第19講怎樣寫講話稿第1頁一、魔法導(dǎo)航講話稿在近幾年高考作文中一直占有一席之地,它是一個(gè)口語化應(yīng)用

文。它要求內(nèi)容完整,關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)齊全,語言含有感染力、號(hào)召力。一篇完整講話稿

寫作步驟主要包含以下四步:第一步:IntroducingYourself/StartingtheMeeting/OpeningRemarksWehaven'tmetbefore,soI'dliketo/Iwanttointroducemyself.I'mfrom...第二步:PreparingtheAudienceI'llstartwith...andthenmoveonto...Finally,I'mgoingto.../I'llbeginbydescrib-

ing...thengoonto...andI'llendwith...第三步:DeliveringtheMessageImustemphasize/stress/makeitclear...——胸有成竹,出口成章第2頁I'dliketoturnto/I'dliketostress...第四步:WindingUpFinally,I'dliketosummarizethemainpoint...二、慣用句式?開頭慣用語:(1)Thetopicofmyspeechis...(2)It'snice/wonderful/exciting/inspiringtospeak/talkabout...(3)Asweallknow,.../It'sknowntousallthat...(4)Everyonedesiresto...andsodoI.Butwhatisthesecretto...AsfarasI'mconcerned,thereare...factors.(5)...suggestthat...Ithinkthat...第3頁

結(jié)尾慣用語:(1)Tosumup/Toconclude/Allinall/Inconclusion/Inaword...(2)WhatIwanttostress/emphasizeis...(3)Personally,Ithinkitnecessary/important/valuable/useful/beneficial/vital/a

goodideaforsb.to...(4)Asformyself,Iwill/must/should...(5)Dear...,let'stryourbest/doourbest/sparenoeffort/dowhatwecanto...(6)Asformysuggestion,Ithink...(7)As...,weshouldbeawareoftheimportanceof...Solongas...第4頁三、典題示例

真題在線(江西)假定你是星光中學(xué)高中畢業(yè)生李華,母校將為高一新生舉行主題為“What

tolearninseniorhighschool?”英語沙龍活動(dòng),特邀請(qǐng)你結(jié)合本身經(jīng)歷談?wù)?/p>

自己體會(huì)。請(qǐng)依據(jù)以下提要準(zhǔn)備一份英語講話稿。1.學(xué)會(huì)學(xué)習(xí):方法、習(xí)慣等;2.學(xué)會(huì)做人:真誠、友善等;3.其它方面:考生自擬。注意:1.詞數(shù)120左右;2.講話稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。第5頁Goodmorning,everyone!Itismyhonortobeheretosharewithyoumyopinions

onwhattolearninseniorhighschool.

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審題謀篇體裁講話稿中心人稱第一人稱主體時(shí)態(tài)普通現(xiàn)在時(shí)普經(jīng)過去時(shí)關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)布局第一段:引入話題(已給出)。第二段:從學(xué)習(xí)方法、學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣等角度闡釋怎樣學(xué)會(huì)學(xué)習(xí)。主題句:概述未來三年面臨挑戰(zhàn)。擴(kuò)展句1:提升學(xué)習(xí)效率(注意結(jié)合個(gè)人經(jīng)歷)。擴(kuò)展句2:養(yǎng)成良好學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣,如提前預(yù)習(xí)和及時(shí)復(fù)習(xí)等。第三段:詳細(xì)說明怎樣學(xué)會(huì)做人。主題句:學(xué)會(huì)和他人相處。擴(kuò)展句1:要尊重老師,關(guān)愛同學(xué)(注意結(jié)合個(gè)人經(jīng)歷)。擴(kuò)展句2:說明真誠意義。第四段:依據(jù)本身情況選擇其它方面說明未來應(yīng)注意事情。主題句:我們應(yīng)該主動(dòng)鍛煉身體、參加課外活動(dòng)等。擴(kuò)展句:說明這么做好處。第五段:總結(jié)上文,展望未來生活。第7頁考場(chǎng)作文:Goodmorning,everyone!Itismyhonortobeheretosharewithyoumyopinionsonwhattolearninseniorhighschool.Ourschoollifeinseniorhighschoolisdifferentfromwhatwelivedinthejuniormiddleschool.Inordertostudywell,weshouldformgoodhabitssuchas①previewbeforelessonsand②reviewlessonsintime.What'smore,weshouldlearnsomeusefulwaystostudy,likeusingsomereferencebooks.Besides,weshouldbe-come③usefulperson.Weshouldbesincere

andfriendly.Inthisway,wecangetalongwellwithothersandwintruefriendship.Ofcourse,weshoulddoexerciseandkeep④health.Ifwedoallthethingswell,wecanspendahappytimeinseniorhighschool.Thankyou!文章提升:1.修改錯(cuò)誤:1)suchas是介詞短語,故應(yīng)將①和②分別改為

和

。2)person是可數(shù)名詞,useful發(fā)音以輔音音素開

頭,故應(yīng)在③useful前加冠詞

。3)keep作“保持”講時(shí)是系動(dòng)詞,后接形容詞

作表語,故應(yīng)將④health改為

。2.提升提議:將畫線部分改為倒裝句:

閱卷現(xiàn)場(chǎng)第8頁參考范文:Goodmorning,everyone!Itismyhonortobeheretosharewithyoumyopinionsonwhattolearn

inseniorhighschool.Inthecomingthreeyears,ourschoollifewillbechallenging.Firstly,weshouldlearntolearneffi-

ciently.Personally,Iusedtotryeffectivemethodstoachievemyacademicgoals.Developinga

goodhabitisalsoofimportance.Itreallybenefitedmealottopreviewlessons,getactivelyin-

volvedinclass,andreviewwhathadbeentaughtafterclass.Inaddition,weshouldlearnhowtogetalongwellwithothers.Inschool,Irespectedteachersand

wasfriendlywithclassmates.Itwaswithsincerityandfaithfulnessthatwecreatedaharmonious

atmosphere.Finally,weshouldtakepartinsportsandoutdooractivitiesfrequently.Notonlyaretheyhelpfulin

buildingupourbody,buttheycanalsoenrichourschoollife.Nopains,nogains.Iamsurethatwithyourgreatefforts,youwillenjoyacolorfulandfruitfullife

here.Thankyou!第9頁

答案1.修改錯(cuò)誤:1)previewing;reviewing2)a3)healthy2.提升提議:Onlyinthiswaycanwegetalongwellwithothersandwintrue

friendship.四、高分秀場(chǎng)(山西高三第三次四校聯(lián)考)假如你是星光中學(xué)學(xué)生李華,將參加主題為“MyChineseDream”英語演

講比賽,請(qǐng)撰寫一篇演講稿,主要內(nèi)容包含:1.夢(mèng)想成為一名山村教師,幫助山村孩子;2.山區(qū)偏僻,教育落后;第10頁3.父母和朋友都反對(duì);4.我會(huì)……注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。Goodmorning,everyone!

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