寫作訓(xùn)練(二)Aletterofgivingadvice假設(shè)你叫李華，最近你的好友林丹來信說她升入高中后感到不太適應(yīng)，不知道如何盡快結(jié)交新朋友，請(qǐng)你用英語給她回一封信，提出一些建議（關(guān)心他人，樂于助人，參加活動(dòng)等）?！咀⒁狻啃诺拈_頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；詞數(shù)：100詞左右。建議信一般為三段：para1.表明目的para2.（重點(diǎn)段落）具體建議以及理由para3.希望采納,表達(dá)祝愿Tip：先寫給出提示的建議，再自己想，既保證合理扣題，也節(jié)省時(shí)間。DearLinDan, Iamgladtohearfromyou.FromyourletterIknowyouarefacingtheproblemonhowtomakenewfriendsinhighschool.Thefollowingaremysuggestions.________________________________________________________________________ Ihopemyadvicewillbeusefultoyouandyoucangetalongwellwithyournewclassmates.Iwishyouhappinessinyournewschool.Para2:建議+理由普遍存在的問題1.結(jié)構(gòu)零散，分太多段；2.條理不清晰，缺乏過渡詞；3.只有建議，沒有理由，不充實(shí)，字?jǐn)?shù)不夠；Para.2具體建議以及理由提建議常用句式:It’simportanttodo..Itshouldbeagoodidea(forsb.)todo…Youwillfindithelpful/usefultodosth.Doing...canmakeagreatdifference.多個(gè)建議要注意___________有過渡、分方面1)關(guān)心他人,樂于助人關(guān)心他人：________________________________________樂于助人：____________________Tobeginwith,youshouldbeconcernedaboutothersandtrytobeasfriendlyasyoucan.Ifyouarealwaysreadytohelpothers,yourclassmateswillknowmoreaboutyou.beconcernedaboutotherscareaboutothersbereadytohelpothers2)當(dāng)一名好的傾聽者（增加的建議）

What’smore,itisimportantforyoutobeagoodlistenerwhileothersarespeaking.Inthisway,peoplewillfeelcomfortabletobewithyou.3）積極參加班級(jí)活動(dòng)

takeanactivepartinclassactivitiesLastbutnotleast,itisalsogoodforyoutotakeanactivepartinclassactivitieswhereyoucanshowyourtalentandgettoknowmoreclassmates.易出現(xiàn)表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤的表達(dá)1）當(dāng)別人有困難的時(shí)候：whenthey____________2)because和so都是只能引起從句，不能單獨(dú)作為一個(gè)句子。Itshouldbeagoodideatocareaboutyourclassmates,

becauseinthisway,yourclassmatesmaythinkyouareakindperson.areintrouble3)__________(care)aboutotherscanmakeagreatdifference.4)_______(try)tojoininmoreactivitiesandyouwillknowmoreclassmatesduringtheactivities.5)moreover

是一個(gè)詞，“what’smore，…”后是逗號(hào)6)“whynotdo…?”“whydon’tyoudo?”CaringTryTobeginwith,youshouldbeconcernedaboutothersandtrytobeasfriendlyasyoucan.Ifyouarealwaysreadytohelpothers,yourclassmateswillknowmoreaboutyou.What’smore,itisimportantforyoutobeagoodlistenerwhileothersarespeaking.Inthisway,peoplewillfeelcomfortabletobewithyou.Lastbutnotleast,