專題08應(yīng)用文寫作

1.（2023上?北京西城?高二北京八中?？计谀┘僭O(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二學(xué)生李華。你校英國留學(xué)生Jim最近

在學(xué)習(xí)漢語的過程中遇到了許多困難，希望你給他一些學(xué)習(xí)漢語的建議，請你給Jim回信，提出你的建議,

內(nèi)容包括：

1.Jim遇到的困難；

2.你的建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

IfsgreattoknowthatyouhavebeguntolearnChinese!YousayyoufindChinesedifficulttolearn.Iquite

understandyourproblem.

Differentfromyourlanguage,mostChinesecharactersarefromimages.ForEnglish,mostoftime,you'llknow

howtopronounceawordwhenyouseeit.ButitisimpossibleinChinese.Inaddition,Chinesegrammaristotally

differentfromEnglishgrammar.Thatdefinitelybringsyoumoretrouble.

However,learningChinesetakestime.Don'tworry.IsuggestyoustartwithPinyin,whichwillhelpyouknow

howtoreadChinesecharacters.Besides,listeningtoChinesesongsorwatchingChinesemovieswillalsohelp.The

moreyouareexposedtothelanguage,themorefamiliaryouwillgetwithit.

Iwishyoueverysuccessinlearningthelanguage!Ifyouhaveanyfurtherquestions,feelfreetoask.Good

luck!

Yours

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作。假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二學(xué)生李華。你校英國留學(xué)生Jim最近在學(xué)習(xí)漢語的

過程中遇到了許多困難，希望你給他一些學(xué)習(xí)漢語的建議，請你給Jim回信。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

理解：understand一comprehend

確實：definitely^-indeed

建議：suggest一advise

另夕卜：besides^moreover

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Inaddition,ChinesegrammaristotallydifferentfromEnglishgrammar.Thatdefinitelybringsyoumore

trouble.

拓展句：Inaddition,ChinesegrammaristotallydifferentfromEnglishgrammar,whichdefinitelybringsyoumore

trouble.

【點睛】[高分句型l]ForEnglish,mostoftime,you511knowhowtopronounceawordwhenyouseeit.（運用了

how+不定式作賓語，when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）

[高分句型1]IsuggestyoustartwithPinyin,whichwillhelpyouknowhowtoreadChinesecharacters.（運用了虛

擬語氣和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

2.（2023上?北京順義?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假如你是紅星中學(xué)高二學(xué)生李華，得知澳大利亞學(xué)生團體下個月將要

來你校進行文化交流，學(xué)校為此招募志愿者參加本次活動，你很感興趣。請給學(xué)校外事辦公室寫一封申請

信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.申請理由（包括英語能力、性格特征）；

2.參加意圖（介紹中國文化、了解澳大利亞）；

3.表達(dá)期待。

注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于60；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

DearSir/Madam,

IamLiHua,astudentfromSeniorGrade2.Learningthattherewillbean,exchangeactivity（交流活動）with

Australianstudentsinourschool,Ireallywanttoapplyforit.

Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearSir/Madam,

IamLiHua,astudentfromSeniorGrade2.Learningthattherewillbean,exchangeactivity（交流7舌動）with

Australianstudentsinourschool,Ireallywanttoapplyforit.

Tobeginwith,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,whichwillsurelybeofgreathelpincommunicatingwith

foreigners.Besides,Ienjoycooperatingwithothersandameasytogetalongwith.Moreimportantly,Chinese

cultureiswhatI'minterestedinandIalsohaveagoodunderstandingofAustralia.I'dbegratefulifmyapplication

couldbetakenintoconsideration.

Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給學(xué)校外事辦公室寫一封申請信，申請文化交流志愿者。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

首先：Tobeginwith一Firstofall

止匕夕卜：besides—whafsmore

友好相處：getalongwith-getonwith

感激：begrateful一appreciate

2.句式拓展

句式轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：rdbegratefulifmyapplicationcouldbetakenintoconsideration.

拓展句：Ifmyapplicationcouldbetakenintoconsideration,Iwouldbemostgrateful.

【點睛】【高分句型1]Tobeginwith,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,whichwillsurelybeofgreathelpin

communicatingwithforeigners.（運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

【高分句型2】Moreimportantly,ChinesecultureiswhatI'minterestedinandIalsohaveagoodunderstandingof

Australia.（運用了what引導(dǎo)的表語從句）

3.（2023上?北京昌平?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假設(shè)你是學(xué)生會主席李華，學(xué)生會打算召開一次主題為“成功的秘訣

的線上英文演講活動，請你寫信給你的英國外教Jim,邀請他來參加你們的活動并做主題發(fā)言。

內(nèi)容包括：1.演講活動舉辦的時間和內(nèi)容；

2.建議發(fā)言的具體內(nèi)容及其原因。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

DearJim,

Iamwritingonbehalfoftheschool'sStudentUniontoinviteyoutobeourguestintheonlinespeech

competitionthemed"ThesecretofSuccess",whichwillbeheldat9a.m.nextMondayviaTencentMeeting.

Inthecompetition,tencontestantswillgiveafive-minutespeechonthetopicinEnglish,followedbythe

question-and-answersession.

Asweknow,youareanexpertinpublicspeakingandabelovedandwell-knownteacher.So,wouldyouhave

timetobeourguestandmakeakeynotespeechafterthecompetition?Wewouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucan

makecommentsonthepositiveandnegativeaspectsofcontestantsprovidesometipsaboutpublicspeaking.

Isincerelyhopeyoucancome.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasedoletmeknow.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

Anotherpossibleversion:

DearJim,

I'mwritingonbehalfoftheStudentUniontocordiallyinviteyoutoattendanonlineEnglishspeechcontest

andI'mwritingtoaskifyouwouldliketojoinus.

Tohelpstudentshaveadeeperunderstandingofsuccess,thestudentunionisgoingtoholdaspeech

competition.Asisscheduled,itisgoingtobeheldfrom2:00p.m.to5:00p.m.onJanuary5th.onTencentMeeting.

Allthecompetitorsarerequiredtoprepareanoriginalspeechthemed“ThesecretofSuccess“within5minutes.At

theendofthecontest,youareexpectedtosharesomerepresentativesuccessstories,offeringusanewdimension

inunderstandingofsuccess.

Ifyou'reavailable,pleaseconfirmitatearliestconvenienceandwewillsendyouthemeetingnumber.Your

presencewillbehighlyexpected.

Yours,

Lihua

【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作。要求考生寫信給你的英國外教Jim,邀請他來參加主題為“成功的秘訣”的

線上英文演講活動并做主題發(fā)言。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

比賽：competition一contest

競爭者：contestant-competitor

感激：appreciate—begrateful

提供：provide一offer

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Inthecompetition,tencontestantswillgiveafive-minutespeechonthetopicinEnglish,followedbythe

question-and-answersession.

拓展句：Inthecompetition,aftertencontestantsgiveafive-minutespeechonthetopicinEnglish,the

question-and-answersessionwillbefollowed.

【點睛】[高分句型1]Iamwritingonbehalfoftheschool'sStudentUniontoinviteyoutobeourguestinthe

onlinespeechcompetitionthemed"ThesecretofSuccess”,whichwillbeheldat9a,m.nextMondayviaTencent

Meeting.（which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]Wewouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucanmakecommentsonthepositiveandnegativeaspectsof

contestantsprovidesometipsaboutpublicspeaking.（if弓|導(dǎo)條件狀語從句）

4.（2023上?北京房山?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二學(xué)生李華。你校學(xué)生會要組織主題為“和諧地

球”的繪畫作品展覽。請你代表學(xué)生會用英文給外籍教師史密斯先生寫一封電子郵件，邀請他來參加此次展

覽的開幕式。內(nèi)容包括：

1.開幕式的時間、地點和流程；

2.展覽的主題和展期；

3.展覽的作品及其特點。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

詞匯：展覽exhibition和諧地球EarthinHarmony

DearMrSmith,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

StudentUnion

【答案】DearMr.Smith,

Itismyhonortoinviteyoutoparticipateintheopeningceremonyofanartexhibitionwiththethemeof

“EarthinHarmony^^,whichwillbeheldbyourschoolattheauditoriumnextSaturdayafternoon,from2pmto5

pm.

Ourceremonywillconsistofthreeprocedures-ourheadmaster'sannouncementofthebeginning,aspeechto

introducetheshowandstudents5performancestocelebrate.Theexhibitionwilllastforawholeweek.Youcan

enjoyvariouspaintingsfromcartoontotraditionalChinesepainting.Theyareallrelatedtotheharmony

relationshipbetweenhumanandnature.

Hopeyouarewillingtojoin!

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

StudentUnion

【導(dǎo)語】這是一篇邀請信。要求考生以學(xué)生會主席李華的身份給外籍教師史密斯先生寫一封電子郵件，邀

請他來參加主題為“和諧地球''繪畫作品展的開幕式。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

參力口：participatein一takepartin

展覽：exhibition-show

由...組成：consistoJbemadefrom

各種各樣的：various—>avarietyof

2.句式拓展

合并簡單句

原句：Theexhibitionwilllastforawholeweek.Youcanenjoyvariouspaintingsfromcartoontotraditional

Chinesepainting.

拓展句：Theexhibitionwilllastforawholeweek,whenyoucanenjoyvariouspaintingsfromcartoontotraditional

Chinesepainting.

【點睛】[高分句型1]Itismyhonortoinviteyoutoparticipateintheopeningceremonyofanartexhibitionwith

thethemeof"HarmonyEarth^^,whichwillbeheldbyourschoolattheauditoriumnextSaturdayafternoon,from2

pmto5pm.（運用了it作形式主語以及which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]YoucanenjoyvariouspaintingsfromcartoontotraditionalChinesepainting.（運用了介詞短語

from...to作后置定語）

5.（2023上?北京懷柔?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二學(xué)生李華，你所在的校籃球隊正在招收新隊員，

請給你班交換生Jim寫一封電子郵件邀請他加入，內(nèi)容包括：

1.邀請原因及球隊簡介；

2.報名方式及截止日期。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

提示詞：recruitnewplayers

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

Fmwritingtotellyouthatourschool'sbasketballteamisrecruitingnewmembers.Iknowyou'reverygood

atplayingbasketball.Whynottakethisopportunitytojoinourschoolteam?Somedetailsabouttheteamareas

follows.

Thecoachingteamisveryprofessionalandourschoolteamhaswonmanyawardsinvariouscompetitions.

WehaveregulartrainingforabouttwohoursontheplaygroundafterschooleveryFriday.Ifyouwanttoapplyfor

themembership,youarerequiredtofillintheapplicationformandsubmitittoschoolsportsofficebythisFriday.

Areyouinterested?Ifyouneedanyhelp,Iwouldbeverygladtohelpyou.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給你班交換生Jim寫一封電子郵件邀請他加入你?；@球隊，

內(nèi)容包括：邀請原因及球隊簡介；報名方式及截止日期。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

機會：opportunity—>chance

各種各樣的：various一avarietyof

比賽：competitions—contests

高興的：glad-happy

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Thecoachingteamisveryprofessionalandourschoolteamhaswonmanyawardsinvariouscompetitions.

拓展句：Notonlyisthecoachingteamveryprofessionalbutalsoourschoolteamhaswonmanyawardsinvarious

competitions.

【點睛】[高分句型1]I'mwritingtotellyouthatourschool'sbasketballteamisrecruitingnewmembers.（運用了

that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

[高分句型2]Ifyouwanttoapplyforthemembership,youarerequiredtofillintheapplicationformandsubmitit

toschoolsportsofficebythisFriday.（運用了if引導(dǎo)的狀語從句）

優(yōu)選提升提

6.(2023上?北京石景山?高二統(tǒng)考期末)假定你是紅星中學(xué)高二學(xué)生李華。你的英國朋友Jim來信，告知他

最近順利通過了漢語水平考試(HSK)四級。請回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.表示祝賀；

2.贊賞其付出。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100字左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

HearingthatyouhavesuccessfullypassedHSKTestofBand4recently,Iamwritingtoexpressmysincere

congratulationstoyou.Here'swhatIwanttosay.

First,Iknowasaforeigner,itisverydifficulttolearnChinese.Whenyoupassthisexam,Ibelieveyoumust

havepaidalot.Second,inthisprocess,notonlywillyougaintheChineselanguage,butalsoyouhavemore

opportunitiestoexperienceChinesetraditionalknowledgeandculture.Thirdly,thisexamisalsoachanceto

exerciseyourself,whichwillmakeyoumoretoughandconfident.

Congratulationsagain,andIhopeyoucanvisitChina.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國朋友Jim寫信祝賀他最近順利通過了漢語水平四級考

試。向他表示祝賀。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

誠摯的：sincere一genuine

首先：first-firstofall

首先：besides—>whafsmore

比賽：competition一match

希望：hope—expect

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：HearingthatyouhavesuccessfullypassedHSKTestofBand4recently,Iamwritingtoexpressmysincere

congratulationstoyou.

拓展句：BecauseIhearthatyouhavesuccessfullypassedHSKTestofBand4recently,Iamwritingtoexpressmy

sincerecongratulationstoyou.

【點睛1（高分句型1JSecond,inthisprocess,notonlywillyougaintheChineselanguage,butalsoyouhavemore

opportunitiestoexperienceChinesetraditionalknowledgeandculture.（運用了倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)）

【高分句型2】Thirdly,thisexamisalsoachancetoexerciseyourself,whichwillmakeyoumoretoughand

confident.（運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

7.（2023上?北京通州?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二學(xué)生李華。你的英國筆友Jim在給你的郵件中

提到他對你校的學(xué)生社團活動非常感興趣，希望你介紹一下這方面的情況。請你給他回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包

括：

1.你校的學(xué)生社團及活動；

2.你喜歡參加的社團及原因。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100詞左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

I'mmorethandelightedtoknowyouarecuriousabouttheclubactivitiesofourschoolandwanttoknow

somethingaboutthem.HereI'dliketosharesomedetailswithyou.

Therearealtogether20orsoclubsinourschool,tonameafew,Pekingoperaclub,Swimmingclub,Calligraphy

club,andPaintingclub.Theyallhaveafixedtimetoarrangevariedactivities.Asforme,I'dliketojoinPeking

operaclub.First,PekingoperaislikeapearlinChinesetraditionalart.Joiningthisclubcangivemeatasteof

Chinesetraditionalartformsandevenhaveahands-onexperience.Besides,theclubwillregularlyorganize

variousactivities,suchasinvitingfamousactorstoperform,anddrawingPekingoperamake-ups.Ibelievegetting

closetoPekingoperawillbeagoodwayoflearningmoreaboutit.

Hopefullymyopinioncanbeofhelp.Ifyouwanttolearnanythingmore,don'thesitatetocontactme.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國筆友Jim回一封郵件，向他介紹你們學(xué)校的學(xué)生社團活動以及

你喜歡參加的社團及原因。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

高興的：delighted—■glad

安排，舉辦：arrange—organise

各種各樣的：varied-various

方法：way—method

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Theyallhaveafixedtimetoarrangevariedactivities.

拓展句：Theyallhaveafixedtime,whentheyarrangevariedactivities.

【點睛】【高分句型1]JoiningthisclubcangivemeatasteofChinesetraditionalartformsandevenhavea

hands-onexperience.（運用了動名詞作主語）

【高分句型2]IbelievegettingclosetoPekingoperawillbeagoodwayoflearningmoreaboutit.（運用了省略

that的賓語從句和動名詞短語作主語）

8.（2023上?北京平谷?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假如你是紅星中學(xué)高二學(xué)生李華。你的英國好友Jim從社交媒體上看

到了你參觀學(xué)校國畫展覽的照片，寫信向你了解情況。請給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.國畫展相關(guān)信息（時間、地點、目的等）；

2.你的感受。

國畫展：theexhibitionoftraditionalChinesepaintings

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearJim,

Howareyoudoing?KnowingthatyouarealoveroftraditionalChinesepainting,Iamwritingtotellyou

somethingabouttheexhibitionoftraditionalChinesepaintingsheldinourschool.

Asscheduled,theeventtookplaceonApril20thinourschoolhall.Someexpertswerepresentandgave

lecturesonsomewell-knownartists,throughwhichwehadagoodunderstandingoftraditionalChinesepainting.

Somepaintingsmadebystudentswereondisplay,whichwasafeastfortheeyes.Everystudentpresentcouldfeel

thebeautyoftraditionalChinesepainting,benefitingalotfromtheactivity.

Hopefully,youcanjoinusnextyear.

Yours

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假如你是紅星中學(xué)高二學(xué)生李華。你的英國好友Jim從社交媒體上看

到了你參觀學(xué)校國畫展覽的照片，寫信向你了解情況。請給他回信。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

舉行：tookplace—*beheld

發(fā)表演講：gavelectures—madespeeches

展出：ondisplay—onshow

收獲，收益：benefit—*gain

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：KnowingthatyouarealoveroftraditionalChinesepainting,Iamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutthe

exhibitionoftraditionalChinesepaintingsheldinourschool.

拓展句：BecauseIknowthatyouarealoveroftraditionalChinesepainting,Iamwritingtotellyousomething

abouttheexhibitionoftraditionalChinesepaintingsheldinourschool.

【點睛】【高分句型1]Somepaintingsmadebystudentswereondisplay,whichwasafeastfortheeyes.（運用了

過去分詞作定語，which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

【高分句型2]EverystudentpresentcouldfeelthebeautyoftraditionalChinesepainting,benefitingalotfromthe

activity.（運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語。）

9.（2023上?北京西城?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二學(xué)生李華，你的英國筆友Jim在做主題為“節(jié)

約能源”的相關(guān)調(diào)研，發(fā)郵件詢問你在日常生活中是如何節(jié)約能源的。請給Jim回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容如下：

1.你在節(jié)約能源方面的做法；

2.你對節(jié)約能源的看法。

注意：1.詞數(shù)：不少于100；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

Knowingthatyouaredoingaresearchaboutenergysaving,I'dliketotellyousomethingthatIdoinmydaily

lifeandmyideasaboutit.

Tobeginwith,savingwaterisveryimportant.Thewaterthatwewashourfacescanbereused,whichisakind

ofgoodresourcetowaterflowers.Whafsmore,thatremembertokeepthelightoffwhenweleavetheroomisalso

amust.Itcannotonlysaveenergybutalsosaveourpockets.Aboveall,theawarenessofsavingenergyisvitalto

everyoneandtheearth.Soremindingpeoplearoundusofsavingenergyanddevelopingagoodhabitplayarolein

protectingourplanet.

Ihopemyideasareusefultoyoursurvey.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求學(xué)生給Jim回信并告訴他自己在生活中節(jié)約能源的做法和自己的

看法。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

首先：tobeginwith一tostartwith/firstofall

其次：whafsmore一besides/moreover

最重要的：aboveall—>mostimportantly

起作用：playarolein一playapartin

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Knowingthatyouaredoingaresearchaboutenergysaving,I'dliketotellyousomethingthatIdoinmy

dailylifeandmyideasaboutit.

拓展句：BecauseIknowthatyouaredoingaresearchaboutenergysaving,I'dliketotellyousomethingthatIdo

inmydailylifeandmyideasaboutit.

【點睛】【高分句型1】Knowingthatyouaredoingaresearchaboutenergysaving,I'dliketotellyousomething

thatIdoinmydailylifeandmyideasaboutit.（運用了非謂語動詞作原因狀語）

【高分句型2]Thewaterthatwewashourfacescanbereused,whichisakindofgoodresourcetowaterflowers.

（運用了非限制性定語從句）

【高分句型3】Whafsmore,thatremembertokeepthelightoffwhenweleavetheroomisalsoamust.（運用了

主語從句）

10.（2023上?北京豐臺?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假設(shè)你是李華，在英國WestMiddleSchool做交換生。學(xué)校網(wǎng)站正在

征集主題為“Conservation”的文章。請你在網(wǎng)站上投稿，介紹自己環(huán)保理念和具體做法。主要內(nèi)容包括：

1.理念或觀點；

2.做法及其原因；

3倡議。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

【答案】Deareditor,

IamLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChina.Iwouldliketosharemyenvironmentalprotectionideasand

specificpracticeswithyou.

Asweallknow,everyoneusesalotofpapereveryday,whichmeanscuttingdownalotoftreeseveryyear.

Therefore,Ithinkweshouldsavepaperatordinarytimes.Theeasiestwaytodothisistofoldapieceofpaper

whosebothsidesareusedup,packitup,andsendittoapapermillforrecycling.

ThafshowIsavepaper.Ihopeeveryonecanstartfromthelittlethingsaroundtoloveandprotectourhome.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給學(xué)校網(wǎng)站關(guān)于“Conservation”主題投稿，介紹自己環(huán)保理念

和具體做法。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

我認(rèn)為：Ithink一asfarasIamconcerned

很多：alotof—largequantitiesof

應(yīng)該：should一oughtto

希望：hope一wish

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Iwouldliketosharemyenvironmentalprotectionideasandspecificpracticeswithyou.

拓展句：Iwouldliketosharesomethingthatisaboutmyenvironmentalprotectionideasandspecificpractices

withyou.

【點睛】［高分句型1】Asweallknow,everyoneusesalotofpapereveryday,whichmeanscuttingdownalotof

treeseveryyear.（運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

【高分句型2]Ihopeeveryonecanstartfromthelittlethingsaroundtoloveandprotectourhome.（運用了省略

that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

H.（2023上?北京東城?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二學(xué)生李華。你的英國筆友Jim來信說他最近

讀了一些科學(xué)家的傳記，認(rèn)為科學(xué)家有很多優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)非常值得年輕人學(xué)習(xí)，并詢問你對此觀點的看法。請

你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括:

1.贊同他的觀點；

2.你從科學(xué)家身上學(xué)到的一種品質(zhì)；

3.你踐行這一品質(zhì)的一個事例。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

Fmmorethandelightedtoreceiveyourlettersayingyou'vereadsomebiographiesofscientists.Ican'tagree

morewithyouthatweteenagerscanbenefitfromtheirpersonalities.

TakeDoctorYuanLongpingasanexample,whoisapioneerinagriculturalarea.WeChineseshowgreat

respecttohim,withoutwhomsomemighthavediedofhunger.AsfarasI'mconcerned,henotonlydevoted

himselftotheresearchonrice,butalsocaredlittleaboutmoney.Inspiredbyhisstory,Fmreadingthelatestarticles

onAIinmysparetimeandevensubmittedmyownarticles.Unexpectedly,mysubmissionwaspublishedina

magazinelastmonth,whichencouragedmetosparenoefforttoworkhard,preparingformyfuturecareerasa

robotdesigner.Additionally,Iwillleadasimplebutmeaningfullife.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國筆友Jim回信，贊同他“科學(xué)家的很多品質(zhì)值得年輕人”

的觀點，并舉例一種從科學(xué)家身上學(xué)到的品質(zhì)，以及如何踐行這一品質(zhì)的一個事例。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

收到你的來信：receiveyourletter—hearfromyou

止匕夕卜：additionally一whafsmore/besides/furthermore

領(lǐng)域：area—field

獻身于：devoteoneselfto一bedevotedto

就我所知：asfarasIamconcerned一frommypointofview/asfarasIknow

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：AsfarasI'mconcerned,henotonl