2026屆新高考英語沖刺復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫一、

素材積累積累

情緒描寫詞匯積累：生氣詞塊flushwithanger,feelasurgeofanger,burstintoanger,bemadwithanger,tremblewithanger,witharmscrossedoverthechest,beseized/overcome/swallowed/overwhelmedbyanger,boilwithrage,stampone’sfeetinanger(憤怒地跺腳),slamthedoor(用力甩門)氣得滿臉通紅

感到一陣怒火

勃然大怒

氣得發(fā)狂氣得發(fā)抖

雙臂交叉抱在胸前被憤怒攫住/沖昏頭腦/吞噬/淹沒

怒不可遏(-mm-)印發(fā)資料有二、續(xù)寫一練習(xí)知識回顧：環(huán)境描寫積累拖車?yán)锏臒艄夂芑璋?，卻充滿了溫暖。Thelightinthetrailerwasdimbutfullofwarmth.2.拖車?yán)镏挥幸槐K舊燈，卻照亮了每個人的臉龐。Therewasonlyoneoldlampinthetrailer,butitlitupeveryone’sface.3.拖車?yán)锏目臻g很小，但大家擠在一起卻很溫馨。Thespaceinthetrailerwassmall,butitwascozywhen

everyonehuddledtogether.4.爐火在角落里燃燒，驅(qū)散了空氣中的寒冷。Thefireburnedinthecorner,drivingawaythecoldintheair.知識點(diǎn)回顧：上次續(xù)寫訓(xùn)練1出現(xiàn)過的環(huán)境描寫齊讀三、續(xù)寫訓(xùn)練2練習(xí)Itallbeganwithaperfectgift.AcoupleofmonthsbeforeIstartedhighschool,myparentsgavemethegreatestgiftanyteenageboycouldaskfor:asmartphone.Ilivedonthatphoneallsummerwithmyfaceburiedinitsscreen.Iheldmulti-daymarathonmessageswitheveryfriendtostayconnectedtoeveryoneofthem.Ibecameaddictedtothephoneandignoredmyfamily,mysurroundings.WhatIwasdoingwassecondarytowhateveryoneelsewasdoing.Beingconnectedwasmoreimportantthanbeingpresent.So,IfeltextremelydispleasedwhenIlearnedwhatmydadhadplannedforourfamilyvacationthatyear.“Thisyear,”mydadsaid,“we’llbedoingsomethingspecial.We’regoingcamping.”Hisexcitementwasmetwithadisappointedsigh.ButIwasn’ttooannoyedandsortofacceptedthearrangements.Itwasn’tmydreamvacation,butitwasstillavacation.Iremainedunbotheredthroughoutthepacking,planningand,ofcourse,theinstructionsthatwentinoneearandouttheother.Mymindwasonmyphone,andthemessageswereflyingbackandforth.Iwassoabsorbedinthescreeninmyhandthatabsolutelynothingcouldgetmyattention.Actually,thefirsttimeIcanremembertrulylookingupwaswhenwedroveacrossabridgeonthewaytoourcampsite.Istaredoutthewindowinadazeandsawredwoodstoweringaboveus,andaroaringriverrushingby.Theairblowingintothecarfromtheopenwindowswashotandsmelledofpine.Butnoneofthatmatteredtome.ThereasonIhadlookedupwasforsomethingfarmoreserious.Moreshocking.Myphonenolongerhadservice.Onthefirstday,Ididn’tabandonhope.Ishouted.Ibargained.Ibegged.However,nothingwouldaddbarstomyphoneservice.Iwenttobedangrilythatnight,thinkingIwouldbeboredtodeathintheabsenceofphoneservicethenextday.ButwhenIwokeupinthemorning,somethinghadchanged.個人成長類四、續(xù)寫思路Para1:Insteadofburyingmyselfinmyphone,Ifocusedonsomethingelse:mysurroundings.________________________________________________________Para2:Thefourdayspassedinaflash,fulloffunactivities.______________________________________________________________范文的思路1.銜接句：周邊環(huán)境描寫2.心理描寫：情緒轉(zhuǎn)變，從生氣到平靜到開心3.動作描寫：關(guān)注大自然4.環(huán)境描寫：大自然vs手機(jī)5.銜接：沒有手機(jī)的假期收獲了什么6.銜接句：露營做了什么，活動？7.動作描寫：活動的過程中做了什么8.心理描寫：露營興奮+快樂9.心理描寫：關(guān)鍵情節(jié)10.主題生活：與家人一起在大自然中度過美好的時光是最重要的1.銜接句2、3、4心理/動作/環(huán)境/對話描寫等5.銜接句6.銜接句7、8、9心理/動作/環(huán)境/對話描寫等10.主題升華五、參考范文Insteadofburyingmyselfinmyphone,Ifocusedonsomethingelse:mysurroundings.

（銜接句）Animalscreatedsoundsthatwerebothloudandpeaceful.（心理描寫）Myangerturnedintopeace,thenlittleinterestand,finally,excitement.（環(huán)境描寫）Witheachminutepassing,Isankdeeperintoamorepeacefulworld,admiringthemagnificentviewsaroundme.（無靈主語）Thesightthatmetmysurprisedeyesnearlytookmybreathaway.

（銜接句）Forthefirsttime,Ithoughtcampinginaplacethathadnophonesignalmightnotbesobad.欣賞

壯麗的景象Thefourdayspassedinaflash,fulloffunactivities.（銜接句:列舉活動）Ihiked.Iswam.Ifished.Iactivelyexploredtheforest.(倒裝句）NosoonerhadIcaughtsightofmydadmakingafirethanIjoinedhim,andafterseveralfalsestarts,wefinallymadeit.（情緒描寫）Seeingthefire,bothofushadasenseofachievement.(與家人互動）Inaddition,Dadtoldmestoriesofhislife.（關(guān)鍵變化）Whentheweekendcametoanend,IrealizedIhadadjustedmyselftothelifewithoutmyphone.Ihadn’tfelttheneedtobeconnectedtoanywhereelse.（主題句）Itdawnedonmethat

whatmatteredmostwerethemomentsIwassharingwithjustmyfatherandnature.突然意識到五、教師下水作文Para1:Insteadofburyingmyselfinmyphone,Ifocusedonsomethingelse:mysurroundings.NeverinmywildestdreamsdidIimaginesteppinginsuchamagicalworld.Unlikevirtualreality,sunlightpeekedthroughthebranches,paintinggoldenspotonthegroundandmorningbirdsweresingingaround,asifputtingonaconcertforus.Takingadeepbreath,Icouldevenfeelthesmellofpine.Allofasudden,myoriginalannoyancegavewayto

asenseofrelaxation.ThiswasthefirsttimeinmonthsthatIhadn’treachedoutformyphone,theonce“perfect”gift.（銜接句）：我做夢也沒想過（環(huán)境描寫）：陽光透過樹枝縫隙灑落下來，在地上繪制出金色的斑點(diǎn)（狀從省略、虛擬語氣）彷佛為我們上演一場音樂會（動作描寫）（心理描寫）最初的煩躁已消失不見，取而代之的一股放松感（銜接句）這是我數(shù)月以來第一次……Para2:Thefourdayspassedinaflash,fulloffunactivities.Occupiedinhiking,fishingandswimming,Ifoundthisfamilyvacationturnedouttobeatrulypreciousgiftforme.Atnight,wesataroundthefireandlistenedtodad’schildhoodstories,laughterlingeringaroundtheredwoods.Ifgivenonemorechance,Iwouldgocampingwithmyfamilywithouthesitation,fortheexperiencetaughtmeanimportantlesson:thegreatestjoydoesn’tcomefromscrollingthroughascreenbutfromsharingmomentswithourfamilies.（銜接句）：形容詞短語作狀語忙于......,這次家庭旅行才是真正寶貴的禮物（動作描寫）：我們圍坐在篝火旁，聆聽爸爸講述童年的故事獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)

笑聲在紅杉林間回蕩

（關(guān)鍵情節(jié)+主題升華）狀從省略

因?yàn)檫@段經(jīng)歷教會了我一個重要的道理not...but...不是...而是六、句型積累1.NeverinmywildestdreamsdidIdosth...半倒裝句:我做夢都沒想過我會...2.peekthrough

偷窺，偷看，透過縫隙撒過3.morningbirdsweresingingaround,asif(theywere)puttingonaconcertforus.asif好像......狀從省略/虛擬語氣4.Myoriginalannoyancegavewayto

asenseofrelaxation.無靈主語：“讓步于”情緒1+gavewayto+情緒2最初的......已消失不見，取而代之的是......5.ThiswasthefirsttimeinmonthsthatIhadn’treachedoutformyphone,theonce“perfect”gift.Thiswasthefirsttime