書面表達30篇（浙江名校期中真題）1．（八年級下·浙江臺州·期中）假如你是林海，你在朋友Allan的微博上看到他發(fā)的帖子抱怨學業(yè)繁重、學習壓力大：Asastudent,myschoollifeisboring.EverydayIhavetodothesamethings,suchashavinglessons,takingexamsanddoingexercises.ButmyhobbyisplayingbasketballandIalwaysplaybasketballwheneverI’mfree.IalwaysforgettofinishmyhomeworkandIamnotdoingaswellasothers.MyparentsareangrywithmeandIamworriedaboutmystudy.WhatcanIdo?ShouldIstopplayingbasketball?請你給Allan寫個回帖，分析他的情況，談談你的看法，并結合自己的學習生活為他提出幾條合理的建議。要求：(1)開頭部分已經寫好，你只需接著寫就可以；(2)文章必須與上面的內容呼應；(3)詞數：80詞左右。HiAllan,Iknowyoufeelboredwiththeschoollifeandyouspendallyourfreetimeplayingbasketball.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LinHai【答案】HiAllan,Iknowyoufeelboredwiththeschoollifeandyouspendallyourfreetimeplayingbasketball.Icanunderstandyourfeelingsverywell.Inordertomakeasuccessintheexam,Ithinkit'simportantforyoutorelax.Butit'snotgoodtoforgettofinishyourhomeworkbecauseofplayingbasketball.Infact,wecandosomethingtomakeourlifemorecolorful.Herearesomepiecesofadviceforyou.Firstly,wecandosomesportstomakeushealthy.Secondly,it'susefulforustodosomereadingorwatchTVafterschool.Lastbutnotleast,wecanspendsometimetalkingwithourfamilyorfriends.Theywillbringushappiness.Ihopemyadvicewilldoyousomehelp,andyoucanenjoyyourschoollifebetter.Yours,LinHai【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如spendtimedoing，playbasketball，inorderto，makeasuccess，intheexam，keephealthy，forgettodo，becauseof，infact，makeourlifemorecolorful，somepiecesofadvice，listentomusic，dosomereading，afterschool等。而固定句型Ithinkit'simportantforyoutorelax./it'snotgoodtoforgettofinishyourhomeworkbecauseofplayingbasketball./it'susefulforustodosomereadingorwatchTVafterschool.的運用，豐富了短文內容，使表達多樣化；同時Firstly,…/Secondly,…/Lastbutnotleast,…使敘述條理，層次分明，是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數。2．（22-23八年級下·浙江·期中）心理健康(mentalhealth)對每個人都很重要。正處于青春期的我們應該怎么保持心理健康呢？假如你是學校的心理健康知識宣講員，請根據下面的內容提示寫篇短文，發(fā)表在校刊上。學校學會和他人相處融洽；多交益友，和他們分享悲傷和快樂；可向老師求助，也可向同學傾訴；學校應該多開設心理健康課；家庭家長需培養(yǎng)孩子的獨立性；不能只和孩子談成績；多溝通；個人幫助自己是最有用的；在空閑時，多閱讀，適當運動；要求:1）要點齊全，語句通順，邏輯連貫，可適當發(fā)揮；2）詞數80詞左右。(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數)Mentalhealthisveryimportantforallofus.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Mentalhealthisveryimportantforallofus.Wecandomanythingstokeepmentalityhealthy.Atschool,weshouldlearntogetalongwellwithothers.Weshouldmakemorefriendsandsharesadnessandhappinesswiththem.Wecanaskourteachersforhelportalktoourclassmateswhenweareintrouble.Ourteachershavemoreexperienceandwecandependonthem.What’smore,theschoolshouldhavethecoursesforthestudentstokeepmentalityhealthy.Athome,theparentsshouldcommunicatemorewiththeirchildren,andthegradesshouldn’tbetheonlything.Parentsneedtocultivatetheirchildren’sindependence.It’sthemostimportantthingforustohelpourselvesonourown.Ithinkitismostusefultohelpmyself.Inourfreetime,we’dbetterdosomeexercisetokeephealthyandreadmorebooks.Themoreweread,thebetterourmindwillbe.Lastbutnotleast,weshouldtakeupagoodhobby.Agoodhobbycanhelpusrelax．【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現在時”；③提示：根據所給提示完成寫作，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖；第二步，根據所給提示，談談如何保持心理健康。[亮點詞匯]①mentalityhealthy心理健康②getalongwellwithsb.與某人相處得很好③introuble陷入困境④dependon依靠⑤course課程⑥independence獨立⑦lastbutnotleast最后但同樣重要的[高分句型]Themoreweread,thebetterourmindwillbe.(the+比較級…,the+比較級…句型)3．（22-23八年級下·浙江紹興·期中）在上周的英語課上，同學們就“孩子是否應當在家做家務”為主題組織了一場討論。請你根據下表提供的信息，將討論的結果整理成文。贊成觀點反對觀點1.培養(yǎng)獨立能力，學會照顧自己；2.懂得公平合理性的理念；1.來自學校的壓力太大；2.浪費時間，沒有必要現在做家務，長大了自然會做；3.提供一個干凈、舒適的環(huán)境是父母的事。你的觀點：……注意：①詞數：80詞左右（短文的開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數）；②短文須包括表中所有內容要點，并闡明自己的觀點，不要逐句翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。Nowadaysmanychildrendon’tlikedoingchores.Lastweek,wehadadiscussionaboutit.Herearetheresults.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Nowadaysmanychildrendon’tlikedoingchores.Lastweek,wehadadiscussionaboutit.Herearetheresults.Somestudentsthinkchildrenshoulddochoresathome.First,doingchoreshelpschildrendeveloptheirindependenceandteachesthemtolookafterthemselves.Italsohelpsthemtounderstandtheideaoffairness.Atlast,everyoneshouldtakepartinkeepingtheenvironmentcleanandtidy.However,othersdon’tthinkchildrenshoulddochores.Theythinkthesedayschildrenalreadyhaveenoughstressfromschool,anddoinghouseworkisawasteoftime.It’snotnecessarytolearnitnowbecausetheycandoitwhentheygrowup.What’smore,it’sparents’jobtoprovideacleanandcomfortableenvironment.Inmyopinion,theearlierkidslearntobeindependent,thebetteritisfortheirfuture.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，學生應注意不要遺漏表格所給要點。適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹同學們針對“孩子是否應當在家做家務”有不同的觀點。第二步，具體闡述同學們針對“孩子是否應當在家做家務”發(fā)表的不同觀點和理由。第三步，介紹自己針對“孩子是否應當在家做家務”發(fā)表的觀點和理由。[亮點詞匯]①dochores做家務②helpsb.dosth.幫某人做某事③lookafter照顧④takepartin參加⑤growup長大

[高分句型]①Somestudentsthinkchildrenshoulddochoresathome.（省略that的賓語從句）②It’snotnecessarytolearnitnowbecausetheycandoitwhentheygrowup.（because引導的原因狀語從句）③Inmyopinion,theearlierkidslearntobeindependent,thebetteritisfortheirfuture.（the+比較級，the+比較級）4．（22-23八年級下·浙江麗水·期中）勞動節(jié)即將到來，在你?！皠趧咏逃隆逼陂g，校英語報發(fā)起了“AHelper”主題征文活動。請結合自身情況，用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談談你經常做的勞動、你的收獲以及你對學生參加勞動的看法。內容要點提示如下：WhatyouoftendoWhatyouhavelearnedathomedothedishes…·lifeskills·responsibility·……atschoolsweepthefloor…incommunitycleanupthecitypark…注意：1.根據表格中的內容提示進行寫作，可適當發(fā)揮；2.80詞左右（文章的標題和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）；3.字跡工整，書寫規(guī)范、正確，語句通順，注意單詞的大小寫和標點等；4.不得出現真實姓名和班級信息。AHelperAsateenager,it’simportanttobeahelperinlife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AHelperAsateenager,it’simportanttobeahelperinlife.Athome,Ioftenhelpdothedishesandcookmealsformyfamily.Atschool,Ioftenhelpteacherssweepthefloorandcleantheblackboard.Inthecommunity,Iusuallyhelpcleanupthecityparksandhandoutleaflets.Theybringalotoffuntoourlife.Bydoingthese,wecannotonlyimproveourlifeskills,butalsoimproveoursenseofresponsibility.Theyalsohelpusunderstandtheideaoffairness.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現在時”；③提示：根據表格內容進行寫作，可適當發(fā)揮，注意語句通順，表述清晰。[寫作步驟]第一步，從在家、學校和社區(qū)講述經常參加的勞動；第二步，介紹自己的收獲及對參加勞動的看法。[亮點詞匯]①helpdosth幫助做某事②cleanup清理③handout分發(fā)[高分句型]Bydoingthese,wecannotonlyimproveourlifeskills,butalsoimproveoursenseofresponsibility.(notonly...butalso“不僅……而且”)5．（22-23八年級下·浙江臺州·期中）WildlifeProtectionSociety(野生動物保護協(xié)會)在ChinaDaily上發(fā)布了一個招募志愿者的公告。假如你是李平，請你用英文給協(xié)會主席寫一封信，申請成為志愿者，要點如下：要求：1）必須包含所有要點，省略號處適當補充；2）詞數：80—100（開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數）。DearChairperson,IwouldliketojointheWildlifeProtectionSociety.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiPing【答案】例文DearChairperson,IwouldliketojointheWildlifeProtectionSociety.Iamkindandalwaysreadytohelpothers.I’mgoodatwritingandcommunicatingwithpeople.Iloveanimals,takingpicturesandtravelling.I’mveryinterestedinwildlife.However,alotofwildanimalsareindanger.Thenumberofsomeanimalsisgettingsmallerandsmaller.Theydon’thaveenoughfoodtoeatandtheyarelosingtheirhomes.Ithinkallofusshoulddosomethingtohelpthem.Icanhelptobuildmorenaturereservesandwritearticlestotellpeopletheimportanceofprotectingwildanimals.SoIhopeIcanbeamemberofyou.Lookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,LiPing【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現在時”；③提示：根據所給提示完成寫作，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己的性格，能力和愛好；第二步，介紹你想加入的原因以及你會做的事情；第三步，期待對方的回復。[亮點詞匯]①bereadytodo樂意做②indanger在危險中③helptodo幫助做④lookforwardtodoing期待做[高分句型]Ithinkallofusshoulddosomethingtohelpthem.（賓語從句）6．（22-23八年級下·浙江杭州·期中）假定你是李平，請閱讀以下郵件并回復。詞數80左右，可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連接完整。Hithere,LiPing!How’severythinggoing?I’mnotfeelingwellthesedays.Myparentsaregivingmetoomuchpressureaboutschool.I’munhappywiththem.Also,Ikeepworryingaboutgettingbettergradesthanmyclassmates,soI’mstressedoutallthetime.WhatshouldIdo?Couldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply!JohnDearJohn,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiPing【答案】例文DearJohn,Thankyouforyourletter.Everythingisfinewithmehere.Maybeyoushouldhaveadeepconversationwithyourparentstoexpressyourrealfeelings.Justbehonestandbravetotellthemyouaretootired,notlazy.Theywillunderstandyou.Astoyourgradesatschool,it’snoneedtocomparewithothers.Lifeshouldn’tjustbeaboutgoodgrades.Freetimeactivitiesareimportant,too.Theseactivitiesaregoodforbothhealthandstudy.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou!LiPing【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)主要為“一般現在時”；③提示：需注意時態(tài)，根據郵件內容完成寫作，可適當發(fā)揮，保證語句通順，意思連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，回答郵件中的問候；第二步，針對郵件中的問題，給出相關建議；第三步，期待收到回信。[亮點詞匯]①comparewith與……比較②lookforwardto期待[高分句型]①Justbehonestandbravetotellthemyouaretootired,notlazy.（祈使句）②Astoyourgradesatschool,it’snoneedtocomparewithothers.（it固定句型）7．（22-23八年級下·浙江溫州·期中）假如你是李華，一個英語游學團要來學校，學校需要一些志愿者，你想成為其中的一員。請根據以下要求寫一封應征郵件：內容：1.個人愛好；2.學英語經歷及英語能力；3.推薦一個旅游勝地并說明理由；4.可適當發(fā)揮。DearAndrew,I’mLiHua.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearAndrew,

I’mLiHua.I’mwritingtoaskforthepositionasastudentvolunteer.IlikeEnglishverymuch.IusuallywatchEnglishfilmsandlistentoEnglishsongsinmysparetime.Asanoutgoinggirl,Igetalongwellwithmyclassmates.Besides,I’mgoodatEnglishandmyspokenEnglishisexcellent.What’smore,IhelpedmyEnglishteacherinseveralEnglishactivitiesofmyclass.Theyweresuccessful.AndI’dliketorecommendtheGreatWalltoallofyou.Becauseit’snotonlytheeffortoftheworkingpeopleinancientChina,butalsothesymbolofancientChineseculture.Allinall,I’msurethatI’mtherightpersonyouarelookingfor.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：一般現在時、一般過去時；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏提示信息，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“我寫信是想申請學生志愿者的職位”來引出重點介紹的內容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。從“個人愛好、學英語經歷及英語能力、推薦旅游勝地及推薦原因等”幾個方面重點介紹；第三步，書寫結語。表達“期待早日回復”的愿望。[亮點詞匯]①inmysparetime在我的業(yè)余時間②getalongwellwith與……相處融洽③amgoodat擅長④What’smore另外⑤recommend...to...推薦……給……⑥notonly...butalso...不僅……而且……⑦thesymbolof……的象征⑧Allinall總之⑨Lookingforwardto期待[高分句型]①I’mwritingtoaskforthepositionasastudentvolunteer.（動詞不定式作目的狀語）②Allinall,I’msurethatI’mtherightpersonyouarelookingfor.（that引導賓語從句；that引導定語從句，that省略）8．（22-23八年級下·浙江杭州·期中）假如你叫Mr.Known。請仔細閱讀下列求助信，并作回復。詞數80左右。要求：(1)簡要分析求助者存在問題的原因，并給出兩條及以上可行性建議；(2)開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；(3)文中不得出現學校和個人的真實信息。To:Mr.KnownFrom:CryingEricDearMr.Known,IarguedwithmybestfriendEllenthedaybeforeyesterday.Ifoundshetookmynewbooksawaywithoutanywordsyesterday.Idon’tknowwhy.Sincethen,wehaven’ttalkedwitheachotheranymore.Idon’twanttolosethisfriend,butIdon’tknowwhattodo.Ireallyneedyourhelp.CryingEricDearEric,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Mr.Known【答案】范文DearEric,Iamsosorrytohearthatyouarguedwithyourbestfriend.Iwouldliketoofferyousomesuggestions,andthereforeIamnowwritingtoyou.Inmyopinion,youshouldbegenerousenough,especiallywithyourbestfriends.Ellenthinksyouaresuchagoodfriend,soshewouldtakeyourbookwithoutaskingyou.Youshouldbuyherasmallgifttorepairyourrelationship.Atthesametime,tellhertoletyouknowifshetakesyourbookagain.IhopeyoucanbegoodfriendswithEllen.Yours,Mr.Known【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為書信形式；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意要求中所需要寫的內容，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。通過我對“吵架”事件的驚訝來引出重點內容的介紹；第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。通過對“吵架”事件的原因分析以及如何解決這個問題兩個方面來闡述重點內容；第三步，書寫總結。期望Eric跟她的朋友重歸于好。[亮點詞匯]①arguewith爭吵②especially尤其③offer提供④atthesametime同時[高分句型]①Iamsosorrytohearthatyouarguedwithyourbestfriend.（that引導賓語從句）②Atthesametime,tellhertoletyouknowifshetakesyourbookagain.（if引導條件狀語從句）9．（22-23八年級下·浙江杭州·期中）假如你是美國來杭州的交換生Leo，現在居住在翠苑社區(qū)，你收到了來自翠苑社區(qū)居委會主任Tim的來信。請根據來信進行回復。DearLeo,Summerholidayiscoming,sostudentsarewantedtodosomevolunteerworkinCuiyuanCommunity.Whatdoyouthinkofvolunteerwork?Ifyouhaveachancetobeavolunteer,whatkindofvolunteerworkdoyouwanttodo?Besides,canyougivesomeadvicetochildreninourcommunityonhowtospendameaningfulandcolorfulholiday?Wesincerelyhopeyoucanjoinustogether.Yours,Tim注意：1.詞數80左右。2.適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。DearTim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Leo【答案】例文：DearTim,Iamverygladtohearfromyou.Nowletmeansweryourquestions.Ithinkvolunteerworkmeansalottous.IfIhaveachancetobeavolunteer,IwanttoworkatananimalhospitalbecauseIloveanimals.Inordertospendameaningfulandcolorfulholiday,firstly,youcanhelpoutaroundthehouseanddosomehousework.Secondly,youcanreadsomebookstobroadenyourhorizons.Finally,youcanbeavolunteertohelpthoseinneed.Ihopeyouwillhaveagreat,relaxingandstress-freeholiday.Yours,Leo【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為書信作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏來信中的關鍵信息，針對對方的問題給出答復。[寫作步驟]第一步，問候對方；第二步，談談對志愿工作的看法，自己想要做什么志愿工作；第三步，給孩子們一些度過有意義又精彩的假期的建議；第四步，收尾。[亮點詞匯]①helpoutaroundthehouse在家里幫忙②thoseinneed那些需要幫助的人③broadenone’shorizons拓寬視野[高分句型]IfIhaveachancetobeavolunteer,IwanttoworkatananimalhospitalbecauseIloveanimals.（if引導條件狀語從句）10．（22-23八年級下·浙江杭州·期中）以下是在學生求助網站的一個帖子，假設你是Mr.Helper，請你給他寫一封回帖。DearMr.Helper,Ihavesomeproblemsthesedays.First,Ialwaysgetsickrecentlybecausetheweatherchangesoften.Ihaveacoldeasily.Second,I’mverybusywithmyschoolwork,butmyparentsalwaystellmetodomuchhouseworkathome.Third,Isometimesfeellonely.WhatcanIdo?Yours,LookingforHelp注意：1.文中不得出現你的真實姓名和校名；2.詞數80左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。DearLookingforHelp,I’msorrythatyouhavesomanyproblems.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Mr.Helper【答案】例文：DearLookingforHelp,I’msorrythatyouhavesomanyproblems.Butdon’tworry.Letmegiveyousomeadvice.Firstly,youcoulddomoreexercisetokeephealthier.It’salsoagoodwaytoeatmorefruitandvegetables.Secondly,whydon’tyoucommunicatewithyourparents?Youshouldexplainthatyoudon’tminddoinghousework,butyouaretoobusyonweekdays.Whenyouarefreeonweekends,youwillhelpdosomehousework.Finally,you’dbetterjoinaclubandmakemorefriends.Wheneveryoufeellonely,youcantalkwithyourfriends.Ihopethesesuggestionscanhelpyou.Bestwishes!Yours,Mr.Helper【詳解】[總體分析］①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為一封回帖；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)主要為“一般現在時”；③提示：文章應該包括求助帖中三個方面的內容，要適當補充，使文章內容充實；行文時多用第一人稱，盡量多使用短語和句型；寫作中適當使用連接詞，使行文連貫、順暢。［寫作步驟］第一步，開門見山，表達安慰，提供建議；第二步，針對求助帖中的三個方面的問題，分別給出合理的建議；第三步，書寫總結與祝愿。［亮點詞匯］①communicatewithsb.與某人交流②joinaclub加入俱樂部［高分句型］①It’salsoagoodwaytoeatmorefruitandvegetables.(it作形式主語)②Whenyouarefreeonweekends,youwillhelpdosomehousework.(when引導時間狀語從句)11．（22-23八年級下·浙江溫州·期中）溫州電視臺少兒頻道策劃開辦一檔向全世界介紹溫州的旅游節(jié)目(TravelAroundWenzhou)，現來我校公開招聘小記者。假設你叫軒軒，請你給電臺導演寫一封電子郵件，介紹你的性格、特長、旅游經歷，并為該節(jié)目推薦一個旅游勝地。100字左右，開頭和結尾部分已給出，不計入總詞數。Deardirector,MynameisXuanxuan.I’dliketobeareporterforyourTVprogramTravelAroundWenzhou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IhopeIwillhavethechancetoworkforyourTVprogram.Yours,Xuanxuan【答案】例文Deardirector,MynameisXuanxuan.I’dliketobeareporterforyourTVprogramTravelAroundWenzhou.I’moutgoingandgoodatcommunicatingwithothers.What’smore,IamtheclassmonitorsothatIknowhowtoworkwithothers.WhatIamproudofismyEnglish.I’vewonmanyprizesinEnglish-speakingandEnglish-writingcompetitions.Iamfondoftravelling.IhavebeentolotsofplacesofinterestaroundChinaandeveninothercountrieswithmyparents.IthinkagoodplacetotravelisYandangMountain,whichislocatedinmyhometownWenzhou.It’samagiclandofmountainsandrocksindifferenceshapes.Withthebirds’singingandthesoundofrunningwater,you’llfeelthatyouareintheheaven.Ithinkforeignerswillloveit. IhopeIwillhavethechancetoworkforyourTVprogram.Yours,Xuanxuan【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般現在時”為主；③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中每一項內容，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己的性格和特長；第二步，敘述自己旅游經歷并推薦一個旅游勝地。[亮點詞匯]①communicatewithsb和某人交流②beproudof以……自豪③belocatedin位于[高分句型]①What’smore,IamtheclassmonitorsothatIknowhowtoworkwithothers.（目的狀語從句）②IthinkagoodplacetotravelisYandangMountain,whichislocatedinmyhometownWenzhou（定語從句）12．（22-23八年級下·浙江溫州·期中）一次運動，一場旅行，一個微笑都可能讓你難以忘懷。假如，你是陳華，請根據《新英語》報社征文要求，以AnunforgettableExperience為題，寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文，描寫你的難忘經歷并談談你的感想。要求：文中不能出現真實的個人身份信息。提示詞：風景區(qū)scenicspots

感激的grateful

給……留下深刻印象impressAnUnforgettableExperience____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AnUnforgettableExperienceIwenttoDalianwithmyparentslastyear.Dalianisabeautifulandmoderncitywhichisworthvisitingagain.Webeganourtravelafterbreakfast.First,wetookthebustotheSeaPark,oneofitsfamousscenicspots.ThereweresomanydifferentkindsoffishesthatIcouldn’tbelievemyeyes.Wealsosawtheshowofdolphins.Itwasfantastic.Thenwehadlunchinarestaurantwhereweenjoyedourselvesalot.Afterlunch,wewentswimming.Theseawasblueandbeachwasgolden.Theyimpressedmedeeply.Thetriphasopenedmyeyestotheoutsideworld.ItwassowonderfulthatIwillneverforgetit.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；

②時態(tài)：主要是“一般過去時”；

③提示：描述自己難忘的經歷和感想，注意結合自己的經歷，描述自己的感受。

[寫作步驟]

第一步，根據題目要求，結合自己難忘的經歷，進行點題；

第二步，闡述清楚此次經歷的過程，務必注意過去時的使用。

第三步，總結自己的感受。

[亮點詞匯]

①oneofitsfamousscenicspots著名的風景區(qū)之一

②enjoyedourselvesalot玩得非常愉快③impressedmedeeply讓我印象深刻[高分句型]

①Dalianisabeautifulandmoderncitywhichisworthvisitingagain.(定語從句)

②ThereweresomanydifferentkindsoffishesthatIcouldn’tbelievemyeyes.(so...that引導的結果狀語從句)③Thenwehadlunchinarestaurantwhereweenjoyedourselvesalot.(定語從句)13．（22-23八年級下·浙江溫州·期中）來自英國ForestSchool的師生們想了解中國學生的志愿者(volunteer)活動情況。你校將以“我的一次志愿服務經歷”為主題推出一期英語版公眾號。假如你是李華，請積極投稿，談談你的一次志愿者服務經歷以及收獲。要求：（1）不能出現真實的個人信息。（2）詞數約90詞，開頭不計入總詞數。參考詞匯:做社區(qū)義工workasacommunityvolunteer，敬老院oldpeople’shome，幫助貧困群眾helpthepoorHello,I’mLiHua.I’mgladtosharemyexperienceasavolunteerwithyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

Hello,I’mLiHua.I’mgladtosharemyexperienceasavolunteerwithyou.It’sgreattobeavolunteerandhelpothers.IhavetakenpartinmanyvoluntaryactivitiesthesedaysandIhavelearntalot.

Iworkedasacommunityvolunteer.Ihelpedsortoutwasteinourcommunitythiswinterholiday.Itaughtmyneighborstoputtherubbishintocorrectrubbishbins.LastSunday,Iwenttotheoldpeople’shome.Icleanedtheoldpeople’sroomsanddidsomewashing.Afterthat,Isangsongsfortheoldandcooksomedeliciousfoodforthem.Realhappinesscomesfromhelpingothers.WhenIsawtheoldpeoplelaughhappily,Ihadastrongfeelingofsatisfaction.Ihopemyvolunteerworkcanmakeadifferencetomorepeople.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般過去時”為主；③提示：根據主題完成寫作，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖；第二步，介紹自己的一次志愿者服務經歷以及收獲；第三步，書寫結語。[亮點詞匯]①takepartin參加②voluntary自愿的③sortout分類④comefrom來自⑤satisfaction滿足⑥makeadifference有影響[高分句型]WhenIsawtheoldpeoplelaughhappily,Ihadastrongfeelingofsatisfaction.(when引導時間狀語從句)14．（22-23八年級下·浙江溫州·期中）假如你是李華，為了感受和傳遞正能量，學校在三月已經開展了學雷鋒系列活動，現請你為學校英語推送專欄VoiceofSchool寫一篇關于本次活動的報道。選擇至少兩個活動簡要介紹過程并分享自己的感受。注意：1.文中不得出現真實人名和校名等相關信息。2.詞數：100詞左右。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。小詞典community

n.社區(qū)

culturen.文化

curl

n.卷發(fā)flower-girln.花童

intangibleculturalheritage非物質文化遺產

oxygen

n.氧氣radiationn.輻射

“stone-boiled”tea圍爐煮茶

snackn.零食/v.吃零食straightenern.直發(fā)棒

ultra-modernspacesuit超現代宇航服

weddingn.婚禮InMarch,ourschoolheldlotsofactivitiestolearnfromLeiFeng________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：InMarch,ourschoolheldlotsofactivitiestolearnfromLeiFeng.WehavediscoveredmanypeoplelikeLeiFeng.PeterandTomsawelderlypeoplewhohaddifficultywalkingontheirwayhome,andtheycarefullyhelpedthemcrosstheroad.OnSunday,MaryandIwenttothecommunitypark.Wefoundalotofjunkfoodbagsinthepark.We