“五年真題(202L2025)

4<19成用女寫作(新缽標(biāo))

五年考情-探規(guī)律

考點(diǎn)五年考情(2021-2025)命題趨勢

2025全國一卷-告知信；1.最近五年新課標(biāo)卷應(yīng)用文寫作以書信類為

2025全國二卷一咨詢信；主。

考點(diǎn)1書信體2025八省聯(lián)考卷一推薦信；

2.浙江1月卷應(yīng)用文寫作傾向于非書信體。

2024新課標(biāo)I&II卷一告知信；

(5年7考)

2023新課標(biāo)I&II卷一建議信；3.應(yīng)用文寫作滲透“德智體美勞”理念，尤

2022新課標(biāo)I&II卷一邀請信；其是體育健身、美育教育、勞動意識。

2021新課標(biāo)I&II卷一投稿信。

4.寫作字?jǐn)?shù)應(yīng)為80個左右，實(shí)際需要120

2025浙江1月卷—演講稿；

2024浙江1月卷一短文投稿；詞左右。

考點(diǎn)2非書信體

2024九省聯(lián)考卷一活動通知；5.重視材料審題能力、核心素養(yǎng)主題把握能

(5年6考)2023浙江1月卷一活動報道；

力以及綜合運(yùn)用高級詞匯和復(fù)雜句式表達(dá)

2023四省聯(lián)考卷一音樂評論；

能力。

2020新課標(biāo)卷一活動報道。

分考點(diǎn)-精準(zhǔn)練

考點(diǎn)01書信體(邀請信、建議信、告知信……)

[2025全國一卷--告知信】

假定你是李華，你班的英語報要增設(shè)一個欄目。外教Jenny提出“Funatmyschool"和"GuesswhoIam

兩個選項(xiàng)供大家選擇。請給Jenny寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

(1)你的選擇；

(2)說明理由。

注意：

(1)寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右；

(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearJenny,

IreallyliketheideaofaddinganewcolumntoourEnglishnewspaper.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearJenny,

IreallyliketheideaofaddinganewcolumntoourEnglishnewspaper.I'mwritingtoexpressthatmy

predilectiongoesto“GuesswhoIam”,whichcapitalizesonanobjectclausetosignalitspotentialcontents.

Thecolumnwillserveasacatalystforcloserbondsbetweenstudents.Redoublingeffortstoboost

academicperformance,wepaylittleheedtootherclassmates9personalities,hobbies,strengths,andeven

aspirations.Suchaninvitingcolumn,adoptinga^descriptionandguess”approach,mustexposeeveryoneto

others9characteristics,thusstrengtheningmutualunderstanding.Moreimportantly,morefriendshipswillbe

forged,sincethecolumnenablesustobefriendsomeoneonthesamewavelength.

Thiseye-catchingcolumn,I'mfirmlyconvinced,won'tfailtograntthewholeclassaharmonious

atmosphere.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生就外教Jenny提出的校英文報增設(shè)一個欄目，在“Funatmy

school”和“GuesswhoIam”兩個選項(xiàng)中給出自己的推薦，并說明理由。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

表達(dá)：express—convey

禾?。┯茫篶apitalizeon一use

擔(dān)當(dāng)：serveas—actas

注意：payheedto一takenoticeof

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Suchaninvitingcolumn,adoptinga^descriptionandguess”approach,mustexposeeveryonetoothers'

characteristics,thusstrengtheningmutualunderstanding.

拓展句：Suchaninvitingcolumn,whichadoptsa^descriptionandguess”approach,mustexposeeveryoneto

others9characteristics,thusstrengtheningmutualunderstanding.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型l]Fmwritingtoexpressthatmypredilectiongoesto"GuesswhoIam”,whichcapitalizes

onanobjectclausetosignalitspotentialcontents.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句,which引導(dǎo)的定語從句）

【高分句型2]Moreimportantly,morefriendshipswillbeforged,sincethecolumnenablesustobefriend

someoneonthesamewavelength.(運(yùn)用了since引導(dǎo)的狀語從句)

【2025全國二卷一咨詢信】

假定你是校英文報編輯李華，外教Chris上個月答應(yīng)寫一篇介紹加拿大體育運(yùn)動的文章。請給Chris寫

一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

(1)詢問進(jìn)展；

(2)提醒交稿時間。

注意：

(1)寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右；

(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearChris

Bestwishes,

LiHua

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

DearChris,

HopethisemailHndsyouwell!Lastmonth,youkindlyagreedtowriteanarticleaboutsportsinCanada,

andwe'realllookingforwardtoreadingit.

I'mwritingtopolitelyinquireabouttheprogressofthearticle.Wouldyoumindlettingmeknowhowit's

going?Also,couldIremindyouthatthedeadlineforsubmissionisthisFriday,June14th?Yourinsightsinto

Canadiansportswillsurelyenrichourreaders9understandingofglobalsportsculture,whichwillbeof

benefittous.

Thankyouagainforyoursupport!

Bestwishes,

LiHua

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生給外教Chris寫一封郵件，詢問他上個月答應(yīng)寫一篇介紹

加拿大體育運(yùn)動的文章的進(jìn)展，并提醒交稿時間。

【詳解】L詞匯積累：

詢問：inquire一ask

理解：understanding-^comprehension

此外：also—besides

肯定地：surely—certainly

2.句式拓展：

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Fmwritingtopolitelyinquireabouttheprogressofthearticle.

拓展句：Asyouknow,I'mwritingtopolitelyinquireabouttheprogressofthearticle.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Wouldyoumindlettingmeknowhowifsgoing?(運(yùn)用了how引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)

【高分句型2】YourinsightsintoCanadiansportswillsurelyenrichourreaders9understandingofglobal

sportsculture,whichwillbeofbenefittous.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)

【2025八省聯(lián)考卷T隹薦信】

假定你是李華，你的留學(xué)生朋友Beth想學(xué)打乒乓球，發(fā)郵件向你求教。請給她回封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

(1)表示支持；

(2)推薦教練。

注意：

(1)寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右；

(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearBeth,

Gladtoknowthatyouwanttolearntoplaytabletennis.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearBeth,

Gladtoknowthatyouwanttolearntoplaytabletennis.Ifsafunandexcitingsport!Ihighlysupport

yourdecision,asitwillnotonlyimproveyourskillsbutalsohelpyoumakenewfriends.

IrecommendyoutakelessonsfromCoachZhang.Heisanexperiencedcoachwhohastrainedmany

playersatdifferentlevels.Hisclassesareengagingandtailoredtoeachstudent'sneeds.Youcanfindhimat

thelocalsportscenter.

Letmeknowifyouneedmoreinformation.Enjoyyourtraining!

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生對于你的留學(xué)生朋友Beth想學(xué)打乒乓球，發(fā)郵件向你求教這

一情況，給她回封郵件。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

強(qiáng)烈地：highly^strongly

提高，增強(qiáng)：improveenhance

引人入勝的：engaging—attractive

有趣的：fun一interesting

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Hisclassesareengagingandtailoredtoeachstudenfsneeds.

拓展句：Hisclassesareengaging,whicharetailoredtoeachstudenfsneeds.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Heisanexperiencedcoachwhohastrainedmanyplayersatdifferentlevels.(運(yùn)用了

who引導(dǎo)的定語從句)

【高分句型2]Ihighlysupportyourdecision,asitwillnotonlyimproveyourskillsbutalsohelpyoumake

newfriends.(運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句以及notonly...butalso…的固定句型)

[2024新課標(biāo)I&II卷--告知信】

假定你是李華，上周五你們班在公園上了一堂美術(shù)課。請你給英國朋友Chris寫一封郵件分享這次經(jīng)歷，

內(nèi)容包括：

(1)你完成的作品；

(2)你的感想。

注意：

(1)寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右；

(2)請按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearChris,

I'mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearChris,

FmwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.

Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost.Inspiredbythefantasticscenery,I

decidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark'spond,surroundedbyblooming

flowers.

Theentireexperiencewasincrediblyrefreshing.Beingsurroundedbynaturenotonlysparkedmy

creativitybutalsoofferedamuch-neededbreakfromtheusualhustleandbustleofschoollife.Ifeltadeep

senseofpeaceasIpainted.

Inaword,Itwasnotjustanartclass;itwasamomentofconnectionwithnaturethatItrulycherished.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】本篇是應(yīng)用文寫作。要求考生給Chris寫一封信，分享在公園上美術(shù)課的經(jīng)歷。

【詳解】L詞匯積累

決定：decide一determine

整個的：entire-whole

提供：offer一provide

總之：inaword—inshort

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Inspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthe

park'spond,surroundedbybloomingflowers.

拓展句：BecauseIwasinspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmall

bridgeoverthepark'spond,whichwassurroundedbybloomingflowers.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型l]Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost,（that引導(dǎo)的定語從

句）

[高分句型2]IfeltadeepsenseofpeaceasIpainted.（as引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）

[2023新課標(biāo)I&II卷一建議信】

假定你是李華，外教Ryan準(zhǔn)備將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組，讓大家課后練習(xí)口語，你認(rèn)為這樣分組存在

問題。請你給外教寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括；

1.說明問題；

2.提出建議

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右：

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearRyan,

I'mLiHuafromClass3.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】

DearRyan,

FmLiHuafromClass3.1thinkifsnotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglish

trainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.

Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.

Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leaving

littleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedif

pairedwithsomeonewhotheydon'tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.

Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirown

partners.Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglish

together.

Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】本篇是應(yīng)用文寫作，要求考生給外教寫一封郵件，告訴他將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組，讓大家課后

練習(xí)口語，你認(rèn)為這樣分組存在問題。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

首先：tobeginwith—firstofall

提高：improve—progress

建議：suggestion一advice

選擇：choose—select

2句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirown

partners.

拓展句：Mysuggestionisthatwearesupposedtogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortolet

studentschoosetheirownpartners.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]

Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leaving

littleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）

[高分句型2]

Besides,Studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon'tgetalong

withorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.（運(yùn)用了省略句和who引導(dǎo)定語從句）

[2022新課標(biāo)I&II卷一邀請信】

假定你是校廣播站英語節(jié)目"TalkandTalk”的負(fù)責(zé)人李華，請給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請她做一次訪談。

內(nèi)容包括：

1.節(jié)目介紹；

2.訪談的時間和話題。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearCaroline,

____________________________________________________Yourssincerely,

LiHua

DearCaroline,

ThisismyfirsttimethatIhaveinvitedyoutoattendourprogram—TalkandTalk.Itistenyearssince

TalkandTalkwasestablished.Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.

Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.

Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.IfyouareavailableonthisSunday,I

togetherwiththewholeTalkandTalkstaffamwaitingforyourcoming.

I'dappreciateitifyoutakemyinvitationintoconsideration.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，假定你是校廣播站“TalkandTalk”的負(fù)責(zé)人李華，請給外教Caroline

寫郵件邀請她做一次訪談。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

建立：establish^setup

了不起的：amazing—fabulous

幫助：aid一assistance

許多：plentyof-alotof

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.

拓展句：Youareourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,whoseaidcanhelpusalot.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型l]Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.（運(yùn)用了where

引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodeal

withit.（運(yùn)用了狀語從句的省略）

[2021新課標(biāo)I&II卷一投稿信】

你校英文報比演〃正在慶祝創(chuàng)刊十周年。請你寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：

1.讀報的經(jīng)歷；

2.喜愛的欄目；

3.期望和祝福。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

YouthandMe

第一節(jié)這是一篇針對報紙創(chuàng)刊10周年投稿的文章。通過審題，我們可以確定，本文主要以第一人稱進(jìn)行

展開和敘述。文章可以用三段式的結(jié)構(gòu)。第一段簡明表示對報刊創(chuàng)辦10周年的祝賀。第二段是文章的主體，

主要闡述閱讀報紙的經(jīng)歷和喜愛的欄目。第三段表達(dá)對報紙的期望和祝福。

DearEditor-in-Chief,

Congratulationsonthe10thanniversaryofYouth.

IhavebeenadevotedreadersinceIsubscribedtothenewspaper.Obsessedwithit,Ireadeachissue

fromcovertocover.Itboastsavarietyofcolumns,ofwhichChinesecultureismyfavorite.Theseriesof

contentsnotonlyintroducesabundantculturalknowledgebutalsovaluestheinheritanceofbrilliantculture

andstrengthensourculturalconfidence.

AsafanofYouth.Irecommendthatitwillbebetterifitcarriessomearticlesaboutthelifeofforeign

teensandIhopethatitwillbecomeevenmorepopular.

Sincerelyyours,

LiHua

Deareditor,

MynameisLiHua,asenior3student.Iamwritingtooffermysincerestcongratulationson

the10thanniversaryceremonyofYOUTH.

Sinceitwasfounded,YOUTHhasbeenpopularwithmanystudentsincludingme,aregularreaderof

YOUTH.Thepaper^broadcontentandrichknowledgehavenotonlywidenedmyhorizonsbutalsogiven

memuchenjoyment.Iamfondofallitscolumns,butwhatimpressedmemostisculture,whereIcanread

humorousstories,poems,fictionsandsoontoimprovemyoralEnglish.

PleaseacceptmysincerecongratulationsagainandIbestwishthatYOUTHcouldachievegreater

successandgainmorepopularity.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生向?qū)W校英文報的“法表達(dá)自己的經(jīng)歷，并送上自己的祝福。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

建立：found—establish

沮喪的：depressed—upset

此外：besides-what'smore

得至!I：receive一obtain

2.句式拓展

同義句改寫

原句：Thesestoriescanrelievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon.

拓展句：Notonlycanthesestoriesrelievemystress,butalsotheycanbroadenmyhorizon.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Whenfeelingdepressed,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotof

imaginativestories.（運(yùn)用了狀語從句的省略和which引導(dǎo)的定語從句）

[高分句型2]RefusedasIwas,Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement,whichgivesmeconfidencetobea

writer.（運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

考點(diǎn)02非書信體（發(fā)言稿、書面通知、短文投稿……）

【2025浙江1月卷一演講稿】

你將參加英語課上的“一分鐘演講”活動。請你針對部分同學(xué)在校園內(nèi)用手機(jī)拍攝短視頻的現(xiàn)象寫一

篇演講稿，內(nèi)容包括：

（1）陳述看法；

（2）提出建議。

注意：

（1）寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右；

（2）請按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Myviewsonfilmingshortvideosoncampus

Onepossibleversion:

Myviewsonfilmingshortvideosoncampus

Goodmorning,everyone!I'verecentlynoticedagrowingtrendofstudentsfilmingshortvideoson

campuswiththeirmobilephones.

WhileIappreciatetheenthusiasmforsharingcreativecontent,wemustalsoconsiderthepotential

drawbacks.Filmingcandisruptthelearningenvironmentbyinterruptingclassesorstudysessions,making

itdifficultforotherstoconcentrate.Additionally,noteveryoneiscomfortablebeingrecorded.Capturing

someonewithouttheirpermissioncanleadtodiscomfortorconflict.

Tocreateamoreharmoniousatmosphere,I'dliketoofferseveralpracticaltips.First,respectourshared

studytimebyavoidingfilminginquietareasorduringclass.Second,alwaysaskpermissionfromanyone

featuredinyourvideos.Lastly,followtheschoolrulesregardingfilmingoncampus.

Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestions!

【2024浙江1月卷一短文投稿】

請你寫一篇短文向校英文報“SportsandHealth”欄目投稿，向同學(xué)們推薦一項(xiàng)適合課間開展的運(yùn)動，內(nèi)容

包括：

1.介紹這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動；

2.說明推薦理由。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答：

StandUpandExercise,Everybody!

【答案】

StandUpandExercise,Everybody!

Everybody!Areyoutiredofsittinginclassallday?Howaboutincorporatingsomephysicalactivity

intoyourdailyroutine?Onegreatoptionisthe“StandUpandStretch”exercise.Thissimpleroutine

involvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.Ifs

aquickandeasywaytogetyourbloodflowingandre-energizeyourbodyandmind.Thisexerciseis

recommendedforseveralreasons.

First,ithelpstocombatthenegativeeffectsofprolongedsitting,suchasbackpainandstiffness.Second,

itcanimproveyourfocusandconcentration,makingiteasiertostayengagedinclass.Lastly,itpromotesa

healthyandactivelifestyle,whichisessentialforoverallwell-being.

So,nexttimeyoufeelabitsluggishduringclass,remembertostandupandstretch!It'sasmallchange

thatcanmakeabigdifferenceinyourday.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一篇短文向校英文報“SportsandHealth”欄目投稿，向同

學(xué)們推薦一項(xiàng)適合課間開展的運(yùn)動。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

厭倦：betiredof-^befedupwith

首先：仃rst—aboveall

減輕：combat一relieve

提高：improve一enhance

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,and

takingafewdeepbreaths.

拓展句：Thisisasimpleroutinethatinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsand

back,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Lastly,itpromotesahealthyandactivelifestyle,whichisessentialforoverall

well-being.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)

[高分句型2]Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,

andtakingafewdeepbreaths.(運(yùn)用了動名詞作賓語)

[高分句型2]Ifsasmallchangethatcanmakeabigdifferenceinyourday.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句)

【2024九省聯(lián)考卷一活動通知】

你校英文報計劃舉辦主題為“攜手行動，節(jié)約糧食”的作文比賽。請你寫一則活動通知，內(nèi)容包括：

(1)介紹活動目的；

(2)說明參賽要求。

注意：

(1)寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右；

(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

WelcometoJointheEnglishWritingCompetition

【答案】

WelcometoJointheEnglishWritingCompetition

OurschoolEnglishnewspaperisexcitedtoannouncetheupcomingwritingcompetition,themed“Hand

inHand,SavetheFood99.Thecompetitionaimstoraiseawarenessabouttheimportanceofsavingfood.

Allstudentsareencouragedtoparticipate.Entriesshouldconsistofanoriginalpieceofwriting,focusing

onthethemeoffoodwasteandshowinghowwecancontributetoitsreduction.Pleasesubmityourentriesto

theEnglishDepartmentmailboxbythedeadlineofJune1st.

Welookforwardtoyourparticipationandcreativesubmissions.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生為校英文報計劃舉辦主題為“攜手行動，節(jié)約糧食”的作文比

賽寫一則活動通知。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

比賽：competition一contest

集中：focuson一concentrateon

鼓勵：encourage一hearten

主題：theme—topic

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：OurschoolEnglishnewspaperisexcitedtoannouncetheupcomingwritingcompetition,themed

"HandinHand,SavetheFood”.

拓展句：OurschoolEnglishnewspaperisexcitedtoannouncetheupcomingwritingcompetition,whose

themeis"HandinHand,SavetheFood”.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Thecompetitionaimstoraiseawarenessabouttheimportanceofsavingfood.（運(yùn)用了

動名詞作賓語）

[高分句型2]Entriesshouldconsistofanoriginalpieceofwriting,focusingonthethemeoffoodwasteand

showinghowwecancontributetoitsreduction.（運(yùn)用了how引導(dǎo)賓語從句）

[2023浙江1月卷一活動報道】

上周末你參加了校學(xué)生會組織的“認(rèn)識我們身邊的植物”活動。請為校英文報寫篇報道，內(nèi)容包括:

1.活動的過程；

2.收獲與感想。

注意:

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。

GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs

【答案】

GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUS

Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activityorganisedbyour

Students9Union.

Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist,whotaughtusaboutthedifferentcharacteristics

andusesofvariousplantspecies.Wethenwentonanaturalwalktoobserveandcollectsamplesofdifferent

plants.Throughouttheevent,Iwasstruckbytheincrediblevarietyofplantsthatexistinourworldand

learnedaboutplantsthatareusedformedicalpurposes,aswellasthosethatprovidefoodandshelterfor

animals.Ialsogainedagreaterappreciationfortherolethatplantsplayinmaintainingthebalanceofour

ecosystem.

Overall,itwasavaluableandenrichingexperience.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生為校英文報寫篇報道，介紹上周末校學(xué)生會組織的“認(rèn)識我們

身邊的植物”活動。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

參與：participatein一attend

開始：begin一start

觀察，調(diào)查：observe—>survey

震驚：strike一astonish/surprise

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activityorganisedbyour

Students9Union.

拓展句：Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina"GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs"activityorganisedby

ourStudents9Union,whichbenefitedmealot.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型l】Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist,whotaughtusaboutthedifferent

characteristicsandusesofvariousplantspecies.（運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

【高分句型2】Throughouttheevent,Iwasstruckbytheincrediblevarietyofplantsthatexistinourworld

andlearnedaboutplantsthatareusedformedicalpurposes,aswellasthosethatprovidefoodandshelter

foranimals.（運(yùn)用了一般過去時的被動語態(tài)和定語從句）

【2023安徽省、云南省、吉林省、黑龍江省四省聯(lián)考卷一音樂評論】

你剛觀看了你校與英國一所友好學(xué)校聯(lián)合在線上舉辦的音樂會。請在線上留言板上寫一則評論，內(nèi)容

包括：

1.音樂會特點(diǎn)；

2.觀看感受；

3.意見建議。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Thisonlineconcertisabsolutelyfantastic.

【滿分作文一】

Thisonlineconcertisabsolutelyfantastic.

Theperformersfromthetwoschoolshavedonetheirbestinentertainingtheaudiencewithonesongafter

another.Theirperformancesareundoubtedlyofhishquality,whichmakestheconcertalmostnodifferentfroma

liveone.IenjoyedeverysecondoftheconcertandwasuaHicularlvattractedwhentheboysandgirlsfromBritain

startedtosingthetraditionalChinesesong“LiangZhu”.Theyperformedthesonginawaythattouchedmyheartand

gavemeafeelingofconnection.

IhopetherewillbemoreODDortunitiesinthefutureforusChinesestudentsandourinternationalfriendstolearn

aboutandfromeachother.

【滿分作文二】

Thisonlineconcertisabsolutelvfantastic.

ThejointperformanceorganizedbyourschoolandafriendlyschoolintheUKshowcasedavarietyof

musicalstylesfromdifferentcultures.Asanaudiencemember,Iwasdeeplyimpressedbythetalentedmusicians

andsingerswhoperformedflawlessly.Theconcertcreated〃senseofunityandcoimectionamongtheviewers,

despitethedistancebetweenus.However,Ithinkitwouldhavebeenbetterifthereweresubtitlesortranslations

forthelyricsofthesongstomakeitmoreaccessibleforinternationalviewers.

Overall,itwasamazingevent,andIlookforwardtomoresuchcollaborationsinthefuture.

【滿分作文三】

Thisonlineconcertisabsolutelyfantastic.

所」top-qualitysoundandvideo“oduction,itcreatedanimmersiveandunforgettableviewingexperience.

WhatkeptmeutterlysMlboundwerethesheerbrillianceoftheperformersandseamlesstransitionbetweeneach

song.Itisnothardtoseethateachmusicpiecewascarefullyselectedandeachperformancewasfilledwith

extraordinary/rema及〃4euassionandDrofessionalism.Theonlydrawbackisthatinformationaboutthe

performersandtheirbackgrounds,particularlyforthosewhoarenotfamiliarto/Qaudience,isnotprovided

enough.

Itwouldbebettertoknowmoreabouttheirexperiencesandhowtheyhonedtheirmusicalskillstoreachthis

levelofexcellence、enhancingtheaudience'saDDreciationoftheirartistry.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于開放作文。要求考生就學(xué)校與英國一所友好學(xué)校聯(lián)合在線上舉辦的音樂會，在

線上留言板上寫一則評論。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

確定無疑地：undoubtedly-withoutdoubt

尤其地：particularly^especially

感動：touch一move

希望：hope一expect

2.句式拓展

同義句

原句：Theirperformancesareundoubtedlyofhighquality,whichmakestheconcertalmostnodifferent

fromaliveone.

拓展句：Thereisnodoubtthattheirperformancesar