2025年小學(xué)英語畢業(yè)考試寫作模擬試卷：拓展寫作思路方法試題型考試時(shí)間：______分鐘總分：______分姓名：______Part1:WritingPracticeImagineyouareatouristvisitingacityforthefirsttime.Writeashortparagraph(about60words)describingthecity.Includeinformationabout:1.Whatyouseethatimpressesyou(e.g.,buildings,parks,people).2.Howyoufeelaboutthecity(e.g.,excited,surprised,happy).3.Onethingyouwanttodoorvisitnext.Part2:ReadingandWritingReadthefollowingshortstoryandthenwritearesponse(about80words).TheLostKittenSamanthawaswalkinghomefromschoolwhenshesawasmall,blackkittensittingaloneunderatree.Itlookedhungryandscared.Samanthagentlypickedupthekittenandcarriedithome.Shegavethekittensomemilkandfood.Thenextday,Samanthaputupa"Found"posterwithapictureofthekitten.Shehopeditsownerwouldfindit.Intheevening,aworriedwomancametoherhouse.Thewomansaid,"That'smykitten!Thankyousomuch!"Samanthasmiledandfelthappyshecouldhelp.Writeyourresponse.Youcananswerthefollowingquestionsorwriteaboutyourownideas:1.HowdidSamanthafeelwhenshesawthekitten?2.WhatdidSamanthadotohelpthekitten?3.Howdoyouthinkthewomanfeltwhenshefoundherkitten?Part3:CreativeWritingThinkaboutyourfavoriteseason.Itcanbespring,summer,autumn,orwinter.Writeashortstory(about100words)aboutsomethingspecialthathappensduringthatseason.Include:1.Theseasonandtheweather.2.Whereyouareorwhatyouaredoing.3.Ahappyorinterestingeventthatoccurs.Part4:PersonalLetterWriteashortletter(about70words)toyourpenpal.Tellyourpenpalabout:1.Yourfavoritehobbyoractivity.2.Whyyoulikeit.3.Somethingnewyouwanttotryrelatedtothishobby.Beginyourletterwith"DearPenPal,"andendwith"Yourfriend,".試卷答案Part1:WritingPractice(SampleAnswer)IvisitedLondonforthefirsttime.Iwassurprisedbythebig,oldbuildingsandthebusystreets.Thepeoplewerefriendly,andIsawabeautifulparkwithmanytrees.Ifeltveryexcitedexploringthecity.Next,IwanttovisitthefamousTowerBridgeandseetheriver.解析思路：此題考察學(xué)生運(yùn)用簡(jiǎn)單句型描述所見所感的能力。解析思路在于：1）識(shí)別題目要求的三點(diǎn)內(nèi)容；2）回憶或構(gòu)思與“第一次游覽城市”相關(guān)的簡(jiǎn)單場(chǎng)景詞匯（如：buildings,streets,park,trees）；3）運(yùn)用基本的形容詞（surprised,big,old,busy,friendly,beautiful）和情感詞匯（excited）進(jìn)行描述；4）確保句子結(jié)構(gòu)簡(jiǎn)單、語法正確（如使用be動(dòng)詞、現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)等），并達(dá)到字?jǐn)?shù)要求。重點(diǎn)在于清晰表達(dá)觀察到的景象和個(gè)人的直接感受。Part2:ReadingandWriting(SampleAnswer)Samanthafeltsorryforthekittenwhenshesawitaloneunderthetree.Shewaskindandhelpedthekittenbygivingitmilkandfood.Ithinkthewomanfeltveryhappyandrelievedwhenshefoundherkitten.Samantha'sactionswerenice,andshehelpedsomeonefindwhatbelongstothem.解析思路：此題考察學(xué)生閱讀理解能力和基于文本進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單推理與表達(dá)的能力。解析思路在于：1）快速閱讀并抓住故事關(guān)鍵信息（看到小貓、喂食、張貼海報(bào)、找到主人）；2）針對(duì)問題，定位到相應(yīng)的文本細(xì)節(jié)（Samantha的感覺、Samantha的行為、女人的感受）；3）運(yùn)用簡(jiǎn)單的從句或并列句結(jié)構(gòu)（如whenshesaw,andshegave,becauseshehelped）組織答案，確保信息點(diǎn)與問題一一對(duì)應(yīng)；4）使用恰當(dāng)?shù)男稳菰~和情感詞匯（sorry,kind,happy,relieved）來描述人物情緒；5）注意句子流暢性和語法準(zhǔn)確性，避免過度引申原文信息。Part3:CreativeWriting(SampleAnswer)Myfavoriteseasoniswinter.Theweatheriscold,anditoftensnowswhereIlive.Lastwinter,Iwasbuildingasnowmanwithmyfamilyinthebackyard.Werolledabigsnowballforitsbodyandsmalleronesforitshead.Weusedacarrotforitsnoseandbuttonsmadeofpebbles.Itwasveryfun,andwespentthewholeafternoonplayinginthesnow.Ilovethefeelingofwinter.解析思路：此題考察學(xué)生的想象力、敘事能力和細(xì)節(jié)描寫能力。解析思路在于：1）明確選擇一個(gè)自己熟悉的季節(jié)并構(gòu)思一個(gè)相關(guān)的小故事；2）圍繞“季節(jié)”、“地點(diǎn)/活動(dòng)”、“特殊事件”三點(diǎn)展開，選擇一個(gè)具體場(chǎng)景（如堆雪人）；3）運(yùn)用感官細(xì)節(jié)（視覺：雪、雪人；動(dòng)作：rolling,using,playing；感覺：cold,fun）來豐富內(nèi)容；4）使用時(shí)間狀語（Lastwinter,allafternoon）和連接詞（and,but）來組織段落結(jié)構(gòu)，使故事連貫；5）確保故事邏輯合理，情感表達(dá)積極，并控制字?jǐn)?shù)在要求范圍內(nèi)。Part4:PersonalLetter(SampleAnswer)DearPenPal,Myfavoritehobbyisdrawing.Ilovedrawingbecauseitisfun,andIcancreateanythingIimagineonpaper.Recently,Istartedlearninghowtodrawcartooncharacters.Theyareverycuteandfunny.Iwanttotrydrawingabeautifullandscapenext,likeamountainwithalakeandtrees.Yourfriend,[YourName]解析思路：此題考察學(xué)生寫私人信件的基本格式、表達(dá)個(gè)人喜好和計(jì)劃的能力。解析思路在于：1）遵循書信格式，包括稱呼、正文、結(jié)尾敬語和簽名；2）直接回答題目要求的三