問劉十九

唐白居易綠蟻新醅酒，紅泥小火爐。晚來天欲雪，能飲一杯無。作者寫作背景譯本對比賞析總結(jié)問劉十九英譯賞析白居易（772-846）樂天香山居士唐代偉大的現(xiàn)實主義詩人題材廣泛，形式多樣，語言平易通俗，有“詩魔”和“詩王”之稱《長恨歌》《琵琶行》《賣炭翁》《暮江吟》《憶江南》新樂府運動反映人民疾苦《白氏長慶集》作者問劉十九英譯賞析《問劉十九》乃白居易晚年隱居洛陽，“天晚欲雪，思念舊人”時所作。劉十九是作者在江州時的朋友。劉十九：白居易留下的詩作中，提到劉十九的不多，僅兩首。但提到劉二十八、二十八使君的，就很多了。劉二十八就是劉禹錫。劉十九乃其堂兄劉禹銅，系洛陽一富商，與白居易常有應(yīng)酬。背景問劉十九英譯賞析綠蟻新醅酒，紅泥小火爐。晚來天欲雪，能飲一杯無。綠蟻：指浮在新釀的沒有過濾的米酒上的綠色泡沫。醅（pēi）：釀造。白話譯文新釀的米酒，色綠香濃；紅泥爐的小火苗，燒得殷紅。天色陰沉，貌似晚上要下雪，能否留下與我共飲一杯？情景語言文本賞析問劉十九英譯賞析V1許淵沖（《漢英對照唐詩一百五十首》；1984年10月）：Inbottles

green

the

newbrew

gleams;In

red-claystove

thefirelooksfine.Thesnowwouldfall

atdusk,itseems.Howdoyoulike

acup

ofwine?ABAB譯本賞析問劉十九英譯賞析V2許淵沖改譯（《漢英對照唐詩三百首》；2000年8月）：

RequestingMr.Liu，theNineteenth

My

newbrew

gives

green

glow;

My

redclaystove

flamesup.

Atdusk

itthreatens

snow.

Won’tyoucomefor

acup?ABAB譯本賞析問劉十九英譯賞析

V3OfferingADrinktoLiuFineyeasts,newwine,Burningcoal,smallstove.Outside,duskandsnow,Haveadrinkwithme,willyou?ABBC譯本賞析問劉十九英譯賞析V4ASUGGESTIONTOMYFRIENDLIUThere'sagleamofgreeninanoldbottle，There'sastirofredinthequietstove，There'safeelingofsnowintheduskoutside——Whataboutacupofwineinside？ABCC譯本賞析問劉十九英譯賞析綠蟻新醅酒,紅泥小火爐。

V1Inbottles

green

the

newbrew

gleams;

In

red-claystove

thefirelooksfine.V2My

newbrew

gives

green

glow;

My

redclaystove

flamesup.V3Fineyeasts,newwine;

Burning

coal,small

stove.V4There'sagleamofgreeninanoldbottle;

There‘s

astirofredinthequietstove.

譯本賞析形

音

意增刪意象：酒小火爐問劉十九英譯賞析Gleam

:n.

toshinewithapaleclearlight發(fā)微光，隱約閃爍Brew:n.atypeofbeer,especiallyonemadeinaparticularplace尤指某地釀造的啤酒Glow：n.adullsteadylight,especiallyfromafirethathasstoppedproducingflames微弱穩(wěn)定的光，暗淡的光Yeast：n.afungususedinmakingbeerandwine,ortomakebreadrise酵母

均來自《牛津高階英漢雙解詞典》第七版問劉十九英譯賞析晚來天欲雪，能飲一杯無。

V1Thesnowwouldfall

atdusk,itseems.Howdoyoulike

acup

ofwine?V2Atdusk

itthreatens

snow.

Won’tyoucomefor

acup?V3Outside,duskandsnow,Haveadrinkwithme,willyou?V4There'safeelingofsnowintheduskoutside——Whataboutacupofwineinside？譯本賞析形

音

意增刪意象：雪問劉十九英譯賞析Dusk:n.thetimeofdaywhenthelighthasalmostgone,butitisnotyetdark黃昏傍晚Threaten:v.toseemlikelytohappenorcausesomethingunpleasant預示兇兆；有…危險Snow:v.whenitsnows,snowfallsfromthesky下雪均來自《牛津高階英漢