2026屆新高考英語熱點沖刺復(fù)習(xí)2025年全國I卷讀后續(xù)寫真題《兄弟倆和一只狗》Brainstorm:Q：Haveyoueverhadconflictswithyourfamily?What’stheproblem?Howdoyousolvetheproblem?Lead-inmisunderstandinginconsideration（不體諒）generationgapIndifference(冷漠）miscommunicationego(自我，固執(zhí)己見）expectation（期望過高）jealousy(嫉妒)disagreement試題分析寫作思路微技能-情緒&動作范文賞析目錄CONTENTS010203042025試題分析高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析01安排順利，但突如其來的降雨迫使所有人進屋MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnacks,whilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadn’tcountedon:MybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50-poundballoffire.Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasilyknockovermyniece’ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowedup,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.whowhenwherewhat"我"和妻子舉辦家庭聚會，妻子準備食物，"我"負責后院安排。

哥哥帶著愛犬Toby前來，由于擔心活潑的Toby會傷到小孩，"我"要求哥哥把狗留在室外。How？Itwasanawkwardmoment.Ididn’twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmybrotherwasn’thappywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrotherdecidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue.Afewdayspassed,andIhadn’theardanythingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise—ashock,actually:“Notachance.”Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted.Afterall,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,he’llgetoverit,Ireasoned.Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinkingheshouldcallfirst.However,myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfinmybrother’sshoes.Hewasfacinghealthissuesandhiswifeofthirty-fiveyearshadpassedawayafewmonthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,theonewhokepthimgoing.我不讓狗進屋，導(dǎo)致哥哥生氣地帶著淋濕的狗提前離開。之后兩個月哥哥拒絕聯(lián)系，"我"經(jīng)過內(nèi)心掙扎，最終理解

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whatGatheringwithfamilyandfriends,mybrothercamewithhisdogToby.Ididn’twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehousedespiterainingandmybrotherwasn’thappyandleft.myconsciencekeptbotheringme.Itriedto__________________________________(設(shè)身處地為哥哥著想).Ireflected,wantingto______________(道歉).I,mybrother,mywife,Toby(adog)intheearlysummer.ournewhome,brother’shomeputmyselfinmybrother’sshoesapologize

文章風格人稱：______________________;時態(tài)：_________________寫作主題:______________________________________________;第一人稱過去式親情與關(guān)愛．2025寫作思路高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析02Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault._______________________本段要詳細描寫“我”是如何認識到自己錯誤的，最終內(nèi)心的愧疚感必須轉(zhuǎn)化為“必須去道歉”的具體行動決心。①whatwasmyfault?②howdidIdo?③whatdidIdecidetodoandwhatdidweprepare?Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor.______本段描寫和解場面：抵達時的緊張、真誠的道歉、哥哥漸進的反應(yīng)，并可以利用Toby的動作作為“催化劑”來打破僵局，最終以一個象征和解的開放式動作（如開門邀請）結(jié)尾。①whoansweredthedoor?Whatweretheirreaction?②whatdidIsayanddo?Whatwasmybrother’sresponse?③whatdidwedotogether?④whatwasthetheme?2025微技能高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析03Paragraph1Paragraph1：

Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault._______________________Iletthemleaveintherainwithoutbeingunderstood.

Iheadedtomybrother’shome.Ifeltguilty(內(nèi)疚的）.詞匯：guilty；ashamed；embarrassed；awkward.Howtoshowguiltindifferentways?情緒描寫表情描寫（五官）動作描寫（肢體語言）語言描寫TheMicro-skillstraining表達微技能：情緒描寫——內(nèi)疚詞塊和句的積累scene1:Discoveringthetruth,theoldmanrealizedhismisjudgment,hewasdeeplyashamedofhisbehaviorAwaveof______washedoverhim,makingithardforhimtobreathe.tip1：具體描寫使文章內(nèi)容更生動，更

有表現(xiàn)力。shameThenextfewdays_________hisconsciencebeingtortureddeeply,feelinglikesittinginpinsandneedles.(如坐針氈）witnessedscene2:Theoldmanfailedtokeephispromiseanddidn’tknowwhattodonext.

hewasashamed.He_______hisfacewithhishandsinshameforwhathehaddone.coveredscene3:Theoldmanmisunderstoodhisson.tip2：動作描寫使表達多樣化。1.這只狗對他來說不僅僅是寵物，這是他的家人。句子潤色Thedogwasn’tjustapetforhim;itwashisfamily.

2.我的不體諒迫使他和托比冒雨離開，無人理解。forcesbtodosthMyinconsiderationforcedhimandTobytoleaveintherainwithoutbeingunderstood.

3.一想到這，我就感到內(nèi)疚和羞愧，呼吸困難。句子潤色Atthethoughtofthis,afeelingofguiltandshamewashedoverme,makingithardformetobreathe.

4.一個內(nèi)心的聲音一直在我的腦海中回蕩，我不能再拖延這個道歉了。keepechoinginmymindAninnervoicekeptechoinginmymindthatIcouldn’tdelaythisapologyanylonger.

delay5.當我告訴妻子我的計劃時，她表示支持并建議烤一些哥哥最喜歡吃的餅干。句子潤色WhenItoldmywifemyplan,shewassupportiveandsuggestedbakingsomeofmybrother’sfavoritebiscuits6.我抓起鑰匙，跳進車里，毫不猶豫地往哥哥家去。withouthesitation/withoutasecondthought.Igrabbedmykeys,jumpedintothecarandheadedtomybrother’shomewithoutasecondthought.bakeIrealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.Thedogwasn‘tjustapetforhim;itwashisfamily.MyinconsiderationforcedhimandTobytoleaveintherainwithoutbeingunderstood.Atthethoughtofthis,afeelingofguiltandshamewashedoverme,makingithardformetobreathe.AninnervoicekeptechoinginmymindthatIcouldn’tdelaythisapologyanylonger.whenItoldmywifemyplan,shewassupportiveandsuggestedbakingsomeofmybrother'sfavoritebiscuits.Igrabbedmykeys,jumpedintothecarandheadedtomybrother'shomewithoutasecondthought.Paragraph2Paragraph2：

Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor.______Mybrotheropenedthedoor.

Iapologizetomybrother.Tobywaggedhistail.Wesattogetherinthelivingroom.tips:everycreaturehasasoul/spirit(萬物有靈）道歉___________________打破僵局____________________敲門___________________消失_____________________開門___________________治愈傷口____________________搖尾巴_________________接餅干____________________示意某人做某事______________________深呼吸__________________________心跳加快_______________________________________TheMicro-skillstraining表達微技能2：動作詞塊和句的積累takeadeepbreathapologizeHeartbeatfaster/heartpoundknockatthedooropenthedoorwagthetailtakethebiscuitssignalsbtodosthbreaktheicedisappear/fadhealthewound1.我的心因緊張砰砰直跳。我深吸一口氣，敲了門。句子潤色Myheartpoundedwithnervousness.Takingadeepbreath,Iknockedatthedoor.2.托比沖了出來，瘋狂地搖尾巴。rushoutTobyrushedout,wagginghistailwildly.

3.我看到了一個驚訝的表情，夾雜著哥哥的冷漠和惱怒。句子潤色Isawalook/expressionofsurprise,mixedwithindifferenceandannoyancefrommybrother.4.我來真誠地道歉，非常抱歉給你造成的痛苦。sincerelyIcametoapologizesincerely.I’msosorryforthePainIcausedyou.

Indifferenceandannoyance5.他接過餅干，示意我進去。句子潤色Hetookthebiscuitsandsignaledmetoenter.6.當我們坐在舒適的客廳時，尷尬慢慢消失了，取而代之的是故事，笑聲和淚水。awkwardnessAswesatinthelivingroom,theawkwardnessslowlyfaded,replacedbystories,laughterandtears.

7.通過坦誠的對話，我們逐漸治愈了傷口，打破了我們之間的僵局。句子潤色Throughopen-heartedconversations,wegraduallyHealedthewoundandbroketheicywallbetweenus.gradually

Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor.Myheartpoundedwithnervousness.Takingadeepbreath,Iknockedatthedoor.ThedoorcreakedopenandoutrushedToby,withhistailwaggingwildly.ThenIsawalookofsurprise,mixedwithindifferenceandannoyancefrommybrother.Itookadeepbreathandbegan,"Brother,Icametoapologizesincerely.I’msosorryforthepainIcausedyou.

Tobyisasmuchapartofyourfamilyasanyhumanmember,andIshouldhaveshowngreaterempathy."Almostinstantly,hiseyeswetwithtearsashetookthebiscuitsandsignaledmetoenter.Aswesatinthecozylivingroom,theawkwardnessslowlyfaded,replacedbystories,laughterandtears.Throughopen-heartedconversations,wegraduallyhealedthewoundandbroketheicywallbetweenus,(provingthatempathy,forgivenessandcommunicationarethetruebridgestomendbrokenbonds.)Write字跡工整篇幅充實：____________________________;語言豐富：___________________________________________;內(nèi)容得體：____________________________________________;空白橫線至多剩余一；無基本語法錯誤；銜接得當；有形容詞和副詞；有從句和非謂語情節(jié)向前發(fā)展；符合原文邏輯；體現(xiàn)作者寫作目的2025范文賞析高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析04

Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.Thedogwasn‘tjustapetforhim;itwashisfamily.MyinconsiderationforcedhimandTobytoleaveintherainwithoutbeingunderstood.Atthethoughtofthis,afeelingofguiltandshamewashedoverme,makingithardformetobreathe.AninnervoicekeptechoinginmymindthatIcouldn’tdelaythisapologyanylonger.whenItoldmywifemyplan,shewassupportiveandsuggestedbakingsomeofmybrother'sfavoritebiscuits.Igrabbedmykeys,jumpedintothecarandheadedtomybrother'shomewithoutasecondthought.

Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor.Myheartpoundedwithnervousness.Takingadeepbreath,Iknockedatthedoor.ThedoorcreakedopenandoutrushedToby,withhistailwaggingwildly.ThenIsawalookofsurprise,mixed