1、C四級寫作的注意事項、評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及范文-CET寫作四級寫作的注意事項、評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及范文 全國英語四級考試中寫作的時間是30分鐘，滿分是15分。詞數(shù)為120150左右。下面是一些考生首先應(yīng)注意的事項： 1達(dá)不到規(guī)定詞數(shù)的要酌情扣15分。（注意：題目中所給的起始句、主題句、結(jié)束句，不計入所寫字?jǐn)?shù)。） 2規(guī)定為三段式的作文，只寫一段為04分，只寫2段為09分。 3文不對題的、或只有孤立的幾個詞的、無法表達(dá)思想的為0分。 4從97年夏天開始，又有新規(guī)定，即：凡作文不到6分者，所差分?jǐn)?shù)，從總卷面分中扣除；凡得0分者，全卷最多能得59分。 四級考試中寫作的閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)共分5等：2分、5分、8分、11分、14分。標(biāo)

2、準(zhǔn)如下： 12分-條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，但多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯誤。 25分-基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的語言錯誤。 38分-基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫；語言錯誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯誤。 411分-切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。 514分-切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好?；旧蠠o語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯誤。 為了讓考生心理有數(shù)，我這里提供一些就WomenintheModernWorld為題的范文。它的段落提綱如下： 1.Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpart

3、insocietytoday._ 2.Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,womenspositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell._ 3.Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomenhasnotbeencompletelyrealized. _ 例1 Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.Longage,womenonlydidsomethinginthekitchenorathome.Nowmanyofthemh

4、aveseriousjobstoserveforpeople.Whatmencandosocanwomen. Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,womenspositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Todayinthefamily,thewifeoftenlotsherhusbandtodosomethingathomebatago,onlywomendidsomething.Menarefonedofdoingsomethingathome. Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwom

5、enhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Sometimes,thematter,thehusbandhittinghaswelf,oftenhappened.Inthefactorythewonmentoasmuchasthemen,buttheyarepaidlessthanthemen.Somepeoplehavenotcompletelyrealizedtheliberationofwomen. 分?jǐn)?shù)：2分。 例2 Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.Intoday,manywomenha

6、veawork.Theyworkedaswellasmenplayinganimportantpartinfactories.Therearemanywomeningovernmentalso.Theyleadotherpeoplecountry,andmakeoutplans.Therearemanyscientistslso.Theyeventnewthingstoimproveourlife. 全國英語四級考試中寫作的時間是30分鐘，滿分是15分。詞數(shù)為120150左右。下面是一些考生首先應(yīng)注意的事項： 1達(dá)不到規(guī)定詞數(shù)的要酌情扣15分。（注意：題目中所給的起始句、主題句、結(jié)束句，不計入

7、所寫字?jǐn)?shù)。） 2規(guī)定為三段式的作文，只寫一段為04分，只寫2段為09分。 3文不對題的、或只有孤立的幾個詞的、無法表達(dá)思想的為0分。 4從97年夏天開始，又有新規(guī)定，即：凡作文不到6分者，所差分?jǐn)?shù)，從總卷面分中扣除；凡得0分者，全卷最多能得59分。 四級考試中寫作的閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)共分5等：2分、5分、8分、11分、14分。標(biāo)準(zhǔn)如下： 12分-條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，但多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯誤。 25分-基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的語言錯誤。 38分-基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫；語言錯誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯誤。 411分-切題。表達(dá)思想清

8、楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。 514分-切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好?；旧蠠o語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯誤。 為了讓考生心理有數(shù)，我這里提供一些就WomenintheModernWorld為題的范文。它的段落提綱如下： 1.Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday._ 2.Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,womenspositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell._ 3.Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofw

9、omenhasnotbeencompletelyrealized. _ 例1 Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.Longage,womenonlydidsomethinginthekitc123下一頁 123下一頁 四級寫作的注意事項、評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及范文henorathome.Nowmanyofthemhaveseriousjobstoserveforpeople.Whatmencandosocanwomen. Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,womenspositioninthefam

10、ilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Todayinthefamily,thewifeoftenlotsherhusbandtodosomethingathomebatago,onlywomendidsomething.Menarefonedofdoingsomethingathome. Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomenhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Sometimes,thematter,thehusbandhittinghaswelf,oftenhappened.Inthefactorythewonm

11、entoasmuchasthemen,buttheyarepaidlessthanthemen.Somepeoplehavenotcompletelyrealizedtheliberationofwomen. 分?jǐn)?shù)：2分。 例2 Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.Intoday,manywomenhaveawork.Theyworkedaswellasmenplayinganimportantpartinfactories.Therearemanywomeningovernmentalso.Theyleadothe

12、rpeoplecountry,andmakeoutplans.Therearemanyscientistslso.Theyeventnewthingstoimproveourlife. Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,womenspositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Inancient,womenspositioninfamilyispity.Theyhadtolooksaftertheirchildren,dideveryhowhusbandorderedhertodo.Butnowitischanged.Theya

13、reequaltoherhusband.Theyhavetherightofspeakingofidea,discussionthingwithherhusband,dowhatshewantstodo. Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomenhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Wealsoshouldrealize,womenlikertyarelimited.Forexample,manyfactorieswantmenbecomeitsworkersbutthechanceofwomenislessthanmen.Eve

14、ryoneshoulddotheirbesttochangethiscondition.Imsure,theliberationofwomenwouldbeincreased. 分?jǐn)?shù)：5分。 例3 Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.ManyWomentodayareplayinganimportantpartatworksthatwasthoughtonlycouldbedonebythemenbefore.Foranexample.Somewomenarenotsecrtaryintheoffice,instea

15、d,theybecomemanagerofacompany. Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,womenspositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Intheworldtoday,moreandmorewomenhavetheirownjob.Theygettheirownsalary,andbecomemoreindependentfromtheirhusband.Withtheeconomicsituationimproved,theirfamilypositionisimproving. Inspiteofthese

16、changes,theliberationofwomenhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Manyhusbandsonlywanthiswifetostayathome,anddohouseworksordosomeshopping.Theyonlywanttheirwifetobeahousewife,butnotamanagerofacompany. 分?jǐn)?shù)：8分。 例4 Womenareplayinganincreasingly&上一頁123下一頁 上一頁123下一頁 四級寫作的注意事項、評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及范文nbsp;importantpartinsocietytoday

17、.Moreandmorewomengotoworktoearnmoneyinsteadofkeepingthehouseorlookingafterthechildren.Womenhaveenteredmanyfieldsofsocietyincludingscientificfield.Asweknow,manywomensportsteamshavewontheworldschampionssuchasChinesewomensVolleyballTeam. Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,womenspositioninthefamilyhasbeeni

18、mprovedaswell.Husbandsarenotthemastersofwivesinmanyplaces.Husbandsandwivesareequalnow.Theyjointogethertoovercomedifficultiesandsharehappiness. Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomenhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Alsoinsomeplaces.Womenareconsideredbeingthingbelongtomen.Theyhavelittlechancetofindjob

19、s.Theydontgetequalpayforequaljob.Thisisaproblemmustbesolvednotonlybysocietybutalsobywomenthemselves. 評分：11分。 例5 Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.InManycountries,moreandmorewomenareactingasworkers,farmers,scientistsandevenleaders.Wecansaythatalmostalljobswhichmencandoaredonepe

20、rfectlybywomen.Womenarenolongerlookeddownuponbysociety. Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,womenspositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Husbandandwifearenowequalinthefamily.Theycopewithproblemsofdailylifetogether,andsharehappinesswitheachther.Also,youcanhardlyfindoutthatintodaysfamilies,womenarebeingbusywithdinners,whe