如何寫對話？Howtomakedialoguesincontinuationwriting?

讀后續(xù)寫__________YuanYongxue2026屆新高考英語熱點沖刺復(fù)習(xí)

“Beforethat,Ineedtotellyousomething,

”Isaid.“We

can

talk

atthe

yogurt

place,”

her

mom

smiled.“

No.I

need

to

tell

you

now.It’simportant,”Iinsisted.

I

could

feel

my

voice

shaking

and

tried

nottocry.

“

What

is

it,dear?”she

gently

asked,

closing

the

doorandwalkingcloser

to

me.

Our

hands

almost

touched.

With

her

eyesstudyingme,

my

heart

beat

faster.

“

I’

m

sorry,

”I

blurted

out.“

I.

.

.I

was

talking

and

laughing

with

Missi

when

I

spun

around

andaccidentallybroke

the

vase.”I

further

explainedthatwe

saved

thepiecesbut

tried

in

vain

to

fix

it.

It

still

looked

like

small

pieces

ofglass.

Hearingmyapology,

Missi’smother

eruptedintoaloudscreamof

joy.She

embraced

me,

kissing

me

on

both

cheeks.

“

Oh,

thankyou!I

alwayshatedthat

ugly

vase.Now

it’s

gone!

You’ve

done

me

ahugefavor!”her

mom

exclaimed

with

delight.Although

relieved

tohaveapologized,I

was

still

in

shock,forthis

was

not

at

allthereaction

Ihadexpected.It

wasn’t

until

I

reached

my

adultyearsthat

Irecognizedwhat

a

profound

gift

hermother’s

generosity

inwelcomingmy

apology

was.

Now,

when

I

receive

a

genuine

apology,Ialways

consider

the

people’s

feelings

and

make

sure

my

responseshowsthem

their

apology

was

fully

heard

and

truly

appreciated.讀后續(xù)寫中喜歡用“對話”，但是何時用？如何用？寫多少？1）對話必須要為推動故事情節(jié)發(fā)展服務(wù)，每段出現(xiàn)一兩句即可；2）對話必須要為反映人物的心理與情感，刻畫人物的性格服務(wù)；3）對話不宜過長，側(cè)重口語化詞匯，避開生僻詞匯；4）對話要盡可能結(jié)合動作描寫，明確對誰說，具有畫面感；5）對話中要學(xué)會使用幾個感嘆詞，表示說話人的喜、怒、哀、樂等情緒。一、對話標(biāo)簽（dialoguetag）的三個位置Shesaid，“...”“...”shesaid.“...”shesaid，“...”對話標(biāo)簽在前對話標(biāo)簽在后對話標(biāo)簽在中間1.對話標(biāo)簽在前她說：“你最好快點，否則你就要遲到了?！盨hesaid,“You’dbetterhurryup,oryouwillbelate.”注意1：英語中say后面通常用逗號不用冒號。英語中冒號的功能：●列舉事物：如

Iusedthreecolors:green,blueandpink.●解釋或說明原因：如

Thisisherplan:goshopping.●引用正式或較長的句子,Y注意2：雙引號中完整句子首字母要大寫。2.對話標(biāo)簽在后她說：“你最好快點，否則你就要遲到了?！薄癥ou’dbetterhurryup,oryouwillbelate.”Shesaid.我媽媽說：“你最好快點，否則你就要遲到了?！薄癥ou’dbetterhurryup,oryouwillbelate.”Mymumsaid/saidmymum.注意：對話標(biāo)簽在后或者在句子中間時，如果主語是名詞，則可以倒裝。而代詞不可以倒裝，saidshe是錯誤的。3.對話標(biāo)簽在中間她說：“你最好快點，否則你就要遲到了?！薄癥ou’dbetterhurryup,”shesaid,“oryouwillbelate.”我媽媽說：“你最好快點，否則你就要遲到了。”“You’dbetterhurryup,”mymum

said/saidmymum,“oryouwillbelate.”Practice1他說：“我想和你一起去，但我還沒有完成家庭作業(yè)?！盚esaid,“Iwouldliketogowithyou,butIhaven’tfinishedmyhomework.”“Iwouldliketogowithyou,butIhaven’tfinishedmyhomework.”Hesaid.“Iwouldliketogowithyou,”hesaid,“butIhaven’tfinishedmyhomework.”你是否只會用said呢？

“Beforethat,Ineedtotellyousomething,

”Isaid.“We

can

talk

atthe

yogurt

place,”

her

mom

smiled.“

No.I

need

to

tell

you

now.It’simportant,”Iinsisted.

I

could

feel

my

voice

shaking

and

tried

nottocry.

“

What

is

it,dear?”she

gently

asked,

closing

the

doorandwalkingcloser

to

me.

Our

hands

almost

touched.

With

her

eyesstudyingme,

my

heart

beat

faster.

“

I’

m

sorry,

”I

blurted

out.“

I.

.

.I

was

talking

and

laughing

with

Missi

when

I

spun

around

andaccidentallybroke

the

vase.”I

further

explainedthatwe

saved

thepiecesbut

tried

in

vain

to

fix

it.

It

still

looked

like

small

pieces

ofglass.二、對話標(biāo)簽中常用的“說”不要只用said！大喊；尖叫：shouted,exclaimed,

roared,yelled,screamed咕噥；低聲說：murmured

輕聲說；耳語：whispered

安慰地說：comforted堅持地說：insisted笑著說：smiled,laughed嘆氣：sighed開玩笑地說：teased,joked

繼續(xù)說：continued強調(diào)說：emphasized回憶道：remembered,recalled最后說/總結(jié)說：concluded三、寫“對話”的四個小技巧在對話標(biāo)簽中加入語氣、嗓音、情感讓你的描寫更生動傳神。基本結(jié)構(gòu)：ina/an+adj（如firm/rude/sad）+tone

inatoneof+n.①第一種：加語氣eg.“Iwouldloveto,”saidEmilyinapleasanttone.

“我很樂意這樣做，”艾米麗用一種愉快的語氣說。如：inasurprising

tone=inatoneofsurprise用一種驚訝的語氣inacurious

tone=inatoneofcuriosity用一種好奇的語氣inan

impatient

tone=inatoneofimpatience用一種不耐煩的語氣inatoneofcommand用一種命令的語氣②第二種：加嗓音eg.“Ididn’tmeanto,”shemurmuredinalowvoice.“我不是故意的，”她低聲說?；窘Y(jié)構(gòu)：ina/an+adj.+voice如：inahigh/low/sweet/

loud/

soft/

weakvoice用一個高/低/甜/響亮/軟/弱的聲音eg.“I...I..don’tthinkI’mrightforthepart,”Irepliedwithembarrassment.“我...我..認(rèn)為我不適合這個角色，”我尷尬地回答。③第三種：加情感基本結(jié)構(gòu)：with+情感名詞(excitement/curiosity/guilt/embarrassment)如：

withexcitement（伴隨著）激動地

withjoy/delight高興地④第四種：加副詞=Firmly,Ianswered,“Iwillneverdothatagain.”eg.“Iwillneverdothatagain,”Iansweredfirmly.“我再也不會那樣做了，”我堅定地回答。

eg.Shesaidhopefully,“Wewillnevergiveup.”他充滿希望地說：“我們絕不會放棄的?！?/p>

基本結(jié)構(gòu)：

sb+said+adv.adv.,+sbsaid.Practice21.”你一定是Annie.”他友好地說。2.她低聲說道：“我不是故意的?！?.“這是真的嗎？”他驚訝地嘀咕道。4.他生氣地大喊:“這不公平！”5.她低下頭說到：“對不起”6.Rose指著窗戶興奮地大喊：“看！”1.”你一定是Annie.”他友好地說。2.她低聲說道：“我不是故意的。”3.“這是真的嗎？”他驚訝地嘀咕道。4.他生氣地大喊:“這不公平！”5.她低下頭說到：“對不起”6.Rose指著窗戶興奮地大喊：“看！”“YoumustbeAnnie,”hesaid

inafriendlytone.Shemurmuredinalowvoice,“Ididn’tmeanto.”“Isittrue?”hewhisperedwithastonishment.Heexclaimedangrily,“Itisn’tfair!”Withherheaddown,shesaid,“Sorry.”“Look!”Rosepointedoutthewindowandscreamedwithexcitement.Self-asses