技法7|畫龍點(diǎn)睛的結(jié)束語(yǔ)[技法綜述]結(jié)束語(yǔ)即結(jié)尾。一篇英語(yǔ)作文如果結(jié)尾寫得好，就會(huì)強(qiáng)化閱卷老師對(duì)你所寫作文的好感，從而給你的作文打高分。1.如何寫好結(jié)尾？結(jié)尾有概括全文內(nèi)容，進(jìn)一步強(qiáng)調(diào)或肯定文章的中心思想，升華主題的作用。主要有以下幾種寫法：(1)照應(yīng)開頭things.Andnjoysbeautifulthings.Andseeingsunrisemaybeoneofthemostunusualexperiencesinourlife.(2)復(fù)述中心Wemustprotectthewateraswellasfindwaystoreuseit.Ifnot,thelastdropofwaterwillbeateardrop.(3)總結(jié)式Inaword,afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Mayallofustreasurefriendship.(4)引用式Ibelievemydreamwilletrueonedaybecause“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”(5)希望式TheInternetisnowveryimportanttomebecauseitnotonlygivesmealouseful.Ibutalsoitisveryuseful.Ilikeitandhopeyouwilllikeittoo.(6)問題式Willyoujoinusinthenextcentury?Howromanticandfantasticitwillbe!2.書信的結(jié)束語(yǔ)書信的結(jié)束語(yǔ)，.../Looking...okingforwardto.../Lookingforwardto...。另外我們還可以使用一些功能句式，向?qū)Ψ奖硎居焉频母兄x或親切的問候，...望或期待等。除了I'mlookingforwardto...之外，常用的結(jié)束語(yǔ)還有：求職信可說：Iwouldbegratefulifyouwouldconsidermyapplication.Ihopetohavetheopportunityofaninterview.咨詢信可說：I'mwaitingforyourearlyreply.感謝信可說：Imustthankyouagainforyourgeneroushelp.Pleaseacceptmygratitude,nowandalways.建議信可說：Intheend,Iwillbeverygladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionspractical.I'llappreciateyourtakingmysuggestionintoaccount....可說：I'dappreciateitifyou...assoonaspossible.邀請(qǐng)信可說：I'mlongingtohearfromyou.[閱卷現(xiàn)場(chǎng)](2016·全國(guó)卷Ⅰ)假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外資公司兼職，已寫好申請(qǐng)書和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷(resume)。給外教MsJenkins寫信，請(qǐng)她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。考生習(xí)作點(diǎn)評(píng)與優(yōu)化作文提升Ifyoucanhelpmeyou.Illverythankyou.Ihopetohearfromyourreplyasearlyaspossible.[名師點(diǎn)評(píng)]1.表達(dá)檔次較低...as...aspossible本來是一種很好的表達(dá)方式，也由于early的錯(cuò)用而大打折扣(應(yīng)為assoonaspossible)。2.verythankyou與hearfromyourreply更是漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)，屬于低級(jí)的錯(cuò)誤。[嘗試優(yōu)化](參考范文)Lookingforwardtoyourreply.AndI'dbereallythankful.(滿分作文)Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakethetroubletodosomuchforme.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.[隨堂訓(xùn)練]Ⅰ.請(qǐng)按要求翻譯下列句子1．不同的旅行方式都能讓人們愉快，但我還是最喜歡乘火車旅行。Differentwaysoftravellingcanmakepeoplehappy,butIliketravellingbytrainbest.(照應(yīng)開頭)2．愛是給予，愛是關(guān)注他人，我將盡力把我所有的愛奉獻(xiàn)給他人。Loveisgivingandloveispayingattentiontoothers.Iwilldomybesttogiveallmylovetoothers.(復(fù)述中心)【導(dǎo)學(xué)號(hào)：】3．從這次經(jīng)歷中，我了解到細(xì)心非常重要，尤其在考試時(shí)，我們?cè)僭鯓蛹?xì)心都不為過。Fromthisexperience,Ilearnedthatbeingcarefulisveryimportantandthatwecan'tbetoocareful,especiallyinexaminations.(總結(jié)式)4．不管怎樣，有不同的文化，就有不同的習(xí)俗，如果你能“入鄉(xiāng)隨俗”，就會(huì)更好地享受這里的生活。Anyhow,differentcultures,differentcustoms.Ifyou“DoastheRomansdowheninRome.”，youwillenjoymoreofyourstayhere.(引用式)5．作為一名學(xué)生，我非常支持這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)，因?yàn)樗苡幸饬x，對(duì)學(xué)生很有幫助，我希望此類活動(dòng)在將來能繼續(xù)開展下去。Asastudent,Iamstronglyfortheactivitybecauseitisverymeaningfulandhelpful.Ihopethatthiskindofactivitywillcontinueinthefuture.(希望式)6．找一個(gè)伙伴和我們一起去如何？這樣我們可以互相幫助并且在旅途中保持愉快。Howaboutfindingapaniontobewithus?So,wecanhelpeachotherandbehappyduringthetrip.(問題式)Ⅱ.書面表達(dá)(電子郵件)(2017·濟(jì)南市模擬)假設(shè)你是李華，上周日你校舉行了英國(guó)姊妹學(xué)校(sisterschool)來訪歡迎會(huì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給你的英國(guó)筆友Jim寫一封電子郵件，向他描述歡迎會(huì)的情況并談?wù)勀惝?dāng)時(shí)的感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好。DearJim，Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours，LiHua【參考范文】DearJim，WehadawelepartyforasisterschoolfromtheUKinthehall.Longbefore3pm,allthestudentsinmyclasscouldn'twaittoetothehall.Ourteachersandparentswereinvitedtotheparty,too.First,ourmonitormadeaspeech.Hethankedourteachersandparentssincerely.Next,wegavepresentstoeachother.Themostexcitingmomentwastheshowtime.Wesang,dancedandplayedgames.Our