WritealetterofadviceReadingforwritingUnit1

TeenageLifeBeabletousewordsandexpressionstogiveadviceaboutproblemsfacedwithseniorhighstudentsBeabletoobtainthestructureofaletterofadviceBeabletowritealetterofadvicesuccessfullyLearningobjectivesLeadinWhat’stheproblemoftheboyinthevideo?PhoneaddictionProblemsofteensGenerationgapLoneliness/SadnessPuppylovestressBullyingSmokingLackofsleepWhatshouldyoudowhenfacingtheseproblems?1.Listentomusictorelaxyourself2.Turntoyourparents/teachers/friendsforhelp3.Keepadiary4.Spendtimeinthegym5.Concentrateonotherthings6.Askanadviser......Givinggoodadviceisanart.Today,wearegoingtolearnhowtowritealetterofadvicetohelpourfriendswhoareintrouble.Let'sfirstreadaletterfromSusanLuotoa‘WorriedFriend'andseehowshedoesit.”ThepartsofaletterDateGreetingBodyCloseSignatureReadingSusanLuo,anadviserforteenagers,hasreceivedaletteraskingforsomeadvice.Readandanswer.1.Whohasaproblem?2.Whogivesadvice?3.What’stheproblem?4.What’stheadvice?DearWorriedFriend,Youwrotethatyouareveryworriedaboutyourfriend,ChenLei.Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrible.Youthinkthatyourfriendplayscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.Irecommendthatyoutalktoyourfriendabouthisbehaviour.Itisnotunusualforteenagersofyourgenerationtobeattractedtocomputergamesandtheonlineworld.Butspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonotherthingsinlife.SomestudentsevenbecomeaddictedtotheInternetandcannotconcentrateonschoolandfamilylife.Ithinkyoushouldencourageyourfriendtotrynewhobbies.Whynotdiscusstheproblemtogether?Iamsurehewilllistentoyou,sinceyouarehisgoodfriend.AllthebestSusanLuoWhohasaproblem?ChenLeiWhogivesadvice?SusanLuoWhat’stcheproblem?playcomputerstoooftenandspendtoomuchtimeonlineDearWorriedFriend,Youwrotethatyouareveryworriedaboutyourfriend,ChenLei.Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrible.Youthinkthatyourfriendplayscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.Irecommendthatyoutalktoyourfriendabouthisbehaviour.Itisnotunusualforteenagersofyourgenerationtobeattractedtocomputergamesandtheonlineworld.Butspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonotherthingsinlife.SomestudentsevenbecomeaddictedtotheInternetandcannotconcentrateonschoolandfamilylife.Ithinkyoushouldencourageyourfriendtotrynewhobbies.Whynotdiscusstheproblemtogether?Iamsurehewilllistentoyou,sinceyouarehisgoodfriend.AllthebestSusanLuoWhat’stheadvice?1.talktoyourfriend2.trynewhobbies3.discusstheproblemtogetherAnyothersuggestions?Youwrotethatyouareveryworriedaboutyourfriend,ChenLei.1234Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrible.Youthinkthatyourfriendplayscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.Iamsurehewilllistentoyou,sinceyouarehisgoodfriend.Irecommendthatyoutalktoyourfriendabouthisbehaviour.Itisnot…

Whynotdiscusstheproblemtogether?D.Ithinkmyadvicewillhelp.B.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.C.Thisismyadviceandreasons.A.Iknowwhattheproblemis.D.Ithinkmyadvicewillhelp.B.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.C.Thisismyadviceandreasons.A.Iknowwhattheproblemis.Organisation:Findandmarkthepartsoftheletterthatmatchthefollowingpoints.DearWorriedFriend,Youwrotethatyouareveryworriedaboutyourfriend,ChenLei.Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrible.Youthinkthatyourfriendplayscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.Irecommendthatyoutalktoyourfriendabouthisbehaviour.Itisnotunusualforteenagersofyourgenerationtobeattractedtocomputergamesandtheonlineworld.Butspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonotherthingsinlife.SomestudentsevenbecomeaddictedtotheInternetandcannotconcentrateonschoolandfamilylife.Ithinkyoushouldencourageyourfriendtotrynewhobbies.Whynotdiscusstheproblemtogether?Iamsurehewilllistentoyou,sinceyouarehisgoodfriend.AllthebestSusanLuoHowdidMsLuoshowunderstandingandmakesuggestionsintheletter?Iunderstandquitewellthat...showunderstandingunderstandingsuggestionsIrecommendthat+shoulddo...Ithinkyoushoulddo...Whynotdo...WritingDearWorriedFriend,Youwrotethatyouareveryworriedaboutyourfriend,ChenLei.Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrible.Youthinkthatyourfriendplayscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.Irecommendthatyoutalktoyourfriendabouthisbehaviour.Itisnotunusualforteenagersofyourgenerationtobeattractedtocomputergamesandtheonlineworld.Butspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonotherthingsinlife.SomestudentsevenbecomeaddictedtotheInternetandcannotconcentrateonschoolandfamilylife.Ithinkyoushouldencourageyourfriendtotrynewhobbies.Whynotdiscusstheproblemtogether?Iamsurehewilllistentoyou,sinceyouarehisgoodfriend.AllthebestSusanLuoPara1寫作背景/點(diǎn)明問題/表示理解/寫作目的Para2提出建議及其原因/好處Para3表達(dá)愿望AletterofadvicePara1寫作背景I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingmeforadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwell.Practice（一句多譯）：

我很高興收到你的來信詢問我關(guān)于如何學(xué)好英語的建議。I'vejustreceivedyourletter,knowingthatyouarehavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell.Thanksforyourletter.I’msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell.Para1理解與共情Practice很抱歉聽到你對新學(xué)校的生活感到壓力大并且焦慮不安。I'msorrytohearthatyouarefeelingstressedandanxiousaboutyournewschoollife.Icompletelyunderstandhowyoufeel.It'sacommonproblemamongteenagers.我完全能理解你的感受。這是青少年是常見的問題。Pleasedon'tworrytoomuch.It'scompletelynormaltofeelconfusedandunderpressure.請不要擔(dān)心。感到困惑和有壓力完全是正常的。Para1寫作目的（過渡句）Practice我現(xiàn)在給你寫信給你提供一些建議。I'mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions.HereareafewsuggestionsthatIhopewillbehelpfultoyou.這是一些建議，希望對你有用。Don’tworry.Maybethefollowingtipscanhelpyousolvetheproblem不要擔(dān)心?；蛟S以下建議能幫助你解決問題。Para2提出建議及原因Practice你最好是跟父母好好溝通，這能幫助你消除一些誤會。You’dbetterhaveanhonestcommunicationwithyourparents,whichcanhelpyouclearupanymisunderstandings.Istronglyrecommendthatyoushouldtakepartinsomeextra-curricularactivities,whichwillnotonlyreduceyouranxiety,butalsoenrichyourknowledge.我建議你參加一些課外活動，既能減少焦慮，還能擴(kuò)充知識。

Frommypointofview,findingahobbyyouloveisagreatwaytorelax.依我看，找到你喜歡的興趣是放松的一個好方法。otherexpressionsPracticeWhynotdosth?Thisisagoodwayto...It’sagoodideatodosth.Bydoingthis,youwill...It’swisetodosthbecause...Howaboutdoingsth?Myadviceistodosth.Thereasonforthisisthat...It’shighlysuggestedthat...Ifyoudothis,youwill..關(guān)聯(lián)詞首先firstly/firstofall/tobeginwith...其次/另外secondly/what’smore/besides/inaddition/moreover最后thirdly/finally/lastbutnotleast總之inaword/allinall/inconclusion...Para3表達(dá)愿望與信心Practice希望我的建議對你有用。Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.Iwouldappreciateitifyoutakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.要是能考慮下我的建議我將感激不盡。

Ibelievethingswillbebetterifyoutakemysuggestions.如果你采納我的建議，我相信事情會變得更好WritingTaskGenerationgapPuppyloveLoneliness2Draftyourletteraccordingtotheoutlinebelow.Showthereaderthatyouknowtheproblemis.Tellthereaderthatyouunderstandhowhe/shefeels.Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkhe/sheshoulddo.Explainyourreason(s).Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkwillhappen.Writethedateandgreetthereader.Closeandsigntheletter.Theme:LonelinessYouwrotethat________________________________________________________________________.Iunderstandquitewellthat______________________________________.It’snotunusualforteenagersto______________________________________.youalwaysfeellonelyafterschoolbecauseyourparentsworkinanothercitysometimesyouareanxiousandafraid.feellonelywhentheyliveawayfromtheirparentsEmotionalresonance(情感共鳴)SampleWritedownsomesuggestions.Ithinkyoushould____________________________________.Irecommendthatyoushould____________________________________.Whynot___________________________________________________?Theme:Lonelinesstalktoyourteachersaboutyourproblemconcentrateonyourstudycontactyourparentswithyour

phonewhenyouarefreeDearXuTing,Youwrotethatyoualwaysfeellonelyafterschoolbecauseyourparentsworkinanothercity.Iunderstandquitewellthatsometimesyouareanxiousandafraid.It’scommonforteenagerstofeellonelywhentheyliveawayfromtheirparents.Irecommendthatyoushouldtalktoyourteachersaboutyourproblem.It’snotunusualtofeelunaccustomedtobefarawayfromparentsatfirst.Butspendingtoomuchtimethinkingofyourparentsisnotgoodforyourschoollife,andmakesitimpossibleforyoutofocusonyourstudy.Ithinkyoushouldconcentrateonyourstudy.Bytheway,youcanuseyourfreetimetohelpothers,sincehelpingotherscanmakeusfeelhappy.Ialsoencourageyoutomakefriendswithyourclassmates,becausebeingfriendlytoyourclassmatescanmakeitpossibleforyoutob