專題09-Unit3Onthemove-體育活動ContentsPart1單元話題寫作詞塊背誦Part2單元話題寫作必備句式Part3單元話題寫作模板與經(jīng)典例題賞析Part4單元話題寫作精練Part5單元話題寫作話題拓展Part1單元話題寫作詞塊背誦1．competefor為……而競爭2．competeagainst與……競爭3．breaktherecord打破紀(jì)錄4．setanewworldrecord創(chuàng)造新的世界紀(jì)錄5．winagold/silver/coppermedal贏得金/銀/銅牌6．folkactivity民間活動7．publicfigure公眾人物8．folkmusic民間音樂9．putonaperformance演出10．reducediseases減少疾病11．havearest休息12．makeahit流行13．Sciencefictionfilm科幻片14．relievesb.fromstress使某人擺脫壓力15．Beaddictedtodoingsth.沉迷于做某事16．showgreatpassionto對……表現(xiàn)出極大的熱情17．a(chǎn)rouseaheateddiscussion引起激烈的討論18．a(chǎn)closegame勢均力敵的比賽19．haveagift/talentfor有……天賦20．sparenoefforttodosth.不遺余力做某事21．cultivateone’spatience培養(yǎng)某人的耐心22．preferAtoB比起B(yǎng)更喜歡A23．overcomedifficulties克服困難24．ingoodform狀態(tài)好25．massesports群眾運動26．indoor/outdoorsports室內(nèi)/室外運動Part2元話題寫作必備句式1．Sportsareperhapsthemostpopularformofrelaxationthatalmostallcanenjoy.體育運動可能是幾乎所有的人都可享受的最大眾化的娛樂形式。2．Takingexerciseregularlycannotonlybuildupourbodybutalsohelpusrelievestress.有規(guī)律的運動不僅可以強身健體，而且可以幫助我們釋放壓力。3．Lastweek,wecarriedoutasurveyregardingthetopic“whoisyouridol”among200students.上個星期，我們在200名學(xué)生中做了一個關(guān)于“誰是你的偶像”的話題調(diào)查。4．Itwasnotuntilthelate1800sthatshootingdevelopedintoasportitem.射擊直到19世紀(jì)末才發(fā)展成為一項體育項目。5．Itisobviousthatmusicisanessentialpartinourlife,whichisthesourceofjoysandinspiration.很顯然，音樂在我們生活中是不可或缺的一部分，它是樂趣和靈感的源泉。6．HewassoaddictedtoplayingcomputergamesthathefailedtopasstheEnglishexam.他如此沉迷于玩電腦游戲以至于沒有通過英語考試。Part3單元話題寫作經(jīng)典例題賞析應(yīng)用文◆經(jīng)典例題最近，劉畊宏健身操的流行引發(fā)了新一波的運動熱潮。請你寫一篇短文，向英文校報投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1．你最喜歡的運動；2．這項運動對你的影響。注意：1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。TheSportILikeMost___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:TheSportILikeMostAsthesayinggoes,“Lifeliesinmovement.”Amongvarioussports,Ihaveastrongpreferenceforvolleyball.YoucannotimaginehowweakIwasbeforejuniorhighschoolwhenIwouldoftencatchacoldandeasilybecomeoutofbreath.ThenItookupvolleyball,fromwhichIhavegainedplentyofbenefits.Throughdailytraining,notonlydoesithelpbuildupmystrengthanddevelopmycharacter,butitalsomakesmeawareoftheimportanceofteamspirit.Besides,bycooperatingwithmyteammates,Imakemorefriends.Allinall,volleyballgivesmeabodyfullofstrengthandamindcrazyaboutsports.Let’senjoythepleasureandbenefitsofsportstogether!【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于說明文。要求考生寫一篇短文，介紹自己最喜歡的運動以及這項運動對自己的影響?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累各種不同的：various→diverse許多、大量：plentyof→agreatmanyof/agreatnumberof獲得：gain→obtain總而言之：allinall→inaword/inshort2.句式拓展簡單句變強調(diào)句原句：Allinall,volleyballgivesmeabodyfullofstrengthandamindcrazyaboutsports.拓展句：Allinall,itisvolleyballthatgivesmeabodyfullofstrengthandamindcrazyaboutsports.【點睛】【高分句式1】YoucannotimaginehowweakIwasbeforejuniorhighschoolwhenIwouldoftencatchacoldandeasilybecomeoutofbreath.（運用了how引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）【高分句式2】Throughdailytraining,notonlydoesithelpbuildupmystrengthanddevelopmycharacter,butitalsomakesmeawareoftheimportanceofteamspirit.（運用了部分倒裝）讀后續(xù)寫◆經(jīng)典例題I'mcrazyaboutrunning.Sometimesthepainofrunningcanhaveamagicinfluenceonarunner.Throughoutanygivenrace,youaresuffering.Yourlungsfeellikethey'rebeingsqueezed

(擠壓)bysomethingunseen.Butitisinthispainthatagreatrunneriscreated.Myfirstcross-countrycoachtoldmethateveryraceisrunwithpatienceanddetermination.I'vecarriedthisadvicewithmeforhundredsofmiles.Iespeciallyrememberthe5milesofrunninginonerace,wherehiswordsencouragedmealot.Thatdaytheweatherwasperfect.Ianddozensofrunnersgatheredatthestartinglinetodosomelast-minutepreparationsfortherunning.Then,welinedupandgotreadytostart.Therewasabriefmomentbeforethegungaveasignalofrunning.Inthatmomentofgreatstress,Ideterminedtopushmyselftorunasfastaspossible,hopingtomakemycoachproud,whowaswaitingformeatthefinishline.Whenthesoundof"Bang"cameup,wewereoff.Runningbetweenrunners,Imanagedtoworkmywayupinthefirst400metersandpassedmanyracersonmysides.Butoutofgoodsportsmanship,weeachsaida"goodjob"or"keepup"toeverypersonwepassed.Althoughwewerecompetitors,runningwasaconnectionweallshared.Thefirstmilepassedquicklyinafeelingofexcitement.Itwasnotchallenginginthebeginningoftherunning.ButIknewitwouldbeharderandharderinthefollowingmiles.Imadefulluseoftherunningskillsthatmycoachhadtaughtme.IcheckedthatIwasdoingeverythingright,breathinginthroughmynose,keepingmyhandsrelaxedandpumping(快速擺動)myarms.However,theshadowoftirednessdancedbeforeme.AnywayItriedtopushitoutofmymind.Withtimegoingby,thecompetitionbecamefiercer.Everyrunnertriedtheirbesttoruninordertogainagoodplaceintherace.Audiencealongthetrackshoutedandcheeredus.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。EventuallyIreachedthefinalmile.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Unfortunately,Isuddenlyfelldown.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Possibleversion:EventuallyIreachedthefinalmile.ItwasthenthatIfeltextremelytiredandsweatfelldownmyface.Manyrunnersintheracehadfallenbehind,butIrefusedtobeoneofthem.Instead,Ichosetopumpmylegsalittlefasterandpushmyselfalittleharder.Asthelasthalfmilewasnear,thenumberofpeoplealongthetrackincreased.Aroundthenextcorner,Icouldseemycoachwavingtomeingreatexcitement.Itriedtorunfaster.Unfortunately,Isuddenlyfelldown.Ifeltgreatpainanddiscouraged.Justatthatmoment,theaudienceshouted,"Comeon,girl!”"Watchout!”"Keepup!”Meanwhile,arunnerbehindmecametomeandgavemealift.Iwasreallygratefulandencouraged.Istoodupandranforthefinal400meters.WhenIfinallysailedoverthefinishline,Inearlycriedwithrelief.Iwonthethirdplaceintherace.MycoachwasproudofmeandIfeltgreattoo.【分析】本文以時間為線索展開，講述了作者一次5英里跑步比賽的經(jīng)歷，直到最后一英里作者都是領(lǐng)先，但是不小心摔倒了，最終得了第三名?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“最終我到達了最后一英里?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫作者在最后一英里的領(lǐng)先地位以及作者期盼成功的喜悅。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“不幸的是，我突然摔倒了?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫作者跌倒后的痛苦悲傷和旁人給她的鼓勵。2.續(xù)寫線索：最后一英里——領(lǐng)先——期盼成功——摔倒——被鼓勵——第三名3.詞匯激活行為類①.汗水順臉流下：sweatfalldownmyface/sweatflowdownmyface②.增長：increase/beontherise③.幫我站起來：givemealift/helpmetomyfeet情緒類①.極其：extremely/awfully/totally②.感到驕傲：beproudof/takepridein【點睛】[高分句型1]ItwasthenthatIfeltextremelytiredandsweatfelldownmyface.（運用了強調(diào)句句型）[高分句型2]WhenIfinallysailedoverthefinishline,Inearlycriedwithrelief.（運用了when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）Part4單元話題寫作精練應(yīng)用文Writing1假定你是李華，你的筆友Leo想了解你校下周舉行的秋季運動會，請你用英語給他寫一封電子郵件。內(nèi)容要點：1.比賽目的；2.比賽的時間；3.比賽內(nèi)容。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：接力賽relayrace___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】參考范文：DearLeo,Hi,I’mLiHua.Howiseverythinggoing?Ourschoolwillholdasportsmeetingnextweekontheplayground.AndI’mwritingthislettertosharesomethingwithyou.Theopeningceremonywillstartat9amandtheheadteacherwilldeliveraspeech.Thesportsmeetingaimstoenrichthestudents’schoollife.What’smore,wecanfeelrelaxedduringthismeeting.Thereareavarietyofeventsforstudentstochoosefrom,suchasrunning,longjumping,relayracesandsomefungames.Lookingforwardtoreceivingyourearlyreply!Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給筆友Leo寫一封信，介紹下周即將舉辦的秋季運動會。信件內(nèi)容包括：比賽目的；比賽的時間；比賽內(nèi)容。【詳解】1.詞匯積累舉辦：hold→launch此外：what’smore→besides各種各樣的：avarietyof→various/varietiesof例如：suchas→forinstance2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Ourschoolwillholdasportsmeetingnextweekontheplayground.AndI’mwritingthislettertosharesomethingwithyou.拓展句：Becauseourschoolwillholdasportsmeetingnextweekontheplayground,I’mwritingthislettertosharesomethingwithyou.【點睛】【高分句型1】Theopeningceremonywillstartat9amandtheheadteacherwilldeliveraspeech.（運用了and連接兩個一般將來時簡單句）【高分句型2】Thereareavarietyofeventsforstudentstochoosefrom,suchasrunning,longjumping,relayracesandsomefungames.（運用了therebe句型和固定短語對活動進行解釋）Writing2假設(shè)你叫李華，你的英國朋友Jane來信，談?wù)摿怂钕矏鄣捏w育運動，并希望了解你最喜愛的體育運動。請根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一封回信。要點如下：1.最喜歡的運動是什么；2.為什么喜歡這項運動；3.運動給你帶來什么好處。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearJane,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Lihua【答案】DearJane,

Iamgladtoknowyoubegantolovesports.Youwillbemuchstrongerdayslater.Tobesure,sportisanimportantpartofmylife.Myfavoritesportisbasketball.Firstly,itcanhelpmetokeephealthyandhappy.Besides,Icanmakealotoffriendsthroughplayingbasketballandwecanshareoursuccessesandfailures.Icanalsolearnalotfromplayingbasketballwithothers,anditmakesmeunderstandthatthereisno“I”intheteam.Withtimegoingon,Ihavelearnedmanypracticalskillsonplayingbasketball.

BestwishesYours,

Lihua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國朋友Jane回信，信的主要內(nèi)容包括告訴他自己最喜歡的運動，闡明原因以及這項運動所帶來的好處?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累喜愛：love→enjoy首先：Firstly→Firstofall健康的：healthy→fit此外：besides→what’smore2.句式拓展簡單句改復(fù)合句原句：Withtimegoingon,Ihavelearnedmanypracticalskillsonplayingbasketball.拓展句：Astimegoeson,Ihavelearnedmanypracticalskillsonplayingbasketball.【點睛】【高分句型1】Iamgladtoknowyoubegantolovesports.(運用了賓語從句)【高分句型2】Withtimegoingon,Ihavelearnedmanypracticalskillsonplayingbasketball.(運用了with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作狀語)Writing3你的學(xué)校近期舉行了一次籃球比賽。假定你是學(xué)校英語報的記者，請寫一篇短文，報道這場比賽的決賽。內(nèi)容包括：1.比賽的時間、地點和人物；2.賽前的準(zhǔn)備情況、比賽的過程及結(jié)果；3.你對于這次活動的評論。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】OnApril10,thebasketballfinalbetweenClass1andClass2beganonthebasketballcourt.Studentsspentalotoftimepreparingforthebasketballgamebeforethesportsevent.Practisingdayinanddayoutwasnoteasyforthem.However,eachteamfoughtforwinningthegame.Atfirst,Class2fellbehindClass1inthegame,buttheydidn’tgiveupandseizedeveryopportunitytoattack.Intheend,Class2defeatedtheopponentwithoneshotintothebasket,whichwasbeyondeveryone’sexpectations.Asaresult,theirdreamcametrueandtheywonthegameduetothecooperationbetweenteammates.Ithinkthattheteamspiritisthekeytotheirremarkableperformanceandself-beliefalsocontributestotheirsuccess.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一篇短文，報道學(xué)校近期舉行的籃球比賽的決賽情況，內(nèi)容包括：1.比賽的時間、地點和人物；2.賽前的準(zhǔn)備情況、比賽的過程及結(jié)果；3.你對于這次活動的評論?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累為……做準(zhǔn)備：preparefor→makepreparationsfor首先：atfirst→firstofall抓住：seize→catchholdof由于：dueto→becauseof/owingto2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Asaresult,theirdreamcametrueandtheywonthegameduetothecooperationbetweenteammates.拓展句：Asaresult,theirdreamcametrueandtheywonthegamebecauseteammateshadgoodcooperation.【點睛】【高分句型1】Intheend,Class2defeatedtheopponentwithoneshotintothebasket,whichwasbeyondeveryone’sexpectations.(運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)【高分句型2】Ithinkthattheteamspiritisthekeytotheirremarkableperformanceandself-beliefalsocontributestotheirsuccess.(運用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)讀后續(xù)寫Writing1Rivaldowasplayingfootballfromtheageof4.Whenhewas7,hejoinedalocalfootballclub.Heattendedthetrainingregularlybutnevergotachancetoplayinmatches.Butthecoachhadfaithinhim.HetoldRivaldothatheshouldfocusonhitraining,andonedayhewouldgetthechance.Rivaldohadnootheroptionbuttocontinuetrainingintheclub.Hewastrainingveryhardandfocusedonimprovinghimself.Evenaftertwoyearsintheclub,heneverplayedinamatch.Hewasnotevenallowedtotravelalongwiththeteam.Onedaytheirclubhadacharitymatch,whereafamousfootballerwasachiefguest.Whiletheteamwasplanningtotravel,oneofthesupportstaffwhousedtotakecareofkitsgotill.So,theyneededsomeoneforthis.ThecoachthoughtthisshouldbeanopportunityforRivaldo.So,hetoldhimtotravelwiththeteamandtakecareofthekits.Othersupportstaffobjectedtoit,butheconvincedthem.Theteamreachedthestadium.Therewerealotofcrowdstowitnessthecelebrityfootballer.ForRivaldo,thisishisfirst-timeexperienceinthestadium.Hewashelpingtheotherplayerswiththekitsforthepre-matchtraining.ThecoachcameforachatwithRivaldo.HetoldRivaldo,“Youareplayingtoday.”Rivaldo,foramoment,gotfrozenandaskedhimwhy.Hesaid,“Oneoftheplayersfromtheteamgotinjuredwhiletraining.So,weareshortofplayers.Weneedsomeonetobeinthefieldtomakeit11.ButIknowyouaremorethanthat.So,goandproveyourself”.Therewasresistancefromthesupportstaff.LuckilyforRivaldo,thecoach,throughtheorganizingcommittee,convincedRivaldo’steammanagementtoallowhimtoplay.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Whenthematchstarted,Rivaldowasrunninglikeadeer.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afterthematch,thecelebrityfootballerwalkedtoRivaldo.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】APossibleVersionWhenthematchstarted,Rivaldowasrunninglikeadeer.Severaltimes,hetooktheballtotherightsidebutfailedtoscoreanygoal.Soonthecelebrityfootballerscoredaquickgoal.Thereweredeafeningcheersfromthesupporters.Therivalteamwasveryspiritedanddominatedthegame.Inthesecondhalf,Rivaldowonachancetopenetrateintothedefensesoftherivalteam.Agoalwasscored.Withthemoraleboosted,Rivaldo’steamtightenedtheirbeltsandplayedwithdetermination.Finally,therefereeblewthewhistleandthematchendedwithRivaldo’steamwinningby2-1goals.Afterthematch,thecelebrityfootballerwalkedtoRivaldo.Wearinganoteofexcitement,hespokehighlyofRivaldo’sperformance.WhenhelearnedthatitwasthefirsttimeRivaldohadplayedinamatch,heimmediatelyinvitedhimtoplayforthejuniorteam.Rivaldoperformedsowellthatlaterhewentontorepresenttheseniorteamandforhiscountry.Inlife,therewillbemanyroadblocks.Butyouhavetocontinueandwait.Whenthemomentcomes,grabitwithbothhandsandflytowardsyourdream.【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了Rivaldo從4歲開始踢足球，努力訓(xùn)練，即使在俱樂部呆了兩年，他也從未參加過一場比賽。直到一次慈善比賽上，Rivaldo被派上場，最終贏得了比賽，得到了足球明星的肯定。【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“比賽開始時，Rivaldo跑得像只鹿?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫Rivaldo參加比賽并獲勝的經(jīng)過。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“比賽結(jié)束后，這位足球明星走向Rivaldo?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫足球明星對Rivaldo的評價以及Rivaldo之后取得的成就。2.續(xù)寫線索：比賽開始——取得勝利——足球明星高度評價Rivaldo——Rivaldo代表國家參賽——感悟3.詞匯激活行為類開始：start/begin控制：dominate/control高度評價：speakhighlyof/thinkhighlyof情緒類立即：immediately/instantly鼓舞：spirited/inspired【點睛】[高分句型1]WhenhelearnedthatitwasthefirsttimeRivaldohadplayedinamatch,heimmediatelyinvitedhimtoplayforthejuniorteam.(運用了when引導(dǎo)狀語從句和that引導(dǎo)賓語從句)[高分句型2]Whenthemomentcomes,grabitwithbothhandsandflytowardsyourdream.(運用了when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句)Writing2Jennywasverynervous.Shehadaswimmingcompetitioninthemorningandcouldnotsleep.Shetossedandturnedallnight.Shewasnostrangertocompetition.Infact,shelovedit.Jennywasveryathleticandwasnotonlypartofaswimteam,butasoccerteam,aswell.Sheevenwonasoccerchampionshipwithherteammateslastyear.Butthisparticularswimmingcompetitionwasimportant.Shehadmadeitallthewaytothefinalsanddidn’twanttoletherteammatesdown.Whenheralarmwentoffat6:00am,shehitthesnoozebuttonandrolledontoherside,wishingshecouldjuststayinbedallday.Havingsleptsopoorly,Jennywasnotatallreadyfortheday.Afterafewminutes,shestretchedherarmsaboveherheadandyawnedbeforethrowinghercoversbackandclimbingoutofbed.Shewasterriblyanxiousaboutthecompetition,somuchthatshecouldn’teveneatbreakfast.Itfeltasthoughshegotbutterfliesinherstomach.Jenny’smotherlookedconcerned.“Youhavetoeatsomething,”shesaid.“It’simportanttokeepyourstrengthup.”“Iknow,I’mjustnothungrythismorning,”Jennyreplied,pickingathereggswithafork.Allshecouldthinkaboutwasfacingthecompetition.Whatifsheperformedpoorly?Whatifshedisappointedhercoachandteammates?Shewouldn’tbeabletoforgiveherself.Jenny’smomsensedherdaughter’sworryandgaveheracomfortingpatontheback.“You’llbegreat,dear.Justdoyourbest.That’sallthatmatters.”Jennyfeltabitofreliefandappreciatedhermother’skindwords.Butbythetimeshegottotheathleticclubwheretheswimmeetwasbeingheld,thatfeelingofcomforthaddisappeared.Shewenttothelockerroomtoprepareforthecompetition.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Whensheopenedhergymbag,shewasquitesurprisedtoseehersocceruniformandrealizedshehadgrabbedthewrongbag.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Jennyheadedfortheswimmingpoolwithabrightsmile.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Whensheopenedhergymbag,shewasquitesurprisedtoseehersocceruniformandrealizedshehadgrabbedthewrongbag.“Oh,no,whatastupidmistakeImade.”Shethought.Atthatpoint,Jennyburstintotearswithgreatdesperation.Shewantedtoreturnandgettherightbag.However,itwastoolate.Justthen,sheheardthefamiliarvoice.ItwasJenny’smotherthatbroughtherthebag.Hermothersaidgentlyandfirmly,“Don’tworry,everythingwillbefine,Ihavegreatconfidenceinyou.”SoJennygotchangedquickly.Jennyheadedfortheswimmingpoolwithabrightsmile.Shewasfilledwithconfidenceassherememberedhermother’sencouragement.Duringthecompetition,Jennythrewherselfintothecompetitionandachievedexcellentresults.Itwashermother’sencouragementthathelpedherachievesuccess.Shefeltluckytohavesuchanicemother.【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了Jenny要去參加游泳比賽，但是由于過于緊張，比賽當(dāng)天拿錯了運動包，幸運的是，Jenny的媽媽及時幫她送到了包，在媽媽的鼓勵下，Jenny在比賽中發(fā)揮出色，獲得了成功的故事?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫①由第一段句首內(nèi)容“當(dāng)她打開健身包時，她驚訝地看到了自己的足球服，并意識到自己拿錯了包”可知，第一段描述Jenny發(fā)現(xiàn)自己拿錯了包，感到絕望崩潰，但媽媽卻及時出現(xiàn)化解了危機，并積極鼓勵Jenny。②由第二段句首內(nèi)容“珍妮帶著燦爛的微笑向游泳池走去”可知，第二段描述Jenny的心理狀態(tài)發(fā)生了積極的改變，信心十足，全身心投入比賽，并獲得了成功。2.續(xù)寫線索：發(fā)現(xiàn)拿錯包——絕望——媽媽送包，鼓勵Jenny——信心十足——比賽取得成功3.詞匯激活行為類：返回：return→goback信心/信任某人：haveconfidencein→havefaithin充滿：befilledwith→befullof投入：throwoneselfintosth.→devoteoneselfintosth.情緒類：絕望：desperation→hopelessness溫柔地：gently→softly【點睛】【高分句型1】ItwasJenny’smotherthatbroughtherthebag.(運用了強調(diào)句)【高分句型2】Shewasfilledwithconfidenceassherememberedhermother’sencouragement.(運用了as引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句)Writing3Mymumandgrandmadrovemetoa5kmrace.Therewasafiercethunderstorm,andwhenwegotthere,Ihadtowaitforittopassbeneathanoverhang(屋檐)withtheotherrunners.Istartedtofeelalittlenervous,becausesomeofthepeopletherelookedreallyfast.Theyhadproperrunningshoesandlongskinnylegs.Theywerealldifferentages.Iwasn’twearingrunningclothes;justanormalT-shirtandshorts.Anhouraftertheofficialstarttimeeventhoughitwasstillraining,theraceorganiserssaidwecouldgo.Thatmorning,Iwasrunningconfidentlyandfeelingstrong.Theroutewentthroughaneighbourhoodandtherewerequiteafewpeoplecheeringuson,butIdidn’tseeanyfacesIknew.Itstartedtopouragain,butIloverunningintherain:ItkeepsmecoolandIcankeepgoingforlonger,evenwhenIgettired,whenIrun,Idon’twearawatchtoseewhatdistanceI’mat；Ijustfocusonmoving,breathingandhowmybodyfeels.Atonepoint,Icametoasplit(分叉)inthecourse.Awomanwhowasdirectingusblockedoff(封鎖)theroutewhichIwasmeanttotakeandtoldmetogotheotherway,soIfollowedherdirections.Iwasconfused,butjustkeptrunning.IknewImustbeclosetofinishingthe5km,butIcouldn’tseethefinishingline.AfterawhileIsawroutedirectionsfora10kmrace.IwasworriedandthoughtIwaslost,buthadtokeepgoing.Mybodystartedtogettiredandmymusclesalittlesore.Isaidtomyself,“You’realmostthere.Justkeepbreathing.”EventuallyIsawthefinishinglineandspottedmymum.Shelookedangry.Igotpastthelineandshewasyelling,“Whydidyoudothis,Kade?Youareinsomuchtrouble.”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Ilearnedwhymymumwasangrylater.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Mymumwentuptotheladywhowastimingtherace.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Ilearnedwhymymumwasangrylater.Whenshedidn’tseemeatthe5kmfinishingline,sheandmygrandmahadgonelookingformeandcouldn’tfindmeanywhere.Theythoughtsomethingbadhadhappened.She’devengivenaphotographofmetoafireman,beforesomeonesaidthey’dspottedmeinthe10km.Isaid,“Ididn’tdothisonpurpose,Mum!Itwasamistake.”ShecalmeddownwhensherealisedIhadn’tintentionallydoneit.IfeltbadthatIhadworriedher.Mymumwentuptotheladywhowastimingtherace.Shetoldmymum,“Hefinishedfirst.Hewontherace.”It’sfunny,becauseinthepicturesofthefinish,thereisnooneinfrontoforbehindme.Icouldn’tbelieveit.Ididn’tevenknowIwasrunninga10kmandIhadwonit.Mymumandmygrandmaweresoexcitedandkepthuggingme.Iwasstilltryingtocatchmybreath.Ifeltsohappyandproud.Itwasmyfirsttimerunningsuchadistance.【分析】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者在一次5公里賽跑的過程中，偶遇雷雨天氣，即使沒有穿專業(yè)的跑步服，作者仍然很專注。在一個分叉口，聽從了一個女人的指揮，作者錯過了5公里的終點線，繼續(xù)跑到了10公里的終點。媽媽因為在預(yù)計的5公里終點線找不到作者，開始搜尋并擔(dān)心作者。得到了別人給的信息，媽媽等在了10公里的終點線，并且很生氣質(zhì)問作者，作者向媽媽解釋了原因，得到了諒解，媽媽和計時員了解到作者優(yōu)異的成績，大家都很高興?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“后來我才知道媽媽為什么生氣?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫媽媽生氣的原因和作者做出的解釋。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我媽媽走到給比賽計時的女士跟前。”可知第二段可描寫計時人員告訴媽媽比賽結(jié)果以及媽媽，奶奶和作者的反應(yīng)。2.續(xù)寫線索：媽媽對作者跑過5英里終點線感到生氣——作者給出解釋——得到媽媽諒解——媽媽走到計時員面前詢問結(jié)果——得到好成績，皆大歡喜3.詞匯激活行為類①尋找：lookfor/searchfor②發(fā)現(xiàn)：spot/find③相信：believe/havefaithin④擁抱：hug/embrace情緒類①感覺糟糕：feltbad/feelawkward②興奮的：excited/thrilled【點睛】[高分句型1]She’devengivenaphotographofmetoafireman,beforesomeonesaidthey’dspottedmeinthe10km.（運用了before引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句和省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句）[高分句型2]It’sfunny,becauseinthepicturesofthefinish,thereisnooneinfrontoforbehindme.（運用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句和therebe句型）Part5單元話題寫作話題拓展Passage1Physicaleducation,orgymclass,isn’trequiredforallhighschoolstudents.Insomeschools,itisn’tofferedforsomedifferentreasons.Butshouldhighschoolstudentshavephysicaleducation?Theansweriscertainly“yes”.Todaymanypeopledon’