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GenerationgapInternetaddictionPre-writingDoyouhaveanyproblemsinyourlife/study?

Thinking:Whatwillyoudoifyouhaveproblemsinyourlife/study?Suggestedanswer:Iwillturntomyfriends,teachersorparentsforhelporwritealettertoanadviserforteenagersforadvice.?WhatisWorriedFriend’sproblem??DoyouthinkMsLuo’sadviceisuseful?Whyorwhynot??Whatotherkindsofadvicewouldyougive?SusanLuo,anadviserforteenagers,hasreceivedaletteraskingforsomeadvice.Readherreplyandanswerthequestions.WorriedFriendisworriedthathisorherfriend,ChenLei,playscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.Perhapstheadviceisuseful,becauseitisalwaysgoodtotalktoafriendabouthisorherproblemsandofferadvice.IwouldtellChenLeithatheshouldspendhistimemoreproductivelywithaneyeonhisfuture.Forexample,insteadofplayingcomputergames,hecouldlearncomputerprogramming.Whoknows?Hemightbecomeagreatfigureinthatfieldwhenhe’solder.

Howtowritealetterofadvice?

Pre-writing:

Analyzetheorganizationoftheletter.

Whatpartsshouldbeincludedinaletter?

DateGreetingBodyCloseSignaturePre-writing:AnalyzethestructureoftheletterA.Iknowwhattheproblemis.B.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.C.Thisismyadviceandreason(s).D.Ithinkmyadvicewillhelp.Pre-writing:StudytheusefulexpressionsoftheletterWhatexpressionsdoesMsLuousetoshowthatsheknowswhattheproblemisandhowshefeels?Circletheminthefirstparagraph.Youwrotethat...,Iunderstandquitewellthatyouare...andfeel....Youthinkthat...Pre-writing:WhatexpressionsdoesMsLuousetomakesuggestions?Circletheminthesecondparagraph.Pre-writing:WhatexpressionsdoesMsLuousetogivereasonsforhersuggestion?Circletheminthesecondparagraph.It’snotunusualfor...to...,butspendingtoomuchtimeonlineis...andmakesitvery...to...Pre-writing:WhatexpressionsdoesMsLuousetoexpressthathersuggestionswillbehelpful?Circletheminthesecondparagraph..I’msurehewilllistentoyou,since...Pre-writing:

Findoutmoreexpressionsofwritingaletterofadvice.Moreexpressionsforaletterofadvice:開頭:表明寫信目的,表達理解來信人的感受。第二部分:提出建議,說明建議的理由和對解決問題的期望。①Knowingthatyouhavetroublein…Iamanxiousforyou.It’smygreatpleasuretogiveyousomesuggestions,whichwill…②Afterreadingyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowthat...however,thesituationwillbebetterifyoucouldtakemyadvice.Hereareafewsuggestionsforyou.①Ithinkitwouldbeagoodideaifyou...because…②Iwouldliketorecommendthat...since…③IfIwereyou,Iwould...④First/Tobeginwith,itisimportantto...because…,What’smore/Inaddition,

italsohelpsto...Lastbutnotleast,whynot...①Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.②Finally,Ihopethatmysuggestionswouldbebeneficialtoyou.④Bestwishes.Lookingforwardtoyourreply/hearingfromyou.結(jié)尾部分:希望建議得到采納并祝愿,或盼望回復。Chooseoneoftheteenagersanddiscusshis/herproblem.Listpossiblesuggestionsandreasons,thenwritealetterofadvicetohimorher.Chooseoneoftheteenagersanddiscusshis/herproblem.Listpossiblesuggestionsandreasons.NameSuggestionsReasonsEric?Trylisteningtoyourparents.?Invitethemoutforsomethingtoeat.?Maybetheyaren’tlisteningtoyoubecauseyoudon’tlistentothem.?Thiswillgiveyouachancetocommunicatewiththempeacefully.XuTing?Joinavolunteergroup.?Connectwithyourparentsonline.?Thiswillgiveyouachancetobearoundotherpeople,andhelpyourealisethatotherpeoplehaveproblems,too.?Justbecausetheyarefaraway,itdoesn’tmeanthatyoucan’ttalktothem.MinHo?Askamutual(共同的）

friendtointroduceyoutoher.?Findchancestogettogetheringroupswheresheisagroupmember.?Yourfriendwillbeabletohelpyoubreaktheicewithherandprovideencouragementtoyou.?Ifyouareinagroup,

youcancommunicate

withherrelaxedly.2Draftyourletteraccordingtotheoutlinebelow.Showthereaderthatyouknowtheproblemis.Tellthereaderthatyouunderstandhowhe/shefeels.Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkhe/sheshoulddo.Explainyourreason(s).Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkwillhappen.Writethedateandgreetthereader.Closeandsigntheletter.Exchangedraftsandassesseachother’sworkaccordingtothechecklist.√Areallthepartsofaletterincludedandorganisedinagoodorder?√Doesthewritergivereasonsfortheadvice?√

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Isthehandwritingeasytoread?SampleWritingDearEric,

Youwrotethatyourparentswon’tlistentoyouwhenyoutellthemthings.Iquiteunderstandthatyouarereallyworriedandfeelterriblenow.Herearesomeofmysuggestions.

Firstofall,Irecommendthatyoushouldwritealettertoyourparentsbyyourself，because

itcanhelpthemunderstandyouandknowmoreaboutyourthoughts.What’smore,Ithinkyoushouldlistentothemfirstandlearntounderstandeachother.Inmyopinion,understandingismutual(相互的）,youshouldn’talwaysaskthemtolistentoyou.Youshouldlistentothe