高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習受鄰居影響男孩學會偷汽車，在暖心老人的幫助下改邪歸正成為足球運動員1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Ihitthebackwindowofanewcarwithahammer.InaflashIwasin.Istartedthecar,justlikemyolderbrotherhadtaughtme.Iwas12then.Itseemscrazynow.Today,everyoneknowsmeasDonaldDriver,afamousfootballplayer.I'vededicated(致力于)mylifeafterfootballtohelpingdisadvantagedkidsaroundthecountry.Momwouldhavekilledmeifshe'dknownwhatIwasupto.Mydadhadgonetoprisonwhileshewaspregnantwithme.Momwantedabetterlifeforme,mytwobrothersandtwosisters.Sheworkedlonghourstosupportus.Butsheoftenfellbehindonrentandthenwe'dhavetomove.TroublereallystartedwhenwemovednextdoortoamannamedJ.R.Momtrustedhimtocareuswhileshewasatwork,andhedid.WhatMomdidn'tknowwasthatJ.R.andhisfriendswerethieves.4續(xù)寫原文MyolderbrotherMosesandIservedaslook-outs(放哨人).Weknewitwaswrong,butthemoneywastoogood-$100anight.Webrokeitintosmallerbills,andregularlyslippedsomeintoMom'spurse.ThenMosesdiscoveredwecouldbringinevenmorecashbystealingcars.Wepracticedgivingthesamesmile,hugandkissformymomwhenwecamehome,nomatterwhatwe'ddoneonthestreets.Now,though,Iwasabouttogetcaught.Thepolicegotcloser.Iturnedintoabackalley.Suddenly,upahead,acarbackedoutofadriveway.Isawalittleoldladysittinginthedriver'sseat.Butit,wastoolate.Istoppedandjumpedouttoseeiftheoldladywasdamaged.Thewoman,EvelynJohnson,lookedangry,butunhurt.“Gositinmyhouserightnow,”shesaid.Itwasthetoneofvoicethatnokidcandisobey.Thepolicearrivedandbegantoquestiontheoldwoman.“Themanwhodidthisranthatway,”shesaid,pointingdownthealley.5段首句Para1：Whenthepolicedroveoff,Para2：Ispentmoretimestudyingandfootballkeptmebusytoo.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8通讀短文可知，本文主要講述的是作者改邪歸正的故事。作者的父親入獄,母親要努力工作養(yǎng)活五個孩子，沒有想到的是受小偷鄰居的影響，作者和哥哥居然開始偷汽車。在一次行動中作者差點被警察抓住，是一位老太太給了作者一次機會。作者如何在老太太的關(guān)心之下改邪歸正成為足球運動員的過程。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:Whenthepolicedroveoff,由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當警察把車開走的時候，”可知，第一段可以寫伊芙琳·約翰遜夫人對我說了什么話，她給了我一次機會，讓我改邪歸正，我試圖為她損壞的汽車應該做些什么和我接下來如何與她相處。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Ispentmoretimestudyingandfootballkeptmebusytoo.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我花了更多的時間學習，足球也讓我很忙?！笨芍诙慰梢悦鑼懳以趯W習和踢足球過程當中遇到的困難以及約翰遜夫人對我產(chǎn)生的影響。11續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材警察把車開走—伊芙琳·約翰遜夫人給我一次機會—我改邪歸正—學習和足球讓我很忙—我遇到困難—在伊芙琳·約翰遜夫人的關(guān)心下克服困難成為足球運動員—感悟12續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材行為類給我一些餅干：pushedsomecookiesinfrontofme/givemesomecookies被給一次機會：begivenanopportunity/beofferedachance盡力為某人做一些事：trytodosomethingforsb./tryone’sbesttodosth.找到通往更好生活的路：findawaytoabetterlife/seekoutthepathleadingtoabetterlife情緒類后悔：sorry/regretful感激：thankful/grateful13續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材[高分句型1]IwentbacktoMissJohnson'shouseafewdayslater,tryingtodosomethingfordamaginghercar.（現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語）[高分句型2]LittledidIknowI'dfindawaytoabetterlifethanIcouldeverhaveimagined.（否定詞little位于句首，句子使用部分倒裝）14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)Whenthepolicedroveoff,EvelynJohnsonpushedsomecookiesinfrontofme.“You'vebeengivenanopportunity,”shesaid.“Don'twasteit.Therearen'tanysecondchances.”IwentbacktoMissJohnson'shouseafewdayslater,tryingtodosomethingfordamaginghercar.IwentagainthenextweeksandIkeptgoingback.“Howareyourgrades?”she'dask.“Didyouwinthegame?”Ilikedthatshecared.Sure,mymomcared,alot,butsheworkedsomuch.MissJohnsonalwayshadthetime.Overtheyears,MissJohnsonhadbecomelikearealgrandmothertome.16范文呈現(xiàn)Ispentmoretimestudyingandfootballkeptmebusytoo.Allthroughoutthedifficulties,IthoughtaboutMissJohnsonandthechanceshe'dgivenme.Iworkedhardonthefootballfieldandbecameafamousfootballplayer.Iturnedintoanalleytoescapethepolice.LittledidIknowI'dfindawaytoabetterlifethanIcouldeverhaveimagined.17范文譯文當警察開車離開時，伊夫林·約翰遜把一些餅干推到我面前?！澳阌袡C會了，”她說?！皠e浪費了。沒有第二次機會了?！睅滋旌?，我回到約翰遜小姐家，試圖為損壞她的車做點什么。接下來的幾周我又去了，我一直在回去?！澳愕某煽冊趺礃?？”她會問?！澳阙A了嗎？”我喜歡她關(guān)心我。當然，我媽媽很關(guān)心我，但她工作太多了。約翰遜小姐總是有時間。多年來，約翰遜小姐對我來說就像