專題06場景描寫（高分定律）

【考情分析】

年份卷別主題話題

2023新高考I卷人與自我之個人成長我被鼓勵參加寫作比賽

2023浙江1月卷人與自然之人與動物我與蜂鳥的神奇邂逅

2022新高考I&II卷人與自我之個人成長鼓勵殘疾男孩參加越野跑

2022浙江6月卷人與社會之善行義舉為無家可歸者發(fā)放食物

2022浙江1月卷人與自我之個人成長與“最不合拍”搭檔成為好友

2021新高考I&II卷人與社會之親情關(guān)愛母親節(jié)的驚喜

2021浙江6月卷人與社會之善行義舉幫助別人度過難關(guān)

2021浙江1月卷人與社會之故事+遇險男孩意外卡住頭而走紅網(wǎng)絡(luò)

【寫作指導(dǎo)】

人與自然的和諧相處、自然災(zāi)害、環(huán)境保護(hù)、動植物的保護(hù)、人與動物等熱門話題中都會涉及到場景

的描寫，借景抒情，通過對景物的描寫，寄寓、烘托著人物的抱負(fù)和情感是謀篇布局的一種寫作手法。適

當(dāng)?shù)沫h(huán)境描寫可以烘托氛圍，襯托主題，折射人物內(nèi)心世界。

（2022年新高考I卷）Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwere

warmingupandwalkingtheroute（路線）throughthickevergreenforest.（走過終年常綠的茂盛的森林）

【素材寶庫】

詞匯積累之動詞

風(fēng)howl嚎叫,blow吹,whip鞭打,sting刺痛，kiss親吻,stroked（輕撫）

雨beatagainst..拍打,crashagainst擊,pourdown傾盆,fall落下，

陽光comeout出來,rise升起,set落下,kiss親吻，floodin照射進(jìn)來,bebathedin沐浴在

雪dance跳舞，float/fall/drift飄,meltaway融化,blanket裹住，cover覆蓋

星星shine閃耀,sparkle/twinkle閃耀,wink/blink眨眼睛,hide躲藏,decorate裝飾,dot裝飾

詞匯積累之形容詞（場景環(huán)境）

pure純潔的dark黑暗的dazzling耀眼的pale/faint暗淡

dim昏暗的feathery鵝毛般的sparkling/twinkling/glittering閃閃發(fā)光的lofty高聳入云

foggy霧蒙蒙的misty有霧undulating起伏的amber-like琥珀一樣的

winding蜿蜒的steep險峻的sunny/rainy/cloudy/snowystarless沒有星星

silky絲滑的hard硬的soft/gentle輕的strong/violent猛烈的

sharp尖銳的rough粗糙的icy/freezing冰冷的shaggy毛茸茸的

warm溫暖的biting刺骨的bumpy崎嶇不平的burning/scorching火辣辣

sweet甜的wet/dam潮濕的choking讓人窒息的bone-chilling刺骨的

strong強(qiáng)烈的fresh新鮮的smelly/foul/stinky臭的;難聞的fragrant清香的

deep深的noisy吵鬧的gurgling潺潺的（流水）deafening震耳欲聾的

low小聲的high大聲的howling怒號的；猛烈的melodious悅耳的

短語積累

風(fēng)暴風(fēng)雨之夜astormynight；四面受風(fēng)exposedtothefourwindsofheaven；

雨連綿不斷的雨continuous/constantrains；在茫茫大雨中intheblindingrain；

狂風(fēng)暴雨fierce/heavy/violentstorms；

在春天溫暖的陽光里inthewarmspringsunshine沐日光浴bathe/baskin(the)sunshine；在盛

陽光夏灼熱的陽光下undertheblazing/scorching/burningsunofmidsummer；

thesetting/risingsun落日/冉冉升起的太陽；

雪深埋在雪中beburiedinsnow；Getpiledwithsnow白雪皚皚，積雪堆積如山；

星空starssparkledinthesky星星在天空中閃爍；thedark,rainingevening雨夜交加的夜晚

花草fragileflowers嬌嫩的花；greengrass青草；fragrantroses芬芳的玫瑰

鳥語thetwitterofbirds吱吱喳喳的叫聲；

birdssoaringthroughtheair空中翱翔的鳥兒

句式積累

1.Thepurefeatherysnowflakesdancedintheair,makingabeautifulpicture.

鵝毛般純潔的的雪花在空中飛舞，像一幅美麗的圖畫。

2.Sparklingstarswinkedatmeinadarkeningsky.

夜空中的閃爍星星向我眨眼睛。

3.Thesceneryalongthejourneyisjustlikeabreath-takinglandscapepainting.

沿路的風(fēng)景就像一幅美麗的山水畫。

4.Aheavysilenceblanketedtheroom.

整個房子沉浸在一片寂寞中。

5.Thebeautifulparkwasascentedcarpetofcolours.

美麗的公園就是一個芬芳的彩色地毯。

6.1mmediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.

頃刻間，黑暗統(tǒng)治了森林。

7.Darknessblanketedthewholeroom.

黑暗籠罩了整個房間。

8.Thefragrantflowersattractedlotsofbutterfliesjingering（縈繞）aroundthem.

鮮花的香味引來了很多蝴蝶，它們圍著花朵。

9.Theflowersweregentlyswayinginthebreeze.

花兒在微風(fēng)中輕輕舞動。

10.Blueskiesstoodtallandfar.

藍(lán)藍(lán)的天空高高聳立。

11.Thestarsshinelikediamonds.

星星如鉆石般閃耀。

12.Thebeachisbathedintheamber-likesunshine.

海灘沐浴在琥珀色的陽光中。

13.Theskywasdottedwithsparklingstars.

天上繁星點(diǎn)點(diǎn)。

14.Starswinkedatmeinadarkeningsky.

夜空中星星向我眨眼睛。

15.Itfeltliketheamber-likesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofhisskin.

他感覺琥珀般的陽光親吻著他的每一寸肌膚。

16.Clustersofstarsdecoratethevastskylikesparklingofjewels.

繁星像閃閃發(fā)光的珠寶一樣裝飾了浩瀚的天空。

17.1wasdisturbedbytheannoyingsoundoftherain.

淅淅瀝瀝的雨聲擾亂了我的思緒。

18.Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds.

天空陰沉，烏云密布。

19.Theskywasacurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofjewels.

天空是濃濃的灰色，伴著擁擠的朵朵云。

20.Thethunderwasrumblinginthedistance.

遠(yuǎn)處雷聲隆隆。

21.Therainwaspouringdown.

雨在傾盆而下。

22.Rainsplashedagainstthewindows.

雨點(diǎn)啪啦啪啦打在窗戶上。

23.Thepurefeatherysnowflakesdancedintheair,makingabeautifulpicture.

鵝毛般純潔的雪花在空中飛舞，像一幅美麗的圖畫。

24.Thefrozensnowcrunchedunderourfeet.

凍結(jié)的雪在我們的腳下嘎吱作響。

25.Agentlewarmbreezestrokedhishead,comfortingallhistiredness.

一陣和煦的微風(fēng)拂過他的頭，撫慰了他所有的疲憊。

26.Thebreezegentlykissedhercheeks.

微風(fēng)輕柔地親吻著她的臉龐。

27.Theicywindstartedhowling,stingingmyface.

寒風(fēng)開始咆哮，刺痛了我的臉。

28.Windandrainnowwhippedthehouse.

風(fēng)和雨像鞭子一樣擊打著屋子。

29.Snowblanketedeveryrooftopandweighedonthebranchesofoldtrees.

雪覆蓋了每一個屋頂，壓在老樹的枝丫上。

30.Thesunwasatitshighest.TheheatbeatdownonmyheadasifIwasbaconunderthegrill.

太陽處于最高點(diǎn)，熱浪擊打在頭上，我好像烤架下的培根一樣。

31.Thewaterkeptrising.Twohourspassed.Hedidnotdaretomoveaninchforfearofslipping.

不斷上升。兩個小時過去了。他不敢動一英寸，怕滑倒。

32.Theanimalsgrewrestlessasifinanticipationofadisaster.

動物們變得焦躁不安，好像在等待一場災(zāi)難。

33.Theroaringfireswallowedthewholehouse.怒火吞噬了整個房子。

諺語積累

1.Therearefourseasonsinaday,tenmilesindifferentdays.一天有四季，十里不同天。

2.Ifyoudon*tgotoSongguTemple,youwillfeeluneasyathome.不至松谷庵，回家心不安。

3.Youcan*tgotoTianduPeakandvisitthemountains.不上天都峰、游山一場空。

4.SpringisbrightontheYunwaiPeakandtenthousandtreesareredaftertheazaleablossoms.

云外峰上春光明，杜鵑開后萬樹紅。

5.Themoonshinesbetweenpines,andtheclearspringstonesflowupward.明月松間照J(rèn)青泉石上流。

6.Blackcloudsriseinthenorthwestandthunderstormsareboundtocome.西北起黑云,雷雨必來臨。

7.OldancestorsofDongbifengandRain.東比風(fēng)、下雨的老祖宗。

8.Heavyfogisonlythree,afterthreecloudyandrainydays.大霧不過三,過三陰雨天。

9.Redskyatnight,sailorsdelight.Redskyinthemorning,sailortakewarning.早霞不出門,晚霞行千里。

10.Haloaroundthesunormoon,rainorsnowsoon.日暈三更雨，月暈午時風(fēng)。

11.Whenthestarsbegintohuddle,theearthwillsoonbecomeapuddle.月明星稀。

12.Whenladybugsswarm,expectadaythafswarm.螞蟻搬家，天將雨。

13.Ifbeesstayathome,rainwillsooncome.iftheyflyaway,finewillbetheday蜜蜂遲歸，雨來風(fēng)吹。

14.Mothernatureisgood,alsocoldbutcher.大自然是善良的慈母，同時也是冷酷的屠夫。

15.Raincomesaftersunshine,andafteradarkcloud,aclearsky.晴日之后有雨水，烏云過后見青天。

萬能寫作模板

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Earlyoneweekendmorning,Iwassleepinglikealogwhenthetelephonerang.WhenIansweredIheardmy

Grandma'svoice“Hey,sweetheart.Ihavemissedyousomuchlately.Whydon'tyoucometothecountrysideand

enjoysomefineviews?^^sheasked."Dad,Grandmaisinvitingustoherhome,^^Ishoutedtomyfatherwhowas

busyinthekitchen.6tFinewithme,“herespondedinacasualtone.Afteraquickbreakfast,wedrovetoGrandma's.

Oncewearrived,wewereboththrilledbythebreathtakinglandscape.Theplumtreesinthebackyardwere

ripewithfruit,whilemillionsofwildflowerscoloredthevalley.Grandmaprepareddeliciouslunchincludingher

specialhomemadeapplejam,whichwasmyfavorite.Seeingmygreedyeyes,grandmasaid“Takesomewhenyou

leave,andI'vegotplentystoredinthecellar（地窖）Talkingandlaughing,wedidn'tevennoticethatitwaslate

intheafternoon,thoughsomewhatcoolerthanithadbeenthatmorning.Grandmasuggestedthatwetakeher

homemadewoodenboatforatouralongthenearbyriver.

Seatedintheboat,lookingupatthesky,Ifeltlikethecloudsweregreetinguscheerfullyfromabove.Inthe

vastfields,thegoldentreeswerelikebridesinthesun.Thebreezeskimmedoverthesurfaceofthefield,carrying

thesweetsmelloftheflowers.ItwaslikeapicturepaintedbyoneoftheDutchmasters."Itissonicetospend

somequalitytimewithfamily,9,Dadmurmured.6tItfeelslikewe'reonanadventure,9,1added.6tIfsbeensomuch

fun!^^

Whilewewereadmiringthesplendidsettingaroundus,theweatherstartedgettinghotandhumidagain.At

first,weignoredthischange,butwhendadlookedupatthesky,hesawdark,lowcloudswereapproachingus.

Thenafiercegale（大風(fēng)）sprangup.Lightningflashedwithintheblackclouds,followedbyaroarofthunder.

"Row!"Dadshouted,trembling,tcAtornado（龍卷風(fēng)）iscoming!,9

Therewasnotimetothink.Werowedasfastaswecould.

Grandmaopenedthedoorforus.

［高考真題】

（2023年浙江卷1月）

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend'sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmand

walkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmy

attention,soIenteredit.Itwasahummingbird（蜂鳥），desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredin

spider-webs（蛛網(wǎng)）andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.

Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswas

thelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.

WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Iremovedthe

stickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,shemadenoattempttofly.Perhapsshehadbeen

strugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?

AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.I

stopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.

Hovering（懸停），sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreature

lookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.

Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthewindow.AsI

wasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenter

ofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectly

intomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.Foramoment,allwerespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,

“Shemusthavecometosaygoodbye.^^

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。琦

Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.

Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.

【名校模擬題提升練】

L（2023江蘇鹽城?高三階段練習(xí)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇

完整的短文。

Oneday,someyoungpeoplefromalocalrehabilitation（康復(fù)）centervisitedawildlifepark.Tippi,aguide,

stoodbeforeacheetah（獵豹）.“HernameisSubira.She'sathree-year-oldcheetah,9,shetoletheaudience.

Allthevisitorssittinginthechairswereamazedbythecheetah'sbeauty,exceptateenageboy,Cory.He

pulledalongfaceandmadenoises,showinghisboredom.

Tippicontinued,t6Thecheetahisthefastestanimalonearth.^^“Aren'tyou,honey?^^Sheaskedinacheerful

tone,lookingatthecheetahlyingatopatree.GivingSubiraadirtylook,Coryreplied,4tOh,justaskinnycat.Next!

Bringoutthestupidtigersorwhateversowecangetthisoverwith!”However,thecheetahgentlylookedatCory

andmakeahappysound.t4Ithinkshelikesyou,^^TippitoldCory."Idon'tcare,^^theboyjustreplied.

WhathadhappenedtoCory?Whywashesoangry?TheboyhaddreamedofsomedayplayingMajorLeague

Baseballandhavingmanyfans.Heknewhehadapromisingfuture.Thatwasbeforethecaraccident.Init,helost

hislegandalsolosthishope,joyandspirit.Hefeltuselessandhopeless.

Nowhesatinawheelchair,angryattheworld.Hewasheretodayonanother"boringfieldtrip^^fromthe

rehabilitationprogram.Suddenly,thecreaturejumpeddown.Seemingtoshowherskills,sheimmediatelyranfast

forward.atOh,she'ssobeautiful,thecrowdsaid.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

“Sheonlyhasthreelegs!”someonesuddenlysaid,surprised.

Atlast,Corysmiled,withhiseyesshiningwithhopeandconfidenceinhisprofessionalfuture.

2.（2023?廣東?高三校聯(lián)考階段練習(xí)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一

篇完整的短文。

Caughtinaflood

Maryandherparentsweredownstairsinthelivingroom.Marywaslookingthroughthewindowsatthe

endlessrainoutside.Ithadbeenrainingnon-stopforthreedays.Shehadneverseenastormthisbad.Itwasmaking

hernervous.Thewindroaredandtherainbeatontheroofandwindows.Dadwaslisteningtoaweatherreporton

theradio,whileMumwasputtingtheirimportantdocumentsanddisastersuppliesintoabag.

“Mum,Dad；'saidMarysuddenly,t4Ithinkweshouldleavehererightaway!”

"No,"saidDad."It'stoolate:Theradiosaysthecityhasalreadybeenflooded.

“Wecandriveourcarthroughthefloodwater.Lefsusleave!I'mreallyscared!,,criedMary."Wecan'tdothat,

honey,9,explainedMum,"otherwisethemovingwatercouldwashthecaraway!”

Marywalkedtothedoor.Shewascurioustoseehowmuchwatertherewasoutside.

“Don'topenthedoor!^^shoutedMumandDadatthesametime.t6Thewatermayfloodin!”

Dadmovedthedinnertableagainstthedoor,incasethefloodwaterforcedthedooropen.Mumwavedto

Marytositonthesofa."Mary,don'tworry.Everything'sgoingtobeOK,“shesaidsoftly,tryingherbestto

comfortMary.Hervoicewascalm,butMarycouldtellshewasworriedtoo.

Withoutsayingasingleword,Dadwalkedtothesofa,satdownandhuggedhiswifeanddaughter.Thesudden

silenceinthehouseseemedtomakethewindandrainmorefrighteningoutside.Whatcouldtheydo?

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段開頭語已為你寫好。

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Allofasudden,thefloodwaterforcedthedooropen.

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Beingupstairs,theybreathedasighofrelief.

3.（2023?吉林長春?東北師大附中?？寄M預(yù)測）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,

使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

AsHurricaneLanboredownonFlorida,manyresidentswhostayedputfoundthemselvesunabletoleave

eveniftheytried.Forhourstheywereforcedtofightheavywindsandattempttoescapefloodinginsidelong-loved

homesthathadbecomefrightening,deadlytraps.Withindays,around100deathsinthestatewouldbeattributedto

thehurricane,manyofthemwereolderresidentswhodrowned.

Whenthewaterslippedinunderthedooroftheirhome,itwasjustaglimmeronthefloor,asignthatitwas

timetogo.ItwasWednesday,Sept.28,aroundnoon,andBishopwokeuphertwobrothers,whohadbeenresting

afterlunch.Shepulledthewheelchairuptotheoldest,Russell,67.Herotherbrother,Todd,63,couldmanagewith

awalker.

Bothmenhadbeenbomwithcerebralpalsy(腦癱)，andtheirmentaldevelopmentwaslikethatofayoung

child.About10yearsago,theystartedshowingsignsofParkinson'sdisease.Buttheyfoundjoyintheir

surroundings.Toddlikedcollectingcansatthebeach.Russelllovedridingthebusandgoingtoparks.Bishop,61,

wastheirlifeline,theirlittlesisterwhohadlongfeltanobligationtokeepthemsafe.

“We'vegottogetgoing!"sheshoutedtothem.Shewenttoopenthefrontdoor.Itwouldnotmove.The

weightofthewaterontheothersidehadmadeitshut.Sherushedtotrythedoortothegarage.It,too,wasstuck.

Thafswhenthehousebegantoflood.Itwentfromankle-deeptoknee-deepinlessthanfiveminutes.Bishopknew

thattherewasnowayout.

NowBishopandherbrothersweretrapped.At12:34p.m.,shecalled911butcouldn'tgetthrough.Therewas

nooneshecouldgetintouchwith.Totryherfortune,shetextedaneighbor,Walters,whowasalwaystherewhen

neighborswereinneed,"Water'scomingin.^^Aroundher,shecouldhearthediningroomhutch(餐具柜)tipping

andcrashing,thechinabreaking,therefrigeratortopplingover.

注意：

(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Theonlywaytogowasup,soBishopguidedhertwobotherstothestairs.

Bishopsankintodespair,butshenoticeditseemedwaterstoppedcomingin.

4.（2023?河南?高三校聯(lián)考階段練習(xí)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一

篇完整的短文。

WorkingasatourguideinthescenicWhiteIslandofNewZealandsoundslikeadreamcometrueforan

adventurousman,unlessofcourse,theincrediblehappens.

At21,JackStevensonwasworkingasatourguideonWhiteIslandwhenhewascaughtinthemiddleofa

killervolcaniceruption.Consideredanactivevolcano,manyhavequestionedthedecisiontoallowtouriststovisit

WhiteIsland.Butitssplendidscenery,warmandskillednativesthereandadventurousexplorationattractmore

than18,000peopletraveltothatspoteveryyear.

Jackalongwithagroupoftouristshikeditswindingtrails,admiredtheimpressivebeauty,divedintoitscold

lakes,andfishedfortreatsinitsstreams.Ofcourse,heknewthemountainwasanactivevolcano...Stillthereisa

villageatthefootofit.

SuddenlyJackfoundhimselfinthemiddleofthedeadliestandmostdestructivevolcaniceventinitshistory.

Blacksmokerolleddownthesideofthemountaintowardsthevillageassoonastheyfelttheearthquake,andthen

ashandrockeruptedeverywhere.Men,womenandchildrentriedtheirbesttogoasfarawayfromthevolcanoas

possibleasthelavamelteditswayquickly.

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Duringthehurrytoescape,Jackofferedtohelp.

JackisnowbackhomeinWhakatane,fromwherehecanseeWhiteIslandandreadthelettersfromtourists.

5.（2023?浙江金華校考階段練習(xí)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇

完整的短文。

MotherandIspentmorningscleaningupthedirtthatblewintoourhouse.Mothersaidallthedustwasdueto

thedrought,notonlyhereinourvillagebutallovertheGreatPlains.

Thedirtcoveredeverything.Whenmysister,Amy,andIwalkedtoschool,weworekerchiefs（方頭巾）over

ourmouthssothatwedidn'tbreatheinthedirt.Whentheairqualitywassobadthattheschoolwasclosed,we

stayedathomeandhelpedMotherputwetsheetsoverthewindows,butthedirtalwaysfoundawayin.

LastSunday,therewasnodirtintheair,onlybrightsunshineandaclearbluesky.Afterbreakfast,Father

headedouttothefarmtocheckonthecattlewhileMotherstarteddoingsomewashing.AmyandIplayedinthe

yard.Surprisingly,thetemperaturesuddenlydropped.

ThenMothershoutedfromthehouse,''Christine,youandAmygetinside,quick,now!”

Ilookedtowardsthewestandsawahugeblackcloud.Allthebirdsflewaway."Amy,gowithMother!”I

shouted,'TilwarnFather.9,

Amyrantowardsthehouse.Thestormhitsofast,andIbarelysawherclimbthesteps.Inaninstanttheday

turnedintonight.Istumbled（絆倒）overourbicyclesleftcarelesslyintheyard.Iscreamed,hopingmyvoicewould

leadFatherback.

Thedirtandsandstung（刺痛）myskinlikeathousandbees.Ineededtogettoashelter.Coveringmyfacewith

onehand,Imovedtowardsourcarwhichwasparkedintheyardandopenedthedoor.DirtflewinwithmeasI

closedthedoor.Fatherwasstilloutthere!Ineededtohelphimfindthecar.

Isearchedthedashboard（儀表板）andfoundtheswitchforthefrontlights.WouldFatherseetheminthe

darkness?Washesafe?Ipushedthehorn（喇叭）againandagain,hopingFatherwouldhearit.IpusheduntilIhad

nomorestrengthinmyarms.

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請按如下格式作答。

Suddenly,Father'sfaceappearedatthewindow.

Finally,thewindstoppedandthedustbegantosettle.

6.（2023?浙江高三檢測）閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

IlivewithmyhusbandinSanLuisObispo,California,aboutthreemilesfromthebeach.Everyfewyears,the

humpbackwhalescomeintothebayforafewdayswhilethey'remigrating.November2020wasoneofthose

times,sowetookoutouryellowdoublekayak（皮艇）towatchthewildlife.Wepaddledoutthelengthofthepier

（碼頭）andsawseals,dolphins,andabout20whalesfeedingonsilverfish.Wewereinawewatchingthese

gracefulgiants-eachoneabout50feetlong-breachandspraythroughtheirblowholes.Welaughedwhenthey

turnedtheirsidefinssothatitlookedasiftheywerewavingatus.

Atthetime,myfriendLizwasstayingwithus.Thenextday,Iaskedherifshewantedtogooutonthewater

toseethem.

“Noway,“saidLiz,now65.Shewasnotanexperiencedkayakerandwasterrifiedthatthekayakwould

overturnwhileweweresurroundedbyhungrywhales."There'snothingtoworryabout,9,1assuredher."Thecraft

isstable,andwecanturnbackanytime.I'velearnedsomewherethatwhaleshaveenormousmouthsbuttinythroats.

Anythingtheycan'tswallowtheyspitrightout."Aftersomecajoling（勸誘），shefinallyagreedtojoinme.Ididn't

wanthertomissthismagnificentexperienceandregretitlater.

LizandIgotoutonthewaterat8:30thefollowingmorning.Therewerealreadyabout15otherkayakersand

paddleboardersinthebay.ItwaswarmforNovember,soweworeT-shirtsandleggings.Afterahalf-hour,wehad

ourfirstwhalesightingjustpastthepier:twohumpbacksswimmingtowardus.Howamazingtobethatclosetoa

creaturethatsize,Ithoughtasthewhalesdippedunderthewaterline.

Whenwhalesgo