1、備考高考寫作專題 1 記敘文重點詮釋：1. 記敘文是以敘述人物的經(jīng)歷或事物的發(fā)展變化的過程為主的一種文體。2. 在記敘文體的高考書面表達(dá)中，命題形式主要是提綱式或圖表式。3. 通常要求考生以第一人稱或第三人稱來寫作，第一人稱主要是寫自己的經(jīng)歷, 第三人稱主要是寫他人的經(jīng)歷或事跡。4. 由于記敘文敘述的事情通常發(fā)生在過去，因而，其時態(tài)主要用一般過去時。5. 記敘文通常是按照事情發(fā)展的先后順序來表達(dá)內(nèi)容的。寫作典例：請仔細(xì)看一下下面的圖畫，注意圖畫中的細(xì)節(jié)：假設(shè)你是李華，在美國探親。 2000 年 2 月 8 日清晨，你的目擊一起交通事故。 警 察局讓你寫一份材料，報告當(dāng)時所見情況。根據(jù)下列圖畫寫

2、出報告。注意:1、目擊者應(yīng)該準(zhǔn)確報告事實；2、詞數(shù) 100 左右;3、結(jié)尾已為你寫好剖析:本題圖文結(jié)合，審題時要重視細(xì)節(jié)。1 明確寫作要求：本題要求寫一篇目擊者的報告，用第一人稱寫；1圖中的環(huán)境條件；2人物位置（此點對完成本題十分重要；人物活動；人物表情；空間結(jié)構(gòu);圖中的全部附加文字（英語和漢語時間:2000 年 2 月 8 日早晨 7 點 15 分;2地點:公園路公園門前；3我正沿公園路向東走；4一輛汽車從第 3 街向右拐，駛?cè)牍珗@路時撞倒了一位過街的老人5汽車未停，沿公園路向西開走；6汽車是黃色的，車牌號是 AC864，司機(jī)是一位女性。One Possible versi on:It wa

3、s 7 : 15 on the morni ng of February 8, 2000.I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of thepark on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and makea right turn in to Park Road. The n ext mome nt the car hit the man while he was

4、cross ing theroad. He fell with a cry. The car did nt stop but drove off at great speed headi ng west. I noticed the driver was a young woma n and the plate nu mber was AC864.高考是全社會關(guān)注的大事，學(xué)校和家庭表現(xiàn)尤為突出。家庭成員對考生從學(xué)習(xí)到生活給予無微不至的關(guān)懷,結(jié)果卻給考生帶來負(fù)面影響。根據(jù)圖畫所描述的內(nèi)容寫一篇文章，并發(fā)表自己的觀點（夾敘夾議。詞數(shù) 120 左右。As the College Entrance E

5、xam in ati on is draw ing n ear,As the College Entrance Exam in ati on is draw ing n ear, the situati on is gett ing worseand worse. From the picture, we can see that Li Ming is studyi ng hard. There are manybooks for him to read and many papers for him to do. How poor he is! At the same time, allhi

6、s family are also busy working for him.Nowadays, many pare nts expect too much of their sons or daughters. They hope thattheir sons or daughters study hard in order to be admitted to an ideal college or a keyuniversity. It is for this reason that parents are strict with their children. However, they

7、 don trealize what they have become a heavy burde n or a great pressure. It is the hard work or thegreat pressure that changes their children that much.So I hope parents provide a proper environment for their children. Only in this way.will they try their best and succeed at last!本文是夾敘夾議類的文章，主要反映家庭對

8、考生的特別關(guān)注給他們帶來負(fù) 面影響。在寫作過程中，對主題要審準(zhǔn)、審清，對發(fā)展過程和結(jié)果進(jìn)行敘述。備考高考寫作專題 2 三段式作文法重點詮釋：所謂三段式就是將一篇書面表達(dá)按三段的寫作模式謀篇布局。就整體篇章結(jié)構(gòu) 而言,如何把握較大的寫作 空間，三段式的寫作模式為最佳選擇。三段式的模式寫法 通吊為：1. 第一段開門見山，提出要解決的問題或觀點，或者把時間，地點，人物和主要事件 及時點出。2. 第二段要擺出事實或提出論據(jù)，或者把事情發(fā)展的經(jīng)過詳細(xì)寫出來。3. 最后一段，得出結(jié)論或理由。注意:要學(xué)會使用過渡詞。過渡詞猶如 橋梁”和粘合劑”。恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠^渡詞 可避免結(jié)構(gòu)松散，層次分明，表意不清等弊端，使

9、文章條理清楚，文字連貫流暢。常用 的過渡詞有：遞進(jìn)型:also, (andbesides, what s more, moreovermfoiRth eir addition, even,what s worse, worse still, to make matters worse, for theworse , not only等;解釋型:that is (to say, in other words, or, namely, if fact, in reality, as a matter of fact 等；轉(zhuǎn)折型:however, but, yet, n evertheless, i

10、n stead, on the coutrary ,on the other handbut al列舉型:firstly sec on dly fin ally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for ano ther 等舉例型:for example, for instanee, such as, that is, like, take等;for example因果型:because （of, since, now that, thanks to, due to; thus, therefore, as a result

11、（con seque nee ,sothat, so 等 i;at讓步型:though, although, in spite of, despite 等;順序型:first next and the n fin ally, first the n aftei 等 iatfin ally并列型:and, both and, or, either or, as Well as,時間型:afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ on doing, hardlywhen,no sooner tha 等 總結(jié)型:in a word, to su

12、m up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion等見解型:in my opinion, pers on ally speak ing, as far as I am concern ed, I 等 m sure條件型:if, as long as, so long as, on condition that , unles 等寫作典例：假設(shè)你是李越，你的加拿大筆友 Steve 來信說，他和他的一些同學(xué)正在學(xué)中文，請你推薦兩本學(xué)中文英漢詞典英漢詞典新華字哋新華字哋收詞收詞（字）（字）18000 （英語）（英語）20QDQ （漢語）（漢語）10000價格價格5

13、2 元元11 元元特點特點大量例子大量例子. .用法說明用法說明. .適適介初學(xué)考介初學(xué)考中國最常用的漢中國最常用的漢語字典語字典注意:1。詞數(shù):100 左右;2.參考詞匯：推薦 recommend;英漢詞典 The English-Chinese Dictionary (ECE;新華字典 Xinhua Dictionary (XD分析:此篇書面表達(dá)屬于實物說明文，其篇章結(jié)構(gòu)可按三段式進(jìn)行寫作。本文的第一段，可用直接的 敘述 “I m so pleaseldar n that you and your classmates are learning Chinese正文即可作為第二段，其主要內(nèi)容

14、是對兩本詞典的一些介紹。結(jié) 束語即可作為第三段。應(yīng)將兩本詞典的特點表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，以便加拿大筆友 Steve 作出合 理選擇。表達(dá)時，文章的基本時態(tài)可考慮用一般現(xiàn)在時。范文：Dear Steve,I m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese.I like to recommend the following two dictionaries.The English-ChineseDictio nary is really a good one for beg inn ers. It has 18,0

15、00 En glish words and 20,000 Chin esewords, besides ple nty of examples, it has manynotes telling you how to use a word. Xinhua Dictionary is the most popular Chinese dicti on ary,and it has a vocabulary fo 10,000 words. It may also be useful to some adva need lear ners of Chinese. Of the two, ECD i

16、s more expe nsive. It costs 52 yua n,and XD costs 11 yua n.Please let me know if you want me to buy one for you.Yours,Li Yue倡議書低碳生活在積極倡導(dǎo)低碳環(huán)保的大環(huán)境下，今天的校園內(nèi),浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象還很普遍，許多學(xué)生沒 有意識到節(jié)能的重要性。請你根據(jù)下圖所展示的一些現(xiàn)象，以學(xué)生會的名義，就這些 現(xiàn)象起草一份倡議書，向全校師生發(fā)出倡議，節(jié)約能源。注意:(1 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；(2詞數(shù)不少于 100;(3 可根據(jù)需要補(bǔ)充與文章有關(guān)的信息；【猜題理由】 本話題屬于熱點

17、話題，既為學(xué)生熟知又與生活實際貼近，也可以在 語言教學(xué)中加強(qiáng)對學(xué)生進(jìn) 行環(huán)境保護(hù)教育。【構(gòu)思點撥】仔細(xì)觀察圖畫，結(jié)合圖畫內(nèi)容捋順要點，確定立意。行文時要注意 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整,篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，并且還要關(guān)注應(yīng)用文文體特點?！緟⒖挤段摹緿ear teachers and stude nts.Nowadays it s com mon to see stude nts wasti ng thing in our school. Many stude nts haven trealized the importanee of ene-gaving. For example, sometimes

18、 we can see that lights and computers arestill on after class, or some stude nts eve n leave water running after using it. Besides, our paper is prin tedon only one side, caus ing much waste.It s time that we did something to avoid this kindwaste. Firstly, make sure that allthe lights and other elec

19、tric facilities are switched off when we leave the rooms. Try toform the habit of turni ng off the tap immediately after using it. What s more, pap(should be prin ted on both sides and reused if possible.In a word, if everybody has the aware ness of en ergy-sav ing and start with ourselves to reduce

20、 thewaste, we can con tribute to society.Stu dents Union縱觀近幾年高考，英語書面表達(dá)大致分為材料作文、圖表作文和開放作文。且材料作文逐漸被圖表作文取代，圖表分析作文就是將數(shù)據(jù)、圖像所包含的信息，轉(zhuǎn)化為表意的說明文 字。圖表分析作文通常比較復(fù)雜，學(xué)生不僅要弄清提示，還要看懂所給的圖表和數(shù) 據(jù)。由于這類試題提示內(nèi)容少，信息點分散，審題時一定要領(lǐng)會作者的出題意圖，弄 清主題再動筆:1.單純描述解釋圖表信息，按圖表所示內(nèi)容如實表達(dá)，不加評論。2. 通過敘述圖表（或圖畫中的內(nèi)容和數(shù)字變化來分析原因，發(fā)表議論。（一柱狀圖（BAR CHART人們?nèi)粘Ｉ?/p>

21、活中事物的變化情況通?？梢杂脤挾认嗟鹊闹鶢顖D形來表示，柱狀圖的高度差別用來說明事物的動態(tài)發(fā)展趨勢，同時要注意圖例說明和坐標(biāo)刻度所提 示的信息。例:你們班會的討論主題是 上大學(xué)是高中生唯一的出路嗎？”請你根據(jù)下面圖表 及漢語提示，寫一篇短文，并闡述你的個人觀點percentage 5040-30_2010percentageA提示：1增長學(xué)識，提高素養(yǎng)，利于擇業(yè)2. 成功的路不只一條。3. 學(xué)費(fèi)高，就業(yè)難。要求:1.詞數(shù):100120 左右。2. 開頭語已為你寫好（不計入詞數(shù)。3. 參考詞匯:tuition n.學(xué)費(fèi) qualities n.素養(yǎng)【解題分析】柱狀圖是高中英語課本中常見的圖形，要求

22、學(xué)生通過柱狀圖圖中數(shù)據(jù)和提示內(nèi) 容寫一短文，屬于比較、對照類。也可根據(jù)提示寫為議論文。通常我們采取三段式 寫法：第一段:描述圖表，得出結(jié)論。第二段:緊扣主題，根據(jù)圖表比較分析原因，論證結(jié)論。第三段:發(fā)表議論，提出自己的看法?！咎釤捯c】分析柱狀圖數(shù)據(jù)信息。從圖中可看出，黑色代表想上大學(xué)，占大多數(shù)，約 60%;淺 黑色代表無所謂,占約 30%;白色代表不想上大學(xué)，占約 10%學(xué)學(xué)謂大大所上上無不廠口One possible versi onIs It The On ly Way Out To Go To College?The majority of us consider it very ne

23、cessary to go to college.They think it canwiden their knowledge and improve their qualities.Only in this way can they find better jobs aftergraduation.Very few students, that is about ten percent of the students, think it no use going university ,because the tuition is too high for their family to a

24、fford.Whats more, its rather hard for college graduates toseek satisfactory jobs.Thirty perce nt of the stude nts, however , believe “ All roads lead to Rome. ”Therefore it does nt make anydiffere nee whether they go to college or not.In my opinion , we can receive a better educati on at college so

25、that we can serve our motherla nd.【語言亮點】1詞匯。女口 :consider , widen , afford , seek , satisfactory2句式。女口：形式賓語:The majority of us consider it very necessary to go tocollege.倒裝：Only in this way can they find better jobs after graduati on.主語從句:its rather hard for college graduates to seek satisfactory job

26、s.諺語:All roads lead to Rome.3過渡詞。女口 :that is about ten percent of the students, whats more, however , inmy opi nion。 【技巧點撥】1.讀懂柱狀圖坐標(biāo)刻線及圖例說明與文字，比較柱狀高低和顏色表示內(nèi)容及數(shù)2.學(xué)會看趨勢、找規(guī)律，從整體看圖表有何發(fā)展變化，找出特點、規(guī)律。3.引用圖表包含信息，使你的文章 由圖而發(fā)”言之有據(jù)。【常用句式】1. As can be see n from the chart, . As is show n in the chart, .2. The char

27、t shows that about 60 perce nt of stude nts want to go to college.3. From the graph/data/results/i nformatio n above , it can be see n/con cluded/show n /estimated.4. The graph shows the cha nges in the nu mber of.over the period from.to.5. Compared with., the nu mber of the stude nts of.備考高考寫作專題 4

28、說明文重點詮釋：1. 說明文是以說明為主要表達(dá)方式，用簡潔明了的語言來解釋說明事物，闡明事 理，從而給讀者提供知 識的一種文體。2. 在高考書面表達(dá)中，其主要命題形式為圖表式作文，有時也以圖畫式和提綱式 作文來呈現(xiàn)寫作材料。3. 它要求語言要簡明扼要，通俗易懂，說明過程講究層次性和條理性。4. 這種文體通常用第三人稱，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。寫作典例：根據(jù)以下圖畫，寫一篇英語短文,描述今昔通訊方式的變化，以及這些變化給人們 生活帶來的影響。（廣東 06注意:1.詞數(shù):100 左右2.生詞:通訊:commu nicate (with sb. muni cati on n.互聯(lián)網(wǎng):the In te

29、rnet n.案例分析從材料的呈現(xiàn)方式(兩幅圖對比及材料所提供的要求描述變化及影響”可知，本文應(yīng)該用說明文體來寫作。時態(tài)的把握是本文的一大難點，一般情況下，說明文應(yīng)用 一般現(xiàn)在時，但本文描述的是今昔通訊方 式的變化,所以在描寫過去通訊方式的時候 要用一般過去時,例女口 in the past, peoplekept in touch with each other ma in ly by writi ng letters or using the public teleph one 及 It used to takeseveral days to hear from each other.在描

30、寫過去發(fā)生的動作對現(xiàn)在造成的影響時，謂語動詞要用現(xiàn)在完成時，例如本文的起始句可用“ Great cha nges have take n place in the way of com muni cati onin people s life in recent ye 及講述影響的過渡 句 “ with these changes,people spaceof life has bee n quicke ned and people s work has bee n made me 相 dfficie nt”對來說，本文用第三人稱容易把握。高分范文Great cha nges have tak

31、e n place in the way of com muni cati on in people s life inrece nt years.In the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or usingthe public teleph one. But now almost every one has his own mobile pho ne.People cancom muni cate with each other almost at any place and at a

32、ny time. What s more, peoplehave easy access to the In ternet, which en ables them to send and receive e-mailswhenever they like.With these changes, people s pace of life has been quickened andpeople s work has been made more efficient. It used to take several days to hear fromeach other, but now it

33、 takes only several minutes, even if they are in two different con ti nen ts.In a word, people have an easier life no wadays.3姓名姓名李剛李剛性別性別男男出生年出生年 月月1982,9山東山東(mobile pl現(xiàn)就讀學(xué)?，F(xiàn)就讀學(xué)校北京外國語大學(xué)英語系北京外國語大學(xué)英語系職職備備團(tuán)支部書記團(tuán)支部書記興趣、愛好興趣、愛好. .特艮特艮體育運(yùn)動、唱呎體育運(yùn)動、唱呎 跳職跳職 口語流利口語流利志志向向肖一名好翻譯肖一名好翻譯學(xué)校鑒運(yùn)學(xué)校鑒運(yùn)該主多才務(wù)藝該主多才務(wù)藝* *岀類拔

34、萃岀類拔萃主耍家庭成處情況簡主耍家庭成處情況簡父時：教帥父時：教帥- -工作認(rèn)真，教學(xué)成績優(yōu)靑工作認(rèn)真，教學(xué)成績優(yōu)靑* *受人尊敬受人尊敬介介姐姐姐姐醫(yī)生，在一家醫(yī)院工作醫(yī)生，在一家醫(yī)院工作. .遠(yuǎn)近聞名遠(yuǎn)近聞名1.層次要清楚，條理性要強(qiáng)；2.字?jǐn)?shù)在 100140 字Li Gang, a boy student of 21,is now studying in the English Department of BeijingForeig n Lan guages Uni versity. He likes sports and games, singing and dancing, and

35、can speak English flue ntly. As a League secretary, he is highly spoke n of by the teachers and stude nts and regarded asan outsta nding stude nt with great ability.Li Gang is from Shandong Provin ce. His pare nts are both teachers. They are dearly loved andrespected by the stude nts for their won d

36、erful teach ing work. Li Gan gs elder sister, a famous doctor,works in a big hospital.Li Gang has made up his mind to be a good tran slator after graduatio n and serve“ the four moder ni zati onsof our ”oun try.備考高考寫作專題 5 議論文重點詮釋：1. 議論文是以議論為主要表達(dá)方式的一種文體，它通過擺事實,講道理的方式來 辯明是非曲折，從而表 達(dá)出作者的觀點。它常由論點，論據(jù)和論證三部

37、分構(gòu)成。2. 在近幾年的高考書面表達(dá)中，其主要命題形式是以表格式和提綱式來呈現(xiàn)寫 作材料的。3. 它要求語言必須簡練，準(zhǔn)確，要盡可能避免使用口語，多用書面語,可適當(dāng)使用名 言警句;以議論為主,輔之以敘述,說明和描寫等手法。4. 寫作時要圍繞中心論點展開議論，即論據(jù)和論證要圍繞論點展開。根據(jù)題目 要求，有時需要從正反兩 面來論述，可增強(qiáng)論證的力度。最后，可得出結(jié)論，照應(yīng)開頭，形成一個有機(jī)的整體。5. 寫作時常以三段式的形式展開議論。寫作典例:暑假即將來臨，你班同學(xué)就假期計劃進(jìn)行討論，提出了不同看法，請根據(jù)提示寫一 篇英語短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?yōu)點優(yōu)點缺點缺點呆崔家中呆崔家中花費(fèi)少花費(fèi)少* *舒適

38、方便舒適方便不能親自了解外界不能親自了解外界外出旅游外出旅游增長知識增長知識”開闊開闊眼界眼界, ,屁費(fèi)龍屁費(fèi)龍 床途不便床途不便注意:1。詞數(shù) 120 左右（不含已寫好部分2. 短文必須包括表中所列要點，可根據(jù)內(nèi)容分段表述；3. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；4. 參考詞匯：眼界 horizon（view案例分析這是一篇典型的議論文體的寫作，它以表格的形式提出了論點（呆在家中的優(yōu)點 和缺點以及外出旅游的優(yōu)點和缺點和論據(jù)，還以文字提示形式提出了話題（假期計劃 及需要考生自由發(fā)揮的部分（你的看法，自己的看法可選擇上述中的任何一種，并就 此發(fā)表個人的見解。本文的重點是表格中兩種方式的優(yōu)，缺點，根據(jù)題

39、目的特點，以三段式的形式來寫作比較好。根據(jù)內(nèi)容，盡管討論已經(jīng)發(fā)生，但它是就一般的暑假假期計劃而進(jìn)行的討論，沒有 特定的時間界定，因而考生應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時為主。相當(dāng)一部分考生用 一般過去時進(jìn)行論述，這會失掉較多的分?jǐn)?shù)。從題目所給的開頭可知應(yīng)用第一人稱 來寫。范文：The summer holiday is coming. Our class have a discussi on about what to do duri ng the holiday.Some are in favor of staying at home. They think itcomfortable. What

40、s more, they can save money for other purposes. But they will losethe chance of getting to know the outside world. However, others prefer to go out for traveli ng since it can increase their kno wledge and broade n their horiz ons. But they will spe nd more money and meet somedifficulties while trav

41、eli ng.In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, suchas read ing books, watchi ng TV, and help ing my pare nts with the housework.我國正提倡建設(shè) 節(jié)約型社會”下圖為某校兩個學(xué)期用水、用電、用紙的情況。請對其進(jìn)行 簡要分析，以“ How to build an economized society 為題;寫一篇作文，談?wù)勛约旱南敕?。項目學(xué)期用電用水用紙上學(xué)期 80 萬元 62 萬元 11

42、萬元下學(xué)期 95 萬元 73 萬元 12. 7 萬元文章須包括以下要點：節(jié)電:及時關(guān)閉電燈、電腦等用電設(shè)備節(jié)水:隨手關(guān)閉水龍頭；廢水再利用節(jié)紙:紙張再利用補(bǔ)充：自己日常生活所感所為留意：1. 詞數(shù):100120 詞，短文標(biāo)題、開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。2. 內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，留意行文貫通。How to build an econo mized society 東北三校s both convenient andOur gover nment is aimi ng to build an econo mized society. It is everybodys duty to work hard

43、 toachieve this goal in cludi ng us stude nts.To build an econo mized society, we must keep the follow ing points in our min ds.Firstly, make sure that the lights and the electric fans are turned off when there is no one in the room. Setthe room temperature at above 26. Remember to turn off the comp

44、uter whe n you are not using it. Secondly, try to form the habit of tur ning off the tap after it is used. Use bas ins whe n washi ng faces orvegetables. Thus the water can be used aga in to clea n toilets or water flowers. Thirdly, it will be good enough to use a basket in stead of plastic bags whe

45、 n you go to the market. As we know, a basket can be usedmany more times.In a word, we should try our best to build an econo mized society.備考高考寫作專題六應(yīng)用文一.書信重點詮釋英文書信格式與中文書信格式有許多不同，它包括五部分，即:信頭，稱呼,正文，結(jié) 束語和簽名，具體如下：精典題例解讀下面是 2003 年 NMET 的書面表達(dá)試題。體裁為書信，內(nèi)容為學(xué)生所熟悉。要 點通過漢語和圖示兩種方式給出。漢語句子雖不算少，但無法照譯。考生在完成本題時需要做到以下

46、幾點：1.認(rèn)真審讀所給文字和草圖，確認(rèn)全部信息要點2.確定寫的動機(jī)：向你的英國筆友介紹你為他所找住房的情況。3. 確定寫的基本路子：以回信的口氣，介紹情況，詢問態(tài)度。4. 確定語篇的結(jié)構(gòu)：書信開頭、介紹情況、詢問態(tài)度、書信結(jié)尾5. 起草語篇，考慮措辭6. 進(jìn)行文字修改。假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友 Bob 將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校來學(xué) 中文，來信請你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。請根據(jù)圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房 的情況，并告知住房面積為 25 平方米，月租 500 元。內(nèi)容要點:1. 開頭；2. 公寓（一室?guī)г∈?、廚房；3. 面積、家具（25 平米、床、沙發(fā)、書桌、椅子；4. 公寓位置（

47、芳草街,離學(xué)校一站遠(yuǎn)；5. 月租 500 元；6.結(jié)尾說明:1. 內(nèi)容要點可用不同方式表達(dá)。2. 對緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分。3. 開頭、結(jié)尾的內(nèi)容須合乎邏輯、語言得體。Dear Bob,Im so glad to lear n that you re coming in September. I ve found a place for yIt s a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroonadkitChe n. Inthe bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a

48、 chair. The rent is 500 yua n per mon th.The flat is in a build ing on Fan gcao Street, which is not far from Jia nxiu Chin ese School.Bus No.11 can take you straight to the school. In fact. it only one stop. Doyou think you d like it? If not, Ican try and find another place for you. Just let me kno

49、w.Yours,Li Hua2 月 4 日，星 期 天 上 午，你 們 班 同 學(xué) 騎 車 到 學(xué) 校 附 近 的 公 園 組 織 了 一 次 環(huán) 保 活動 。 請 根1 組組掃除：清理廢紙、煙蒂、塑料袋等廢棄物掃除：清理廢紙、煙蒂、塑料袋等廢棄物2 組組宜傳宜傳樹立標(biāo)牌樹立標(biāo)牌. .告訴游客要慢護(hù)艷木告訴游客要慢護(hù)艷木3 組組演講匕向游容育傳演講匕向游容育傳“白色污鍛白色污鍛”的害處以及保護(hù)環(huán)境的重亞性的害處以及保護(hù)環(huán)境的重亞性你的看法你的看法1.日記必須包括表內(nèi)所有的內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫；2.日記格式及首句已給出，不列入總詞數(shù);3.詞數(shù):100 詞左右4.參考詞匯：煙蒂 ci

50、garette endFebruary 4, Sun day Fine we were divided into three groups .The first group collected the rubbish,such as thewaste paper, cigarette ends ,plastic bags and so on. The second group set up severalboards to remi nd the visitors to take care of the flowers and trees. The last group gave a spee

51、ch to thevisitors on the dan ger of“ white polluti on” and the importa nee ofprotecting the environment.I thi nk it is very importa nt for us to protect the en vir onment .For the sake of peoples health and happ in ess, measures should be take n to con trol and preve nt polluti on and every oneshoul

52、d make a con tributi on to it.備考高考寫作專題 7 十句作文法重點詮釋：十句作文法是有關(guān)專家總結(jié)出來的一種高分作文方法，考生在經(jīng)過短期訓(xùn)練之后便可較大幅度地提高寫作水平。其基本模式為：1. 第一段為開頭，包括兩句。第一句為主題句，點明全文主題;第二句為擴(kuò)展句，進(jìn)一步說明和支持主 題句。兩者關(guān)系也可倒過來，由第一句說明情況，第二句點明主 題。2. 第二段為正文，共七句。第三句為主題句，提出本段的主題，它應(yīng)與第一段的主題相關(guān)或一致。第四 至九句為擴(kuò)展句，說明和支持本段的主題。句與句之間要注意 好過渡，以使段落邏輯合理，結(jié)構(gòu)得當(dāng)。3.第三段為結(jié)尾，簡化為一句，也是全文的

53、總 結(jié)句,它將前面的內(nèi)容總結(jié)為一個結(jié)果，表明自己的論點。注意:要提高語言表達(dá)的 檔次,在句式運(yùn)用上就不能一味地使用簡單句和稱述句，而應(yīng)該根據(jù)實際情況靈活運(yùn) 用所學(xué)的各種句式。豐富的句式有助于考生在高考中出類拔萃，贏得高分。寫作典例電視在人們的日常生活中占有很重要的地位，電視傳播不斷深層次地影響著每 一個人。請以“Television 為題，寫一篇有關(guān)其所帶來的積極影響的英語短文。分析：1。這篇書面表達(dá)的中心思想是電視所帶來的積極影響。 2。電視對現(xiàn)代 生活的影響是多方面的，考生不要試圖面面俱到，如果涉及面太多，文章反而顯得松散 我們只選擇幾個方面進(jìn)行寫作，可用舉例的方法合理安排語言材料。范文：

54、有毒食品致病甚至致死的事例經(jīng)常見諸報端，目前三鹿奶粉更是鬧得 人 心惶惶?，F(xiàn)請你以“ Let s all go out for food saf 為標(biāo)題根據(jù)下表提示完 成一篇 短文。話題話題讓品安全己經(jīng)引起扱大關(guān)注讓品安全己經(jīng)引起扱大關(guān)注原原m m廠両唯利足圖，生產(chǎn)偽劣垃圾僧品廠両唯利足圖，生產(chǎn)偽劣垃圾僧品濫書農(nóng)藥和添加劑濫書農(nóng)藥和添加劑認(rèn)亢時待負(fù)品安認(rèn)亢時待負(fù)品安全全廠商廠商1 HE關(guān)注利潤關(guān)注利潤”也關(guān)注質(zhì)駁也關(guān)注質(zhì)駁監(jiān)督員：嚴(yán)控宣全標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，嚴(yán)罰不監(jiān)督員：嚴(yán)控宣全標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，嚴(yán)罰不EI廠商廠商消取者：盡匡選抒録色傳品消取者：盡匡選抒録色傳品注意:避免直譯,要求層次清楚，內(nèi)容連貫。字?jǐn)?shù) 120 字左

55、右 參考詞匯：添加劑 addictive 嚴(yán)厲severely 監(jiān)督員 supervisor 消費(fèi)者 consumerLet us all go out for food safetyIt is frequently reported that poisonous food causes deaths. Sanlu Milk Powder is a good exampleat pece nt. Therefore, food safety had bee n draw ing the public atte nti on.s greatFood problems mainly lie in

56、the two factors. On the one hand, some food producers lack socialcon scie nee. Cen teri ng on mon ey, they produce lots of fake and junk food; On the other hand, otherproducers are short of com mon sense on food safety, thus pois on and addictive abuse pollutes food.For the sake of health, we must t

57、ake food safety seriously. Firstly, food producers shall pay moreatte nti on to food quality, and they are required to care about food safety as well as profits; Secon dly,food supervisors shall operate strict food sta ndards and punish the ill producers severely; Lastly, consumers had better go to

58、regular markets to choose gree n food.針對練習(xí):（用十句作文法和三段式表達(dá)下表是某校關(guān)于中學(xué)生雙休日活動現(xiàn)狀的一份調(diào)查，請結(jié)合表格內(nèi)容,用英語寫 一篇 120- 150 單詞的短 文，就中學(xué)生應(yīng)如何過雙休日發(fā)表你的看法范 文（One possible version: This form displays the result of a survey on how to spe nd stude nts weeke nd. It says that few stude nts are glued to their schoolwork any more.

59、In stead, they prefer tosurf on the intern et, watch TV, go shopp ing rather tha n invo Ive in sports games. Library and in terestgroups are available but not favourable.Pers on ally I thi nk, stude nts are now freed from heavy burde n but their spare time is not wellarran ged. They are expected to

60、spe nd some time on what they learn in stead of hanging out. Moretime should be spent not only on green field but also in the libraries to build up themselves physicallyand men tally. Besides, more in terest groups should be established for students to widen their horizonand sharpen their brains so