咨詢信【試題探究】假定你是李華,打算今年暑假去美國旅游。請你給TravelAmerica國際旅行社寫一封電子郵件進(jìn)行咨詢,內(nèi)容如下:1.請其推薦合適的旅游路線;2.請其告知相關(guān)的旅游費用。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。Step1:精準(zhǔn)審題謀篇布局人稱第一人稱(I),第二人稱(you)時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時要點1.寫信目的2.咨詢的內(nèi)容:旅游路線,旅游費用Step2:字斟句酌巧飾亮點要點1:我打算在美國住10天左右,希望能看一看那些獨特的自然風(fēng)景,品味一下當(dāng)?shù)氐娘L(fēng)俗。一般表達(dá):IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,andIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.句式升級(定語從句)IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,duringwhichIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.要點2:除此之外,我想了解路線的價格,包括所有旅游費用。一般表達(dá):Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,andallthetravelingexpenses.句式升級(分詞短語作定語)Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,coveringallthetravelingexpenses.Step3:銜接過渡斐然成篇DearSir/Madam,I’mplanningtotraveltotheUSAinthecomingJuly.Therefore,I’mwritingtoinquireabouttravelroutesofyouragency.IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,duringwhichIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.So,couldyoupleaserecommendsomesuitabletravelroutes?Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,coveringallthetravelingexpenses.Areplyatyourearliestconvenienceishighlyappreciated.Yours,LiHua【句式儲備】1.篇頭——開篇表明寫信目的IamLiHua,aChinesestudent,studyinginNewZealand.Iamwritingtoinquireaboutsomeinformationregarding/concerningtravel.我是李華,一名在新西蘭學(xué)習(xí)的中國學(xué)生。我寫信是想詢問一些關(guān)于旅行的信息。2.篇中——陳述要咨詢的內(nèi)容①Firstofall,I’mtemptedtoknowthedeparturetimeandtravelingroute.首先,我很想知道出發(fā)時間和旅行路線。②Secondly,howmuchdoIhavetopayforthetravel?其次,我需要支付多少旅費?③Thirdly,isthereanythingIshouldpayspecialattentionto?第三,有什么我應(yīng)該特別注意的嗎?3.結(jié)尾——表感謝,盼回復(fù)①Iwouldbemuchappreciatedifyoucouldfurnishmewiththeaboveinformationandyoucancontactmevia1234456@df.erf.如果您能提供我上述信息,我將不勝感激,您可以通過1234456@df.erf與我聯(lián)系。②Thankyouandyourpromptreplywillbehighlyappreciated.謝謝你,如能及時回復(fù)我將不勝感激?！就卣箖洹考俣闶抢钊A,高考過后計劃暑假期間到美國去參加中美學(xué)生交流活動。請寫一封咨詢信,詢問相關(guān)事宜。內(nèi)容包括:1.對申請者的相關(guān)要求;2.課程的相關(guān)事宜;3.住宿和吃飯的條件;4.需要做的相關(guān)準(zhǔn)備。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearSirorMadam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearSirorMadam,Iamveryinterestedintheexchangeprogramyouoffered.Iamwritingtoobtainsomemoredetailedinformationaboutit.Firstly,IjustgraduatedfromanordinaryhighschoolandIwonderwhatqualificationsarerequiredforapplicants.Secondly,ifadmitted,whatcoursesamIgoingtotake,anddoIneedtobuyanybooksaheadoftime?Inaddition,wouldyoubesokindtointroducetometheconditionsofboardandaccommodations?Bytheway,ifIneedtomakeanyotherpreparations,letmeknow,willyou?ThanksagainforyourtimeandI’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【要點精練】1．假如你是李華，一名高三學(xué)生，準(zhǔn)備在畢業(yè)后參加英國牛津大學(xué)的暑期夏令營（OxfordSummerCamp2018）。請用英語寫一封電子郵件給相關(guān)負(fù)責(zé)人Mr.William，說明自己的情況并咨詢相關(guān)事宜。注意：1.詞數(shù)100詞左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。DearMr.William,I’mLiHua,aChinesestudent.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua2．假設(shè)你是蘇華，上周創(chuàng)建了學(xué)校志愿者服務(wù)俱樂部，但成員不多。你決定寫個email給外教，咨詢?nèi)绾芜M(jìn)行一項系列廣告活動來招募俱樂部成員。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.信中不要出現(xiàn)自己真實的姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.開頭語和結(jié)束語已寫好，不計入詞數(shù)。Dearsir，___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua3．假如你是大學(xué)生李華，想利用假期時間打工掙錢。你對報紙上的廣告很感興趣。請你根據(jù)下面的廣告內(nèi)容寫一封信應(yīng)聘工作并詢問有關(guān)情況。字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右。TemporaryJobOfferMajorcateringCompanyhastemporaryjobsaschefs,waiters,kitchenstaffandEnglishsecretary.FormoreinformationwritetoMs.KateRees,17ParkEndSt._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假定你是李華，你校英語俱樂部將舉辦英語作文大賽。你有意參加，請你用英語給負(fù)責(zé)人Mr.White寫一封郵件，詢問相關(guān)信息。要點如下：1.報名時間及方式；2.需要提供的信息；3.費用及其他。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：報名：signup_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假定你是李華，你的澳大利亞朋友David是中國功夫的愛好者，你得知今年七月你所在的城市將舉辦一次國際功夫比賽。請你用英語給他寫封郵件，詢問他是否有興趣參加，要點包括:1.比賽的時間和地點2.比賽的目的3.參加比賽的益處注意:1.

詞數(shù)100左右；2.

可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.

開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。DearDavid,Howiseverythinggoing?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwillaccompanyyouduringthecompetition.I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua6．假如你是學(xué)生李華。圣誕節(jié)即將到來，你們班決定本周五晚上慶祝一番，由你負(fù)責(zé)為此選定一個場所。MiracleInn的一則廣告引起了你的注意，但有一些具體信息不明確（如箭頭所指內(nèi)容）。請根據(jù)你所做的Notes，給MiracleInn發(fā)一封電子郵件詢問有關(guān)情況。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearSir/Madam，Iamwritingformoreinformationabouttheserviceatyourinn._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua參考答案1．DearMr.William，I’mLiHua,aChinesestudent．HavinglongedforOxfordforalongtime,IreallywanttobepartoftheOxfordSummerCamp2018.Therefore,I’mwritingtointroducemyselfandaskseveralquestionsconcerned.I’malwaysanEnglish-loverandhavetakensomeoptionalcoursesrelatedtoEnglishliteratureandculture.SoI’mwonderingwhetherthereareanycoursesinthiscamp?Ifthereare,howmanycourseswillyouofferandwhatsubjectswilltheycover?Besides,canyougivemethescheduleofthesecoursestoseewhetherI’llhavetimetovisitotherplaces?Finally,doyouprovideaccommodationsduringtheSummerCamp?Areallthestudentslivingoncampusorwillyouarrangehome-stay?Thankyouinadvance!Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yourssincerely,LiHua【寫作分析】本文是一封電子郵件。假如你是李華，一名高三學(xué)生，準(zhǔn)備在畢業(yè)后參加英國牛津大學(xué)的暑期夏令營（OxfordSummerCamp2018）。請用英語寫一封電子郵件給相關(guān)負(fù)責(zé)人Mr.William，說明自己的情況并咨詢相關(guān)事宜。寫作時要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)提示充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點完整地表述出來。寫作時注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用，主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)，語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。【亮點說明】本文是一封電子郵件。格式正確，內(nèi)容符合要求，重點突出，文中使用高級詞匯和句子?，F(xiàn)在分詞完成式做原因狀語；I’mwritingtointroducemyselfandaskseveralquestionsconcerned.過去分詞做后置定語；SoI’mwonderingwhetherthereareanycoursesinthiscamp?句中whether引導(dǎo)賓語從句；Ifthereare,howmanycourseswillyouofferandwhatsubjectswilltheycover?條件句和問句完美結(jié)合；句中一般疑問句使用巧妙，恰到好處；另外，Therefore,Besides,Finally,等的運用為文章增色添彩。2．Dearsir，I’mdelightedtotellyouanexcitingnewsthattheVoluntaryServiceClubofourschoolwassetuplastweek.Itsmainpurposeistoprovideanopportunityforstudentstoservethesocietybetterandknowmoreaboutthesociety．Itcanalsohelptodevelopourcooperativeability．Inordertohavemoremembers,Iplantoorganizesomeadvertisingactivitiestoattractmorestudents.Studentswhoarehealthy,open-mindedandwillingtohelpothersarewelcometojoinourVoluntaryServiceClub.Theywillberequiredtodovoluntaryworkatweekendsorduringholidays.However,Ihavelittleexperienceinsuchadvertisingactivities,couldyouhelpmeandgivemesomeadviceaboutit?Iwillbeappreciativeitifyoucouldgivemeahand.I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，咨詢外教如何進(jìn)行一項系列廣告活動來招募學(xué)校志愿者服務(wù)俱樂部成員?！疽c分析】第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時，也有部分一般過去時和一般將來時。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。要求：1.上周學(xué)校創(chuàng)建了志愿者服務(wù)俱樂部2.

咨詢外教如何進(jìn)行一項系列廣告活動來招募俱樂部成員。第二步:列提綱（重點詞組）bedelightedto;setup;

mainpurpose;cooperativeability;open-minded;bewillingto;voluntarywork;havelittleexperiencein;givesb.ahand;lookforwardto第三步：連詞成句1.I’mpleasedtotellyouanexcitingnewsthattheVoluntaryServiceClubofourschoolwassetuplastweek.2.Itsmainpurposeistoprovideanopportunityforstudentstoservethesocietybetterandknowmoreaboutthesociety．3.Studentswhoarehealthy,open-mindedandwillingtohelpothersarewelcometojoinourVoluntaryServiceClub.4.Theywillberequiredtodovoluntaryworkatweekendsorduringholidays.5.Ihavelittleexperienceinsuchadvertisingactivities.6.Iwillbeappreciativeitifyoucouldgivemeahand.7.I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列補充關(guān)系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(從句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果關(guān)系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，第五步：潤色修改范文內(nèi)容完整，要點全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了較多主從復(fù)合句，如：Studentswhoarehealthy,open-mindedandwillingtohelpothersarewelcometojoinourVoluntaryServiceClub.這句話運用了關(guān)系代詞who引導(dǎo)的定語從句；使用了一些固定詞組，如bedelightedto;setup;bewillingto等。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。3．DearMs.Kate,I’mwritinginresponsetoyouradvertisementforatemporarypositionasawaiter.I’ma20-year-oldcollegestudent.IwouldbeabletoworkduringJuneandJuly.IdonothaveanyexperiencebutIenjoyworkingwithpeopleandaminterestedinacareerinthecateringindustrywhenIleaveuniversity.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldsendmemoreinformationaboutthepostavailable.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou.Yourssincerely,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封信應(yīng)聘工作并詢問有關(guān)情況。【寫作分析】1.詞匯積累喜歡：like→enjoy感激的：thankful→grateful期待：expect→lookforwardto收到某人的來信：receivealetterfromsb.→hearfromsb.2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：I’ma20-year-oldcollegestudent.IwouldbeabletoworkduringJuneandJuly.拓展句：I’ma20-year-oldcollegestudent,who

wouldbeabletoworkduringJuneandJuly.[高分句型1]IdonothaveanyexperiencebutIenjoyworkingwithpeopleandaminterestedinacareerinthecateringindustrywhenIleaveuniversity.(我沒有任何經(jīng)驗，但我喜歡與人打交道，并且對大學(xué)畢業(yè)后在餐飲行業(yè)發(fā)展很感興趣。)該句中“but”作為并列連詞連接前后分句；“when”引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句。[高分句型2]Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldsendmemoreinformationaboutthepostavailable.(如果您能寄給我更多關(guān)于這個職位的信息，我將非常感激。)該句中“if”引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句。4．DearMr.White，MynameisLiHua.I'velearnedthatacompetitionfortheEnglishWritingwillbeheldbytheEnglishClub.I'mwritingtoapplyfortheinformationaboutit.Wouldyoubekindenoughtotellmewhenandhowtosignup?Whatkindsofpersonalinformationshouldbeprovidedtoenterthecontest?What’smore,tobefrank，howmuchshouldIpayforit?Iamexpectingyourreply.Thanksalot!SincerelyLiHua【分析】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文中的書信，同時也是一篇開放性書面表達(dá)，要求考生把自己當(dāng)成李華，給朋友Mr.White寫信，咨詢英語俱樂部舉辦的作文大賽的具體信息。要求考生自行組織要點，總體難度較大。【寫作分析】第1步：審題。根據(jù)文字提示可知本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫信咨詢英語作文大賽的具體信息。全文以一般現(xiàn)在時和第一人稱為主。第2步：組織要點。1.報名時間及方式；2.需要提供的信息；3.費用及其他。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞組進(jìn)行遣詞造句，關(guān)鍵詞為signup、applyfor等。同時注意書信的慣用語和習(xí)慣表達(dá)。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。本篇范文結(jié)構(gòu)完美，條理清晰。范文時態(tài)和人稱運用準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋了文字提示要求的所有要點，且有適當(dāng)?shù)膫€人發(fā)揮?？忌\用了多樣式的句型結(jié)構(gòu)，整篇文章富有變化并不死板。使用了較多的高級詞匯，如signup、applyfor等；同時文章還運用了一些串聯(lián)成分，如what’smore，這些串聯(lián)詞讓各個要點更為緊密地結(jié)合在一起。以上寫作技巧的運用提升了文章的層次，顯示了考生具有很強(qiáng)的駕馭語言的能力。5．DearDavid，Howiseverythinggoing?

I'mwritingtotellyouthatthe12thInternationalKungFuCompetitionwillbeheldinDaqingfromJuly20thto24thatDaqingGymnasium.Asweknow,kungfuisanimportantpartofChinesecultureandhasbecomeincreasinglypopularathomeandabroad.Thiseventaimstofurtherexpandtheinfluenceofkungfuworldwide.Theorganizershopepeoplewillfeelthecharmofkungfuinthiscompetition.Iknowyouarekungfuamateur.Areyouinterestedintakingpartintheevent?Youwillbeabletoappreciatehigh-levelkungfuperformancesandcommunicatewithpeoplesharingthesameinterestfromallovertheworld.Youcanalsoimproveyourtechniques.Iwillaccompanyyouduringthecompetition.I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作?！緦懽鞣治觥康?步：根據(jù)提示可知，要求寫一封郵件；假定你是李華，你的澳大利亞朋友David是中國功夫的愛好者，你得知今年七月你所在的城市將舉辦一次國際功夫比賽。請你用英語給他寫封郵件，詢問他是否有興趣參加，要點包括:1.比賽的時間和地點；2.比賽的目的；3.參加比賽的益處第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：InternationalKungFuCompetition（國際功夫比賽），Gymnasium（體育館），athomeandabroad（國內(nèi)外），furtherexpand（進(jìn)一步擴(kuò)大）；amateur（業(yè)余愛好者）等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。范文內(nèi)容