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讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)讀懂原文2026屆新高考英語(yǔ)沖刺復(fù)習(xí)01解構(gòu)原文要素contents02預(yù)測(cè)合理走向04情節(jié)協(xié)同效應(yīng)03設(shè)計(jì)閉環(huán)結(jié)構(gòu)與原文融洽度高,與提示句銜接合理01解構(gòu)原文要素1.核心沖突
定位故事的核心矛盾(如:人物困境、意外事件、未實(shí)現(xiàn)的目標(biāo))。
例:原文描述“登山者遇暴雪迷路”→沖突是“生存挑戰(zhàn)與自救”。2.人物特質(zhì)
分析主角的性格、行為模式、情感變化(通過(guò)動(dòng)作、對(duì)話、心理描寫(xiě)推斷)。
例:若主角前文多次“猶豫不決”,續(xù)寫(xiě)不宜突然變得果敢。3.伏筆與線索
標(biāo)記關(guān)鍵細(xì)節(jié)(如:環(huán)境變化、特殊物品、次要人物的暗示)。
例:前文提到“背包里的舊地圖”,續(xù)寫(xiě)可能用它脫困。4.主題傾向
判斷原文主題(友情、成長(zhǎng)、環(huán)保等),續(xù)寫(xiě)需延續(xù)一致性。
例:主題是“勇氣”→續(xù)寫(xiě)應(yīng)體現(xiàn)主角戰(zhàn)勝恐懼。01解構(gòu)原文要素讀什么?WhenWhereWhoWhatHow5W1Hcharacters,events,time,place,etc..讀情節(jié)Conflict/problem/suspense讀人物personality/emotionalchanges閱讀是續(xù)寫(xiě)的前提和基礎(chǔ)。ThedevelopmentofthestoryRelationshipbetweenpeople01解構(gòu)原文要素讀什么?提取關(guān)鍵要素(5W1H)——快速定位故事框架What(事件):原文的核心事件(如:登山遇險(xiǎn)、家庭矛盾)。Who(人物):主角的性格、與其他角色的關(guān)系(如:內(nèi)向的兒子與嚴(yán)厲的父親)。Where/When(環(huán)境):時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)是否影響情節(jié)(如:暴風(fēng)雨夜的森林→環(huán)境需成為續(xù)寫(xiě)阻力)。Why(原因):沖突的根源(如:迷路是因主角固執(zhí)不聽(tīng)勸告)。How(方式):前文解決問(wèn)題的線索(如:主角擅長(zhǎng)觀察植物,可能利用此技能脫困)。01解構(gòu)原文要素讀什么?whentimewhereplace,surroundingswhomaincharacter:backgroundcharacter:whatwhathappened?Howthefeelingsofeachcharacter01解構(gòu)原文要素讀什么?beginningdevelopmentclimaxendingAsequenceofeventsEacheventcausesorleadstothenext.Readforplotturningpointfallingaction01解構(gòu)原文要素讀什么?
分析情感沖突——驅(qū)動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展的引擎
情感沖突需通過(guò)“外部動(dòng)作+內(nèi)部心理”雙線呈現(xiàn):
外部動(dòng)作:人物的具體行為(如:顫抖的手、逃避的眼神)。
內(nèi)部心理:直接描寫(xiě)(如:Shewonderedifsheshouldapologize...)或間接暗示(如:窗外雨滴比喻淚水)?!靖叻旨记伞吭诶m(xù)寫(xiě)段首句給定后,立即用1-2句話呼應(yīng)前文情感狀態(tài)。
例:給定句:Heopenedtheletterwithadeepbreath.
續(xù)寫(xiě):Thehandwritingwasunmistakablyhisfather’s,thoughshakynow.Memoriesoftheirlastargumentfloodedin—howstubbornhehadbeen...01解構(gòu)原文要素讀什么?
negativepositiveconfusedanxioustakeitseriouslyunhappynotdiscouragedworriedhappyoptimisticReadforcharactersExamplesofemotionalchanges01解構(gòu)原文要素讀什么?StoryWhenWhereWhoWhat
TheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity.Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Mrs.Meredith'shomeMrs.Meredith&herownchildren,John,Harry,Clara&Bernardandhismotherandfather&villagers
Readforwritingmaterials—細(xì)讀原文,探尋寫(xiě)作素材Writingmaterials01解構(gòu)原文要素讀什么?Charactersofthemainfigures
Mrs.Meredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman.Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.Sheknewtheyhadproblems,andtheyneededallkindsofhelp.Whenshehadtime,shewouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem.Onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore.Therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirlittleboy.Thelittleboy-hisnamewasBernard-hadinterestedherverymuch.“Iwishyoucouldseehim,”shesaidtoherownchildren,John,Harry,andClara.“Heissuchahelptohismother.Hewantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney,butIdon'tseewhathecando.”Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard.“Iwishwecouldhelphimtoearnmoney,”saidClara.“Hisfamilyissufferingsomuch.”“SodoI,”saidHarry.“Wereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem.”Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“Ihaveagreatidea!Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish.”kindthoughtfulkind,caring,active,enthusiastic,intelligentMrs.MeredithJohn,Harry,Clara.01解構(gòu)原文要素讀什么?
Mrs.Meredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman.Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.Sheknewtheyhadproblems,andtheyneededallkindsofhelp.Whenshehadtime,shewouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem.
Onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore.Therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirlittleboy.Thelittleboy-hisnamewasBernard-hadinterestedherverymuch.“Iwishyoucouldseehim,”shesaidtoherownchildren,John,Harry,andClara.“Heissuchahelptohismother.Hewantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney,butIdon'tseewhathecando.”Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard.“Iwishwecouldhelphimtoearnmoney,”saidClara.“Hisfamilyissufferingsomuch.”“SodoI,”saidHarry.“Wereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem.”Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“Ihaveagreatidea!Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish.”WritingmaterialsCharactersofthemainfigures01解構(gòu)原文要素讀什么?
TheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity.Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.
Mrs.Meredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman.Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.……warm-hearted,united,caringVillagersCharactersofthemainfigures01解構(gòu)原文要素讀什么?
TheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity.Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.
Mrs.Meredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman.Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.……WritingmaterialsCharactersofthemainfigures01解構(gòu)原文要素WhatWhat'sBernard'sfamilycondition?HowdidMeredith'sfamilyhelphim?
Onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore.Therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirlittleboy.Thelittleboy-hisnamewasBernard-hadinterestedherverymuch.“Iwishyoucouldseehim,”shesaidtoherownchildren,John,Harry,andClara.“Heissuchahelptohismother.Hewantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney,butIdon'tseewhathecando.”Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard.“Iwishwecouldhelphimtoearnmoney,”saidClara.“Hisfamilyissufferingsomuch.”“SodoI,”saidHarry.“Wereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem.”Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“Ihaveagreatidea!Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish.”Theotherchildrenalsojumpedupallattention.WhenJohnhadanidea,itwassuretobeagoodone.I'lltellyouwhatwecando,”saidJohn.“YouknowthatbigboxofcomUncleJohnsentus?Well,wecanmakepopcorn,andputitintopaperbags,andBernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit.”01解構(gòu)原文要素WhatWhat'sBernardfamilycondition?HowdidMeredith'sfamilyhelpthem?
Onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore.Therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirlittleboy.Thelittleboy-hisnamewasBernard-hadinterestedherverymuch.“Iwishyoucouldseehim,”shesaidtoherownchildren,John,Harry,andClara.“Heissuchahelptohismother.Hewantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney,butIdon'tseewhathecando.”Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard.“Iwishwecouldhelphimtoearnmoney,”saidClara.“Hisfamilyissufferingsomuch.”“SodoI,”saidHarry.“Wereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem.”Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“Ihaveagreatidea!Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish.”Theotherchildrenalsojumpedupallattention.WhenJohnhadanidea,itwassuretobeagoodone.I'lltellyouwhatwecando,”saidJohn.“YouknowthatbigboxofcomUncleJohnsentus?Well,wecanmakepopcorn,andputitintopaperbags,andBernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit.”Writingmaterials01解構(gòu)原文要素讀什么?Usefulexpressions:kindandthoughtful/earnsomemoneyVividdescription:sprangtohisfeet(一躍而起)andcried/jumpedupallattentionUsefulsentences:?Meredithspentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.?Therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,couldnotgoouttowork?Astheeconomywasindecline,……Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.?“YouknowthatbigboxofcornUncleJohnsentus?Well,wecanmakepopcorn,andputitintopaperbags,andBernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit.
WritingMaterials——原文中的寫(xiě)作素材
01解構(gòu)原文要素讀什么?StoryWhenWhereWhoWhat
Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.Mrs.Meredith'shomekindandthoughtful/Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor/earnsomemoney;sprangtohisfeetandcried/jumpedupallattention/Astheeconomy……What'sBernard'sfamilycondition?Howdidtheyhelphim?writingmaterials02預(yù)測(cè)合理走向想什么?1.首句定位法
給定續(xù)寫(xiě)段的首句往往暗示情節(jié)方向,需分析其與原文的邏輯銜接:
時(shí)間/空間線索:如Asnightfell...,需描寫(xiě)夜晚相關(guān)事件。
情感轉(zhuǎn)折:如Tearsblurredhereyes...,需解釋哭泣原因及后果。2.雙線交織原則
情節(jié)線(外部事件)
+情感線(內(nèi)心變化)需同步推進(jìn):
例:主角“尋找出路(情節(jié))”的同時(shí)“回憶父親的鼓勵(lì)(情感升華)”。3.避免邏輯硬傷
禁止引入超現(xiàn)實(shí)元素(如突然出現(xiàn)魔法)、違背前文人設(shè)的行為。02預(yù)測(cè)合理走向想什么?
Focusontwogivensentences
Para.1
WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.Para.2
Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.TheysucceedinmakingpopcornTheyputtheirgoodideaintopracticeBernardsoldpopcornDidheearnmoney?Para.1
WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.Para.2
Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.巧用原文,構(gòu)造情節(jié)--BrainstormingWritingmaterials(原文素材)Usefulexpressions:
kindandthoughtful/earnsomemoneyearnsomemoneyVividdescription:sprangtohisfeet(一躍而起)andcried/jumpedupallattentionUsefulsentences:?Meredith
spentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.?Therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,couldnotgoouttowork?Astheeconomywasindecline,……Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.?“YouknowthatbigboxofcornUncleJohnsentus?wecanmakepopcorn,andputitintopaperbags,and
Bernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit.
Plotanalysis
Plotanalysis03設(shè)計(jì)閉環(huán)結(jié)構(gòu)寫(xiě)什么?推斷續(xù)寫(xiě)方向——從伏筆到閉環(huán)
根據(jù)給定段落首句的邏輯關(guān)系選擇方向:
因果關(guān)系:首句是結(jié)果,需補(bǔ)全原因(如:Sheburstintotears.→前文須鋪墊挫折)。
轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系:首句含but/however(如:Butthemapwaswrong.→需寫(xiě)新危機(jī))。
遞進(jìn)關(guān)系:首句含finally/then(如:Thenanideastruckher.→需具體化解決方案)?!痉蠢尽?/p>
若原文無(wú)任何鋪墊,續(xù)寫(xiě)突然出現(xiàn)“陌生人救援”或“超能力”即屬邏輯斷裂。03設(shè)計(jì)閉環(huán)結(jié)構(gòu)寫(xiě)什么?Para.1
WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.SomedetailedinformationofMrs.Meredith
Herreaction銜接首句主人公——WellbegunishalfdonePara.1
WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.Writeandpolishpara1
?Mrs.Meredith'sreaction??WhatdidMeredith'schildrendonext?
?Bernard'sreaction?
Tip:UseadvancedsentencepatternsTip:Adddetaileddescription?Theresult——successful?Allthingsready——theirreaction?Howtotomakeeverthingready?Usefulexpressions:kindandthoughtful/earnsomemoneyVividdescription:sprangtohisfeet(一躍而起)andcried/jumpedupallattentionUsefulsentences:?“YouknowthatbigboxofcornUncleJohnsentus?Well,wecanmakepopcorn,andputitintopaperbags,andBernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit.Writingmaterials(原文素材)Usedetaileddescription&advancedsentencesExcitement1.Hisfacelitupwithexcitement.2.Huggingthegifttoherchest,shelookedupexcitedlyandhereyeswelledupwithtears.3.Unabletocontainherexcitement,shejumpedwithjoy.4.Whensheheardthenews,herheartpoundedwithexcitement.5.Lookingatthebeautifulsight,Momcouldhardlyconcealherexcitement.Happiness1.Relieffilledhisheart,withabrightsmilespreadingacrosshisface.
2.Norahwassohappythatshealmostjumpedupandtearsfilledhereyes.3.WhenSantawalkedintotheroom,mydaughterclappedandjumpedupanddown.
4.Jennifer’ssleepyeyesopenedwideandherfaceworeasmilethatbrightenedupthewholeroom.Standup—ReadSitdown—Polish03設(shè)計(jì)閉環(huán)結(jié)構(gòu)寫(xiě)什么?WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.“Whatawonderfulplan!Iwillgiveyouahand.”shesaid,with
herfacelightingup.
SoontheyhurriedtoseeBernardandtoldhimtheirplanexcitedly.
Hearingthat,Bernardjumpedwildlyintoairwithhishandswaving.Thenthefourkidstookout
thebigboxofcornsentbyUncleJohn.Motherwasresponsibleformakingpaperbags.JohnandBernard
wereoccupiedin
poppingthecornwhileHarryandClara
putitinto
thepaperbags.Everyonewasdevotedtotheirjob.Seeing
allpaperbags
filledwithdeliciouspopcorn,theywipedthesweatonthefacewithabrightsmilespreadingacrosstheirface.細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)&高級(jí)句型原文素材改編復(fù)現(xiàn)03設(shè)計(jì)閉環(huán)結(jié)構(gòu)寫(xiě)什么?Para.2
Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.銜接首句主人公Writingmaterials(原文素材)Usefulexpressions:
earnsomemoney/kindandthoughtfulkindandthoughtfulVividdescription:sprangtohisfeet(一躍而起)andcried/jumpedupallattentionUsefulsentences:?Meredith
spentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.?Therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,couldnotgoouttowork?Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.?“……Bernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit.?Howdidhesellpopcorn??Didheearnmoney??Whatabouthisfather??WhenMrsMeredithcameto
visitthemagain,whathappened?
03設(shè)計(jì)閉環(huán)結(jié)構(gòu)寫(xiě)什么?Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.
Hevisitedtheneighborsfromdoortodoortosellhispopcorn.Inspiteofstrugglingtomakeendsmeet,peopleinthesmallcommunitywerewillingtodoeverythingintheirpowertohelpBernard.
Owingtocountlesshelpinghands,thelittleboygradually
earnsomemoney.Asaresult,hisdadwhowassickinbedreceivedtimelymedicaltreatment.The
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