【題文】Onahighwayserioustrafficaccidenthasjustoccurred.motorcycleisoninflames.badlynearthemotorcycle,thebeginningspreadtothecar.motorcycledriverisstuckundertheHemightalreadybedead,butnotforThefireisspreadinghim.goingtodo?Thepassers-bywhowereverybravetookimmediateactionandtheyrushedtohelp.Thefirewasmovingcloser.fewpeopletriedcar,buthardlymovedit.Luckily,theirefforts,finallyliftedburningvehicleuptwowheelswhileanotherpersonpulledyoungdriverout.Theyoungsurvived,withonlybonestoshowhisbrushwithdeath.Hehasotherthing:athankfulheart.Hethatthereangelsouttheresavinghislifeaspeoplecametogetherandriskedtheirlivestosavehim.【寫作內(nèi)容】以30個詞概括短文的內(nèi)容要:用120詞ispower”為發(fā)表自己的看法，包如下內(nèi)容要點(1)上車禍中的年輕摩托車司機得救的原因(2)這故事給你的啟示；(3)講一件你親身經(jīng)歷的或者聽說“團就是力”的件?！緦懽饕蟆孔髦锌梢允褂蒙斫?jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得接引用原文中的句子。作中不能出現(xiàn)實姓名和學(xué)校名稱?！驹u分標準】內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語連，數(shù)適當。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Havingseenserioustrafficaccidentthehighway,groupofpassers-byunitedtogetherandmadejointeffortshelpinjuredmotorcycledrivertroubletheoflosingtheirlives.Asknow,reasontheyoungmotorcycledrivercouldbesavedatisthatallpassers-byofferedtheirhelpasmuchaspossible.Everyoneofthemtrieshisbesthelpmotorcycledriverout,whichresultsthesuccess.Ina’snottothatstrength.Asfarconcerned,thereisalessonthestoryforallofNomatterhowstrongweareindividually,westrongerthefaceofdifficultyifweworktogether.Assayinggoes,fingersmallstone.”Afterearthquakein2008,disastervictimswereinurgentneedhelp.greatnumberofvolunteersthereofferkindsofassistances,includingfood,clothingaswellmedicalaids.addition,almostallChinesepeopletookactiontodonatemoneyandthingstorebuildtheirhomes.Thankstothehelpfromallthecountry,theearthquakevictimscomebacktolifeandregainvitality.Asaresult,wecandrawconclusionthatwefacethedifficulty,onlybyworkingtogetherweit.Manylightwork.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇任務(wù)型寫作?！驹斀狻勘疚氖且黄蝿?wù)型寫作。共分兩個任務(wù)：第一個任務(wù)以約30個概括短的內(nèi)容要點；第二個任務(wù)用120詞power”為發(fā)表自己的看法，包括如下內(nèi)容要點(1)上文車禍中的年輕摩托車司機得救的原因(2)這故事給的啟示(3)講述一件你親身經(jīng)歷的或者聽說“團結(jié)就是力”的事件意完成第一任務(wù)時語言使用應(yīng)簡練準確位。在第二個任務(wù)中應(yīng)涵蓋題目所出的三大要點文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)寫作過程中注意使用平時學(xué)到的短語和句型，注意行文的連貫和邏輯性。【點睛文是一篇任務(wù)型寫作章括性強點突出容覆蓋全面結(jié)布局合理，同時文中使用高級句子。Havingseenaseriousaccidentonhighway,agroupofpassers-byunitedtogetherandjointeffortstotheinjuredmotorcycledriveroftroubleattheriskoflosingtheir現(xiàn)分詞做原因狀語Asweknow,thereasonthe

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