HowtoEnrichYourWritingbyAddingDetails?TeachingGoals:Attheendofthisclass,studentsshouldbeableto:Learnaboutthetipstoadddetailsinthewriting;學(xué)會(huì)細(xì)節(jié)增添,句子拓展的技巧；Polishthewritingbyusingthetips.學(xué)以致用，優(yōu)化書面表達(dá)。問題：如何“短話長說”？一．交際性拓展：Tip1：交際性拓展，主要集中在信件_____與______，可通過______________，_____________等內(nèi)容的添加，讓書信交際功能更生動(dòng)而又有人情味。比較與發(fā)現(xiàn)：1.給今年即將畢業(yè)的全體高三學(xué)生寫封信，信中建議他們?cè)诟呖迹?theCollegeEntranceExamination）結(jié)束后的暑假中能夠安排一些有意義的事去做。Iamwritingtoofferyousomesuggestions.1.Iamwritingtoofferyousomesuggestions________________________________________.→2. I,amwriting toofferyousomesuggestions_________________________________________________________.聽說某中外合作辦學(xué)大學(xué)招收廣東高中畢業(yè)生，有意申請(qǐng)到該校英語系學(xué)習(xí)，用英語寫一封自薦信。Lookforwardtoyourreply.____________________________________________________andlookforwardtoyourreply.Practice:1.英國朋友對(duì)中國傳統(tǒng)文化感興趣。你邀請(qǐng)他參加中國國畫展覽。IamwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartinatraditionalChinesepaintingexhibition._________________________________________________________________,IamwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartinatraditionalChinesepaintingexhibition.1二．細(xì)節(jié)性拓展Tip2：細(xì)節(jié)拓展可通過兩方面進(jìn)行 :1.__________ ，即通過適當(dāng)________，將寫作內(nèi)容 (_______,_______,_______)2.__________：挖掘?qū)懽鲗?duì)象的不同方面。比較與發(fā)現(xiàn)中英寒假生活調(diào)查，向英國朋友介紹中國學(xué)生的寒假生活。InChina,thewintervacationfallsduringtheChineseNewYear,somoststudentstakepartindifferentSpringFestivalactivities.InChina,thewintervacationfallsduringtheChineseNewYear,somoststudentstakepartindifferentSpringFestivalactivities,____________________________________________________你準(zhǔn)備了中國結(jié)作為禮物送給網(wǎng)友，感謝他的幫助。InChina,theChineseknotisasymboloffriendship.InChina,theChineseknotisasymboloffriendship,_________________________________Practice：推薦來中國旅游:TravelinginChina,youcanlearnalotaboutChinesetraditionalculture.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________手機(jī)攝影大賽，作品拍攝內(nèi)容需展現(xiàn)“最美中國”。YoucantakesomepicturesaboutnaturalsceneryinChina.三．邏輯性拓展Tip3：邏輯性拓展可通過兩方面進(jìn)行 :．表__________:_____________,____________,__________________.表__________:_____________,____________,__________________比較與發(fā)現(xiàn)表結(jié)果：邀請(qǐng)他來中國體驗(yàn)文化。2IwouldliketoinviteyoutocometoChinathissummer._____________________________________________________________________________所有老師全部為外教。AlltheteachersarenativeEnglishspeakers._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________暑假建議你去學(xué)車。Youcanlearntodriveinordertogetadrivinglicense.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________表原因：推薦你的同學(xué)李雷做他的導(dǎo)游。I’dliketorecommendmyclassmateLiLeitobeyourguide.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________學(xué)校茶文化活動(dòng)通知。ATeaCultureFestivalisgoingtobeheldinourschoolnextweek.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________李華，考試不要緊張。LiHua,don’tbenervouswhiletakingexams.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Practice:學(xué)校將召開安全會(huì)議。AmeetingwillbeheldonMay13thinRoom504,BuildingNo.1.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3建議外國友人Peter學(xué)習(xí)中國唐詩。WhynottrytolearnTangpoetry?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________課前請(qǐng)做好充分準(zhǔn)備。Pleasemakefullpreparationsforthelesson.__________________________________________________________________________四．總結(jié)：交際性拓展細(xì)節(jié)性拓展邏輯性拓展五．練習(xí)假定你是李華，即將去英國某中學(xué)做交換生。請(qǐng)你給負(fù)責(zé)該項(xiàng)目的外籍教師Mr.Steven寫一封郵件，了解相關(guān)事宜。要點(diǎn)如下：課程安排；2.住宿環(huán)境；3.其他注意事項(xiàng)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearMr.Steven,I’mgoingtostudyinyourschoolasanexchangestudent(感.受)___________________________,soIm’writingtoseekhelpfromyouinordertolearnsomethingaboutmystaythere.First,Iwanttoknow thecoursearrangementsothat(因果)____________________________________________________________________________.Besides,Iwanttoknowaboutthelivingenvironment,suchas(下義詞延