高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)除夕寒日，陌生人的暖心救助1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Iworkedatacoffeeshopinaveryremote(偏僻的)area.Iwasn’tpleasedwithhavingtoworkduringNewYear’sEve,butabouthalfwaythroughmyshift(輪班),IsawsomeonewhomademefeelgratefulthatIwouldatleastbeabletogohometosharethedinnerwithmyfamily.Itwasacoldday.Theweatherwasawfulwithanicywindandnear-freezingrain.Asllookedoutofthestorewindow,Isawayoungmanwalkingalongtheroad,expectingtogetfreeridesfromthepassingcars,Therewasverylittletraffic,andthefewvehiclespassingbyweredrivenbypeople.whowererushinghomeandcouldn’tbebotheredtopickupastranger.Iexpectedtheyoungmantocomeintowarmupordrinkacup,ofhotcoffee,buthejustkeptonwalkingeventhoughhewastrembling(顫抖)inthecold.4續(xù)寫原文Ithoughtabouthowitfeltliketobealoneandtrytohitchaside(免費(fèi)搭車)insuchbadweatheronsuchaspecialday,andmyheartwentouttohim.Whereverhewasgoing,itwasclearthathestoodnochanceofmakingittohisdestinationintimeforthedinner.Iwasalone,soIcouldn’tleavethestoretohelpout.ThenIcalledmyparents.Iknewthattheywerebusypreparingthebigdinnerforthewholefamily.Iexplainedabouttheyoungmanandaskedthemiftheycouldhelphimout.Withoutanyhesitation,theyagreed.Afterashortwhile,Isawmyparents’car.Itstoppedbesidetheyoungmanandtherewasaquickexchangeofwords.Themannoddedhisheadthankfully,andthenthecardroveoff.Isawthelookofsurprise,disbelief,gratitude,andpleasurethatIwouldneverforgetappearedonthefaceoftheyoungman.5段首句Paragraph1：Then,makinghiswaytothestore,theyoungmancameinandaskedifhecouldstayforafewminutes.Paragraph2：Ireallythankedmyparentsthatday.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8作者在偏遠(yuǎn)地區(qū)的咖啡店工作，除夕當(dāng)班。天氣惡劣，作者看到一位年輕人在路邊試圖搭便車，卻因車少且司機(jī)匆忙無(wú)人理會(huì)。作者心生同情，因無(wú)法離崗，便聯(lián)系父母幫忙。父母毫不猶豫地答應(yīng)，開(kāi)車接上年輕人。年輕人對(duì)這份突如其來(lái)的幫助感到十分驚喜。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Then,makinghiswaytothestore,theyoungmancameinandaskedifhecouldstayforafewminutes.隨后，年輕人朝店鋪?zhàn)邅?lái)，走進(jìn)店里，詢問(wèn)是否能停留幾分鐘。他走到柜臺(tái)前，看著我，眼中滿是感激之情。他說(shuō)自己原本已對(duì)能在除夕當(dāng)晚趕到目的地與家人團(tuán)聚不抱希望，在這冰天雪地中，他又冷又餓又絕望。沒(méi)想到，我的父母如同天使降臨，愿意載他一程。他感慨道，在這特殊的日子里，陌生人給予的這份溫暖，讓他重新感受到了人性的美好。他還說(shuō)，這份善意會(huì)一直激勵(lì)著他，以后遇到需要幫助的人，他也會(huì)毫不猶豫地伸出援手。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Ireallythankedmyparentsthatday.那天，我真心感謝我的父母。他們不僅用行動(dòng)幫助了那位年輕人，讓他能在除夕之夜與家人團(tuán)聚，也給我上了一堂生動(dòng)的品德課。他們的善良和熱心腸，讓我明白在他人需要幫助時(shí)伸出援手，能給別人帶來(lái)多大的改變?；氐郊液?，我和家人圍坐在餐桌旁，分享著這一天的經(jīng)歷。大家都為父母的善舉感到驕傲，歡聲笑語(yǔ)充滿了整個(gè)屋子。這個(gè)除夕，因?yàn)檫@份小小的善舉，變得格外有意義，讓我深刻體會(huì)到了幫助他人帶來(lái)的快樂(lè)。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Then,makinghiswaytothestore,theyoungmancameinandaskedifhecouldstayforafewminutes.Hewalkeduptothecounter,lookingatmewithgratitudeinhiseyes.HesaidthathehadgivenuphopeofreachinghisdestinationintimetobewithhisfamilyonNewYear'sEve.Inthefreezingcold,hewascold,hungryanddesperate.Unexpectedly,myparentscamelikeangelsandwerewillingtogivehimaride.Hesighedwithemotionthatonthisspecialday,thewarmthfromstrangersmadehimfeelthebeautyofhumannatureagain.Healsosaidthatthiskindnesswouldalwaysinspirehim.Inthefuture,whenhemetpeopleinneed,hewouldnothesitatetolendahand.13范文呈現(xiàn)Ireallythankedmyparentsthatday.Theynotonlyhelpedtheyoungmanwiththeiractions,allowinghimtobereunitedwithhisfamilyonNewYear'sEve,butalsogavemeavividlessoninmorality.Theirkindnessandwarm-heartednessmademeunderstandhowmuchofadifferenceitcanmaketoreachoutwhenothersareinneed.Afterreturninghome,Isataroundthedinnertablewithmyfamily,sharingtheexperiencesoftheday.Everyonewasproudofmyparents'gooddeeds,andlaughterfilledthewholehouse.ThisNewYear'sEve,becauseofthissmallactofkindness,becameextremelymeaningful,makingmedeeplyrealizethejoyofhelpingothers.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Then,makinghiswaytothestore,theyoungmanenteredandpolitelyinquiredifhecouldstayforashortwhile.Approachingthecounter,hefixedhiseyesonme,aprofoundsenseofgratitudeshimmeringwithinthem.HeconfidedthathehadallbutabandonedhopeofarrivingathisdestinationintimetocelebrateNewYear'sEvewithhislovedones.Amidstthebone-chillingcold,hewasleftshivering,famished,andutterlydespondent.However,myparents,likecelestialbeingsdescendingfromtheheavens,offeredhimalifeline.Withatoneofdeepemotion,heexpressedhowthisunexpectedwarmthfromstrangershadrekindledhisfaithintheinherentgoodnessofhumanity.Moreover,hepledgedthatthisactofkindnesswouldserveasaconstantreminder,compellinghimtoextendahelpinghandwheneverheencounteredthoseinneed.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Itrulyfeltindebtedtomyparentsthatday.Notonlydidthey,throughtheirselflessactions,enabletheyoungmantobereunitedwithhisfamilyonthismostspecialofnights,buttheyalsoimpartedtomeaprofoundlessonincompassion.Theirbenevolenceandmagnanimitymademeacutelyawareofthetransformativepoweroflendingahandtothoseindistress.Uponreturninghome,Ijoinedmyfamilyaroundthedinnertable,regalingthemwiththeeventsoftheday.Everyonewasfilledwithprideformyparents'nobledeeds,andtheroomresoundedwithjubilantlaughter.ThisN