高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)年少因誤解與朋友關(guān)系破裂，后來(lái)重歸于好1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Formyfourteenthbirthday,mymomofferedtotakemeandmyseveralfriendstothecitynearestoursmalltowntovisitamall,goshopping,eatpizzainthefoodcourt,andthencatchamovie.Afterward,wewouldallreturntomyhouseforaparty.Itwasjustthekindofcelebrationthatateenagegirlexpected.Whenitwastimetoclimbaboardthebusandridetogethertomyhomeoutinthecountry,Noradidn’tshowup.Ifeltconfused.ThenIfeltmad.Whydidn’tshetellmeshecouldn’tmakeit?Whywouldshetellmeshe’dcometothepartyandthenbackoutwithoutlettingmeknow?IdecidedtocallNoraandgetsomeanswers.Noraexplainedthatshe’dhadtostayhomefromschoolbecauseshehadgottensick.Shecouldn’tridethebushomewithmeandmyotherfriendsorjoinusattheshoppingmallforfood-courtpizzaandamoviebecauseshehadbeentoosicktocometoschool.4續(xù)寫原文Norabegancryingonthephone,hurtandsurprisedthatIwasangrywithher.Momentslater,hermothercalledback.Angrily,shetoldmehowmuchI’dhurtherdaughter,howmuchNorahadwantedtojoinus,andthatshehadbeentheonetochangeNora’splanswhenshedidn’tallowhertogotoschoolsickthatday.IseldomgaveNoraorherabsencefromourfestivitiesanotherthought.AtschoolonMonday,IfounditeasytoavoidhersincesheandIhadnoclassestogether.Fortherestoftheschoolyear,weseldomspoke,andIforgotaboutmyhurtfulcallwithNoraastimewentby.ThenextyearIstartedatthehighschool,withtwiceasmanystudentsasmymiddleschool.Imadesomenewfriendsandkeptsomeoldones.MaybeIglancedatNorawithasmallsmileonceinawhileaswepassedinthehalls,butourfriendshiphadbeenrelegated(使降級(jí))tothepast.Ithappenedsometimes,andIshruggeditoff(不予理睬).5段首句Para1：Yearslater,FacebooksuggestedNoraasanonlinefriendforoursimilarities.Para2：IwroteanapologylettertoNora.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者的諾拉沒(méi)有參加她14歲的生日派對(duì)，使作者很是生氣以至于在電話里產(chǎn)生了一些誤解，導(dǎo)致后來(lái)關(guān)系的破裂。在經(jīng)過(guò)很長(zhǎng)時(shí)間后，作者在一次無(wú)意的網(wǎng)絡(luò)推薦好友中，主動(dòng)發(fā)出了加諾拉好友的申請(qǐng)，后來(lái)兩人在網(wǎng)上互動(dòng)一段時(shí)間后，又化解矛盾，重歸于好的故事。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Yearslater,FacebooksuggestedNoraasanonlinefriendforoursimilarities.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“幾年后，臉書因?yàn)槲覀兊南嗨浦幫扑]諾拉做我的網(wǎng)友?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懳液椭Z拉建立友誼，在網(wǎng)上互動(dòng)，以及作者對(duì)自己以前行為的反思。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：IwroteanapologylettertoNora.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我給諾拉寫了一封道歉信?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼懽髡咴趯懙狼感藕蟀l(fā)生的事情。11續(xù)寫思路分析續(xù)寫線索推薦諾拉做我的網(wǎng)友——我發(fā)出加好友請(qǐng)求——我和諾拉在網(wǎng)上互動(dòng)——我感到后悔對(duì)于以前的行為——我給諾拉寫了一封道歉信——感悟12續(xù)寫素材可用詞匯：行為類①推薦：suggest/recommend②.意識(shí)到：recognize/beawareof/realize③.處理：handle/dealwith情緒類①.失望的：disappointed/despondent②.不幸的：ill-fated/unfortunate13續(xù)寫素材可用句型：[高分句型1].Afterayearorsoofpoliteonlineinteractions,IbegantoreflectonthatuglyphoneconversationI’dinitiatedwithNoraallthoseyearsbefore.（運(yùn)用了省略連詞that的定語(yǔ)從句。）[高分句型2].IwonderedifNorawouldevenremembertheincident.（運(yùn)用了連詞if引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。）14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)Yearslater,FacebooksuggestedNoraasanonlinefriendforoursimilarities.So,Ireachedoutandsentthefriendrequest.Noraaccepted.Afterayearorsoofpoliteonlineinteractions,IbegantoreflectonthatuglyphoneconversationI’dinitiatedwithNoraallthoseyearsbefore.Now,Iregretteditdeeply.Irecognizedhowselfish,self-centered,andself-absorbedI’dbeen.Ididn’tevengiveherachancetotalkwithme,andIdidn’tthinkabouthowdisappointedshemusthavebeen,orevenaskhowshewasfeeling.16范文呈現(xiàn)IwroteanapologylettertoNora.IwonderedifNorawouldevenremembertheincident.Butonlyafewdayslater,sherespondedwithamessageofherown—oneofheartfeltreceptivityandforgiveness.Shetoldmehowshe’dmissedmeafterthatill-fatedbirthdaycelebrationweekendandwantedtostayfriendswithme.Iexpressedmyregretthattheopportunityhadbeenwasted—allbecauseofthatonephonecallandhowI’dhandledit.17范文譯文幾年后，臉書推薦諾拉作為我們的網(wǎng)友，因?yàn)槲覀冇邢嗨浦?。所以，我?lián)系并發(fā)送了朋友請(qǐng)求。諾拉接受了。經(jīng)過(guò)一年左右禮貌的網(wǎng)絡(luò)互動(dòng)，我開始反思那些年前我和諾拉發(fā)起的那次丑陋的電話交談?，F(xiàn)在，我深感遺憾。我意識(shí)到自己是多么自私、以自我為中心、全神貫注。我甚至沒(méi)有給她一個(gè)與我交談的機(jī)會(huì)，我也沒(méi)有想過(guò)她一定有多失望，甚至沒(méi)有問(wèn)她感覺(jué)如何。18范文譯文我給諾