熱點(diǎn)09應(yīng)用文（全國卷）

命題特點(diǎn)以提綱類為主要命題形式，提示內(nèi)容較為簡潔;體裁和題材相對穩(wěn)定，以應(yīng)用文

為主，選材均與考生學(xué)習(xí)生活及社會熱點(diǎn)相關(guān)。命題超勢”命題將會保持穩(wěn)定性，實(shí)用類將會

成為發(fā)展趨勢，內(nèi)容上會靈活多變，加大開放性。

試卷年份體裁話題題材

全國卷I2021（甲卷）建議信中國傳統(tǒng)文化哪些中國傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國朋友

2020參賽短文社會生活身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人

2019申請信社會生活畫展志愿者

2018建議信社會生活餐桌禮儀

2017告知語言學(xué)習(xí)學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃安排

全國卷II2021（乙卷）演講稿學(xué)習(xí)生活線上學(xué)習(xí)

2020記敘文學(xué)校生活采摘活動(dòng)

2019告知信學(xué)校生活球隊(duì)比賽事宜

2018通知學(xué)校生活觀看英文短片

2017邀請信藝術(shù)參觀剪紙藝術(shù)展

全國卷III2021（新高考）略

2020電子郵件學(xué)校生活征求英語短劇的意見

2019邀請信學(xué)校生活邀請參加音樂節(jié)

2018告知信學(xué)校生活體育活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目開展情況

2017邀請信學(xué)校生活邀請外國友人加入校隊(duì)

一、解題步驟

書面表達(dá)分步驟：

1、審體裁一審人稱一審時(shí)態(tài)f列要點(diǎn)f謀篇章

2、列出詞匯和句型—連詞成句段落—清晰完美收尾

3、檢查拼寫f亥實(shí)標(biāo)點(diǎn).檢查句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否正確—檢查要點(diǎn)是否遺漏—檢查詞數(shù)是

否符合要求

二、實(shí)戰(zhàn)技巧

寫好高考“書面表達(dá)''絕非一日之功，關(guān)鍵在于平時(shí)扎扎實(shí)實(shí)的訓(xùn)練。但是，在夯實(shí)語言基

本功的前提下，熟悉、掌握一定的應(yīng)試技巧，也非常重要。根據(jù)''書面表達(dá)''常見錯(cuò)誤及評卷要

求，建議使用“一式，兩頭，三寫，四關(guān)''的應(yīng)試搶分技巧。具體為：

一式寫對格式

要求記住英語常用文體的格式和應(yīng)用文體的寫作方式和特點(diǎn)。

二頭寫好兩頭

要求靈活運(yùn)用熟悉的句式和表達(dá)手法，使文章開頭和結(jié)尾結(jié)構(gòu)正確，言簡意賅。

三寫規(guī)范三寫

在高考英語書面表達(dá)的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中，正確拼寫和使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及書寫的美觀程度也是影響

得分的一個(gè)重要指標(biāo)，因此考生要高度重視。許多考生只重視書面表達(dá)內(nèi)容的訓(xùn)練和提高，卻

忽視了卷面規(guī)范書寫的訓(xùn)練，導(dǎo)致本不該的失分。

四關(guān)突破四關(guān)

所謂“四關(guān)''是指突破內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)關(guān)、行文邏輯關(guān)、語法規(guī)則關(guān)和習(xí)慣表達(dá)關(guān)。要求內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)

準(zhǔn)確全面，行文邏輯通順嚴(yán)密，語言運(yùn)用正確得當(dāng)，表達(dá)方式符合英語習(xí)慣。

當(dāng)然，在備考過程中，有針對性地背誦一些高分句式，套用合適的寫作模塊，可以幫助大

家在短時(shí)間內(nèi)在書面表達(dá)上推得高分!

熱點(diǎn)解讀

（2021年全國高考乙卷英語試題）你校將舉辦英語演講比賽。請你以Besmartonlinelearners

為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽，內(nèi)容包括：

1.分析優(yōu)勢與不足；

2.提出學(xué)習(xí)建議。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.題目和首句已為你寫好。

Besmartonlinelearners

【答案】onepossibleversion:

Besmartonlinelearners

problems.Butninghasincreasinglybeeanimportantmeansforpeopletoacquireknowledgeand

solveproblems.Butbeingsmartonlinelearnershasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.

Firstofall,assmartonlinelearners,wecanmakefulluseofthemostextensiveeducational

resourcestobroadenthehorizon.Besides,Wecantaketheinitiativeinourstudybyourselves

withouttimeandspacelimit.

follows.Facedhesedisadvantagesareasfollows.Facedwithallkindsofinformationonihe

internet,Wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoour

studyandlife.Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficult

forusnottobeaffected.

Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesand

findaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.

滿分技巧

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生以Besmartonlinelearners為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

充分利用：makefi.il!useoJmakethemostof

擴(kuò)寬,豐富：broaden-enrich

各種各樣：allkindsof-varietiesof

不完美：imperfection—*defect

2.句式拓展

合并簡單句

原句：Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesand

findaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.

拓展句：Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantages,

findingaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.

【點(diǎn)睛】

[高分句型1]

Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,Wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrue

andthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.（非謂語作狀語和which引導(dǎo)的非限制

性定語從句）

[高分句型2]

Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficultforusnotto

beaffected.（現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）

(2020年全國統(tǒng)一高考英語試卷(新課標(biāo)H))

上周末，你和同學(xué)參加了一次采摘活動(dòng)。請你為班級英語角寫一篇短文，介紹這次活動(dòng),

內(nèi)容包括：

1.農(nóng)場情況；

2.采摘過程；

3.個(gè)人感受

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.題目已為你寫好。

題目:MyWeekend

MyWeekend

【答案】onepossibleversion:

MyWeekend

Organizedbythestudentunion,agroupofvolunteerswenttoHopeFanntohelpthefanners

pickpeacheslastweekend.Thefarmissituatedatthefootofamountain,theskyisblueandtheair

isfresh.Wewereattractedbythebeautifulscenery.Therearcdifferentkindsoffruittreesaswellas

avarietyofanimals.

Onarriving,wesawredripepeacheshangingonthetree.Usingbasketsandladders,Wefirst

pickedtheonesthatweremostbeautifulincolor,thenthosethatwereripeandsoft.Icouldn'twaitto

takeabite,andthesweetjuicewentdownmythroat.

Iwasgratefulforthisopportunitytogetclosetonature.NotonlywouldIbeabletoexperience

fruitpicking,butIcouldalsofeastonthesweetness!

第一步：根據(jù)提示可知，上周末，你和同學(xué)參加了一次采摘活動(dòng)。請你為班級英語角寫一篇短

文，介紹這次活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括：1.農(nóng)場情況；2.采摘過程；3.個(gè)人感受。

第二步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：pickpeaches,issituated,beautifulscenery,fruit

trees,avarietyofanimals,Usingbasketsandladders,takeabite,begratefulfor,getclosetonature,

feastonthesweetness.

第三步：根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。本文用一般現(xiàn)在

時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)O

第川步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接和過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

【點(diǎn)睛】

范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達(dá)方式，如

Organizedbythestudentunion,agroupofvolunteerswenttoHopeFarmtohelpthefarmerspick

peacheslastweekend.和Usingbasketsandladders運(yùn)用了非謂語動(dòng)詞；Wcfirstpickedtheones

thatweremostbeautifulincolor,thenthosethatwereripeandsoft.運(yùn)用了定語從句；Notonly

wouldIbeabletoexperiencefruitpicking,butIcouldalsofeastonthesweetness!運(yùn)用了連詞not

only…but…和倒裝句。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，

文章思路清晰，層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。

（2019全國卷HI）

假定你是李華，你校將舉辦音樂節(jié)。請寫封郵件邀請你的英國朋友Allen參加，內(nèi)容包括:

I.時(shí)間；

2.活動(dòng)安排；

3.歡迎他表演節(jié)目。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

滿分技巧

【審題謀篇】

體裁邀請信

人稱第一、二人稱為主

時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)為主

1.音樂節(jié)舉辦的時(shí)間；2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容安排；3.歡迎他表演

要點(diǎn)

節(jié)目

【提綱要點(diǎn)】

1.第一段——點(diǎn)明主題發(fā)出邀請，并介紹音樂節(jié)的具體內(nèi)容

①點(diǎn)明主題

AChineseclassicalmusicconcertwiHbcheldinthemusichallofourschool.

②發(fā)出邀請

Pdliketoinvileyoulojoinme.

③活動(dòng)安排

Manymusicmasterpieceswillbeplayedbyafamousband.

④歡迎他表演節(jié)Fl

Youareweletogiveaperformance.

2.第二、三段——表達(dá)期盼，期待回復(fù)

⑤表達(dá)期盼一我將在音樂廳入口等你

I'llmeetyouattheentranceofthemusichall.

⑥期待回復(fù)

Lookingfbiwardtoyourreply!

【潤色升級】

1.將①句增加時(shí)間細(xì)節(jié)，并用賓語從句進(jìn)行表達(dá)

I'mgladtotellyouthatqChincscclassicalmusicconccrtwillbc

heldinthe」nusichallofLou「schoolonNovembe「8lh.

2.將②句用非謂語動(dòng)詞作狀語表達(dá)，并與④句合并

Knowingthatyouarefondofclassicalmusic,I'dlikeioinvilnyvu

tojoinmeandyouareweletogiveaoerfoirnance.

3.將⑤句用if條件句表達(dá)，并增加細(xì)節(jié)

Ifitisconvenientforyou.I'llmeetyouattheentrancc

ofthemusichallat7：00thalevening.

【規(guī)范譽(yù)寫】

四

（2018?全國卷II）

你受學(xué)生會委托為校宣傳欄“英語天地”寫一則通知，請大家觀看一部英文短片Growing

Togelher,內(nèi)容包括：

1.短片內(nèi)容：學(xué)校的發(fā)展;

2.放映時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；

3.歡迎對短片提出意見。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【市題謀篇】

體裁通知

人稱第三人稱為主

時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主

1.短片內(nèi)容；2.放映時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；3.歡迎對短片提出

要占

意見

【提綱要點(diǎn)】

1.第一段——點(diǎn)題：你受學(xué)生會委托為校宣傳欄“英語天地”寫一則通知，請大家觀看一部

英文短片

?Recently,anoutstandingshortfilmwillbeshowninourschool.Weleto

ioinusandenjoyit!

2.第二段一主體段落展開：短片內(nèi)容；放映時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；歡迎對短片提出意見。

②短片內(nèi)容：學(xué)校的發(fā)展

Themovieisadocumentaryaboutthedevelopmentofourschool.

③放映時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)

ItwilLbeshowninthelibraryonJune9th.

④歡迎參加會后討論并充■短片提出意見

Everyoneofyouisbewelelotakepariinthediscussionheldafterwardsandgiveyour

ments.

⑤我們期待你的評論和反饋。

Weareexpectingendencouragingyourmentsandfeedback.

3.第三段——表達(dá)期望

@1havetheconfidencethatyouwillhaveagreattimethen.

【潤色升級】

1?句②通過增加定語從句來拓展要點(diǎn)

ThenameofthemovieisGrowingTogether,whichis—adocumnntary

aboulthedevelopmenlofourbelovedschool.

2.句③通過增加具體時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)拓展要點(diǎn)

ItwillbeshownonthefourthfloorKfLtheschooUib〉aryfrom2:00to4:

00intheafternoononJune9th.

3.句④和句⑤用非謂語動(dòng)詞作狀語合并為一句，實(shí)現(xiàn)句式升級

Everyoneofyouisweletotakepartinthediscussionhcldafterward

s,2xpcctcdandcncouragcdtogivcyourmcntsandfeedback.

【規(guī)范譽(yù)寫】

五

（2017.北京高考）

假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記錄

畢業(yè)前夕你們制作以“感恩母校''為主題的畢業(yè)紀(jì)念視頻的全過程。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

提示詞：視頻video

【審題謀篇】

體裁圖畫類周記

人稱第一人稱為主

時(shí)態(tài)一般過去時(shí)為主

1.激烈討論后決定制作視頻；2.準(zhǔn)備素材，采訪拍攝；3.后期制作；4.畢業(yè)

要點(diǎn)

典禮放映

【提綱要點(diǎn)】

1.第一段一點(diǎn)明主題

①畢業(yè)在即，激烈討論后決定制作視頻

Graduationfinallycame.Afteraheataddiscussion,weagreedon

makingavideo.

2.第二段——主體內(nèi)容

②準(zhǔn)備素材——采訪老師，拍攝學(xué)校生活

Weinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofschoollife.

③后期制作——爭論保留什么

Wedebatedoverwhattoputinlothevideo.

④典禮放映

Thevideowasplayedonthegraduationceremony.

⑤發(fā)表感悟——很有成就感

Thatsurelygaveusagreatsenseofachi6vement.

【潤色升級】

1.將②句增加“花費(fèi)時(shí)間”細(xì)節(jié)，并升級為定語從句

Material-collectingtookusawholeweek,duringwhichwcinterviewed

ourteachersandlookpictuiesofeveryaspeclofschoollife.

2.將③句增加細(xì)節(jié)，渲染討論及效果

WedebatedoverwhalU)pulinloihevideo.Somepromiseswereunavoidable,bulIhu

videoturnedou[perfect.

3.將④句升級用when狀語從句表達(dá)并增加“效果”細(xì)節(jié)

Severaldayslater,whenthevideowasplayedonthegraduation

ceremony,itwaswellreceived

【規(guī)范譽(yù)寫】

知識梳理

第1部分考場作文常見的錯(cuò)誤及防范措施

一考場作文常見的三類錯(cuò)誤

考場作文常見的錯(cuò)誤主要分為三類：詞匯類錯(cuò)誤、語法類錯(cuò)誤和漢語式英語。

—（一）詞匯類錯(cuò)誤一

考試時(shí)，考生很容易出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤和詞形變化錯(cuò)誤；而詞性不清和詞匯用法方面的錯(cuò)

誤主要還是受漢語思維的影響。其應(yīng)對措施是在備考時(shí)要多注意容易拼錯(cuò)或容易出現(xiàn)詞形變化

錯(cuò)誤的單詞，真正用心去體會英語詞匯的詞性和運(yùn)用，對一些固定習(xí)語更不能想當(dāng)然地改動(dòng)。

1.單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤

誤：Bytheway,he'saseniorHighSchoolstudentnamedLihuafromTianJin,china.

正：Bytheway,he'saseniorhighschoolstudentnamedLiHuafromTianjin,China.

2.詞形變化錯(cuò)誤

誤：Peoplethrowedcans,paper,bagsandsoonintotheriverwater.

IE：Peoplethrewcans,paper,bagsandsoonintotheriverwater.

3.詞性不清錯(cuò)誤

誤：Everyoneinmyfamilyislikethedog.

正：Everyoneinmyfamilylikesthedog.

4.詞匯用法錯(cuò)誤

誤：Heopenedthelightafterheenteredtheroom.

正：Heturnedonthelightafterheenteredtheroom.

5.擅自改動(dòng)習(xí)語

誤：Nowadaysmostparentsattachmuchimportancewitheducation.

正：Nowadaysmostparentsattachmuchimportancetoeducation.

限時(shí)檢測

（限時(shí)：10分鐘）

改正下列句子中的錯(cuò)誤

?Doingapart-timejobalwayseffectsstudy.

②ThereisnodoubtthatkeepinganEnglishdiaryhelpsyoualotwithwritenEnglish.

③Inmysurprise,hehasgotthefirstprize.

@WemustpayattentionourpronunciationwhenwespeakEnglish.

@Weareallentireresponsibleforouractionsandforourreactions.

答案：①effects—affects②writen—^written③ln—To

?attention后力口to?entire—>entirely

（二）語法類錯(cuò)誤

一個(gè)正確的句子除了用詞得當(dāng)外，語法也應(yīng)該準(zhǔn)確無誤。如果語法不正確，再好的構(gòu)思也

難以正確地表達(dá)，語法類錯(cuò)誤的多少會直接影響作文的檔次。英語書面表達(dá)中語法類錯(cuò)誤主要

表現(xiàn)在：

1.時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤

誤：Whenhecameback,hefoundthathiswifehasgonetohed.

正：Whenhecameback,hefoundthathiswifehadgonetobed.

2.語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤

誤：Childrenwhoraiseinpoorfamiliescangenerallydealwithproblemsmoreeffectivelyin

theiradultyears.

正：Childrenwhoareraisedinpoorfamiliescangenerallydealwithproblemsmoreeffectively

intheiradultyears.

3.主謂一致錯(cuò)誤

誤：SomestudentslikebooksthatiswrittenbyLuXun.

正：SomestudentslikebooksthatarewrittenbyLuXun.

4.比較級使用錯(cuò)誤

誤：Withthedevelopmentoftransportation,theworldseemstobegettingmoreandmore

smaller.

正：Withthedevelopmentoftransportation,theworldseemstobegettingsmallerandsmaller.

5.非謂語動(dòng)詞使用錯(cuò)誤

誤：Theteachercameintothelab,followingbysomestudents.

正：Theteachercameintothelab,followedbysomestudents.

（限時(shí)：10分鐘）

改正下列句子中的錯(cuò)誤

?Ifitwon'traintomorrow,we'llgocamping.

②NotonlyTombutalsoIaretiredofoneexaminationafteranother.

③Theythinkstudentsshouldhavetheirowntimetostudyanditismorequieterathome.

④Therearealotofstudentsstandinaqueuetoweletheoldsoldier.

⑤ShesaidshewouldpayavisittoSuzhouinthenextmonth.

答案：①won't一■doesn't②are—?am③more一■much或去掉more④stand—standing⑤

去掉in

—（三）漢語式英語——

一般來說，英漢兩種語言既有許多相似之處，又有許多不同之處。在寫作時(shí)如果想當(dāng)然地

去寫，會出現(xiàn)許多漢語式英語，其中主要包括：

1.純漢語式思維和漢語式語序

誤：Atthisschoolstudying,Ireallyveryhappy.

正：Studyingatthisschool,Iamreallyveryhappy.

2.句子成分殘缺

①誤：Therearemanystudentsdon'tsupporttheproject.

正：Therearemanystudentswhodon'tsupporttheproject.

②誤:Hetoldmethatallmyclassmalessittingintheclassroom.

正：Hetoldmethatallmyclassmatesweresittingintheclassroom.

3.句子粘連

誤：Theoldmanhastwosons,bothofthemworkinthesamepany.

正：Theoldmanhastwosons,andbothofthemworkinthesamepany.

正：Theoldmanhastwosons,bothofwhomworkin由esamepany.

4.主謂搭配不當(dāng)

誤：Hehappenedanaccidentyesterday.

正：Anaccidenthappenedtohimyesterday.

5.動(dòng)賓搭配不當(dāng)

誤：Theyaretryingtheirbesttoimprovetheirproduction.

正：Theyaretryingtheirbesttoincreasetheirproduction.

6.形容詞和名詞搭配不當(dāng)

誤：Wewalkedafarwaybeforeplantingtrees.

正：Wewalkedalongwaybeforeplantingtrees.

7.動(dòng)詞和副詞搭配不當(dāng)

誤：Mygrandfatherverylikesblackteaandhasiteveryday.

正：Mygrandfatherlikesblackteaverymuchandhasiteveryday.

8.介詞和賓語搭配不當(dāng)

誤：Theywillbuildamonumentonmemoryofthenationalhero.

正：Theywillbuildamonumentinmemoryofthenationalhero.

（限時(shí)：10分鐘）

改正下列句子中的錯(cuò)誤

?Weareimpossibletofinishtheworkinsuchashorttime.

②It'sknownthatthecostinbigcitiesisveryexpensive.

③Hecameheretoattendthemeetingincar.

④Ihaven'theardfromyourletterforalongtimeandImissyouverymuch.

@1havemanycollectionsofstamps,someofthemarcmyfavorite.

答案：①Wcarcimpossible—>ltisimpossibleforus

②expensive一high③in—by④yourletter一you

?some前力「and或them—which

二防范出現(xiàn)錯(cuò)誤的兩個(gè)措施

句子正確是作文得高分的關(guān)鍵和保證,考場上要避免上述低級錯(cuò)誤，可采取以下兩個(gè)措施。

----（一）確定主語----

英語句子無論多長都有自己的主語（祈使句省略了主語you）o寫句子前首先要確定主語，

其次要特別注意漢語與英語的區(qū)別。例如：

1.北京八月多雨。

誤：BeijingrainsmuchinAugust.

正：ItrainsmuchinBeijinginAugust.

2.寫得很匆忙，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)書中滿是錯(cuò)誤。

i吳：Writteninahurry,wefoundthebookfullofmistakes.

正：Writteninahurry,thebookwasfoundfullofmistakes（byus）.

——（二）確定謂語動(dòng)詞——

英語中沒有動(dòng)詞就構(gòu)不成句子，但動(dòng)詞千變?nèi)f化，稍不注意就會寫錯(cuò)句子。在寫句子時(shí)應(yīng)

特見注意以下幾個(gè)方面。

I.注意及物與不及物動(dòng)詞的正確運(yùn)用

誤；Thelivingstandardofthepeoplehasraisedinthepasttwentyyears.

正：Thelivingstandardofthepeoplehasrisen/hasbeenraisedinthepasttwentyyears.

2.注意延續(xù)性與非延續(xù)性動(dòng)詞的正確運(yùn)用

誤：Hisgrandmotherhasdiedforfifteenyears.

正：Hisgrandmotherhasbeendeadforfifteenyears.

3.注意一些不可用于被動(dòng)語態(tài)的動(dòng)詞或動(dòng)詞短語

誤：Thatdictionaryisbelongedtothelibrary.

正：Thatdictionarybelongstothelibrary.

限時(shí)檢測

（限時(shí)：20分鐘）

I.以下句子含有考生常犯的錯(cuò)誤，請改正

I.Itishightimethatwedosomethingtoreducetrafficaccidents.

答案：do-did或在do前力口should

2.Whilehavingourdinner,thedoorbellrang.

答案：having前力口wewere或thedoorbellrang—>weheardthedoorbellringing

3.Recentlyourvillagehastakenplacegreatchanges.

答案：Recentlygreatchangeshavetakenplaceinourvillage.

4.DrSmith,togetherwithhiswife,aretoarriveontheeveningflight.

答案：arc—>is

5.Eatingatschoolisveryconvenientforstudents.

答案：Itisveryconvenientforstudentstoeatatschoo..

6.WouldyoupleasemeetmyuncleattheairportbecausethisishisfirstlimevisittotheUS?

答案：去掉time

7.Thecarhittedtheoldmananddrivedaway.

答案：hitted一hit;drived—drove

8.Ihavetwofriends,theirnamesareTomandJim.

答案：their—*whose或their前加and

9.Therearemanystudenrsareplantingtreesonthehill.

答案：去掉第二個(gè)are或在students后加who

10.Atweekends,wewouldplaybasketball,swimminginthepoolorgoforapicnic.

答案：swimming—>swim

II.下面的考生作文中共有1()處語言錯(cuò)誤，請改正

假定你是李華，最近與好朋友Lucy吵架了，現(xiàn)在給外教Melinda寫一封郵件請求幫助。

郵件內(nèi)容包含：

1.吵架的原因；

2.吵架后的心情；

3.請求Melinda給出解決辦法。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearMelinda,

ThereasonwhyIamwrittingtoyouisbecauseIquarreledwithmyfriendLucyandIneedyour

helpnow.

Thequarrelwasoccurredwhenwewerediscussingwhetherweshouldgoshoppingatlast

weekend.Becausetheingexamination,sheinsistedonstudyingatschoolwhileIopposedstrongly.

Aftertheincident,wchavenotchattedanymore,causedmegreatdepression.Iamsinceresorryto

seethingsgoinglikethisandIhavebeenfeltfrustratedeversince.

Ireallydon'twanttolosethisfriend.Couldyoupleaseoffermesomeeffectiveandpractical

advices?Lookingforwardtoyoureply.

Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

第一句：第二句：

第三句：第四句：

第五句：第七句：

第八句：________________

答案：

第——句：writting—?writing;because—>that

第二句：去掉was;去掉al

第三句：Because后加of

第四句：caused一causing

第五句：sincere一sincerely;felt^feeling

第七句：advices—>advice

第八句：you—>your

（一）（限時(shí)：45分鐘）

I.按分類提示，改正下列句子中的唯一一處錯(cuò)誤

題組1連詞類錯(cuò)誤

1.Inaddition,theclimatehereisverysimilartothatintheUSA,thusthereisnoneedforyou

toworryaboutii.

答案：Inaddition,theclimatehereisverysimilartothatintheUSA,您

thusthereisnoneedforyoutoworryaboutit.

2.Althoughitwasnotexpensive,inordertobuymethegift,butmydadmadeeveryeffortto

earnthemoney.

答案：Althoughitwasnotexpensive,inordertobuymethegift,氏t/

bulmydadmadeeveryefforttoearnthemoney.

yet

3.Thereasonisoftenbecausethepressurefromtheirparentsallowsthemalmostnotimefor

otheractivities.

答案：Thereasonisoftenbecausethepressurefromtheirparentsallowsthemalmostnotime

that

forotheractivities.

4.Firstly,weshouldbegivenmoreopportunitiestousethatwe'velearnedinordertohavea

bettergraspofit.

答案：Firstly,weshouldbegivenmoreopportunitiestousethatwe'velearnedinordertohave

what

abettergraspofit.

5.Around540millionpeoplearcaffectedbysecond-handsmoke,thatcauses100,000deaths

peryear.

答案：Around540millionpeopleareaffectedbysecond-handsmoke,thatcauses100,000

which

deathsperyear.

6.Ourclassismadeupof52students,allofthemarefriendlyandhard-working.

答案：Ourclassismacleupof52students,公allofthemarefriendlyandhard-working.或

Ourclassismadeupof52students,allofOemarefriendlyandhard-working.

whom

題組2動(dòng)詞類錯(cuò)誤

7.LearningthatyouareabouttopayavisittoaChinesefriendandconfusingabouttheChinese

customs,Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantdetails.

答案：LearningthatyouareabouttopayavisittoaChinesefriendandconfusingaboutthe

confused

Chinesecustoms,Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantdetails.

8.Secondly,ifIwereyou,Iwillbringsomegiftswithme,suchassouvenirsfrommyown

country.

答案：Secondly,ifIwereyou,Iwillbringsomegiftswithme,suchassouvenirsfrommy

would

owncountry.

9.What'smore,inordertohavemuchknowledgeofChineseculture,itofimportanceforyouto

beawareofthecontent,Tangpoetry.

答案：What'smore,inordertohavemuchknowledgeofChineseculture,itAofimportance

foryoutobeawareofthecontent,Tangpoetry.

lO.IfyouwanttohaveaDNAdetection,youhavetopayfor125pounds.

答案：IfyouwanttohaveaDNAdetection,youhavetopayfhr125pounds.

1l.Onlyinihiswaytheygrowuptobeindependentandbeetrulysuccessful.

答案：OnlyinthiswayAtheygrowuptobeindependentandbeetrulysuccessful.

12.Lastofall,topromotetheunderstandingandfriendshipbetweenthestudentsofthetwo

countries,Ihopeyoucandosomething,suchashelpuspracticeourspokenEnglish.

答案：Lastofall,topromotetheunderstandingandfriendshipbetweenthestudentsofthetwo

countries,Ihopeyoucandosomething,suchashelpuspracticeourspokenEnglish.

helping

13.Knownthatourlibraryisgoingtobuybooks,I'dliketogivesomesuggestions.

答案：Knownthatourlibraryisgoingtobuybooks,I'dliketogivesomesuggestions.

Knowing

14.Weatherpermits,wewillhaveapicnictomorrow.

答案：Weatherpermits>wewillhaveapicnictomorrow.

pennitling

15.Weofferawiderangeofholidaystochoose.

答案：Weofferawiderangeofholidaystochoose

題組3介詞、冠詞、代詞類錯(cuò)誤

16.Bydoingso,Icannotonlysharegoodideaswithothersbutalsolearntoexpressmeclearly.

答案：Bydoingso,Icannotonlysharegoodideaswithothersbutalsolearntoexpressme

myself

clearly.

17.Goodopinionsareworthstickingbecausetheycanbenefitusall.

答案：GoodopinionsareworthstickingQbecausetheycanbenefitusall.

18.WhenIhavedifferentopinion,Imaychoosetogiveitupandrespecttheopinionofthe

majority.

答案：WhenIhaveAdifferentopinion,Imaychooseiogiveiiupandrespecttheopinionof

themajority.

19.Twoyearsago,ourteacherofferedusananswerfbradifficultmathprobleminclass.

答案：Twoyearsago,ourteacherofferedusananswerforadifficultmathprobleminclass.

to

2O.Theblackboardisinfrontoftheclassroom.

答案：Theblackboardisin壯frontoftheclassroom.

21.Nowadaystherearestillmanypoorstudents.Theycannotaffordtogototheschool.

答案：Nowadaystherearestillmanypoorstudents.Theycannotaffordtogoto

theschool.

22.Shemetandeventuallymarriedwithamanconsiderablyyoungerthanherself.

答案：Shemetandeventuallymanied\vkhamanconsiderablyyoungerthanherself.

23.Severalyearslater,awordcamethathehadsucceededinsolvingthedifficultproblem.

答案：Severalyearslater,kwordcamethathehadsucceededinsolvingthedifficult

problem.

24.Bicyclesareenvironmentallyfriendlybecauseitwon'tgiveoffwastegas.

答案：Bicyclesareenvironmentallyfriendlybecauseitwon'tgiveoffwastegas.

they

25.Asisknowntoweall,withtheimprovementofpeople'slivingstandards,carshavebeea

popularmeansoftransport,bringinggreatconveniencetoourlife.

答案：Asisknowntoweall,withtheimprovementofpeople'slivingstandards,carshavebee

US

apopularmeansoftransport,bringinggreatconveniencetoourlife.

26.Contrarywithpeople'sexpectations,mostoftheChinesemothersarcnotinfavorofthe

authorswaysheeducatedchildren.

答案：Contrarywithpeople'sexpectations,mostoftheChinesemothersarenotinfavorofthe

to

authorswaysheeducatedchildren.

題組4形容詞和副詞類錯(cuò)誤

27.Thatsuregaveusagreatsenseofachievement.

答案：Thatsuregaveusagreatsenseofachievement.

surely

28.Wearenowlivinginaninformationage,inwhichTV,cellphonesandtheWebarewide

used.

答案：Wearenowlivinginaninformationage,inwhichTV,cellphonesandtheWebarewide

widely

used.

29.1thinkit'samoreperfectopportunityformetofurtherdevelopmyabilities.

答案：Ithinkit'sam\eperfectopportunityformetofurtherdevelopmyabilities.

3O.Heisaboredboyandwealldislikehim.

答案：Heisaboredboyandwealldislikehim.

boring

31Onlybraveonescanwatchsharksinthedeeplyocean.

答案：Onlybraveonescanwatchsharksinthedeeplyocean.

deep

32.Assoonasshesawtheresults,shegotanexcitinglookinherface.

答案:Assoonasshesawtheresults,shegotanexcilinglookinherface.

exciled

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