讀后續(xù)寫人與動物幫助迷茫的人續(xù)寫篇

3月本校月考讀后續(xù)寫一、原題呈現(xiàn)

Kayceealways

hadalovefor

animals.Turtles,cats,dogs,hamsters-Kayceelovedthemall.Shehadseveralpetsgrowingupandwasresponsiblefortakingcareofallofthem.Despiteherbusystudiesinhighschool,sheevenmadetimetovolunteeratthenearest

animalshelter.AssonasKayceegotherdriver'slicenseandasetofwheels,shewouldspendeveryweekenddrivingseveralmilestotheoutskirts(市)ofChicagotohelpwalkthedogsandcleanthecages.ForKayce,theseanimalswere

inneedofalovingandpermanenthome.Inthe

chain-linkfences

oftheshelter,noanimalcouldfeeltrulyathome.Still,Kayceehopedthatheractionswouldhelp

giveasenseofcertaintyandasourceoflove

fortheselonelycreatures.Yet,asshewouldfindout,theactofcaringforanimalsmayendupbringinglightandwarmthtoyourlifeaswell.OneSaturday,whilemakingherroundsattheanimalshelter,Kayceenoticedamiddle-agedmanwhowaslookingforadogtoadopt.Aftercaringforso

manydogswithroughpastsandahistoryofabusivetreatment,Kayceerecognized

asimilarpain

intheman'seyesashewanderedthroughthehallsoftheshelter,almost

inadaze(迷茫)

himself.Aftershowingthemanaroundforhalfanhour,Kayceefinalytookhimasideandasked,"DoyoumindifIaskwhat'swrong?Youseemtobeinpainfromsomething".Feelingsurprised,theman

chuckledembarrassedlyandsighed."You'reprettybrightforyourage,"hesaid,"Mywife...She...diedafewmonthsagoandIstillhaven'tgottenpastit.I’mhopingthatadoptingapetmayhelpmeto

pickupthepieces

(重整旗鼓)."要求:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為

150

左右;2.請按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:

Kayceefeltabituneasyafterhearingtheman'sstory,butshenoddedandheldhishand.______________________________Paragraph2:Atlast,theycametoacagewithabrowncorgi(柯基)inside.___________________________________________________________________二、宏觀把握主題情節(jié)：

Kaycee在animalshelter當(dāng)志愿者照顧被遺棄或虐待的動物們，并認(rèn)為動物們需要找到一個充滿愛的，可以永遠(yuǎn)呆下去的家。她遇到了一位男士前來領(lǐng)養(yǎng)狗狗，但是他的妻子剛?cè)ナ啦痪?，男士處于迷茫悲傷痛苦的狀態(tài)。人物分析：

Kaycee是一位內(nèi)心充滿了溫暖的志愿者，致力于照顧動物們，并希望它們可以找到alovingandpermanenthome。在theman身上，她看到了similarpain。此時她應(yīng)該是看到了動物們和男士的那種潛在的聯(lián)系，努力要幫上忙。主題：

Caringforanimalscouldbringlightandwarmthtobothanimalsandhumans.三、情節(jié)構(gòu)思視角：問題鏈構(gòu)思Para.1:Kayceefeltabituneasyafterhearingtheman'sstory,butshenoddedandheldhishand.①WhatdidKayceesaytocomforttheman?②Whatwastheman'srepsonsewhenlookingforadog?③

Didthemanfindthedoghewantedtoadpot?解讀：根據(jù)前文kaycee聽到了男士的故事，首段第一句可以接著補(bǔ)充Kaycee安慰男士的話。緊接著就是開始帶男士尋找狗，并介紹信息或詢問男士問題。首段沖突尚未解決，男士應(yīng)該對接觸到的狗都不是很心儀，仍處于心情低落狀態(tài)。結(jié)合第二段提示句中的atlast可知，首段結(jié)尾時應(yīng)講述未找到想要領(lǐng)養(yǎng)的狗。Para.2:Atlast,theycametoacagewithabrowncorgi(柯基)inside.①Whatwascorgi'saction?②Whatwastheinteractionbetweenthemanandthedog?③WhatdidKayceedoandrealize?解讀：根據(jù)提示句可知，本段應(yīng)描述corgi狗吸引到了男士的地方，以及男士與狗狗之間簡短的互動，以及最終男士決定領(lǐng)養(yǎng)這只狗。而kaycee也因為能給狗狗和陌生的失落男帶去溫暖和希望而感到開心。四、范文賞析官方范文:

Kayceefeltabituneasyafterhearingtheman'sstory,butshenoddedandheldhishand.”youcouldmakeit,"sheencouragedhim

beamingawarmsmile.Guidingthemantothecages,Kayceeaskedhimewhatkindofdoghe’dliketoadopt.

Confusedanddazed,themanstuttered,unabletogiveaname.

Sighingdeeply,he

confessed

thathewasnottheonewhowasinterestedindogs,buthiswire.

Realizingthepainhiddenunderhistearfuleyes,Kayceecomfortedhimwithpatience,leadinghimtopickfromonedogtoanotherwhileexplainingeverydogindetails.

Yetthegloomycloudstillhangingoverhishead,alleffortswentinvain.

Atlast,theycametoacagewithabrowncorgiinside.

Withstronghope,Kayceeintroducedthiscorgi,whowasabusedandthenabandonedwithonlythreelegsandoneeyeleft.Despitehisdisability,heisthemostoptimisticone.Noticingtheirvisits,thecorgiwaggedhistail(揺尾巴)merrily,

staringatthemanwithhisbigbrighteye.

Struckbytheshorteye-contactanditsstories,themanmadeanimmediatedecisiontoadoptthecorgi.Surprisedanddelighted,Kayceenoddedherheadinrelief.Aftersigningrelateddocuments,Kayce

eyedthemdisappearatthegate.

Caringforanimalscouldbringlightandwarmthtobothanimalsandhuman,shethought.Effy下水作文

Kayceefeltabituneasyafterhearingtheman'sstory,butshenoddedandheldhishand."Iamsorryforyourloss.Butyou'llmakeit,"comfortedKaycee,

hertone

softandwarm.Leadingthemantothecages,Kaycee

inquiredhimabout

thetypeofdoghewasconsideringadoptingwhilepatiently

explaining

everypossibledetailsofeachdog,but

the

man'seyesjustkeptdriftingbackandforth.Utterlydazed,theman,onceagain,

chuckledembarrassedlyandstuttered,"

Thankyou!ButIjustdon't...",

hisvoicetingedwith

apologyandgloom.

Kaycee,,

beaming

awarmsmile,

encouragedtheman

and

guidedhimtocontinuetheirresearch.

Atlast,theycametoacagewithabrowncorgiinside.

Pressinghisnoseagainstthecage,the

scarred

dog

affetionatelygazedupat

themanandKaycee

withhisgem-likeeyes,waggingitstailmerrily.

"HeisSkip,asweetheart.

Hewas

onceabused

butisalways

resilient."explainedKaycee.Theman

kneltdown,stroking

hisfur

tenderly.Theireyeslockedto