高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)在餐廳里感受的溫暖與善良的真諦1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Bobby,mybrother,andIwouldspendourusualSaturdaywithGrandpa,cleaninghishouse.Momwouldtakeustohishomeintheearlymorning.Sincechildhood,BobbyandIhadbeenspendingthedaydusting,moppingandchangingthesheetsonhisbed.Grandpagrewupinapoorfamily.Hisdaddiedwhenhewasateenager.Thenhehadtoleaveschool,runthefamilyfarmandraisehisbrotherandsister.Heworkedasanightdoorkeeperforacompanywithinwalkingdistanceofhishome,andthehighlightofhisweekwastherewardthathegavemybrotherandmeforcleaning.Anditwasthemomentwhenwefeltthehappiest.4續(xù)寫原文ThisSaturday,afterBobbyandIfinishedcleaning,Grandpadecidedtoinviteustodinner.Whenwefinallyarrivedathisfavoriterestaurant,thewaitressesgreetedhimasalong-lostelder.Theirsmilesandwavesfollowedustoourfavoritetableasweplacedourorders.Andthenwelaughedandate.Grandpapraisedhowwellwehadcleanedhisplace,tellinganyonewhowouldliketolistenabouteverytaskwehadaccomplished.Regardlessofwhowasservingusatthetime,eachoftheotherwaitresseswouldcomeuptosay“hi”toGrandpaandcongratulatehisgrandkidsontheirwork.Itwasarestaurant,butitwaslikeourhome.Whendinnerwasover,thewaitresswouldbringthecheckandhandittoGrandpa.Thistime,itwasGloriathatbentclosetohim,andtoldhimtheamountofthecheck.5續(xù)寫原文Grandpacarefullydugintothepocketofhistrousersandbroughtoutaworncoinpurse.Hecarefullylaidoutthecoinsandpaidthebill.ThenhegaveGloriaatip,butitwasn’tenough.Iwasashamedthathegottheamountofthetipwrong,andwewereembarrassed.IwasabouttosaysomethingwhenGloriagrabbedmyhands.“Comeandgetsomeflowers,today’sgifts,Susie,”shesaidassheledmetowardthecounter.6段首句Paragraph1：“Iwantyoutolistencarefully,Susie,”Gloriasaidtomeseriously.Paragraph2：IlistenedtoGloriaandstaredatthoseflowers,deepinthought.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9我和弟弟鮑比每周六都會(huì)去爺爺家?guī)兔Υ驋?，爺爺出身貧寒，靠自己努力撐起家庭。這周六打掃完后，爺爺帶我們?nèi)ニ钕矚g的餐廳吃飯。餐廳的服務(wù)員們都熱情地和爺爺打招呼，大家相處得像一家人。用餐結(jié)束后，爺爺付錢給小費(fèi)，可給的不夠，我覺得很羞愧。這時(shí)，服務(wù)員格洛麗亞拉著我去柜臺(tái)拿花，還說有話要跟我說。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：“Iwantyoutolistencarefully,Susie,”Gloriasaidtomeseriously.“我想讓你認(rèn)真聽著，蘇西?！备衤妍悂唶?yán)肅地對(duì)我說。她拉著我走到柜臺(tái)邊，輕輕地把花放在我面前?！澳銧敔斒莻€(gè)非常好的人?！彼难凵裰谐錆M了敬重，“他雖然沒有很多錢，但每次來這里，他都會(huì)盡自己所能給我們小費(fèi)，而且他總是對(duì)我們每一個(gè)人都很友善，關(guān)心我們的生活。我們都很尊敬他，在這里，他就像我們的長(zhǎng)輩一樣?！备衤妍悂喌穆曇艉軠厝?，卻讓我內(nèi)心受到了很大的沖擊。我開始反思自己剛才因?yàn)闋敔斀o的小費(fèi)不夠而感到羞愧的行為，覺得自己是多么的膚淺。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：IlistenedtoGloriaandstaredatthoseflowers,deepinthought.我聽著格洛麗亞的話，盯著那些花，陷入了深深的思考。我意識(shí)到，善良和尊重并不是用金錢來衡量的。爺爺雖然生活并不富裕，但他一直用自己的方式對(duì)周圍的人表達(dá)著善意。他努力工作，養(yǎng)大了自己的弟弟妹妹，還一直關(guān)愛著我們。而我卻因?yàn)橐稽c(diǎn)小費(fèi)而感到尷尬，實(shí)在不應(yīng)該。我抬起頭，看著格洛麗亞，心中充滿了感激。我決定以后要像爺爺一樣，做一個(gè)善良的人，不再因?yàn)橥庠诘臇|西而輕視他人。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)"Iwantyoutolistencarefully,Susie,"Gloriasaidtomeseriously.Sheledmetothecounterandgentlyplacedtheflowersinfrontofme."Yourgrandpaisareallyniceperson,"shesaid,withrespectshininginhereyes."Althoughhedoesn'thavemuchmoney,everytimehecomeshere,hetrieshisbesttogiveustips.Andheisalwayskindtoallofus,caringaboutourlives.Weallrespecthimalot.Here,heisjustlikeourelder."Gloria'svoicewassoft,butithitmehard.Ibegantoreflectonmybehavioroffeelingashamedjustbecausegrandpa'stipwasnotenough.IfelthowshallowIwas.14范文呈現(xiàn)IlistenedtoGloriaandstaredatthoseflowers,deepinthought.Irealizedthatkindnessandrespectcouldn'tbemeasuredbymoney.Althoughgrandpadidn'tlivearichlife,hehadalwaysshownkindnesstopeoplearoundhiminhisownway.Heworkedhardtoraisehisyoungerbrotherandsisterandhadalwaystakengoodcareofus.ButIfeltembarrassedjustbecauseofalittletip.Ireallyshouldn'thave.IlookedupatGloria,fullofgratitudeinmyheart.IdecidedthatIwouldbeakind-heartedpersonlikegrandpainthefutureandwouldneverlookdownuponothersbecauseofexternalthings.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)"Iwantyoutolistencarefully,Susie,"Gloriasaidtomeearnestly.Sheguidedmeovertothecounteranddelicatelylaidtheflowersbeforeme."Yourgrandpaistrulyaremarkableman,"sheremarked,hereyesbrimmingwithrespect."Despitehislimitedmeans,eachtimehegracesourrestaurant,hesparesnoefforttoofferusatip.Moreover,hetreatseveryoneofuswithkindnessandshowsgenuineconcernforourwell-being.Weallholdhiminthehighestesteem.Here,heislikeabelovedeldertous."Gloria'svoice,softyetimpactful,struckachordwithinme.Icouldn'thelpbutreflectonmyearlierfeelingsofshame,whichhadstemmedfromtheinadequacyofgrandpa'stip.Iwassuddenlyawareofhowsuperficialmythoughtshadbeen.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)IheededGloria'swordsandfixedmygazeontheflowers,lostinprofoundcontemplation.Itdawnedonmethatkindnessandrespectdefyquantificationbymonetarystandards.Grandpa,despitehishumblecircumstances,hadconsistentlyextendedkindnesstothosearoundhiminhisownuniqueway.Hetoiledtoraisehisyoungersiblingsandhadalwaysshowereduswithloveandcare.Yet,Ihadallowedmyselftobeembarrassedoverameretip.Itrulyregrettedmyearlierreaction.IliftedmyheadandmetGloria'seyes,m