高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)雨中的啟迪：從困境走向希望之路1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文20yearsago,myfatherdiedofanaccidentresultedfromdrinking,leavingmysickmotherandtwoyoungerbrothersalone.Atthattime,Iwasinaseniorhighschool.Aftermyfather’sfuneral,thewholefamilywasinaworseconditionthanever.Astheeldestson,Ihadnochoicebuttoquitschoolandworkinafactory.Lifewentonwithoutanywonder.Idarednottoaskformore,justhopingtobringuptwoyoungerbrothers.However,thatwasnotaneasything,forIcouldn’taffordtheirtuitionevenifIworkedfromdaytonightwithoutstopping,andmuchworse,Ihadtotakemysickmotherintoaccount.Thepresentmiserymademewanttohaveanothertry,butitseemedimpractical,forIcouldn’tlosethisjobanymore.4續(xù)寫原文Athreadofhopesparkledinthosegloomydayssuddenly.ItwasarainyduskwhenIputmyselfintherainandwalkedinthestreet.Suddenlytherainstopped!Tomybewilderment(困惑),Iraisedmyhead,andfoundthat“thesky”wasinfactadarkblueumbrella.ThenIheardadeepvoice.“Whynotrunwithoutanumbrella?”Amiddle-agedmanwithonelegoncrutchsaidtome,“Ifyourun,youwouldgetlessdrenched.”5續(xù)寫原文Ishookmyhead,butafterasecondIthought:Right,whynotrunwithoutanumbrella?Hiswordsshockedmedeeply.Withoutmyfather,couldIonlybeaslavetothefate,andmydreaminchildhoodonlyanillusion?Lifeislikethis.Whenyouareinrainydaysinyourlife,ifyoucouldn’tfindawaytopreventyoufrombeingdrenchedearlier,youwouldhavebeenoverwhelmedbyit,butifyoudecidetogetridofit,you’lldiscoverthattherainydayslastnotsolongasyouimagined.6段首句Paragraph1：Whilewalkingtogetherintherain,hetoldmehisstory.Paragraph2：Then,Idecidedtoreturntoschoolandearnmoneytosupportmyfamilywhilestudying.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析920年前，父親因酒后事故離世，留下患病母親和兩個(gè)弟弟，身為長(zhǎng)子的“我”無奈輟學(xué)去工廠打工。生活艱難，“我”雖想改變卻又不敢辭職。一個(gè)雨夜，一位獨(dú)腿中年男子撐傘與“我”交談，他的話和自身經(jīng)歷，給身處困境的“我”帶來了希望與勇氣，“我”決定做出改變。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Whilewalkingtogetherintherain,hetoldmehisstory.在雨中一同前行時(shí)，他向我講述了自己的故事。曾經(jīng)，他是一名前途光明的運(yùn)動(dòng)員，卻因一場(chǎng)意外失去了一條腿。但他沒有被這巨大的不幸打倒，反而憑借著頑強(qiáng)的意志，努力重新開始生活。他白手起家，創(chuàng)辦了一家小公司，創(chuàng)業(yè)過程中遭遇了無數(shù)的艱難險(xiǎn)阻。資金短缺、客戶流失、市場(chǎng)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)激烈，每一個(gè)問題都像一座大山橫在他面前。然而，他憑借著不屈不撓的精神，一次次地克服困難，最終取得了成功。他的經(jīng)歷深深地震撼了我，讓我在黑暗中看到了一絲曙光。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Then,Idecidedtoreturntoschoolandearnmoneytosupportmyfamilywhilestudying.聽完他的故事后，我毅然決定重返校園，同時(shí)在學(xué)習(xí)之余賺錢養(yǎng)家。我利用課余時(shí)間四處尋找兼職工作，發(fā)傳單、做家教、在餐廳打工，只要能賺錢，再苦再累我都愿意做。在學(xué)校里，我爭(zhēng)分奪秒地學(xué)習(xí)，不放過任何一個(gè)知識(shí)點(diǎn)。雖然生活十分艱辛，但我始終牢記著他的話，從未有過放棄的念頭。漸漸地，情況開始有所好轉(zhuǎn)。我不僅能夠負(fù)擔(dān)起弟弟們的學(xué)費(fèi)，還能給母親買藥治病。最終，我考上了一所理想的大學(xué)。多年后，我成為了一名成功的專業(yè)人士，而那個(gè)雨夜與他的相遇，永遠(yuǎn)改變了我的人生軌跡，我對(duì)此心懷無盡的感激。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Whilewalkingtogetherintherain,hetoldmehisstory.Hehadbeenapromisingathletebeforeanaccidentdeprivedhimofhishealthyleg.However,hedidn'tallowthismisfortunetobeathim.Instead,heusedhisstrongwilltostartlifeanew.Heestablishedasmallbusinessfromnothing.Duringtheprocess,heencounterednumerousdifficulties.Therewereshortagesoffunds,lossesofcustomers,andfiercemarketcompetition.Eachproblemwaslikeahugemountainstandinginhisway.Nevertheless,withhisindomitablespirit,heovercamethesedifficultiesonebyoneandfinallyachievedsuccess.Hisstorydeeplyshockedmeandgavemeaglimmerofhopeinthedarkness.14范文呈現(xiàn)Afterhearinghisstory,Iresolutelydecidedtoreturntoschoolandearnmoneytosupportmyfamilywhilestudying.Ilookedforpart-timejobsduringmybreaks.Ihandedoutflyers,gaveprivatelessons,andworkedinrestaurants.Iwaswillingtodoanyjob,nomatterhowhardortiringitwas,aslongasitcouldbringinmoney.Atschool,Imadethemostofeveryminutetostudy,notmissinganyknowledgepoints.Althoughlifewasextremelytough,Ialwaysrememberedhiswordsandneverhadthethoughtofgivingup.Gradually,thingsstartedtochangeforthebetter.Icouldaffordmybrothers'tuitionandbuymedicineformymother.Eventually,Iwasadmittedtoanidealuniversity.Yearslater,Ibecameasuccessfulprofessional.Andthatencounterwithhimonthatrainynighthadforeverchangedthecourseofmylife,forwhichIwasextremelygrateful.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Whiletraversingtherain-soakedstreetssidebyside,heunfoldedhislife'snarrative.Onceapromisingathlete,anaccidenthadbrutallysnatchedawayhishealthyleg.However,farfrombeingvanquishedbythismisfortune,hesummonedhisindomitablewilltoembarkonanewlifejourney.Fromthegroundup,helaunchedasmallbusinessventure,onlytobemetwithalitanyofchallenges.Financialconstraints,clientdefections,andcut-throatmarketcompetition—eachobstacleloomedlikeaninsurmountablemountain.Nevertheless,withunwaveringdeterminationandgrit,hesurmountedthesehurdlesonebyone,ultimatelyachievingresoundingsuccess.Hisstorystruckadeepchordwithinme,castingaglimmerofhopeintotheabyssofmydespair.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Havingabsorbedhisstory,Imadearesolutedecisiontoreturntothehallowedhallsoflearningwhilesimultaneouslyshoulderingthefinancialburdenofmyfamily.Duringbreaks,Iscouredthecityforpart-timeemploymentopportunities.Whetheritwasdistributingflyersonstreetcorners,tutoringstudentsintheirhomes,ortoilingawayinrestaurants,Iwasundeterredbythearduousnessortedium.Atschool,Iimmersedmyselfinmystudies,seizingeveryfleetingmomenttomasterknowledge.Despitetheover