SectionⅢIntegratedskills1寫作指導·增底蘊

目錄2典例體驗·提素能3核心知識·巧突破4課時檢測·提能力1寫作指導·增底蘊儲備寫作素材寫一篇影評

本單元的寫作任務(wù)是寫一篇影評。影評屬于夾敘夾議文或議論

文。這種文體主要是以一般現(xiàn)在時介紹劇情內(nèi)容并就自己感興趣的情

節(jié)發(fā)表觀點。影評要求評論者就影片特點進行評論，敘議結(jié)合。影評的基本寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為：寫影評時應(yīng)注意的問題：1.

在一篇影視評論中，評論者不僅需要介紹電影的背景知識和故事梗

概，同時也要從劇情的編排、演員的表演或者觀影的感悟等方面進

行評價。2.

可以從理論和情感角度對所介紹的影視作品進行綜合評價、表達自

己的觀點，也可對影片中演員的演技、音樂、人物對白、情節(jié)、特

殊效果、攝影等給予評論。3.

評論要盡量客觀、公正。評論中要寫明你認為該影片的成功之處和

不足之處，也可以提出電影改進意見等。一、寫作常用詞匯1.

director

n.導演2.

main

actor主演3.

be

directed

by

...由……導演4.

be

set

in

...以……為背景5.

learn

from

...從……中學習6.

be

popular

with

...受……歡迎7.

martial

art

武術(shù)8.

romantic

scenes浪漫的場景9.

play

the

part

of扮演10.

the

most

exciting

moments最激動人心的時刻11.

to

everyone’s

surprise出乎所有人的意料12.

a

great

masterpiece杰作二、寫作常用句式（注意加藍部分的表達）1.

The

Princess

Diaries

is

a

movie

about

a

teenager

named

Mia

Thermopolis.《公主日記》是一部關(guān)于一個名叫米婭·瑟姆波利斯的少女的電

影。2.

Kung

Fu

Panda

3

tells

a

story

about

a

fat，

big

panda

that

can

perform

martial

art.《功夫熊貓3》講述了一個會表演武術(shù)的肥胖大熊貓的故事。3.

The

new

Chinese

TV

series

is

making

waves

in

China

and

abroad.There

must

be

more

stories

behind

the

scenes.這部新的中國電視劇在國內(nèi)外掀起了波瀾，其幕后一定有更多

故事。4.

The

film

was

adapted

from

a

novel，

which

told

that

a

couple

adopted

a

flexible

way

to

bring

up

their

adopted

son，

who

gradually

adapted

to

his

new

family.這部電影是由一部小說改編來的，它講述了一對夫婦采用一種靈

活的方法來撫養(yǎng)他們收養(yǎng)的兒子，使他逐漸適應(yīng)了他的新家庭的

故事。5.

It’s

the

female

character

that

interests

us

most.令我們最感興趣的是這個女性角色。6.

This

movie

tells

us

that

any

difficulty

can

be

overcome

as

long

as

you

try

your

utmost

persistently.這部電影告訴我們這樣一個道理：只要你堅持不懈地努力，任何

困難都能克服。7.

The

film

is

well

worth

seeing，

as

it

carried

the

main

idea

that

justice

can

always

beat

evil.這部電影很值得觀看，因為它告訴我們正義一定會戰(zhàn)勝邪惡。8.

What

I

have

to

admit

is

that

this

movie

is

wonderful，

such

as

its

advanced

digital

video

effects

and

the

worry

about

the

future

of

human

beings.我不得不承認的是這部電影很不錯，比如它先進的數(shù)字視頻特效和

對于人類未來的擔憂。典例體驗·提素能點撥寫作技法2根據(jù)以下關(guān)于“哈利·波特”系列電影的簡介，寫一篇80詞左右

的英文影評。1.

“哈利·波特”系列電影是根據(jù)英國作家J.K.Rowling的小說改

編，由Chris

Columbus執(zhí)導。2.

哈利失去雙親，在姨母家受虐待，11歲生日時被邀請到Hogwarts魔

法學校上學。3.

Hogwarts是一個神奇莫測的魔幻世界，在那里哈利學習了魔法，經(jīng)

歷了許多神奇的事，并交了一些好朋友。4.

“哈利·波特”系列電影取得巨大成功。該系列電影告訴我們應(yīng)該

相信自己，樂于助人。

第一步：審題謀篇，合理布局第二步：遣詞造句，規(guī)范得體◎核心詞匯1.

童話故事

?2.

由……改編

?3.

受虐待

?4.

一所魔法學校

?5.

神奇的經(jīng)歷

?6.

交朋友

?7.

值得觀看

?8.

樂于助人

?fairy

tale

be

adapted

from

be

badly

treated

a

magic

school

amazing

experiences

make

friends

be

well

worth

seeing

be

willing

to

help

others

◎遣詞造句1.

“哈利·波特”系列電影是一個童話故事。（主謂一致；the

Harry

Potter

films）

?2.

它們是根據(jù)英國作家J.K.Rowling的小說改編，由Chris

Columbus

執(zhí)導。（被動語態(tài)；adapt；direct）

?

?3.

哈利失去雙親，在姨母家受虐待。（非限制性定語從句；treat）

?The

Harry

Potter

films

are

a

fairy

tale.They

adapted

from

the

novel

of

the

English

writer

J.K.Rowling

and

directed

by

Chris

Columbus.Harry，

whose

parents

are

dead，

is

badly

treated

at

his

aunt’s

home.4.

他11歲生日時被邀請到Hogwarts魔法學校上學。（被動語態(tài)；同位

語；invite）

?

?5.

哈利學習了魔法，經(jīng)歷了許多神奇的事，并交了一些好朋友。（并

列謂語；magic；amazing）

?

?On

his

eleventh

birthday，

he

is

invited

to

go

to

Hogwarts，

a

magic

school.Harry

learns

magic，

has

many

amazing

experiences

and

makes

several

good

friends.6.

“哈利·波特”系列電影取得了巨大成功，很值得觀看。

（success；worth）

?

?7.

此系列電影告訴我們應(yīng)該相信自己，樂于助人。（賓語從句；

believe

in）

?

?The

Harry

Potter

films

are

a

great

success

and

they’re

well

worth

seeing.The

films

tell

us

that

we

should

believe

in

ourselves

and

be

willing

to

help

others.第三步：詞句升級，彰顯文采1.

用過去分詞短語合并升級句1和句2

?

?2.

用定語從句合并升級句4和句5

?

?

?The

Harry

Potter

films

are

a

fairy

tale

adapted

from

the

novel

of

the

English

writer

J.K.Rowling

and

directed

by

Chris

Columbus.On

his

eleventh

birthday，

he

is

invited

to

go

to

Hogwarts，

a

magic

school，where

Harry

learns

magic，

has

many

amazing

experiences

and

makes

several

good

friends.第四步：檢查謄寫，連句成篇

?

?

?

?

?

?

?

?

?The

Harry

Potter

films

are

a

fairy

tale

adapted

from

the

novel

of

the

English

writer

J.K.Rowling

and

directed

by

Chris

Columbus.In

the

films，

Harry，

whose

parents

are

dead，

is

badly

treated

at

his

aunt’s

home.But

fortunately，

on

his

eleventh

birthday，

he

is

invited

to

go

to

Hogwarts，

a

magic

school，where

Harry

learns

magic，

has

many

amazing

experiences

and

makes

several

good

friends.The

Harry

Potter

films

are

a

great

success

and

they’re

well

worth

seeing.The

films

tell

us

that

we

should

believe

in

ourselves

and

be

willing

to

help

others.【即時演練】假定你是李華，你校英語報開設(shè)了一個介紹影視作品的專

欄，請根據(jù)下面表格中的提示為該欄目寫一篇關(guān)于電影《流浪地

球》的影評。片名The

Wandering

Earth導演郭帆劇情該片改編于劉慈欣的同名小說。影片講述了在不久的將來，太

陽系已經(jīng)不適合人類生存。人類開啟“流浪地球”計劃，試圖

帶著地球一起逃離太陽系，尋找人類的新家園評論該電影是中國科幻電影史上的里程碑，自上映以來，深受觀眾

歡迎注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.

可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：里程碑landmark參考范文：The

Wandering

Earth

is

a

science

fiction

film

directed

by

Guo

Fan

and

adapted

from

Liu

Cixin’s

novel

of

the

same

name.The

film

tells

the

story

that

in

the

near

future

the

solar

system

is

no

longer

suitable

for

human

survival.People

will

start

the

“Wandering

Earth”

project，

trying

to

escape

from

the

solar

system

with

the

earth

and

looking

for

a

new

home

for

human

beings.The

film

is

a

landmark

of

Chinese

science

fiction

films

and

has

been

popular

with

audiences

since

its

release.核心知識·巧突破探究課堂重點3

cure

n.藥物，療法；治療vt.治好【教材原句】

The

Prince

has

given

up

hope

of

a

cure

but

his

wife，

Elizabeth，

takes

him

to

see

Lionel

Logue，

an

Australian

speech

doctor

living

in

London.親王已經(jīng)放棄了治療的希望，但他的妻子伊麗莎白還

是帶他去見了萊昂內(nèi)爾·洛格，這是一位澳大利亞語言治療師，當時

住在倫敦。【用法】（1）a

cure

for

...

……的治療方法；治愈……的方法（2）cure

sb

of

治好某人的……；改掉某人的……【佳句】

This

kind

of

medicine

cured

her

child

of

the

skin

disease.這種藥治好了她孩子的皮膚病?！军c津】

cure意為“治療，治愈”，常與介詞of搭配，強調(diào)結(jié)果；

treat意為“治療”，強調(diào)過程，常用搭配：treat

sb

for

...為某人治

療……。【練透】單句語法填空/選詞填空①Nothing

seemed

to

cure

him

his

nervousness.②He

suffered

from

a

headache.The

doctor

his

headache

with

a

new

drug

but

it

didn’t

him.（cure，

treat）【寫美】完成句子③Friendship

is

any

injury

in

life.友誼是一劑良藥，能治療生活中的各種傷痛。of

treated

cure

a

cure

for

typical

adj.典型的，有代表性的【教材原句】

The

film

looks

like

a

fairly

typical

historical

film

without

fancy

special

effects，

and

it

is

made

enjoyable

by

the

performances

of

the

main

actors.這部電影看上去像一部頗為典型的歷史劇，沒有復雜的特效，而幾位

主演的出色演技令這部電影十分精彩?！居梅ā浚?）be

typical

of

...

是……的代表/典型特征it

is

typical

of

sb

to

do

sth

某人一貫做某事（2）typically

adv.

典型地，有代表性地；向來，通?！炯丫洹?/p>

Since

I’m

here，

I’d

like

to

try

a

typical

dish

of

this

country.既然來了，我想品嘗這個國家的一道特色菜?！揪毻浮繂尉湔Z法填空/完成句子①

（typical），

he

didn’t

even

bother

to

tell

anyone

where

he

was

going.②This

pattern

of

woods

and

fields

the

English

landscape.這是具有典型英格蘭風景特征的森林與田野?！緦懨馈烤湫娃D(zhuǎn)換③Typically，

Tom

is

late

for

class.→

?Typically

is

typical

of

It’s

typical

of

Tom

to

be

late

for

class.

fancy

adj.復雜的；花哨的；昂貴的vt.想要，想做；傾慕n.想象的

事物；想象（力）；想要；愛好【用法】（1）fancy

doing

sth

想要做某事fancy

（one’s）

doing

sth

想象（某人）做某事fancy

that

...

想象/認為……fancy

sb/oneself

as/to

be

...

想象某人/自己是……（2）take

a

fancy

to

...

喜歡上/愛上……h(huán)ave

a

fancy

for

愛好；喜歡【佳句】

“Fancy

yourself

as

an

interviewer.Who

would

you

like

to

interview

most？”

our

English

teacher

asked.“想象自己是一個采訪者。你最想采訪誰？”我們的英語老師問道?！揪毻浮客瓿删渥英賁orry，

but

I

don’t

?.對不起，我今晚不想出去。②The

children

their

teacher.孩子們喜歡上了他們的老師。③Idon’tknowhe

?.我不知道他愛釣魚。fancy

going

out

tonight

have

taken

a

fancy

to

has

a

fancy

for

fishing

【寫美】句型轉(zhuǎn)換④I

just

can’t

fancy

he

did

such

a

terrible

thing.→I

just

can’t

fancy

?.his

doing

such

a

terrible

thing

narrow

adj.狹窄的；勉強的；狹隘的vt.&

vi.（使）窄小，縮小【教材原句】

In

the

meantime，

Hooper

skilfully

creates

uncertainty

and

tension

with

narrow

indoor

sets

and

dark

lighting.與此同時，霍珀用

狹窄的室內(nèi)布景和黑暗的燈光巧妙地創(chuàng)造了不確定性和緊張感。【用法】（1）a

narrow

bed/doorway/shelf/street

狹窄的床/門口/架子/街道a

narrow

escape

九死一生；僥幸逃脫a

narrow

victory

險勝narrow

interests

目光短淺的利益（2）narrow

the

generation

gap縮小代溝（3）narrowly

adv.

勉強地；狹隘地；嚴格地【佳句】

Parents

and

children

should

communicate

more

to

narrow

the

gap

between

them

so

that

they

can

understand

each

other

better.父母和孩子之間應(yīng)當更多地交流來縮小代溝，這樣他們才可以

更好地相互理解?！揪毻浮客瓿删渥英貶e

pulled

the

thick

curtains

together，

leaving

just

?.他拉上厚厚的窗簾，僅留下一條狹窄的縫隙。②She

won

over

her

great

rival

in

the

tennis

competition.

她在那次網(wǎng)球賽中險勝了她的強大對手。【寫美】翻譯句子③他在這次火災(zāi)中死里逃生，但是他的身體表面被嚴重燒傷。

?

?a

narrow

gap

a

narrow

victory

He

had

a

narrow

escape

from

the

fire

but

the

surface

of

his

skin

was

severely

burned.

recommend

vt.推薦，舉薦；勸告，建議【教材原句】

All

in

all，

I

highly

recommend

this

film.總之，我強

烈推薦這部電影?！居梅ā浚?）recommend

doing

sth

建議做某事recommend

sb

to

do

sth

建議某人做某事recommend

that

sb

（should）

do

sth

建議某人做某事recommend

sb

sth/sb＝recommend

sth/sb

to

sb

把某物/某人推薦給某人it

is/was

recommended

that

sb

（should）

do

sth

建議某人做某事（2）recommendation

n.

推薦；介紹信【佳句】

He

recommended

reading

the

book

before

seeing

the

movie.他建議先看這本書，再去看這部電影?！军c津】

recommend和recommendation后接從句時，其謂語動詞常

用虛擬語氣，即“（should＋）動詞原形”結(jié)構(gòu)?！揪毻浮繂尉湔Z法填空/完成句子①My

recommendation

is

that

the

machines

?

every

year.②If

you

go

to

Beijing，

I

?.（should）

be

checked

recommend

visiting

the

Great

Wall

如果你去北京，我建議參觀長城。③

you

（should）

book

your

flight

early.強烈建議你早點兒預訂航班。It

is

strongly

recommended

that

【寫美】句式升級④I

recommend

you

to

learn

some

basic

Chinese

before

you

come.→I

recommend

that

?

?.you

（should）

learn

some

basic

Chinese

before

you

come

4課時檢測·提能力培育學科素養(yǎng)維度一：品句填詞根據(jù)所給單詞的首字母或漢語提示，寫出單詞的正確形式。1.

The

gap

between

the

two

teams

has

n

to

three

points.2.

Can

you

r

some

new

story

books

to

me？3.

She

tried

every

means

to

c

her

child

of

the

bad

habit.4.

This

is

the

（典型的）

style

of

music

that

interests

the

young.arrowed

ecommend

ure

typical

5.

Do

you

（想要）

going

to

the

cinema

this

evening？fancy

維度二：詞形轉(zhuǎn)換用所給單詞的正確形式填空。1.

As

we

all

know，

light

（typical）

travels

in

a

straight

line.2.

She

worked

so

hard

that

（eventual）

she

suffered

from

a

serious

headache.3.

Luckily，

she

got

the

job

on

the

strength

of

your

?

（recommend）.typically

eventually

recommendation

維度三：固定搭配和句式根據(jù)漢語提示完成下列句子。1.

She

believes

this

new

medicine

will

?.她堅信這種新藥將能治好他的眼病。2.

Luckily，

he

was

able

to

?.幸運的是，他能夠從失火的建筑中逃了出來。3.

The

doctor

recommended

that

?

?.醫(yī)生建議病人多做戶外運動。cure

him

of

his

eye

disease

escape

from

the

burning

building

the

patient

（should）

do

more

outdoor

exercise

4.

I

know

you

Chinese

culture，

especially

the

local

operas.我知道你非常喜歡中國文化，尤其是當?shù)氐膽騽　?.

to

narrow

her

eyes

because

she

has

a

short

sight.因為有點近視，她有瞇著眼睛看人的習慣。take

a

great

fancy

to

It

is

typical

of

her

Ⅰ.閱讀理解A

In

movies

and

books，

people

often

describe

a

decisive

moment

when

they

figure

out

who

they

are.However，

I

never

thought

it

actually

happened

in

real

life.I

never

expected

to

have

a

“moment”

of

my

own.When

it

arrived，

mine

was

much

more

powerful

than

I

could

have

ever

imagined.

During

the

spring

of

my

junior

year，

my

class

watched

a

documentary

called

The

Invisible

Children.It

was

about

three

college

students

who

took

a

trip

to

Africa

and

documented

their

experience.At

first

the

film

was

slightly

humorous.However，

once

the

group

arrived

in

northern

Uganda，

the

mood

changed.They

learned

what

the

consequences

of

a

23-year

war

had

been

for

thousands

of

children.Some

had

lost

family

and

friends，

and

others

were

caught

by

the

opposing

force

and

became

child

soldiers.Before

long，

I

was

sobbing.I

couldn’t

believe

these

things

were

happening，

yet

at

the

same

time

I

knew

they

were.I

just

hadn’t

been

paying

attention，

for

in

the

past

17

years，

I

was

blessedly

protected.When

the

movie

ended，

I

couldn’t

get

it

out

of

my

head.For

the

next

week，

I

was

not

myself.Every

bite

of

food

I

took

I

thought

of

Grace，

the

15-year-old

who

had

little

to

eat.When

I

went

to

bed，

I

pictured

Sunday，

the

14-year-old

boy

sleeping

on

a

straw

mat

on

the

ground

in

a

camp.My

whole

world

shifted.

Since

that

day，

I

haven’t

been

able

to

picture

my

future

in

a

way

that

doesn’t

involve

going

to

Africa

and

doing

what

I

can

to

help.Ultimately，

this

is

why

I

decided

to

major

in

engineering.With

an

engineering

degree，

my

potential

for

change

will

be

limitless.I

will

build

wells

and

schools，

and

design

irrigation

systems.Engineering

is

tough，

but

I

know—in

what

Yeats

called

“my

deep

heart’s

call”—that

this

is

what

I’m

supposed

to

do

with

my

life.語篇解讀：本文是一篇記敘文。作者在觀看了紀錄片《看不見的孩

子》后，人生觀被改變，決定主修工程學，來改變世界。1.

What

did

the

author

think

of

a

decisive

moment

at

first？（

）A.It

was

impossible.B.It

was

unforgettable.C.It

was

common.D.It

was

powerful.解析：

觀點態(tài)度題。根據(jù)第一段中的However，

I

never

thought

it

actually

happened

in

real

life.

I

never

expected

to

have

a

“moment”

of

my

own.可知，作者最初認為這個決定性時刻是不

可能發(fā)生的。2.

How

did

the

movie

influence

the

author？（

）A.It

amused

him.B.It

made

him

unsure

of

himself.C.It

changed

his

perspectives

of

life.D.It

made

him

lose

the

desire

to

eat

or

sleep.解析：

細節(jié)理解題。根據(jù)倒數(shù)第二段中的My

whole

world

shifted.可知，電影改變了作者的人生觀。3.

Why

does

the

author

choose

to

study

engineering？（

）A.To

challenge

himself.B.To

achieve

his

goal.C.To

be

well

acknowledged.D.To

realize

his

childhood

dream.解析：

細節(jié)理解題。根據(jù)最后一段內(nèi)容可知，作者選擇工程專

業(yè)是為了實現(xiàn)他的目標。4.

In

which

section

of

a

newspaper

may

this

text

appear？（

）A.Celebrity.B.Health.C.Science.D.Education.解析：

文章出處題。文章主要講述了作者在觀看了紀錄片《看

不見的孩子》后，人生觀被改變，決定主修工程學來改變世界。由

此可推知，文章可能選自報紙的“教育”版。B

Last

November，

a

kindergarten

teacher，

Robin

Hughes，

read

her

class

a

book

about

snow.The

students

listened

closely.But

Hughes

noticed

that

some

children

looked

puzzled

because

only

a

couple

of

kids

had

seen

snow.

Hughes

decided

to

call

in

a

favour

to

her

sister，

Amber

Estes.“Would

you

be

willing

to

ship

a

snowman

to

us

if

it

snows？”Hughes

called.Estes

laughed

it

off

and

agreed，

as

Hughes

always

shared

some

uncommon

ideas

with

her.A

few

days

later，

her

neighbourhood

got

nearly

10

inches

of

snow.So，

she

walked

out

into

the

snow

and

built

“Lucky”，

a

small

snowman

with

blueberry

eyes，

a

carrot

nose.

After

about

10

days

of

refrigeration

and

planning，

Lucky

was

on

a

nearly

800-mile

flight

from

Kentucky

to

Florida.Estes

mailed

Lucky

in

an

insulated

（絕緣）

container

filled

with

ice

packs.

“If

Lucky

arrived

in

one

piece，

the

plan

was

for

him

to

keep

his

name，”

Estes

said.“If

the

experiment

failed，

he

would

be

renamed

Puddles

（水坑）.”That

night，

Estes

stayed

up

late

tracking

the

package.

On

19

January，

a

postal

driver

delivered

the

snowman

to

the

school.Hughes

cut

the

box

open

before

she

presented

the

snowman

to

her

students.To

her

surprise，

Lucky

had

arrived

almost

whole.“I

was

so

excited

because

he

made

it，”

said

Hughes.“All

the

children

wanted

to

touch

him.They

asked

if

he

is

coming

to

life.”

Ever

since，

at

least

twice

a

day，

Hughes

said

she

brings

Lucky

out

from

the

cafeteria

freezer

so

students

can

touch

the

snowman

and

ask

questions.Cheers

and

wows

fill

the

room

every

time

Lucky

is

brought

in.When

his

coat

starts

to

get

shiny，

she

takes

him

back

to

the

freezer.

“This

year，

things

are

not

normal

for

kids

in

the

classroom

or

for

adults，”

she

said.“This

little

snowman

has

created

happiness.”Hughes

plans

to

melt

Lucky

before

Earth

Day

and

will

use

the

water

while

planting

a

garden

at

the

school.語篇解讀：本文是一篇新聞報道。幼兒園教師Robin

Hughes發(fā)現(xiàn)一部

分學生沒有見過真正的雪，于是她求助自己的姐姐將北方堆的雪人

快遞到南方，滿足學生的愿望，體現(xiàn)了教師濃濃的愛心。5.

What

caused

Robin

Hughes

to

ask

her

sister

to

mail

a

snowman？

（

）A.Some

students

hated

the

hot

weather.B.Some

students

had

never

seen

snow.C.Some

students

did

not

believe

the

snowman

was

real.D.Some

students

had

never

done

a

science

experiment.解析：

細節(jié)理解題。根據(jù)第一段中的But

Hughes

noticed

that

some

children

looked

puzzled

because

only

a

couple

of

kids

had

seen

snow.可知，部分學生沒有見過真正的雪。6.

Why

did

Estes

laugh

when

Hughes

asked

her

to

mail

a

snowman

to

her

students？（

）A.She

was

used

to

her

sister’s

strange

requests.B.She

knew

it

would

never

snow

in

Kentucky.C.She

thought

her

sister’s

idea

would

bring

joy

to

her

students.D.She

had

not

seen

her

sister

in

a

long

time

and

missed

her.解析：

推理判斷題。根據(jù)第二段中的Estes

laughed

it

off

and

agreed，

as

Hughes

always

shared

some

uncommon

ideas

with

her.可

以推斷，Estes對于妹妹奇怪的要求已經(jīng)習慣了，“一笑而過”但

還是答應(yīng)了她的要求。7.