Unit6

Survival選擇性必修第二冊單元詞句識記內(nèi)容索引單元默寫檢測核心知識突破關(guān)鍵能力考查寫作素養(yǎng)培優(yōu)課時作業(yè)單元詞句識記Ⅰ.閱讀單詞1.foxn.

狐貍2.seasideadj. 海濱的3.predatorn. 掠食動物,捕食性動物4.newcomern. 新來者5.flourishv. 生長茂盛,興盛6.lambn. 羔羊肉7.garlicn. (大)蒜8.hikern. 徒步旅行者,遠(yuǎn)足者9.clayn. 黏土10.caven. 洞穴11.indoorsadv. 在室內(nèi)12.supplementv. 補(bǔ)充,增補(bǔ),增加13.Marsn. 火星14.nuclearadj. 核武器的15.hostileadj. (生長環(huán)境)惡劣的16.unmannedadj. 無人駕駛(操縱)的17.spacecraftn. 航天器,宇宙飛船18.stunningadj. 極具吸引力的;令人驚奇的19.agencyn. 機(jī)構(gòu);(尤指政府內(nèi)的)局,部,處20.astronautn. 宇航員,太空人21.capsulen. (航天器的)密封艙,太空艙22.trunkn. 樹干Ⅱ.核心單詞1.inthesuburbofourcity

在我們城市的郊區(qū)2.ajewelthief

一個珠寶竊賊3.adapttourbanlife

適應(yīng)城市生活4.garbagedisposalmethods

垃圾處理方法

5.acrucialfactor

一個關(guān)鍵性的因素6.eliminateitsnegativeeffects 消除其負(fù)面影響7.bravefirefighters

勇敢的消防隊(duì)員8.fiercecompetition

激烈的競爭9.anewmonthlymagazine

一份新的月刊10.consistoffourChinesecharacters 由四個漢字組成Ⅲ.一詞多義1.fuel

n.燃料

v.給……提供燃料;增強(qiáng),刺激

①solidfuel

固體燃料

②fuelnuclearplants給核電廠提供燃料

③fuelfears增強(qiáng)恐懼2.wipe

v.擦,拭,揩;消除,抹掉

①wipehertears擦掉她的眼淚

②wipeoutdiscrimination消除歧視3.orbit

v.環(huán)繞……運(yùn)行

n.軌道

①orbitthesun繞太陽運(yùn)行

②theearth’sorbit

地球的軌道Ⅳ.派生單詞1.crimen.

罪,罪行 criminaladj.

犯罪的

n.罪犯2.greedyadj.

貪婪的,貪心的;渴望的 greedn.

貪婪;渴望3.commitv.

犯(錯誤或罪行);承諾,保證 commitmentn.

承諾;保證;獻(xiàn)身;投入 committedadj.

盡心盡力的;堅(jiān)定的;堅(jiān)信的4.estimatev. 估計,估算 estimationn. 估計,評價5.migratoryadj. 遷徙的 migratev. 遷徙 migrationn. 遷徙,移居6.appreciatev. 欣賞;賞識 appreciationn. 欣賞;感激 appreciativeadj. 贊賞的;感激的7.restrictv.

限制,控制 restrictedadj. 受限制的 restrictionn. 限制,約束8.optimisticadj. 樂觀的;樂觀主義的 optimistn. 樂觀主義者 optimismn. 樂觀;樂觀主義9.consumptionn. (精力、油、電等的)消耗量 consumev. 消耗,耗費(fèi)(燃料、時間、能量等) consumern. 消費(fèi)者;顧客10.reactv. (作出)反應(yīng) reactionn. 反應(yīng)11.advancedadj. 高級的;先進(jìn)的 advancev. 前進(jìn),進(jìn)步

n.前進(jìn);進(jìn)步12.terrifyingadj. 極其可怕的,駭人聽聞的 terrorn. 恐懼 terrifyvt. 使恐懼,使十分害怕,使驚嚇 terrifiedadj. 恐懼的;受驚嚇的13.exposev.

使暴露(于險境);使接觸,使體驗(yàn);揭露 exposedadj. 暴露的;無遮蔽的 exposuren. 暴露,揭露;接觸14.dustn. 沙土,塵土 dustyadj. 布滿灰塵的;沙塵的Ⅴ.短語詞塊1.fitinwith

適應(yīng);與……一致2.getatastefor

嘗一嘗;體驗(yàn);感受3.crashinto

撞上4.amountto

總計,接近5.splitup

分開6.copewith

應(yīng)付7.bring...undercontrol 使……處于控制之下8.getridof

擺脫,除去9.wipeout

徹底摧毀,消滅;抹去(舊事)10.consistof

由……構(gòu)成,由……組成11.inone’sway

擋某人的道,妨礙某人12.outofreach

夠不到13.underconstruction 在建設(shè)之中14.inthemeantime

在此期間,與此同時Ⅵ.教材佳句1.As

our

cities

become

greener,theyofferincreasinglyappealingspacestoanimalslookingfornewhabitats.(as引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句)

隨著我們的城市環(huán)境變得更好,它們?yōu)閷ふ倚聴⒌氐膭游锾峁┝嗽絹碓接形Φ目臻g。2.Thereisevidencethat

urban

racoons

are

more

intelligent

than

their

wild

cousins...(that引導(dǎo)同位語從句)

有證據(jù)表明,城市里的浣熊比它們的野生近親更聰明……3.Only

then

can

we

looktowardsharmoniouslysharingoururbanhabitats.(“only+狀語”置于句首的倒裝句)

只有那時,我們才能期待和諧地共享我們的城市棲息地。4.Inthemeantime,scientificresearchshowsthatthe

planet

Earth

is

getting

warmer.This

change

is

being

caused

by

human

activityandis

having

a

terrible

effect

onthebiosphere.(環(huán)境保護(hù))

此同時,科學(xué)研究表明地球正在變暖。這種變化是由人類活動引起的,而且對生物圈正在產(chǎn)生嚴(yán)重的影響。?構(gòu)詞法日積月累名詞后綴-sure/-ture通常表示某種狀態(tài)、性質(zhì)或動作的結(jié)果或產(chǎn)物。①exposure暴露

②pressure壓力③pleasure高興,快樂

④departure離開⑤mixture混合物

⑥closure關(guān)閉,倒閉單元默寫檢測StepOne

寫一寫Ⅰ.閱讀單詞1.inaseasidesuburb

在

郊區(qū)

2.flourishintheirnewcity

在它們的新城市中

3.thecavemouth

口

4.stayindoors

待

5.supplementoilsupplies

石油供應(yīng)

海濱茁壯成長洞在室內(nèi)增加6.ahostileenvironment

環(huán)境

7.anunmannedspacecraft 一個

宇宙飛船

8.stunningviews

景色

9.Chineseastronauts

中國

10.thetrunkofatree

樹的

惡劣的無人駕駛的令人驚奇的宇航員樹干Ⅱ.核心單詞1.

n.郊區(qū),城郊

2.

adj.城鎮(zhèn)的,城市的

3.

n.垃圾

4.

adj.至關(guān)重要的,關(guān)鍵性的

5.

v.消除,根除

6.

n.消防隊(duì)員

7.

adj.惡劣的,極端的

8.

v.組成

suburburbangarbagecrucialeliminatefirefighterfierceconsistⅢ.派生單詞1.

n.罪,罪行→

adj.犯罪的

n.罪犯2.

v.犯(錯誤或罪行);承諾,保證→

n.承諾;保證;獻(xiàn)身;投入→

adj.盡心盡力的;堅(jiān)定的;堅(jiān)信的

3.

v.欣賞;賞識→

n.欣賞;感激→ _____________adj.贊賞的;感激的

crimecriminalcommitcommitmentcommittedappreciateappreciationappreciative4.

v.限制,控制→

adj.受限制的→

n.限制,約束

5.

n.樂觀主義者→

n.樂觀;樂觀主義→

adj.樂觀的;樂觀主義的

6.

v.消耗,耗費(fèi)(燃料、時間、能量等)→_____________n.(精力、油、電等的)消耗量→

n.消費(fèi)者;顧客

restrictrestrictedrestrictionoptimistoptimismoptimisticconsumeconsumptionconsumer7.

v.(作出)反應(yīng)→

n.反應(yīng)8.

v.前進(jìn),進(jìn)步

n.前進(jìn);進(jìn)步→

adj.高級的;先進(jìn)的

9.

n.恐懼→

vt.使恐懼,使十分害怕,使驚嚇→

adj.極其可怕的,駭人聽聞的→

adj.恐懼的;受驚嚇的

10.

v.使暴露(于險境);使接觸,使體驗(yàn);揭露→__________

adj.暴露的;無遮蔽的→

n.暴露,揭露;接觸

11.

n.沙土,塵土→

adj.布滿灰塵的;沙塵的

reactreactionadvanceadvancedterrorterrifyterrifyingterrifiedexposeexposedexposuredustdustyⅣ.短語互譯1.

在此期間,與此同時

2.

應(yīng)付

3.

使……處于控制之下

4.

徹底摧毀,消滅;抹去(舊事)

5.

由……構(gòu)成,由……組成

inthemeantimecopewithbring...undercontrolwipeoutconsistof6.outofreach

7.underconstruction

8.fitinwith

9.splitup

10.getridof

夠不到在建設(shè)之中適應(yīng);與……一致分開擺脫,除去Ⅴ.句式仿寫1.句型公式:as引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句

當(dāng)我們在電視上看到奧運(yùn)會上國旗升起時,我們都感到非常自豪。(心理描寫) Weallfeltveryproud

intheOlympicGamesonTV.

aswewatchedthenationalflagrising2.句型公式:that引導(dǎo)同位語從句

我堅(jiān)信我將來能做得很好。(主旨升華) Ifirmlyholdthebelief

.

3.句型公式:“only+狀語”置于句首的倒裝句

只有這樣,我們才能過上幸福健康的生活,使我們的學(xué)習(xí)更有成效。(發(fā)言稿) Onlyinthisway

andmakeourstudymoreproductive.thatIcandowellinthefuturecanweliveahappyandhealthylifeStepTwo練一練Ⅰ.根據(jù)語境和首字母提示寫出單詞的正確形式1.Bodylanguageisthekeytocommunication,sopropergesturesplayac

roleinourdailylife.

2.Thefestivalc

ofvariousactivities,rangingfromanancientpoetryrecitationcontestonTuesdayafternoontoaweek-longexhibition.

3.Itwasaparticularlydarkandstormynight,withthef__________windshakingthewindowswildly.

rucialonsistsierce4.Thepolicehavee

twosuspectsfromtheirinvestigation.

5.Let’smakeaconsciousefforttopackouteverythingwebringinandproperlydisposeofg

inwastebins.liminatedarbageⅡ.根據(jù)語境用括號內(nèi)所給詞的正確形式填空1.Tonyis

tosellingtheproducts,becausehehasmadeastrong

tohisboss.(commit)

2.Whenitcomesto

,

inthedevelopedcountries

themostenergyintheworld.(consume)

3.Whentheysawthe

scene,hescreamedwith______________andeveryoneonthespotfelt

andcouldn’tsayaword.(terror)

committedcommitmentconsumptionconsumersconsumeterrifyingterrorterrified4.

arepeoplewhocommit

.

(crime)5.ThroughTV,kidshaveregular

tocrimesandviolence.Itisbadto

kidstosuchthingsandweshouldmakekids

tosomegoodbooks.(expose)

CriminalscrimesexposureexposeexposedⅢ.短語填空underconstructionwipeout

underconstruction

outofreach inthemeantimeconsistof1.Thenewteachingbuildingis

anditwillbefinishedinDecember.

2.Theclassmeeting,

threeparts,beganwithatouchingvideoaboutastudentbeingavolunteerinhiscommunity.

consistingof3.Eventuallyyourchildwillleavehometoleadherownlifeasafullyindependentadult,but

shereliesonyoursupport.

4.Astheboxwas

ontheshelf,thelittleboybroughtachairtostandon.

5.Wearegoingto

thewholeunpleasantpastinordertoestablishafriendlyrelationshipwitheachother.

inthemeantimeoutofreachwipeoutⅣ.串記練習(xí)閱讀下面新情景,在空白處填入1個適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~或括號內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。Inthe1980s,thieves

committed

crimes,thetheftsindoorshappenedfromtimetotime,andseriouscaseswereterrifying.Theborderofurbanandruralareaswasanareawithahighincidenceofcrime.Peopleweregreedy1.

astablelifeandhopedthatthegovernmentwouldtakemeasures2.

(cope)

with

thisfortocopesituation.Thegovernmentrespondedtotheneedsofthemassesintime,dispatched(派出)alargenumberofpoliceforces,andusedadvanced3.

(equip)tocombat4.__________(crime).In

the

meantime,manycriminalgangs5.

(wipe)

outandalargenumberofcaseswereexposedintheworld,effectively6.____________(frighten)thosewhohadcriminalintentions.Thecrimeratewasbrought

under

controlandthethreat7.

(harm)tosocietywaseliminated.8.

wasestimatedthatatleastequipmentcrimeswerewipedfrighteningharmfulIt100,000criminalswerepunished,9.

effectivelypurifiedthesocialenvironment.Peoplereactedstronglytoit.Thefactshowedthatitwascrucialthatthemasses10.

(active)participateinit.

whichactively核心知識突破No.1熱考詞匯No.3寫作遷移No.2熟詞生義/一詞多義1.appreciate

v.欣賞;賞識;感激→appreciationn.欣賞;感激→appreciativeadj.贊賞的;感激的佳句背誦

IappreciateyourattempttoenhanceouroralEnglishbyrandomlyorganizingpairworkinclass.(建議信,2023·新課標(biāo)Ⅰ卷)我感謝您在課堂上隨機(jī)組織配對活動來提高我們口語的嘗試。appreciate(one’s)doingsth

感激(某人)做某事Iwouldappreciateitif...

如果……我將不勝感激[點(diǎn)撥]

appreciate后面接if引導(dǎo)的從句時,要先接it再跟從句,其中的it指代后面從句的內(nèi)容,相當(dāng)于形式賓語。類似用法的還有l(wèi)ove、hate、like、prefer、dislike等。以練促學(xué)單句語法填空/單句寫作①HereIsincerelyexpressmy

(appreciate)ifyoucouldhelpfindthelostsuitcase.

②Iappreciate

(give)theopportunitytoworkinyourcompany.

③

youcouldtakemyinvitationintoaccount.(邀請信,2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)

如果您能考慮一下我的邀請,我將不勝感激。appreciationbeinggivenIwouldappreciateitif2.terrifying

adj.極其可怕的,駭人聽聞的(frightening)→terrifiedadj.恐懼的;受驚嚇的→terrorn.恐懼→terrifyvt.使恐懼,使十分害怕,使驚嚇佳句背誦

Itwasterrifyingforus,aswewereshakenbythewaves.(心理描寫)這對我們來說十分可怕,因?yàn)槲覀儽缓＠苏鸬脫u搖晃晃。beterrifiedof(doing)...

害怕(做)……interror

驚恐地terrifysbintodoing...

嚇唬某人做……以練促學(xué)完成語段

thepolarbear,Ijust

.Suddenly,thepolarbearopeneditsbloodymouth,asiftryingto

.

Neverbeforehadweexperiencedsuch

.

害怕北極熊的靠近,我嚇得呆在那里了。突然,北極熊張開它血淋淋的嘴,好像在試圖嚇唬我把相機(jī)交出來。我們從未經(jīng)歷過如此可怕的時刻。

Terrifiedoftheapproachoffrozeinterrorterrifymeintohandingoverthecameraaterrifyingmoment3.expose

v.使暴露(于險境);使接觸,使體驗(yàn);揭露

(reveal)→exposedadj.暴露的;無遮蔽的→exposuren.暴露,揭露;接觸佳句背誦

Duringthisperiod,youwillexpose

yourself

toaselectionofChinesetraditionalculturesindailylife.(通知)在這段時間里,您將有機(jī)會在日常生活中接觸到一系列中國傳統(tǒng)文化。expose...to...

把……暴露在……;使……接觸……exposeoneselfto... 接觸……;使自己暴露于……beexposedto

接觸……;暴露于……[點(diǎn)撥]

在expose...to...及be

exposed

to結(jié)構(gòu)中,to為介詞,其后需用名詞、代詞或動名詞作賓語。以練促學(xué)單句語法填空/一句多譯①Somepeoplethinkweshouldn’texposechildrento__________(play)computergames.

②Itwassixteendegreesbelowzero,thechillwindblewacrossmybody,andmyownfacehurtfromjustafewseconds’_____________(expose)totheicyair.

playingexposure③我從小就接觸外教,因此,我能夠用英語和其他人自由交流?！鶬_______________________________________________________________________,soIcancommunicatefreelywithothersinEnglish.→_________________________________________________________________________________,IcancommunicatefreelywithothersinEnglish.(現(xiàn)在分詞的完成式作狀語)

havebeenexposedto/haveexposedmyselftoforeignteacherssinceayoungageHavingbeenexposedto/Havingexposedmyselftoforeignteacherssinceayoungage片段鞏固

用appreciate;terrifying;expose完成“情緒描寫”片段寫作提示:他們遇到可怕的野生動物,非?？謶?、害怕→很快意識到要冷靜下來→欣賞大自然的原始力量和美→暴露在野外,意識到自己的脆弱→小心翼翼慢慢走開→離動物越來越遠(yuǎn),不再害怕Theywereterrifiedwhentheyencounteredthemassiveterrifyingwildanimal.Theirheartspoundedintheirchests.Buttheysoonrealizedtheyhadtostaycalm.Theydeeplyappreciatedtherawpowerandbeautyofnature.Exposedinthewild,theyfeltvulnerable.Withgreatcaution,theyslowlyinchedaway,hopingnottoprovokethebeast.Eventually,astheyputmoredistancebetweenthemselvesandtheanimal,theymanagedtowipeouttheparalyzingfear.1.寫出加黑部分的詞性和漢語意思①Theearthisoneofnineplanetswhichorbitthesun.

②Itriedtowipethewholeepisodefrommymind.

v.環(huán)繞……運(yùn)行v.抹去2.選出fuel的漢語意思A.v.刺激,增加B.v.給……加燃料C.n.燃料C①Producingfoodthatnooneeatswastesthewater,

fuel,andotherresourcesusedtogrowit.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)

②Asafoodie,thewaytomyheartisthroughmystomach,andnowherefuelsmyappetitequitelikeItaly.(2024·新課標(biāo)Ⅱ卷)

③Thehelicopterhasalreadybeenfuelledandisreadytotakeoff.

AB句型公式:that引導(dǎo)同位語從句課本原句:Thereisevidencethat

urban

racoons

are

more

intelligent

than

their

wild

cousins...有證據(jù)表明,城市里的浣熊比它們的野生近親更聰明……佳句背誦

Hearingthenewsthat

you

were

fired

from

the

work,Ifeltgreatlyworried.(慰問信)聽到你被解雇的消息,我感到非常擔(dān)心。Thesuggestionthat

we

should

go

out

for

dinnerwaswelcomed,andeveryonewassoexcitedthattheydancedaround.(情緒描寫)我們外出吃飯的建議受到了歡迎,每個人都興奮得手舞足蹈。Thefearthat

he

might

fail

the

examkepthimupallnight,hisheartpoundingwildly.(情緒描寫)擔(dān)心考試不及格,他徹夜未眠,心砰砰直跳。(1)that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句常作news、fact、hope、idea、suggestion、promise、truth等名詞的同位語。(2)that引導(dǎo)同位語從句和定語從句時的區(qū)別在于:引導(dǎo)定語從句時,that為關(guān)系代詞,在從句中作主語或賓語,有意義;而引導(dǎo)同位語從句時,that在從句中只起引導(dǎo)詞的作用,不作成分,沒有意義。以練促學(xué)單句語法填空/完成語段①Hemadeapromisetohisson

madehissonexcitedallday.

that/which②Iammorethangladtoheartheidea

____________withthethemeof“GreenBeijing”andherearemysuggestionsfortheevent.___________________________________________________________________________.

Besides,thereisanothersuggestion________________________________________________________________________________________________.

thatyouareplanningaclubactivityThereisnodoubtthatorganisingaacyclingtouraroundthecityisagoodchoicethatyou(should)holdagreenfairorexhibitiontoshowenvironmentallyfriendlyproductsandtechnologies聽說你們正在策劃一個以“綠色北京”為主題的社團(tuán)活動,我非常高興,下面是我對這次活動的建議。毫無疑問,組織一次環(huán)城自行車之旅是一個不錯的選擇。此外,另一個建議是你們應(yīng)該舉辦一個綠色博覽會或展覽來展示環(huán)保產(chǎn)品和技術(shù)。關(guān)鍵能力考查維度一

核心知識運(yùn)用1.TheCarlowAutumnWalkingFestivalisagreatopportunityforthebeginner,experiencedor

(advance)walkertoenjoythechallengesofCarlow’smountainhikesorthepeaceofitswoodlandwalks.(2024·新課標(biāo)Ⅱ卷)

2.NomatterwhereIbuythem,though,onesteamerbasketisrarelyenough,yettwoseems

(greed).(2023·新課標(biāo)Ⅰ卷)

advancedgreedy3.Theyoftencoveronlytheireyeswiththeirhands,leavingtherestoftheirbodies

(expose).(2022·全國乙卷)

4.Buthowcanapainting

(appreciate)bysomeonewho’sblind?(2022·浙江6月卷)5.Idecidedtocommitto

(complete)theapplications.(2022·北京卷)

6.AccordingtoarecentstudyintheJournal

of

Consumer

Research,boththesizeand

(consume)habitsofoureatingcompanionscaninfluenceourfoodintake.(新高考Ⅰ卷)

exposedbeappreciatedcompletingconsumption7.It

(estimate)thatsmokingcauses100,000prematuredeathseveryyear.

8.Fortherestofthegamewerestrictedourselves_________________cheeringonourownteam.

9.Moreimportantly,healwaysstaysoptimistic

lifeandhasapositiveinfluenceonhisfriendsandclassmates.

10.Inthepast,therewasoftenanautomatic

(react)toincreasedtraffic:justwidentheroads.

isestimatedtoaboutreaction維度二

單句寫作1.

,

theappealofscreensandtheconvenienceofonlinecontenthavequietlycausedprintmediatoloseitscharm.(as引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句)

隨著數(shù)字革命席卷我們的生活,屏幕的吸引力和在線內(nèi)容的便利性已經(jīng)悄然使印刷媒體失去了魅力。Asthedigitalrevolutionsweepsthroughourlives2.Iamwritingtosharemythoughtsonthephenomenon_______________________________________andlackawareness

inaskingquestionsduringEnglishclass.(that引導(dǎo)同位語從句)

我寫這封信是為了分享我對英語課堂上許多人在提問時猶豫不決和缺乏提問意識的現(xiàn)象的看法。3.

thatitwasbraverythatcanconquerwhateverdifficultycameintheway.(“only+狀語”置于句首的倒裝句)

直到那時,我才意識到,正是勇敢才能克服一切困難。thatmanyofusarehesitanttoaskquestionsOnlythendidIrealize4.Indeed,Igotatasteofvictoryandlearnedtopursuemydreamwithperseverance,

.

(“疑問詞-ever”/“nomatter+疑問詞”引導(dǎo)的狀語從句)(2023·新課標(biāo)Ⅰ卷)

事實(shí)上,我嘗到了勝利的滋味,學(xué)會了無論遇到什么困難,都要堅(jiān)持不懈地追求夢想。5.

,

I’mdeterminedtofinishtheworkaheadoftime.(“疑問詞-ever”,“nomatter+疑問詞”引導(dǎo)的狀語從句)

無論有多么困難,我都決心提前完成工作。whateverdifficultiesmightariseNomatterhow/Howeverdifficultitis維度三

單元知識拾遺Successoftendependson1.

.

Wemustn’tletlimitations2.

.

Thepathtoitcan3.

.

However,4.

,

wecanturnchallengesintoopportunities.成功往往取決于關(guān)鍵的選擇。我們不能讓局限性限制我們的潛力。通往它的道路可能充滿障礙。然而,以樂觀的態(tài)度,我們可以將挑戰(zhàn)轉(zhuǎn)化為機(jī)遇。crucialchoicesrestrictourpotentialbefiercewithobstacleswithanoptimisticattitude寫作素養(yǎng)培優(yōu)Ⅰ.話題下的應(yīng)用文專練(報道——地震經(jīng)歷)

假定你是李華,上周你們城市發(fā)生了地震,請你為校英文報寫一篇報道,內(nèi)容包括:(1)簡單介紹地震發(fā)生時的情況;(2)采取的措施;(3)表達(dá)期待。根據(jù)提示,利用本單元所學(xué)知識完成應(yīng)用文寫作第一步

字斟句酌

優(yōu)化表達(dá)①上周,當(dāng)我在郊區(qū)散步時,一場猛烈的地震意外地襲擊了我的城市。(fierce,suburb)

AfierceearthquakeunexpectedlystruckmycitylastweekwhenIwaswalkinginthesuburb.②它發(fā)生在白天,所以很多人在戶外,很多在室內(nèi)的人也能迅速作出反應(yīng)。

(indoors,react)

③我們的政府立即努力找出關(guān)鍵的解決方案。(crucial)

Ithappenedinthedaytime,solotsofpeoplewereoutdoorsandmanypeoplewhowereindoorscouldalsoreactquickly.Ourgovernmentmadeeffortstofigureoutthecrucialsolutionimmediately.④消防隊(duì)員、警察和軍隊(duì)都迅速做出了應(yīng)對。(firefighter,copewith)

⑤不久,他們把一切都控制住了。

(bring...undercontrol)

⑥我相信現(xiàn)在的情況很快就會好轉(zhuǎn)。

Firefighters,policeandthearmyallcoped

withitquickly.Beforelong,theybroughteverythingunder

control.Ibelievethatthepresentsituationwillsoonbecomebetter.AfierceearthquakeunexpectedlystruckmycitylastweekwhenIwaswalkinginthesuburb.Fortunately,ithappenedinthedaytime,solotsofpeoplewereoutdoorsandmanypeoplewhowereindoorscouldalsoreactquickly.Thankfully,ourgovernmentmadeeffortstofigureoutthecrucialsolutionimmediately.In

the

meanwhile,firefighters,policeandthearmyallcopedwithitquickly.Beforelong,theybroughteverythingundercontrol.Ibelievethatthepresentsituationwillsoonbecomebetter.第二步

恰當(dāng)過渡

完美成文(使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡銜接詞連句成篇)Ⅱ.話題下的續(xù)寫能力提升(根據(jù)提示續(xù)寫2場景)場景導(dǎo)語:一個寒冷的傍晚,大衛(wèi)前往另一個城市進(jìn)行工作面試,他急需這份工作來掙取房子糾紛的律師費(fèi)→途中,他遇到了一個驚恐的小女孩,盡管他知道幫助她可能會錯過面試,但他還是決定停下來幫助她→小女孩名叫米婭,她的媽媽勞拉急需救助→大衛(wèi)跟隨她找到了發(fā)生事故的地方→呼叫911,在救援人員到來之前為昏迷的女孩媽媽提供幫助并陪女孩送她的媽媽去醫(yī)院。場景續(xù)寫1:大衛(wèi)陪米婭去看望勞拉→小女孩跑上去擁抱媽媽并告訴她事實(shí)真相→勞拉向大衛(wèi)表達(dá)感激→勞拉詢問大衛(wèi)晚上的計劃→大衛(wèi)去面試工作以便能請得起律師→勞拉對大衛(wèi)錯過工作面試深表遺憾→大衛(wèi)安慰勞拉并說他只是關(guān)心請律師的事→勞拉想到了一個主意AsDavidandMiavisitedLaura,thelittlegirlrantohermotherandhuggedher.

場景續(xù)寫2:原來勞拉是一名專業(yè)律師→她提出免費(fèi)為大衛(wèi)辯護(hù)→并請大衛(wèi)詳細(xì)告訴她他的案件→大衛(wèi)感到驚喜→在勞拉的幫助下,大衛(wèi)贏得了訴訟并成功保住了他的房子→俗話說,善有善報ItturnedoutthatLaurawasaprofessionallawyer.

場景續(xù)寫1AsDavidandMiavisitedLaura,thelittlegirlrantohermotherandhuggedher.“It’sDavidthatsavedus,Mommy!”Miasaidexcitedly.LauraextendedherheartfeltgratitudetoDavid,“Youaresokind!Ijustcan’tthankyouenoughforit!”ThenLaurainquiredaboutDavid’splanfortheevening.Davidexplainedthathewasheadingforajobinterviewsothathecouldaffordalawyer.Onhearingthis,LauraexpressedhersorrowatDavidmissingthejobinterview.DavidreassuredLaura,statingthatheismerelyconcernedaboutsecuringalawyer’sassistance.Atthatverymoment,anideacameintoLaura’smind.

場景續(xù)寫2ItturnedoutthatLaurawasaprofessionallawyer.“Takeiteasy,David!Actually,I’malawyer.”saidLaura,withasmileonherface.ShegenerouslyofferedtodefendDavidforfreeandaskedDavidtotellherhiscaseindetail.Feelingawaveofsurpriseandjoysweepingoverhim,DavidadvisedLauratohaveagoodrestfirst.Twomonthslater,withthehelpofLaura,Davidwonthelawsuitandsuccessfullysavedhishouse.Astheoldsayinggoes,“onegoodturndeservesanother”.Afterthat,Davidcontinuedtohelpthoseinneed.

課時作業(yè)Ⅰ.應(yīng)用文寫作假定你是李華,你校正在舉辦以“四月八日國際珍稀動物保護(hù)日”為主題的英語征文比賽。請你寫一篇短文投稿,內(nèi)容包括:1.珍稀動物的重要性;2.保護(hù)珍稀動物的倡議。注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。ProtectingRareAnimals

寫作思路:【范文賞析】

ProtectingRareAnimalsToday,manyrareanimalshavedisappearedorfacethepossibilityofextinction.Atthesametime,manyanimalsarehuntedforfurorfood.Humanbeingsarefullyresponsibleforthesituation.Takingcareoftheworld’srareanimalsiseveryone’sresponsibility.Rareanimalsareanessentialpartofourplanet,whichplayasignificantroleintheecology(非限制性定語從句).Theextinctionofthemcanhavewide-rangingeffectsonhumankind.Valuingwildanimalsenhancestherelationbetweenmanandnature.

Wehopeourfuturegenerationcanhearlionsroaringandbirdssinging,butnotjustseetheminpicturebooks.Itishightimethatweshouldprotectthem(虛擬語氣).

Ⅱ.讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Istaredatthedarkroofofmytent,wonderingifitwastimetogonow.IthoughtI’dbetterwaituntilitwaslightouttousethecampsite(營地)bathroominthewoods.Atnight,thewoodswereprobablyfilledwithallkindsofanimals.Mostofthemwouldbeharmless,likedeer,butsometimessomethinglessfriendlywassighted,likeabear.However,itwasimpossibleformetowaituntildawn.Myparentsweresleepingsoundlybesideme,soIdecidedtogooutforfiveminutesbymyself.Itookaflashlightandwentoutside.Themoonwasonlyathinclawinthesky,andtherewasverylittlestarlight.Manyshadowswerelikebigwildanimals.Ih