專題11興趣、愛好與成長（人與自我）

【考情分析】

年份卷別主題話題

2023新高考I卷人與自我之個人成長我被鼓勵參加寫作比賽

2023浙江1月卷人與自然之人與動物我與蜂鳥的神奇邂逅

2022新高考I&II卷人與自我之個人成長鼓勵殘疾男孩參加越野跑

2022浙江6月卷人與社會之善行義舉為無家可歸者發(fā)放食物

2022浙江1月卷人與自我之個人成長與“最不合拍”搭檔成為好友

2021新高考I&II卷人與社會之親情關(guān)愛母親節(jié)的驚喜

2021浙江6月卷人與社會之善行義舉幫助別人度過難關(guān)

2021浙江1月卷人與社會之故事+遇險男孩意外卡住頭而走紅網(wǎng)絡(luò)

-I【寫作指導(dǎo)】

興趣、愛好與成長的主題涉及個人在閱讀、音樂、影視、烹飪、游戲、體育運動、表演、音樂、舞蹈、

旅游、花草動植物等方面的喜好。在進行“興趣、愛好與成長”主題類讀后續(xù)寫，寫作中除了講述自己的

某一個興趣愛好、還可以從家長或老師如何培養(yǎng)孩子的興趣愛好以及在這個過程中所產(chǎn)生的問題、觀點、

態(tài)度、矛盾的激化以及作者的成長經(jīng)歷等多方面來進行續(xù)寫。

【素材寶庫】

詞匯積累（名詞類）

hobby愛好interest興趣hiking徒步swimming游泳

gardening園藝gardener園丁camping露營piano鋼琴

boating劃船fishing釣魚basketball籃球dancing跳舞

tennis網(wǎng)球tabletennis乒乓球football足球popmusic流行音樂

musicband樂隊rock搖滾樂pekingopera京劇guitar吉他

guitarplayer吉他手rap說唱cinema電影院opera歌劇

comedy喜劇bass貝斯music音樂party聚會，組

詞匯積累（形容詞類）

interesting有趣的interested感興趣的free隨心所欲的comfortable舒月艮的

relaxed放松的，自由的relaxing令人輕松的easy容易的exciting令人激動的

詞匯積累（短語類）

goboating去劃船gofishing去釣魚

gohiking去徒步gocamping去露營

joinaclub參加俱樂部beinterestedin...對...感興趣

bekeenon喜歡befondof...昌歡...

haveatastefor愛好developaninterestin...培養(yǎng)在….方面的興趣

haveaneyefor...對...有鑒員力findanoutletforone'stalents找個施展自己才華的機會

enjoypopularmusic喜歡流行音樂beavailableforaninterview有時間參加面試

takeregularexercise經(jīng)常鍛煉buildupone'sbody/improveone'shealth強身健體

cometolike逐漸喜歡formagoodhabitofdoingsth.養(yǎng)成..的好習(xí)慣

climbmountains爬山developagreatlikingfor...漸漸愛上...

surftheInternet上網(wǎng)becrazyabout/haveapassionfor…酷愛...

playgames玩游戲developaninterestin...發(fā)展...方面的興趣

chatonline在線聊天broadenyourhorizons拓寬視野

句式積累

1.Travelisawaytobroadenourhorizons,throughwhichwecanlearnaboutdifferentculturesof

theworld,

旅游能開拓我們的視野，通過旅游,我們可以了解世界上的不同文化。

2.1enjoymyhobby.Itoffersmeanopportunitytodosomethinginterestingandcreative,Meanwhile,

providesmewithasourceofpleasure.

我享受著我的愛好。它提供給我一個做趣事，做有創(chuàng)意的事的機會。同時它還是我快樂的源泉。

3.MusicissoappealingtomethatIalwayslistentomusicwheneverI'mfree,whichbringsmeintoa

differentworld.Thefeelingisbeyondmywords.Ithasbecomesuchanimportantpartinmylife.

音樂對我很有吸引力，我自由的時候總是聽音樂，這把我?guī)У搅艘粋€不同的世界。這種感覺語言無法形容。

它已經(jīng)成為我生活中如此重要的一部分。

4.Icanhardlyimaginewhatlifewouldbelikewithouttravelling.

真的很難想象，如果沒有旅游我的生活會怎樣。

5.Wethinkwhatwearedoinginworththetimebecausewearedoingwhatweliketo.

我們認(rèn)為我們做的事是值得的,因為是我們喜歡的。

6.SinceI'minterestedincomputerscienceverymuch,Iwouldverymuchliketotakecoursesrelatedt

computers.

我對電腦科學(xué)很感興趣,因此非常想學(xué)與電腦相關(guān)的課程。

7.NeverforamomentcanIstopmyloveforreadingbecausebooksarewiseteachersaswellas

goodfriendsinmylife.Booksarethesourceofknowledgeandpower,fromwhichIbenefitalot.

我對書的熱愛一刻也不會停止，因為在我的生活中，書是睿智的老師和益友。書是知識和力量的源泉，我從中

獲益匪淺。

8.Myhobbyisreading,whichallowsmetoreducemystressfrommywork.我的愛好是讀書，這使我能

減輕工作帶來的壓力。

9.Myfavoritesportsareplayingtabletennisandswimming,soIoftengotoplaytabletennisorgoswi

mmingwithfriendsatweekends,whichhelpsmehaveakeenmind.

我最喜歡的體育運動是打乒乓球和游泳,因此我經(jīng)常在周末和朋友們一起去滑冰或者游泳，這能使我有敏捷

的頭腦。

10.Ithinkitisagoodhabittokeepadiaryeveryday,forithelpsmeconsolidatewhatI*velearned

inclassandimprovemywritingskills.

我認(rèn)為寫日記是我個好習(xí)慣，因為它幫助我鞏固在課堂上所學(xué)的東西，提高了我的寫作技能。

11.IalwaystakepartintheEnglishCornerwhereIoftenexchangemyEnglishstudyexperience

withothers,whichbroadensmyhorizonsandimprovesmyinterestinEnglish.

我一直參加英語角，在那里我經(jīng)常和其他人交流學(xué)習(xí)英語的經(jīng)驗，這拓寬了我的視野，提高了我對英語的興趣。

12.I'minterestedincommunicatingwithpeopleofdifferentculture.

我對和來自不同文化的人交流很感興趣。

13.Wehadgreatfunsinging,dancingandtellingjokesandstories.

我們從唱歌、跳舞、說笑話、講故事中獲得很多樂趣。

14.Beinganactiveyoungperson,Ilikesportsandoutdooractivities.Inaddition,I'measytoget

alongwithandIlikemakingfriends.

作為一個活躍的年輕人，我喜歡體育運動和戶外活動。此外，我很容易相處并且喜歡交朋友。

15.Hegoesforplayingonlinegames.

他喜歡玩在線游戲。

16.Shoppingismyfavoritehobbyinmysparetime.

購物是我閑暇時最大的愛好。

17.Asisoftenthecasewitholdpeople,mygrandfatherisfondoftalkingaboutgoodolddays.

就像其他老人一樣，我祖父也喜歡談?wù)撨^去的美好時光。

18.Itisthecustomtogivetipstowaitersinrestaurantsandtaxidrivers.

在餐館給服務(wù)員小費、給出租車司機小費被認(rèn)為是習(xí)俗。

19.Therewillbemanyactivities,suchasmakingdumplingsandcakes,givingperformances,playinggamesand

soon.

這里會有很多活動，例如：包餃子、做蛋糕、表演節(jié)目、玩游戲等。

20.Geniusisstronginterestandtenaciousfascination.

天才，就是強烈的興趣和頑強的入迷。

諺語積累

1.Withoutpolishing,gemstonesdonotshine.

不經(jīng)琢磨，寶石也不會發(fā)光。

2.Theroadtoloftygoalsisalwaysroughanddifficult.

通向崇高目標(biāo)的道路，總是崎嶇艱難的。

3.Ifpeoplearenotfarawayfromtheirinterestsandabsent-minded,theywillnotsucceedinlearning.

人若志趣不遠(yuǎn)，心不在焉，雖學(xué)無成。

4.Everyone'sheartloves,rawonionsmixedwithleeks.

各人心里愛，生蔥拌韭菜。

5.蘿卜白菜，各有所愛。

Radishandcabbage,eachhashisownlove.

6.Wearclothesandhats,eachhashisowngood.

穿衣戴帽，各有所好。

7.Interestisthebestteacher.

興趣是最好的老師。

8.Wherethereisnointerest,thereisnomemory.

哪里沒有興趣，哪里就沒有記憶。

9.Thingsgatherinwhattheywant.

物聚于所好。

10.Sinceancienttimes,peoplebegantoexplore,shouldoriginatefromthesurpriseofallthingsinnature.

古往今來人們開始探索，都應(yīng)起源于對自然萬物的驚異。

11.Differentpersonalitiesleadtodifferentinterests.

不同的品格導(dǎo)致不同的興趣愛好。

12.Whatyoulearnhappilywillneverbeforgotten.

高興學(xué)來的東西永不會忘。

13.Learningmustbeinkeepingwithone'sowninterestsinordertobenefit.

學(xué)問必須合乎自己的興趣，方可得益。

14.1hopetheScripturesandworshiptheTaohavetheirowngood.

望經(jīng)拜道，各有一好。

15.Themoreaddictedyouare,themoreskilledyouare.

嗜之越篤，技巧越工。

16.Interestdoesn'tlie.

興趣是不會說謊的。

17.Loveisthebeginningoflearning.

愛為學(xué)問之始。

18.Thelargertheislandofknowledge,thelongerthecuriousoceanline.

知識之島越大，好奇的海洋線越長。

19.Hobbyisthefirststeptoacquireknowledge.

愛好即獲得知識的第一步。

20.Loveisthebeginningoflearning.

愛為學(xué)問之始。

萬能寫作模板

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Havingbeenteachinganthropology（人類學(xué)）atDartmouthCollegefor15years,Istillremembertheday

whenIfirstencounteredthebookMargaretMeadsComingofAgeinSamoa,averyimportantbookonthestudyof

thesocialandculturaldevelopmentofpeoples.

WhenIwasfourteen,Iearnedmoneyinthesummerbycuttinglawns,andwithinafewweeksIhadbuiltupa

bodyofcustomers.Igottoknowpeoplebytheflowerstheyplanted,bythethingstheylostinthegrassorstuckin

thegroundonpurpose.Ilearnedsomethingaboutthemeasureofmyneighborsbytheirpreferredmethodof

payment:bythejob,bythemonth-ornotatall.

Mr.Balloufellintothelastcategory,andhealwayshadareasonwhy.Ononeday,hehadnochangeforafifty,

onanotherhewassimplyoutwhenIknockedonhisdoor.Still,exceptforthemoney,hewasaniceenougholdguy,

alwayswavinghishatwhenhe'dseenmefromadistance.Sure,Ikepttrackofthetotal,butIdidn'tworryabout

theamounttoomuch.

Then,onelateafternooninmid-July,thehottesttimeoftheyear,Iwaswalkingbyhishouseandheopened

thedoor,mentionedmetocomeinside.Thehallwascool,shaded,andittookmyeyesaminutetoadjusttothedim

light.

“Ioweyou,^^Mr.Ballou,^cbut...^^

Ithoughtrdsavehimthetroubleofthinkingofanewexcuse.a4Noproblem.Don'tworryaboutit.”

“Thebankmadeamistakeinmyaccount,hecontinued,ignoringmywords.tcItwillbeclearedupinadayor

two.ButinthemeantimeIthoughtperhapsyoucouldchooseoneortwovolumesforadownpayment.^^

HegesturedtowardthewallsandIsawthatbookswerestacked（堆放）everywhere.Itwaslikealibrary,

exceptwithnoordertothearrangement.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Mr.Ballouencouragedmetoread,borroworkeepthebooksIlike.

Tothisday,thirtyyearslater,Iclearlyrememberthisexperience.

【答案】

Mr.Ballouencouragedmetoread,borroworkeepthebooksIlike.Facingsomanybooksforthefirsttime,I

hadnoideawhichonetochoose.Niceenough,hesearchedformeandhandedafairlythickbookandaskedmeto

tellhimwhatthebookwasaboutthenextweek.Itwasmyfirstencounterwithworldliterature,andIwasso

impressedbythepoweranovelcouldcontainandabsorbedinreadingallthosevividcharactersandtheelegant,

simplelanguage.

Tothisday,thirtyyearslater,Iclearlyrememberthisexperience.NowIamateacherteachinganthropologyat

college.Forthatyear,Mr.Ballouneverpaidmesomemoneyforcuttinghislawnsbutledmetotheroadthatisfar

morevaluablethanmoney.Abook,ifitarrivesbeforeyouattherightmoment,intheproperseason,willchange

thecourseofallyourlife.

【分析】本文是記敘文。文章主要講述了作者對于第一次讀到瑪格麗特?米德的《薩摩亞人的成長》這本書

的回憶。十四歲那年，作者在夏天靠修剪草坪賺錢，Mr.Ballou是作者的顧客之一，由于資金問題，一直欠

著作者修剪草坪的錢。一天，Mr.Ballou邀請作者進入自己家中，對于欠錢有所尷尬的他希望作者能夠在自

己很多書籍中選一兩本書作為首付。Mr.Ballou幫助作者選了一本書，這是作者第一次接觸世界文學(xué)，同時

也被深深的吸引。在那一年里，Mr.Ballou從來沒有給過修剪草坪的錢，而是帶領(lǐng)作者走上了一條遠(yuǎn)比錢值

錢的路。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“Mr.Ballouencouragedmetoread,borroworkeepthebooksIlike.（Mr.Ballou鼓勵我讀、

借或保存我喜歡的書。）”可知，第一段可描寫作者面對如此多的書無從選擇，在Mr.Ballou的幫助之下，讀

到了第一本關(guān)于世界文學(xué)的書，而被深深吸引。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“Tothisday,thirtyyearslater,Iclearlyrememberthisexperience.（三十年后的今天，我仍然

清楚地記得這段經(jīng)歷。戶可知，第二段可描寫這段經(jīng)歷對于作者的影響和感受。

2.續(xù)寫線索：自己選書的為難——Mr.Ballou幫助選書——第一次讀書的感受——經(jīng)歷對作者的影響——感

悟

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①挑選：choose/searchfor/select

②要求：ask/require/want

③帶領(lǐng)：lead/guide

情緒類

①好意地：niceenough/kindly

②象好的：beimpressedby/haveagoodimpression

③生動活潑的：vivid/bright

④有價值的/珍貴的：valuable/precious

【點睛】［高分句型1］.Itwasmyfirstencounterwithworldliterature,andIwassoimpressedbythepoweranovel

couldcontainandabsorbedinreadingallthosevividcharactersandtheelegant,simplelanguage.（由并歹U連詞and

連接兩個分句；"anovelcouldcontain”為之前名詞“thepower”的定語從句，先行詞在從句中作動詞"contain”

的賓語，因此關(guān)系詞that/which被省略）

［高分句型2］.Abook,ifitarrivesbeforeyouattherightmoment,intheproperseason,willchangethecourseof

allyourlife.（由if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句）

［名校模擬題提升練】

1.（2023-20224湖南?階段練習(xí)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完

整的短文。

TheForgottenPages

Onceuponatime,inalandfaraway,therewasasmallvillage.Surroundedbythemajesticmountains,the

villagershappilylivedalifeofbliss.

Allofthemwereusedtotheirroboticdailytasksandnoneofthemhadtheimaginationorthewilltotry

somethingnew,exceptforonegirlnamedHannah.Veryfewpeopleinthevillagecouldreadletalonewrite,and

Hannahwasoneofthem.Herparentshadmadesurethattheironlychildgoteverythingpossible.

Hannahwasanadventurousspiritwithanimaginationfarbeyondhertime.Oneafternoon,whenHannahwas

ononeofheradventurousquests,shecameuponanabandonedcottage.Thecottagelookedveryoldinits

condition.EventhoughHannah'smotherhadstrictlywarnedhernottogowanderinginabandonedplaces,her

curiositygotthebestofher.

Shetip-toedslowlytothedoorandslowlyopeneditandshewasleftstunned.InfrontofHannahwasaroom

fullofbooks!Booksglisteringinthedust,baskinginthewarmsunlightjustwaitingtobeexplored.Hannahgasped

（倒吸氣）assherealizedthatshehadfoundahiddentreasure.Hannahbroomedanddustedalldaylonguntilshe

realizeditwasdarkandshehadtogoback.SoHannahpickedtwobooksanddecidedtoreadthematherhome.

Shewenthomeandallnightlong,shereadtheadventuroustaleshiddeninthebookcover.Thenextday,she

quicklygulpedherbreakfastandmadeherwaytothecottageagain.Hannahdevouredthebooks.

Theyweretoointerestingfilledwithstoriesaboutdifferentcreatures.Eachpagewasjustanadventurewaiting

tobeembarkedon.Hannah'simaginationtookhertoaworldoftalkinganimals,mysticalcreatures,anddaring

nights.Thelittlegirlwassoinspiredbythebooksandshelearnedthepowerofloveandfriendship!Withthegood

inheart,shedecidedtosharethetaleswiththepeopleofhervillage.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Sheknewitwouldbeadifficultjourney,butshewantedtosharethegoldwitheveryone.

Soon,thewordsofHannah'sstorytellingspreadtofar-offtowns.

【答案】

Sheknewitwouldbeadifficultjourney,butshewantedtosharethegoldwitheveryone.Shewantedtoignite

thesparksofcuriosityandimaginationinherpeers.Makingthishermission,Hannahstartedtellingtaleseveryday

athercottage.Sheaddedherowntouchofcuriosityeverynowandthentodifferentstories,makingthemmore

interesting.Inthebeginningonlyherverygoodfriendsandherfamilycametothereadings.Butthewordsofher

famoustalesspreadrapidlycausingmoreandmorepeopletocometothereadings.Seeingtheinterestofherown

people,Hannahstartedwritingstoriesofherowntoo!

Soon,thewordsofHannahsstorytellingspreadtofar-offtowns.Peopletraveledfromdifferentplacestojust

listentoherstories.EveryonewouldgatheraroundHannahinaweasshetoldherstories.Theoldcottagewasno

longerwitheringawayaspeoplefromherownvillagehelpedherbuildthecottageagain.Andthus,theforgotten

treasurelyingintheoldcottagetransformedintoaworldofinfiniteadventures,imaginationandpossibilities.

Hannahevenconductedworkshopsinwhichshetaughtherfellowshowtoreadandwrite.Hannah'spassionand

dedicationblewlifeintothetalesandherwordsbreathednewlifeintocountlesssouls.

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了Hannah是一個富有冒險精神的女孩兒，一天她在探險的時候發(fā)現(xiàn)

了一個小屋，里面有許多書籍，她對這些書籍非常感興趣，這些書太有趣了，充滿了關(guān)于不同生物的故事，

每一頁都是等待開始的冒險，她的想象力把她帶到了一個會說話的動物、神秘的生物和大膽的夜晚的世界，

她決定與村里的人們分享這些故事。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“她知道這將是一段艱難的旅程，但她想與大家分享這些寶藏。”可知，第一段可描寫

Hannah給同村人講故事以及她開始寫故事。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“不久，Hannah的故事傳遍了遙遠(yuǎn)的城鎮(zhèn)?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫Hannah講故事這件事

情的擴大及其影響。

2.續(xù)寫線索：開始講故事一她講的故事開始傳開一開始寫故事一人們趕來聽故事一小屋發(fā)生變化

一舉辦講習(xí)班——她帶來的影響

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①講故事:telltales/tellstories

②傳播：spread/diffuse

③轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)椋簍ransforminto/turninto

情緒類

①敬畏地：inawe/inreverence

②熱情：passion/enthusiasm

【點睛】[高分句型1]EveryonewouldgatheraroundHannahinaweasshetoldherstories.（由as引導(dǎo)的時間狀

語從句）

[高分句型2]Hannahevenconductedworkshopsinwhichshetaughtherfellowshowtoreadandwrite.（由“介詞

+which”引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句）

2.（2023-2024?滄州?階段練習(xí)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整

的短文。

MyhusbandandIhadpurchasedthepianosooursonanddaughtercouldtakepianolessons.ButIhada

secretdreamthatIdidnotsharewithanyone:IwantedtolearntoplaythepianoandsothatIcouldsitonapiano

benchandperformoneday.

Dayslater,Ipassedourannouncementboard,whichlisteditemsforsale,variousjobs,andatthebottom,

someonewasofferingpianolessons.

Myvoicetrembled（顫抖）whenIcalledthenumberthenextday.WhenthetutornamedMelodylearnedthatI

wasthestudent,shehesitated.Shehadnevertaughtabusyadultlearner,butshewaswillingtotryifIwas

determinedtolearn.

Whenmyfirstlessonendedasarranged,Melodyopenedthedoortohernextstudent,asix-year-oldboyfull

ofenthusiasm.MelodyintroducedusandtoldmehisnamewasJeff."I'mgoingtolearntoplaythepiano,“hetold

me.Nodoubtsorinsecuritiesgotintheboy'sway.Hisenthusiasmstruckme,andonmywayhome,Iwhispered,

Tmgoingtolearntoplaythepiano.”

However,Iwasn'tastarpupil.Ididn'thaveinstantrecallonhowtoreadmusic.Gettingbothhandsto

cooperatewasdifficultandthenIwasintroducedtothepedal（踏板）.MaybeIhadbeenjusttoopsychologically

stressedout.Consequently,Melodyblamedmefornotpracticingenough.Therefore,Ihadtolookatmytight

scheduletoseewhereIcouldmaketimetoimprovemyself.

Thefollowingweek,MelodytoldmeIwouldneedtoparticipateintheDecemberperformanceandthatIhad

toplaybymemory.IwouldhaveonemonthtomemorizetwopiecesandIhadn'tevenseenthemyet!Iwasin

despairandwantedtogiveup."It'stheconventional（依照慣例的）way,^^Melodysaidtomeinafirmvoice,t6and

evenJeffismemorizingthepiecesheisplaying.Thinkwhyyoucamehere!^^

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Herwordssuddenlyhadremindedmeofmysecretdream.

Onthedayoftheperformance,Isteppedslowlyontothestage.

【答案】

Herwordssuddenlyhadremindedmeofmysecretdream.Ihadwantedtoplaythepianonotjustto

accompanymychildrenbuttoexpressmyselfandtosharewiththemsomethingspecialthatonlyIcouldoffer.I

begantopracticediligently.Isetasidetimeeverydaytopractice,evenifitwasjustafewminutes.Gradually,the

piecesbegantosoundmoreandmorelikemusic.Icouldfeelthenotesundermyfingersandtherhythminmy

heartbeat.Thefinaltestcame.

Onthedayoftheperformance,Isteppedslowlyontothestage.Itookadeepbreath,andthenIbegantoplay.

Themusicflowedfrommyfingersandfilledtheroom.Iplayedwithallmyheart,allmypassion,allmylovefor

thepiano.Whenthelastnotesounded,theroomeruptedintoapplause.Ihaddoneit!Ismiledandbowed,feeling

proudundertheapprovalandencouragementoftheaudience.ItwasamomentofpurejoyandtriumphthatI

wouldrememberforalifetime.

【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇記敘文。文章講述了作者有一個秘密的夢想：學(xué)習(xí)彈鋼琴。她終于鼓足勇氣找到叫梅

洛迪的家庭教師教授她鋼琴課，但她的表現(xiàn)不佳。在得知還要在近期要參加演出時，作者打起了退堂鼓。

老師梅洛迪問她為什么來這里。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“她的話突然讓我想起了我的秘密夢想?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懤蠋煹脑捵屪髡哂浧鹆俗?/p>

己的初衷，她開始勤奮練習(xí)并取得巨大進步。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“演出那天，我慢慢地走上舞臺?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫作者忘情表演，演出成功。這成

為作者銘記一生的喜悅和勝利的時刻。

2.續(xù)寫線索：憶起初衷一開始苦練——小有成就一忘情表演一演出成功——銘記一生

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①表達：express/voice

②提供：offer/provide

③突然爆發(fā)：eruptinto/burstinto

情緒類

①勤奮地：diligently/industriously

②喜悅:joy/delight

【點睛】[高分句型1]Isetasidetimeeverydaytopractice,evenifitwasjustafewminutes.（運用了evenif弓|導(dǎo)

讓步狀語從句）

[高分句型2]Whenthelastnotesounded,theroomeruptedintoapplause.（運用了從屬連詞when引導(dǎo)時間狀語

從句）

[高分句型3]ItwasamomentofpurejoyandtriumphthatIwouldrememberforalifetime.（運用了關(guān)系代詞that

引導(dǎo)定語從句）

3.（2023年?來賓?期末）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的短文。

IstillrememberhownervousIfeltdoingsomethingsforthefirsttime.You'dthinkthatafteralotoffirst

timesthebutterflies-in-stomachfeelingwoulddisappear.Buthere'swhathappenedamonthago.

“Pleasecometothechessclubtomorrow,9,Mareyasaidtome."Iknowyou'regoingtoloveit!”"I'venever

evenplayedchess（國際象棋）JIsaid.“Itseemssuperhard.^^

“Iwentlastweek,anditwasextremelyfim!”saidMareya."Really?”Isaid,notconvinced.

“Really.Also,theclubneedsmorepeopletokeepitgoing.^^Mareyasmiled.

“Listen.Ifyoutryit,Fildomysillyrabbitdanceinthemiddleofrecess（課間休息）Ilaughed.uInfrontof

everyone?Ifsadeal!^^

WhenIarrivedathome.Isearchedourgameshelves.Finally,attheverybottomofthepile,Ifoundatattered

（破舊的）boxwithachessboardandplasticchesspieces.Ireadtheinstructionscarefully.Knights,rooks,bishops,

pawns,aking,andaqueen-eachpiecehadaspecialstartingplaceanditsownwayofmoving.Myheartsank.I

couldn'tpossiblymemorizealltherulesintime.EveryoneinthechessclubwasgoingtothinkIwas

inexperienced!

Thatnight,IdreamedIwasinachessgame,andthequeens,kings,andknightswerelaughingatme.Eventhe

knights'horsesweresnickering（竊笑）！Thenextday,ItoldMareyaIwashavingsecondthoughts.

“Pleasedon'tbackout,“shesaid."'Rememberourdeal.^^

“Iwouldliketoseeyoursillyrabbitdance,9,1said,smiling.

Afterschool,Ifoundthechessclub'smeetingroomandwentinside.Ilookedaround,butMareyawas

nowhereinsight!Tomakemattersworse,Ididn'tknowasinglepersonintheroom.Butterfliesfilledmystomach

asIstartedtoheadtowardthedoor.

"Hi!"saidafriendlywoman.'TmMs.Martinez.^^

"I'mArizona,1said."Iwassupposedtomeetafriend,butIdon'tseeher.I'dbettergetgoing.^^“Well,as

longasyou4rehere,whydon'tyousitwithJoeandJessandwatchtheirgame?”

注意：

1.續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Paragraph1:

Ididn'twanttoberude,soIsatdown.

Paragraph2:

Thenextday,atrecess,Mareyaranuptome.

【答案】

Ididn'twanttoberude,soIsatdown."I'lljuststayforammute.^^Ithought.Tomysurprise,Istayedtherefor

anhourandIactuallyhadfun.WatchingJoeandJessplayingfiercelyonthechessboard,Iwasveryexcitedand

eagertohaveatry.Alltheworriesandfeardisappearedatthatmoment.Itriedmybesttocontrolmyeagernessand

turnedtoaskMs.Martinezinawhisper,"MayIjointhechessclubtolearntoplaychess,Ms.Martinez?It'sreally

anamazinggame,whichIthinkFvefalleninlovewith.^^"Ofcourse,welcomeyou,Arizona!?,Ms.Martinezsmiled

andofferedherhandtomewarmly.

Thenextday,atrecess,Mareyaranuptome."Oh,Arizona,Iheardthatyoujoinedthechessclubyesterday

4t

andyouarethemembernow.^^Uponseeingme,sheshoutedatmecheerfully.Yeah?canIhavethehonourto

enjoyyoursillyrabbitdancenow?”Mareyaseemedtohesitateforamomentandanswered,tcNoproblem!It'sa

deal.^^Thenwelaughedtogether.Fromthenon,IwasnolongerafraidofbeinglaughedatbecauseIknewaslong

asIkeptmovingforward,thescaredfeelingwouldgoaway.

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了一個月前，作者受同學(xué)邀請參加國際象棋俱樂部，卻因自己從未

下過象棋而倍感緊張，生怕自己被大家嘲笑。最終，他勇敢地來到俱樂部，并迸發(fā)出了對象棋強烈的興趣

和熱愛，主動加入了俱樂部學(xué)習(xí)象棋的一段經(jīng)歷。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我不想失禮，所以我坐了下來?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懽髡咦掠^看同學(xué)下棋，自此產(chǎn)

生了興趣，主動要求加入俱樂部學(xué)習(xí)。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“第二天課間休息時，Mareya向我跑來?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫Mareya得知他加入俱樂

部后非常高興，作者要求她兌現(xiàn)承諾及兩人的反應(yīng)，并突出立意，呼應(yīng)主題。

2.續(xù)寫線索:坐下看下棋——產(chǎn)生興趣、躍躍欲試——請求加入俱樂部——得到許可——Mareya得知消息，

很興奮一要求Mareya兌現(xiàn)承諾一最初的擔(dān)憂、恐懼已不在一感悟

3.詞匯激活：

行為類：

①盡自己最大努力做某事：tryone'sbesttodo/sparenoefforttodo

②提供：offer/provide

③欣賞：enjoy/admire

④前進：moveforward/advance

情緒類：

①渴望做某事：beeagertodo/longtodo

②害怕、恐懼：fear/scare

③高興地：cheerfully/joyfully

【點睛】【高分句型1】It'sreallyanamazinggame,whichIthinkI'vefalleninlovewith.（運用了以關(guān)系代詞

which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句和省略了連接詞that的賓語從句。）

【高分句型21Fromthenon,IwasnolongerafraidofbeinglaughedatbecauseIknewaslongasIkeptmoving

forward,thescaredfeelingwouldgoaway.（運用了以連詞because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句和省略了連詞that的賓

語從句，以及aslongas引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。）

4.（廣東?模擬預(yù)測）閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

IlovetoplaythepianoandIgreatlyenjoyperformingmysongs,sowhentheannualwinterrecital（音樂演奏

會）wascanceled,Iwasdisappointed.Ihadlookedforwardtoitforalongtimeandhadalreadypreparedtwoof

mybestsongs.

Mymomhadawonderfulidea,however,toturnthisdisappointingthingintosomethingworthwhile.t4Youcan

performyoursongsatCarriageHouseSeniorLiving,9,mymomsuggestedbrightly."I'msuretheseniorstherewho

donothavefamiliestovisitthemthatoften,wouldreallyappreciatethemusicandyoucouldplaymorethanjust

twosongs.”

Iimmediatelythoughtthiswasagreatidea.OneofthethingsIdidnotlikeabouttherecitalswasthatIwas

limitedtoplayingjustacoupleofsongs.PlayingthepianoatCarriageHouseseemedlikeawin-winsituation

becausenotonlycouldIplaymoresongs,butIwouldalsohavethechancetocheeruptheresidentstherewith

somelivelytunes.

MymomcalledCarriageHouseandmadearrangementsformetoperform.Inthecomingincludingmanyold

classics.

Whentheexcitingdayfinallyarrived,myfamilyandIdrovetoCarriageHouse.Walkingthroughthe

enormousdoubledoors,westeppedintoanentrywaythatoverlookedthespaciousgranddiningroom.Rightatthe

entrancetothediningroomstoodthepianoasifitwerejustwaitingtomakesomemusictoliventheplaceupabit.

Atnearlyeverytableseveralgray-hairedwomenormenwereseatedenjoyingtheirdinnerandthecompanythat

thecrowdedroomprovided.Despitetheconversationsgoingonatvarioustables,isolationhunglikeadarkcloud

intheroom.

Almostimmediately,weweregreetedbyanoldwomanwithawalkerwhointroducedherselfasPhyllisin

chargeofCarriageHouse.Shewelcomedmeandledmetothestage.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

AsIsatdownonthebench,Ipressedakeyonthepianoandwassurprisedtohearnosound.

NervousnessmeltedawayandIstartedtoenjoytheperformancewiththeold.

【答案】

AsIsatdownonthebench,Ipressedakeyonthepianoandwassurprisedtohearnosound.Feelingasifthe

wholeworldwaswatchingme,Iwasstruckdeadwithembarrassment.HowcouldIperformthesongwithoutthe

piano?IwasonpinsandneedleswhenPhyllisslowlymadeherwaytothefrontofthecrowdofdinnersand

announcedinacomfortingtone,<6Thisgirlhascometosingforusbutthepianoseemstobealittlenervous.^^

Almostimmediately,therewasscatteredapplauseandseveralpeoplesteppedforwardtohelpmepluginthepiano

andsetthemicrophone.Witheverythingready,Itookadeepbr