本文格式為Word版，下載可任意編輯——初一年級(jí)英語(yǔ)my,mother,with,me

Thespringwindisblowngreenwillow,thewindinthehotsummer,the

autumnwindblowingyellowrice,winterwindblowingthewhiteearth,awind

blowingupmysoul.

Theexamiseverystudentworkachievementexhibition,performanceof

thedirectimpactonstudents"mood.Afterfinalexam,transcriptsofhomethat

day,I"mdisappointedurgently,myEnglishresultis78points,afterreadingthe

report,Iwillno()ttoutterasinglewordtolieinbed,staringattheceiling......I

donotknowhowlongafter,thedoorsuddenlyopened,mothercameinand

satdownbesideme,notlookingatme,suddenly,onmymotherangrily

shouted:"youstayinbeddoing?Youfailedtheexamisyoudon"tworkhard,

canthisstrangewho......"Waitingforhertofinish,Icried.

Tiredofcrying,todrythetears,Ilookedatmymother.Themothersaw

myheartcalmdown,shealsorestoredthetruecolours,sayaffectionatelyto

me:"theexamisimportant,butyoursubjectiveeffortismoreimportant,as

longasyoutryyourbest,yourlifeisno".""......"Myeyesarebright,spiritlifts,

confidenceandbacktomeagain.Loveislikethewind,takemybadmoodwas

nottheleasttracewasfound.Blowing,mymindblowingafresh.

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Examsareoftenusedtocheckstudents"learningresultduringaperiod,sothescoresalwaysdirectlyimpactonstudents"mood.

Afterthefinalexam,Ifeltnervouseveryday.WhenIreceivedthefinaltranscript,Iwastotallydisappointed.Ionlygot78pointsinmyEnglishtest.Ilayonthebedwithoutsayingasingleword.Istartedstaringattheceiling.Ididnotknowhowlongitlasted,suddenly,mymothercameinandsatdownbesideme.Shesaidtomeangrily,"Whatareyoudoinghere?Whyyoulieonthebed?Youfailedtheexambecauseyoudon"tworkhard..."Ikeptsilentandwaitedforherto

finish,andthenIcried.

Tiredofcrying,Idriedthetearsandlookedatmymother.ShesawIhavecalmeddown,shesaidaffectionatelytome,"Theexamisveryimportant,andyoumusttryyourbesttoworkhard.Thenyoucanhaveabetterfuture..."MyeyeswereturningbrightandIfel