閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段使之構成一篇完整的短文。InasmallanddustyvillageinEngland,therelivedayoungmannamedTomHarper.Hisclotheswereoldandtorn,andhisshoeshadholesthatletintherain.Tomlivedinatinyroomaboveanoisycafe,whereheworkedwashingdishesforafewcoinseachday.Lifewashard,butTomhadadream:hewantedtoownabakery,fillingthestreetswiththewarmsmelloffreshbread.

Tom’sparentspassedawaywhenhewasyoung,leavinghimwithnothingbutakindheartandastrongwill.Everynight,aftercleaningthecafe’spots,hesatbyaflickeringcandleandreadbooksaboutbaking.HeborrowedthesebooksfromMrs.Green,thevillagelibrarian,whosawsomethingspecialinTom’sbrighteyes.

Oneday,aposterappearedinthevillagesquare.ItannouncedabakingcompetitioninLondon,withagrandprizeof￡10,000.Tom’sheartraced.Thiscouldbehischance!ButthejourneytoLondoncostmoney,andTomhadnone.Heworkedextrahours,savedeverypenny,andevensoldhisonlycoattobuyatrainticket.

WhenthedaycameTomboardedthetrainwithasmallbagandanervoussmile.InLondon,thecompetitionwasheldinahugehallfilledwiththebestbakersfromacrossEngland.Tomfeltsmallamongthem.Hehadnofancytools,justanoldwoodenspoonandarecipehe’dcreatedhimself,asoft,goldenloafwithherbsfromthevillagefields.Hishandsshookashemixedflour,water,andyeast(酵母).Theshakeresultedfromnotjusthisnervousness,butalsothecoldness.

Afterwhatseemedtobeacentury,Tomfinallycompletedhisherbloaf.Allthebakedbreadandcakeswerepresentedtothejudges.Thejudgestastedthemcarefully.Hourspassed,andTom’sstomachtwistedwithworry.Itseemedhardforhimtomakeitthroughtheannouncementofthewinner,bothpsychologicallyandphysically.Beforethejudgesannouncedthewinner,Tom’seyesaccidentallymetafamiliarfigure’seyes

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Mrs.Greenwasamongtheaudience!

注意:1.

續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右；2.

請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Mrs.GreenwasholdingacoatandwavingherhandsatTom.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Withtheprizemoney,Tomopenedasmallbakeryinhisvillage.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文本分析?1．角色：_____________________________?2．視角：第________人稱?3．時空線：fromTom'slifeinthesmallEnglishvillage(abovethecafe)---______________---thedayofthebakingcompetitioninLondon?4.請在文章中將可能的線索都找出來。?WhatwasTom'sdreamandwhatdidhedotopursueitindailylife?：、______________________________________________?HowdidTomgetthechancetoattendthebakingcompetitioninLondon?：____________________________________________?WhatdifficultiesdidTomfacewhenpreparingforandattendingthecompetition?：____________________________________________?WhatwasMrs.Green'sattitudetowardsTomandwhatdidshedoforhim?：____________________________________________?WhatdidTomusetomakehisbakedgoodsinthecompetition,andhowdidhefeelduringthecompetition?：____________________________________________?Whathappenedbeforethejudgesannouncedthewinnerofthecompetition?：____________________________________________?情節(jié)線：Tomlivesahardlifeinasmallvillagebutdreamsofowningabakery,readingbakingbookswithMrs.Green'shelp.→_________________________→TomattendsthecompetitioninLondon,feelssmall,bakesaherbloafwithsimpletools.→________________________→（續(xù)寫）Mrs.GreeninteractswithTom,judgesannouncetheresult.→（續(xù)寫）Tomusesprizemoneytoopenavillagebakery.?6．情感線：Tom：hopeful(holdingbakerydream)→______________（whenseeingthecompetitionposter）→_________________（facingnomoney,coldinLondon）→_________________（waitingforjudge'sresult）→________________（seeingMrs.Green/afterwinning）?Mrs.Green：kind(lendingbooks,noticingTom'spotential)→____________________（appearinginLondonaudience/續(xù)寫）7.綜合以上信息，請用3-4句話概括文章大意。（中英各一個）?中文：_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________英文：_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8.句式：_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9.主題（本文屬于人與自我）：_______________________?情節(jié)構造?第一段提示句：Mrs.GreenwasholdingacoatandwavingherhandsatTom.?銜接句1———對“Mrs.Greenholdingacoatandwaving”提問“HowdidTomfeelwhenhesawMrs.Greenwiththecoatandwaving,andwhatmighthedofirst?”：____________________________________________?過渡句推演：銜接1→←銜接2?銜接句2———對“interactionbetweenTomandMrs.Green,thenjudge'sannouncement”提問“WhatmightMrs.GreensaytoTomaboutthecoat,andhowmightthejudges'announcementgo?”：________________________________________?第二段提示句：Withtheprizemoney,Tomopenedasmallbakeryinhisvillage.?銜接句3———對“Tomopeningthevillagebakery”提問“WhatmightTom'sbakerylooklike,andhowmightthevillagersreacttoit?”：__________________________________________?過渡句推演：銜接3→←主題?主題：___________________________?段落構思?第一段：Mrs.GreenwasholdingacoatandwavingherhandsatTom.?→①__________________→②__________________→③__________________；?英文：___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二段：Withtheprizemoney,Tomopenedasmallbakeryinhisvillage.?→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。?英文：___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案文本分析?1．角色：TomHarper（家境貧寒卻懷揣烘焙夢想的年輕人）、Mrs.Green（善良的villagelibrarian，幫助Tom并關注其成長）、烘焙比賽的評委（負責評選比賽結果）、咖啡館老板（Tom的雇主，提供洗碗工作）?2．視角：第三人稱?3．時空線：fromTom'slifeinthesmallEnglishvillage(abovethecafe)---TomsavingmoneyandbuyingatraintickettoLondon---thedayofthebakingcompetitioninLondon?4.請在文章中將可能的線索都找出來。?WhatwasTom'sdreamandwhatdidhedotopursueitindailylife?：Tom'sdreamwastoownabakery.Everynightafterwashingdishes,hereadbakingbooksborrowedfromMrs.Greenbycandlelighttolearnbakingskills.?HowdidTomgetthechancetoattendthebakingcompetitioninLondon?：AposterannouncingaLondonbakingcompetitionwitha￡10,000prizeappearedinthevillagesquare.Tomworkedextrahours,savedeverypenny,andsoldhisonlycoattobuyatraintickettoattendthecompetition.?WhatdifficultiesdidTomfacewhenpreparingforandattendingthecompetition?：Hehadnomoney(sohesoldhiscoattobuyaticket),nofancybakingtools(onlyanoldwoodenspoon),feltsmallamongtopbakersinLondon,andwascold(whichmadehishandsshakewhilebaking)andnervousduringthecompetition.?WhatwasMrs.Green'sattitudetowardsTomandwhatdidshedoforhim?：Mrs.GreenwaskindandsawTom'spotential.ShelentbakingbookstoTomandevenwenttoLondontowatchTom'scompetition.?WhatdidTomusetomakehisbakedgoodsinthecompetition,andhowdidhefeelduringthecompetition?：Heusedanoldwoodenspoon,aself-createdrecipe,andherbsfromthevillagefieldstomakeaherbloaf.Hefeltsmall,nervous,andcold(hishandsshook),andwasworriedwhilewaitingforthejudges'result.?Whathappenedbeforethejudgesannouncedthewinnerofthecompetition?：Tom'seyesaccidentallymetMrs.Green'seyes—Mrs.Greenwasamongtheaudience,holdingacoatandwavingathim.?5．情節(jié)線：Tomlivesahardlifeinasmallvillagebutdreamsofowningabakery,readingbakingbookswithMrs.Green'shelp.→ALondonbakingcompetitionwitha￡10,000prizeisannounced;Tomsavesmoney(evensellshiscoat)togo.→TomattendsthecompetitioninLondon,feelssmall,bakesaherbloafwithsimpletools.→Beforethewinnerisannounced,TomseesMrs.Greenintheaudience.→（續(xù)寫）Mrs.GreengivesTomthecoattokeepwarm,encourageshim;judgesannounceTomwinsthecompetition.→（續(xù)寫）Tomusesprizemoneytoopenavillagebakery,makinghisdreamcometrue.?6．情感線：Tom：hopeful(holdingbakerydream)→excitedandeager（whenseeingthecompetitionposter）→anxiousandhelpless（facingnomoney,coldinLondon）→worriedandtense（waitingforjudge'sresult）→surprisedandmoved（seeingMrs.Green）/overjoyedandgrateful（afterwinning）?Mrs.Green：kind(lendingbooks,noticingTom'spotential)→caringandsupportive（appearinginLondonaudience/bringingcoatforTom,encouraginghim）?7.綜合以上信息，請用3-4句話概括文章大意。（中英各一個）?中文：Tom在英國小村莊過著貧苦生活，卻懷揣開面包店的夢想，他借烘焙書學習。倫敦烘焙比賽的消息傳來，他賣房買火車票參賽。在比賽現(xiàn)場，他用簡單工具制作香草面包，等待結果時意外看到前來支持的Mrs.Green。?英文：TomlivedapoorlifeinasmallEnglishvillagebutdreamedofowningabakery,learningfrombakingbooksheborrowed.WhenaLondonbakingcompetitionwitha￡10,000prizewasannounced,hesoldhiscoattobuyatraintickettoattend.Atthecompetition,hemadeaherbloafwithsimpletoolsandunexpectedlysawMrs.Green,whocametosupporthim,whilewaitingfortheresult.?句式：條件狀語從句（IfTomwinsthecompetition,hecanrealizehisbakerydreamandimprovehislife.）；直接引語（Mrs.Greenmightsay,"Tom,thiscoatisforyou—don'tcatchacold.Ibelieveinyourbaking!"）；現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語（washingdishesforafewcoinseachday,fillingthestreetswiththewarmsmelloffreshbread）；時間狀語從句（Whenthedaycame,Tomboardedthetrainwithanervoussmile./Afterwhatseemedtobeacentury,Tomfinallycompletedhisherbloaf.）?9.主題（本文屬于人與自我）：堅守夢想的力量，即使身處困境，只要有毅力、不放棄，并借助他人的善意支持，終能實現(xiàn)目標?情節(jié)構造?第一段提示句：Mrs.GreenwasholdingacoatandwavingherhandsatTom.?銜接句1———對“Mrs.Greenholdingacoatandwaving”提問“HowdidTomfeelwhenhesawMrs.Greenwiththecoatandwaving,andwhatmighthedofirst?”：Tomfeltsurprisedandwarm,hiseyesfillingwithtears.HequicklywalkedtowardsMrs.Green,forgettinghisnervousnessforamoment.?過渡句推演：銜接1→Mrs.GreengaveTomthecoat,toldhimshewantedtosupporthisdream,andTomfeltmoreconfident←銜接2?銜接句2———對“interactionbetweenTomandMrs.Green,thenjudge'sannouncement”提問“WhatmightMrs.GreensaytoTomaboutthecoat,andhowmightthejudges'announcementgo?”：Mrs.Greensaid,"Iknewyou'dcometothecompetition,soIbroughtthiscoat—youlookcold.Yourbakingisfullofheart,andthat'sthebestpart."Justthen,judgesannounced,"ThewinnerisTomHarperforhisdelicious,heartfeltherbloaf!"?第二段提示句：Withtheprizemoney,Tomopenedasmallbakeryinhisvillage.?銜接句3———對“Tomopeningthevillagebakery”提問“WhatmightTom'sbakerylooklike,andhowmightthevillagersreacttoit?”：Tom'sbakeryhadawarmwoodensignwith"Harper'sBakery"onit,andthewindowswerefilledwithfreshbread.Villagerscrowdedin,excitedtotastethebread,andpraisedhowdeliciousitwas.?過渡句推演：銜接3→TominvitedMrs.Greentothebakery'sopening,thankedherforherhelp,andthebakerybecameabelovedplaceinthevillage←主題?主題：善意的支持能給予人追夢的勇氣，而堅守夢想、付出努力，終會收獲成功與溫暖?段落構思?第一段：Mrs.GreenwasholdingacoatandwavingherhandsatTom.?→①Tom’seyeslitupinsurprise,andherushedthroughthecrowd,ignoringtheothercompetitors’curiousglances.②“Mrs.Green!Whatareyoudoinghere?”heasked,hisvoicetrembling.Shesmiledandhandedhimthecoat:“Yousoldyoursfortheticket,didn’tyou?Icouldn’tletyoufreeze.”③BeforeTomcouldthankher,thejudges’voicesboomed:“FirstplacegoestoTomHarper!”Thehalleruptedinapplause,andTomhuggedMrs.Greentightly,tearsofjoystreamingdownhisface；?英文：Mrs.GreenwasholdingacoatandwavingherhandsatTom.Tom’sheartskippedabeat—heneverexpectedtoseeherhere.Hepushedthroughthecrowd,hiscoldhandsclutchingtheedgeofhisoldshirt.“Mrs.Green?Howdidyou…?”hestammered.Sheplacedthecoatoverhisshouldersgently:“Iborrowedafriend’scartocome.Yourherbloafmustbewo