Donuts

一、請根據(jù)兩個提示句進行故事續(xù)寫，150詞左右。

MymotherpassedawaywhenIwassix,andmydadbecametheonlyparentformybrothers

andsistersandme.

EverymorningbeforeDadwenttowork,hefrequentedhisfavoriteneighborhooddonutshop.

Healwaysleftwithabearclawpastry（油酥糕點）andacupofcoffee.Occasionally,Dadwouldtake

mefishingonweekendsortohisworkduringthesummer,andwealwaysstoppedatDad'smorning

place,wherehewouldshareconversationandjokeswiththeemployeesandcustomersalike.

Whenweleft,accompanyingthebearclawinasmallboxwasachocolate-covereddonutfor

me.Dadwouldhelpmeupandintohistruck.Myanklesjustclearedtheseatasmyshoesstayed

clearofdirtyingthecushion.IsatclosetoDad,justunderhiswing,feelinghonored,safeand

comfortable.MyjobduringthejourneywastoholdDad'scoffeebetweenmykneestokeepitfrom

spilling.Eventhoughthecuphadalid,Itookmyjobseriouslyandthecoffeeneverdidspill（灑）.

Aftercatchingmyfirstrainbowtrout（魚尊魚）,Dadwassoproud,westoppedbythedonutshop

onourwayhometoshowofftheprize.Theapplausetheygavemefeltgood,buttoseehowproud

Dadlookedwastherealgift.AstimepassedandIgrewolderandbigger,thedonutshopbecamea

specialplaceforustocelebratemywinsfromswimminganddownhillskiingcompetitions.Evenif

Ididn'twinorplace,Dadwouldstilltakemetothatfamiliarplaceofsharing.Wealwaysleftwith

thelittleboxholdingonebearclawandonechocolate-covereddonut.Eventually,Igrewupandleft

Dad'shome.

Onmyweddingday,beforehewalkedmedowntheaisle,Dadhandedmeasmallgiftbox.

Ayearlater,IunderwentthreebacksurgeriesandDad'scancerhadprogressedverymuch.

二、原作品讀

MymotherpassedawaywhenIwassix,andmydadbecametheonlyparentformysiblingsand

me.

EverymorningbeforeDadwenttowork,hefrequentedhisfavoriteneighborhooddonutshop.

Healwaysleftwithabearclawpastryandacupofcoffee.Occasionally,Dadwouldtakemefishing

onweekendsortohisworkduringthesummer,andwealwaysstoppedatDad'smorninghangout.

wherehewouldshareconversationandjokeswiththeemployeesandcustomersalike.

Whenweleft,accompanyingthebearclawinasmallboxwasachocolate-covereddonutfor

me.Dadwouldhelpmeupandintohistruck.Myanklesjustclearedtheseatasmyshoesstayed

clearofdirtyingtheupholstery.IsatclosetoDad,justunderhiswing,feelinghonored,safeand

comfortable.MyjobduringthejourneywastoholdDad'scofleebetweenmykneestokeepitfrom

spilling.Eventhoughthecuphadalid.Itookmyjobseriouslyandthecoffeeneverdidspill.

Aftercatchingmyfirstrainbowtrout,Dadwassoproud,westoppedbythedonutshoponour

wayhometoshowoffthetrophy.Theapplausetheygavemefeltgood,buttoseehowproudDad

lookedwastherealgift.

AstimepassedandIgrewolderandbigger,thedonutshopbecameaspecialplaceforusto

celebratemywinsfromswimminganddownhillskiingcompetitions.EvenifIdidn'twinorplace,

Dadwouldstilltakemetothatfamiliarplaceofsharing.Wealwaysleftwiththelittleboxholding

onebearclawandonechocolate-covereddonut.

Eventually,IgrewupandleftDad'shome.Onmyweddingday,beforehewalkedmedownthe

aisle.Dadhandedmeasmallgiftbox.WhenIopenedit,Ifoundasmallchocolate-covereddonut.

Myheartmeltedquickerthanthechocolatefrostingwouldhaveinanoven.Weheldeachotherand

cried.HetoldmehowproudhewasofmeandthatIwouldalwaysbehislittlegirl.

DadcontinuedgoingtohisfavoritedonutshoplongafterIleft.Ionlyreturnedthereonce,with

myfirstbabydaughter.Dadglowedwithpride,holdingwhatseemedtobethebesttrophyyettoshare

withhisfriends.

InOctober1989,Dadfoundouthehadinoperablecancer.Welivedanoceanapart,andour

visitswerefew.

Ayearlater,Iwasattackedandbeaten,landingmeinthehospital,undergoingthreeback

surgeriesforcrushedvertebrae.Dad'scancerhadprogressedsomuchthathisbodywasbarelyable

toholdhimup.Againstdoctor9sorders,heflewtothehospitaltocomfortme.Whenhearrived,I

wasintractionandbarelyabletomove.Dad'sfrailbodylayovermychest,andwithhisskeletal

armshehuggedme,sayingifhecouldgivemeanygiftintheworld,hewouldtradeplaceswithme

atthatverymoment.

Astheypreparedmeforsurgery,IwatchedDad'seyespourtearsthatwouldfilladam.Heasked

theanesthesiologisttotakecareofhislittlegirl.Theywheeledmeoutoftheroomandintosurgery.

WhenIwokeup,Iwasbackinmyroom.Nobodywasaround.AsIreachedforthetelephonetocall

Dad,Isawapaperplateholdingadonutcoveredwithchocolate.

IneversawDadagain.He'dbecomesoweakhehadtoreturnhome.Thecancertookhimjust

daysafterheleftmybedside.

NowwhenIdrivepastdonutshops,Ican'thelpbutsmile,recallingthosememories,mygreatest

trophy.

一、wordsforunderstanding（加粗的單詞為熟記單詞，其它認識即可）：

單詞音標詞性釋義單詞音標詞性釋義

sibling['SIbllg]n.兄弟姐妹aisle[ai1]n.過道

pastry['pelstri]n.油酥糕點oven[1Avn]n.烤箱

hangout['hseyaut]n.常去處glow[glou]vi.發(fā)光

daw[klo:]n.爪inoperable[in'Dporobl]adj.不能手術(shù)

的

upholstery[Ap'houIsn.襯墊crush[krAJ]vt.壓傷

tori]

lid[11d]n.蓋子vertebrae['v3：abri：]n.椎骨

spill[spi1]vi.溢出traction「traekjn]n.牽引（治療）

trout[traut]n.魚尊魚frail[frei1]adj.脆弱的

trophy「troufi]n.獎品skeletal['skelotl]adj.骨骼的

downhill[,daun'hn.（滑雪）速降anesthesiologLaenos,0i：zi*D1n.麻醉學家

i1]ist0d3ist]

短語釋義短語釋義

passaway去世take...seriously認真對待

showoff炫耀

二、Readtoappreciate

1.每天早上爸爸上班之前，他經(jīng)常去附近他最喜歡的甜甜圈店。

EverymorningbeforeDadwenttowork,hehisfavoriteneighborhooddonutshop.(Action)

2.我緊挨著爸爸坐著，就在他的羽翼下，感到光榮、安全和舒適。

IclosetoDad,justunderhis,feelinghonored,safeand.(Action+

Metaphor+Emotion)

3.爸爸虛弱的身體躺在我的胸前，用他骨瘦如柴的手臂擁抱著我,說如果他能給我任何禮物，

他愿意在那一刻和我交換。

Dad'sfrailbodyovermychest,andwithhisskeletalarmsheme,sayingifhecould

givemeanygiftintheworld,hewouldtradeplaceswithmeatthatverymoment.(Action+Metaphor)

4.我的心比烤箱里的巧克力糖霜融化得還要快。

Myheartquickerthanthechocolatefrostingwouldhaveinanoven.(Action+Emotion)

5.爸爸驕傲得滿臉通紅，手里拿著似乎是最好的獎杯，準備和朋友們分享。

Dadglowed,holdingwhatseemedtobethebesttrophyyettosharewithhis

friends.(Emotion+Metaphor)

6.當他們?yōu)槲易鍪中g(shù)做準備時，我看著爸爸的眼睛里涌出的淚水像水壩一樣。

Astheypreparedmeforsurgery,IwatchedDad'seyes___________________________________

.(Emotion+Metaphor)

三.Languageinuse

(1)Applicationofthekeywords:FillintheblanksaccordingtotheChinesesentences.

1.雷聲常伴著閃電。Thunderoftenlightning.

2.我要替你把那個小衣櫥清理出來141outthatclosetforyou.

3.我希望別人嚴肅地對待我的不幸。Ilikemymisfortunes

4.我們抱在一起哭了。Weeachotherand.

5.他去了醫(yī)院接受對他的腹部疼痛進行的各項檢查。

Hewentintothehospitaltotestsforapaininhisabdomen.

6.他不顧醫(yī)生的囑咐，飛到醫(yī)院來安慰我。Againstdoctor'sorders,hetothehospital

tocomfortme.

7.我呼吸著芬芳的空氣。Hetthescentedairmylungs.

8.光陰一去不復返。Timefliesneverto.

(2)Imitationofthescenes:

仿寫：描寫我比賽失敗之后，朋友鼓勵我。

Key:

一、讀后續(xù)寫

Onmyweddingday,beforehewalkedmedowntheaisle,Dadhandedmeasmallgiftbox.

WhenIopenedit,asmallchocolate-covereddonutcameintoview.Myheartmeltedquickerthanthe

chocolatefrostingwouldhaveinanoven.Weheldeachothertightlyandtearswelledupinmyeyes.

HetoldmehowproudhewasofmeandthatIwouldalwaysbehislittlegirl.However,happydays

didnotlastlong.ItwasnotlongbeforeDadfoundouthehadinoperablecancer.

Ayearlater;IunderwentthreebacksurgeriesandDad'scancerhadprogres