫注的;專心致志的“,常用搭配“beengrossedin”,例如“Hewasengrossedinreadingthe
book.“(他全神貫注地讀那本書。)
高級(jí)句式解析:
1.“Ifrozeforamoment,mypalmssweatingandmymindracingwithallkindsofworst-casescenarios.”此句運(yùn)用了獨(dú)立主
格結(jié)構(gòu),“mypalmssweating”和“mymindracing”分別對(duì)“我”當(dāng)時(shí)的狀態(tài)進(jìn)行了細(xì)節(jié)描寫,使畫面感更強(qiáng),更生動(dòng)地展現(xiàn)出
“我”緊張害怕的樣子。
2.“ItTurnedoutthattheywereusingtheirclub'sinfluencetoadvocateforthesepooranimals."中“Itturnedoutthat...”是一個(gè)
常用句型,意為“結(jié)果是……;原來是……”,用于引出意想不到的結(jié)果或真相,在這里很好地起到了揭示騎手真實(shí)身份
和目的的作用。
2021年1月浙江卷(尷尬的萬圣節(jié))
Pumpkin(WM)carvingatHalloweenisafamilytradition.WevisitalocalfarmeveryOctober.Inthepumpkinfield,I
competewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggestpumpkin.Mydadhasarulethatwehavetocarryourpumpkins
backhome,andastheeldestchildIhaveanadvantage—Icarriedan85-pounderbacklastyear.
Thisyear,itwashardtotellwhethermyprizeortheonechosenbymy14-year-oldbrother,Jason,wasthewinner.
Unfortunatelywcforgottoweighthembeforetakingouttheirinsides,butIwasdeterminedtoprovemypoint.Allofuswerehard
atworkatthekitchentable,withmymomfilmingtheannualevent.I'munsurenowwhyIthoughtforcingmyheadinsidethe
pumpkinwouldsettlethematter,butitseemedtomakeperfectsenseatthetime.
Withthepumpkinrestingonthetable,holeuppermost,Ibentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening.AtfirstIgot
jammedjustabovemyeyesandthen,asIwentonwithmytask,unwillingtoquit,mynosebrieflypreventedentry.Finally
Imanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit,likeacork(軟木塞)forcedintoabottle.Iwasabletostraightenupwiththehuge
pumpkinrestingonmyshoulders.
Myexcitementwasshort-lived.Thepumpkinwasheavy."I'mgoingtosetitdown,now,"Isaid,andwithJasonhelping
tosupportitsweight,Ibentbackover(hecabletogiveitsomewheretorest.ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatI
realizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraighltorwardthangettingin.When1pulledhard,mynosegotintheway.Igotintoa
panicasIpressedfirmlyagainstthetabicandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butitwasnouse."Ican'tget
itout!^^Ishouted,myvoicesoundingunnaturallyloudintheenclosedspace.
注意:
1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;
3.續(xù)寫完成后,請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。
Paragraph1:Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.
Paragraph2:ThatvideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween.
【參考范文1】
Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Growingmorepanic,Ibegantocry.Fortunately,hearingme
crying,dadcameandhelpedmelaymyheadonthetable,somyneckcouldrestforawhile.Thenhesaidtome“Listen,honey.I
havetocutthispumpkininhalf.MIhadnochoicebuttokeepstillwithmyeyestightlyclosedandlisteningtotheknifemoving
on(hepumpkin.Momentslater,myheadwasfinallyreleasedfromthishorriblepumpkincage.Thenmomtoldmeshehadjust
filmedmemanagingtopullmyheadoutofthepumpkin.
ThatvideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween.ActuallymymomhadaskedwhethershecouldpostitontheInternet,
becauseafterallIwassoembarrassedandlookedsosillyinit.Anyway,Inoddedandsupportedheridea.Itturnedoutthatpeople
likedandforwardedi(crazilyon(heInternet,onlytomakemeanInternetcelebrity.
【參考范文2】
Itwasfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Theairinsidethehollowvegetablewasfullofmyanxiousbreath.I
couldhearmysister'slaughterandJason'smuffledvoicetalkingaboutcuttingthegiantthingepen."No!Notmy
preciouspumpkin!^^Iprotested.Eventually,Dadhelpedmeadjustmybodytoamorerelaxedposition,andpulledthepumpkin
gentlyoffmyhead.Hairinknots,noseandchaincoveredinpumpkinflesh,Iletoutasighofrelief.That'swhenIrealizedthe
camerahadbeenrollingthewholetime!
ThevideowaspostedonlinetheMondaybeforeHalloweenAlookedjustlikeapumpkinheadinit.Embarrassedandalittle
annoyed,Ifledtomyroom,butMomstoppedme."Youhaven'treadthecommentsyct.,,Iscrolleddownthescreenandmarveled
atthestoriestheviewerssharedaboutHalloween.Onegirlrecalledcelebratingitwithherbrothersandsisters,andthankedusfor
“bringingherhome”.Thewordsbroughtwarmthtomyheartandtearstomyeyes.Ifeltluckytobeapartofthismischievousyet
lovingfamily.
模擬演練
1.閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
Oneday,Ifoundawalletonthestreet.Thewalletcontainedonlythreedollarsandaveryoldletter.Theenvelopewas
wornandtheonlythingonitwasthereturnaddress.Istartedtoopentheletter,hopingtofindsomeinformation.ThenIsaw
thedate-1990,and(hesignalure-Beatrice.Theletterwaswrittenseveraldecadesago.
ThenImadeeveryeffortandfoundoutthatBeatricewasnowworkinginahospital.Ishowedhertheletter.Thesecond
shesawtheletter,shetookadeepbreathandsaid,“Youngman,thisletterwasthelastcontactIeverhadwithHenry.Heismy
onlybrother.Ilovedhimverymuch.Iwasonly16atthetimeandmybrotheristwoyearsyoungerthanme.Ifyoucanfind
him,te'lhimI'mstilllookingfbrshesaidandtearsbegantowellupinhereyes."Motheriswaitingfbrhimtocome
backhome.”
WhenIwalkedoutofthebuildingwiththewalletinmyhand,theguardofthebuildingrecognizedthewallet,andwith
hishelp,Ifinallyfounditsowner,HenneIhandedthewallettoHenryandhesaid,“Yes,that'smine!Itmusthavedroppedout
ofmypocketthisaftemoon.^^
“1readtheletterinthehopeoffindingoutwhoownedthewallet.,,1said.Thesmileonhisfacesuddenlydisappeared.He
asked,"Youreadthatletter?"t4NotonlydidIreadit,butalsoBeatriceread.”Ireplied.Hesuddenlybecameexcited.4*Beatrice?
Youknowwheresheis?Howisshe?Pleasetellme,“hebegged."She'sfine.Shehasbeenlookingfbryou."Isaidsoftly.
Hegrabbedmyhandandsaid,“Sir,youknowsheismyonlysisterinthisworld.I'vealwaysmissedher.^^
HenryandItooktheelevator(電梯)downtoBeatrice'sroom.Iwalkedovertoher."Beatrice,nIsaidsoftly,pointingto
Henry,whowaswaitingwithmeinthedoorway.tkDoyouknowtheman?”
注意:
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為15()左右;
2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Beatriceadjustedherglasses,lookedforamoment,butdidn'tsayaword.
AboutthreeweekslaterIgotacallatmyofficefromBeatrice.
【答案】Paragraph1:
Beatriceadjustedherglasses,lookedforamoment,butdidn'tsayaword.Henrysaidsoftly,almostinawhisper,
“Beatrice,it'sHenry.Doyourememberme?MShesaidexcitedly,“Henry!Idon'tbelieveit!Henry!It*syou!MyHenry!”He
walkedslowlytowardsherand(heyhugged.ThenurseandIleftwithtearsfallingdownourfaces.
比阿特麗斯調(diào)整了一下眼鏡,看了一會(huì)兒,但一句話也沒說。亨利輕聲說,幾乎是輕聲說,“比阿特麗斯,是亨
利。你還記得我了嗎?她興奮地說,“亨利!”我不相信!亨利!是你的名字!我的亨利先生!他慢慢地向她走去,他
們擁抱在一起。護(hù)士和我離開了,眼淚流了下來。
Paragraph2:
AboutthreeweekslaterIgotacallatmyofficefromBeatrice."CanyoubreakawayonSundaytoattendaparty?Henry
andBeatricearcgoingtohaveapartyinthehome!”Itwasabcautifi.ilpartywithallthepeopledresseduptojoininthe
celebration.Ifyoueverwantedtoseeawomanandamanactinglike(woteenagers,youhadloseethiseldersisterand
youngerbrother.Itwasaperfectendingforafamilyaffectionthathadlastednearlyseveraldecades.
大約三周后,我接到比阿特麗斯的電話?!澳阈瞧谔炜梢詤⒓泳蹠?huì)嗎?'‘亨利和比阿特麗斯將在家里舉辦一個(gè)聚會(huì)!
“這是一個(gè)美麗的派對(duì),所有人都盛裝參加慶?;顒?dòng)。如果你想看到一個(gè)女人和一個(gè)男人像兩個(gè)青少年,你必須看到
這個(gè)娟姐和弟弟。這是一個(gè)持續(xù)了近兒十年的家庭感情的完美結(jié)局。
【解析】
本文以信封為線索展開,講述了作者在街上發(fā)現(xiàn)了一個(gè)錢包,在里面發(fā)現(xiàn)一封破舊的信,通過努力找到信主人的
姐姐,通過保安大叔找到了錢包主人,最后,姐弟重逢的故事。
1.段落續(xù)寫:
①內(nèi)第一段首句內(nèi)容“比阿特麗斯扶了扶眼鏡,看了一會(huì)兒,但沒有說一句話。“可知,第一段可描寫姐弟兩人重
逢的溫馨場(chǎng)景。
②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“大約三周后,我在辦公室接到比阿特麗斯的電話?!笨芍?,第二段可描寫作者對(duì)重逢事件的
感慨。
2.續(xù)寫線索:發(fā)現(xiàn)信封——找到信封主人姐姐一找到主人一姐弟重逢一感謝一感悟
3.訶匯激活
行為類
接電話:getacallat/putsbonto/pickupthetclcphonc/answcrthephone
抽出時(shí)間:breakawayon/taketimeofiVspareone'stime
情緒類
興奮:didexcitcdly/thrilled
淚流;前面:tearsbathe/streamdown/one'scheeks
【點(diǎn)睛】
[高分句型1]:ThenurseandIleftwithtearsfallingdownourfaces.這句話運(yùn)用了with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)。
[高分句型2]:Itwasaperfectendingforafamilyaffectionthathadlastednearlyseveraldecades這句話運(yùn)用/that弓I
導(dǎo)的定語從句。
2.閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。
“Iwillhaverevenge(復(fù)仇)onhim,andmakehimregretwhathedidtome,“saidPhiliptohimself,hisfaceredwith
anger.Stephen,whohappenedatthatmomenttowalkpastandhearhimtalkingtohimself.
“Whoisthatyouwanttotakerevengeon?”askedStephen.Philiplookedathisfriendandsaid,“Youremembermynew
ballgivenbymyfather?Look!Itispunctured!ItwasfarmerRobinson'ssonwhodidthis^,^
SuphenaskedhimwhyyoungRobinsonhadruinedit."Iwaswalkingandkickingmyball.^^Philipreplied,4iByaccident,
whenIwasoppositethegate,myballbumpedoverabucketofwaterlef:inthepathwayby
“Hecameupandbegantoyellatme.IassuredhimthatwhatIhaddonewasanaccident,andthatIwasterriblysorryfbr
it.Ialsoofferedtofetchanotherbucketofwaterforhim.ButdespiteallIhadsaid,hetookanailoutofhispocketandtwisted
itintotheball,asyousee.Iwillmakehimpayfbrthis.**
“Honestlyspeaking,“saidStephen.uhcisalreadypunishedfbrwha:hehasdone,becausenobodylikeshimandheoften
walksaroundalone.Heisjustalonelyandmiserableboy.Thiswillbeenoughrevengefbryou.”
“ButtheballismyfavoritegiftandIenjoyplayingwithitsomuch...^^murmuredPhilip.
“NowPhilip,“saidStephen,”【thinkyoucanactbetterthanhimintennsofgettingrevenge.Iwilltellyouwhat
happenedtohimnotlongago.”
“Awhileagohesawabeehoveringaboutaflower.Hecaughtthebeeandwasgoingtopulloffitswingsfbrfiin.The
bee,ofcourse,stunghim.Thepainmadehimsoangrythat,likeyou,hedecidedtogetrevenge.Hegotastick,andpressedit
intothebeehive(蜂巢)
“Immediatelythewholeswarmofbeesflewoutandstunghimsobadlythathehadtospendafewdaysinbed.”
“Soyousee,hewasnotverysuccessfulingettingrevenge.Whatifhecouldactbelterandforgivethebeeforstinging
him?”askedStephen.
Paragraph1:"Imustsay/*repliedPhilip,4kthatyouradviceseemsverygood”.
Paragraph2:Afewdaysafterward,PhilipsawthisyoungRobinsonfallashewascarryinghomeahe
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