高考英語寫作訓(xùn)練2021年廣州二模續(xù)寫AramandRossi’sBakeryWalkingalongthenarrowbricksidewalk,Aramtookadeepbreath.Theairsmelledoflemonsandbakedbreadandcoffee,comingfromRossi’sItalianBakery.Hewasalmostthere.Aramstillcouldn’tbelievehisluck.Allhisfriendswereworkingboringsummerjobs—waitingtablesandbabysitting.Andherehewas,abouttostartasanactualbaker’sassistant,doingwhatheloved.ItwasallthankstohisAuntRita.SheknewMrs.Rossiandhadarrangedeverything.Itwastheperfectexperienceforhisfuturecareer.Rossi’sBakery,hewassure,wouldonedaybeknownastheplacewherehegothisstart.Ah,herehewas—thebakery.Afadedwoodensignoverthedoorread“Rossi’sBakery.”Aramstraightenedhisshouldersandentered.Mrs.Rossiwassittingatthecounter,lookingoldandwise.Aramgreetedherandstuckouthishand.Mrs.Rossilookedatitforasecondbeforeturningaroundandwavinghiminside.“I’mreadytolearneverything,”Aramsaid.“Great.Let’sstartwiththecashregister,”Mrs.Rossisaid,“becausethat’swhatyou’llbedoing.”Sheshowedhimhowtousethecashregister.Itwasn’thard.Thepastrytrayswereallmarkedbyprice,andthereweren’tthatmanychoicesanyway.“That’sit?”Aramsaid,hisheartsinking.“Butwhendowebake?”“Bake?Iorderwholesalenow.Nomorebaking.I’mtooold.”ThenMrs.Rossisilentlyheldupherhands.Aramtookinherknotted,swollenfingers,andheunderstood.Awaveofdisappointmentstruckhim.Sadnessoverwhelmedhimsosuddenlythathecouldn’tthinkofawordtosay.Hesighed,andMrs.Rossisighed,too.“Iusedtobakeitall.Breadandcakes.Andnoonediditbetterthanme.Butthatwaswhenthesethingsworked,”saidMrs.Rossiholdingupherhandsoncemoreandglancingacrosstheshelvesfilledwithemptybottleslabelledwithnamesofthevariousingredients(配料)sheonceused.Suddenlyshecamealive,wavingherarthritic(關(guān)節(jié)炎的)hands.“Peopleusedtolineuparoundthecorner.Everyonewantedmybakedbread.”Aram來實(shí)習(xí)的年輕人未來職業(yè)憧憬失望Mrs.Rossi店主老女人高超烘焙技巧被迫放棄ThenathoughtoccurredtoAramthathecouldaskMrs.Rossitoteachhim.Aram請求教“DearMrs.Rossi,”hiseyesshonelikethestarsinthenightsky,“Ilovebakeryfrommychildhoodandit’smydreamtoprovidedeliciousbreadandcakesforothers.Whenpeopleareinabadmood,Ibelievetastyfoodcanbringthemhappiness,andIwanttobecomethatpersonwhospreadjoythroughmyownefforts!Pleaseteachme!”過去夢想—現(xiàn)在觀點(diǎn)—未來期許：提出要求Mrs.Rossiraisedhereyebrowsandcarefullymeasuredtheyoungman,whostoodnervouslywaitingforheranswer.過程——說服提出教 — 同意？（不合理）不同意？—反復(fù)請求—心理變化 （對話、原因、復(fù)雜） 沉默Mrs.Rossifinallysaid,“Let’sbuytheingredientsfirst.”Rossi同意教配料買齊開始烘焙學(xué)習(xí)提升煥發(fā)生機(jī)顧客歸來ForAram,itwasaweightoffhismind.心理回應(yīng)Inthefollowingdays,Aramorderedallthenecessaryingredientsonlineandtheemptybottlesontheshelveswererefilled.具體動作+結(jié)果WithMrs.Rossi’sguidance,Aram’sbakingskillsimproveddaybyday.情節(jié)發(fā)展動作Oldcustomersstartedtocomeback,andthefadedbakeryseemedtoregainitslife.結(jié)果SometimesMrs.Rossiwouldsitinanarmchairoutsideandgreetedpeopleunderthenewwoodensign,whichnowread“AramandRossi’sBakery”.平凡結(jié)尾—日?！垲}全文呈現(xiàn)ThenathoughtoccurredtoAramthathecouldaskMrs.Rossitoteachhim.“DearMrs.Rossi,”hiseyesshonelikethestarsinthenightsky,“Ilovebakeryfrommychildhoodandit’smydreamtoprovidedeliciousbreadandcakesforothers.Whenpeopleareinabadmood,Ibelievetastyfoodcanbringthemhappiness,andIwanttobecomethatpersonwhospreadjoythroughmyownefforts!Pleaseteachme!”Mrs.Rossiraisedhereyebrowsandcarefullymeasuredtheyoungman,whostoodnervouslywaitingforheranswer.Mrs.Rossifinallysaid,“Let’sbuytheingredientsfirst.”ForAram,itwasaweightoffhismind.Inthefollowingdays,Aramorderedallthenecessaryingredientsonlineandtheemptybottlesontheshelveswererefilled.WithMrs.Rossi’sguidance,Aram’sbakingskillsimproveddaybyday.Oldcusto