2025年英語寫作能力提升測試試卷：英語寫作中的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)解析試題考試時(shí)間：______分鐘總分：______分姓名：______一、英語寫作中的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)解析要求：本部分主要考查學(xué)生對(duì)英語寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的理解和應(yīng)用，要求學(xué)生能夠根據(jù)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)對(duì)自己的寫作進(jìn)行評(píng)估和改進(jìn)。1.根據(jù)以下評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，判斷以下句子是否符合寫作要求。a.A.Thestoryisinteresting,butthegrammarisnotcorrect.B.Thegrammarisgood,butthestoryisnotclear.C.Thestoryisinterestingandthegrammariscorrect.D.Thestoryisnotinterestingandthegrammarisnotcorrect.2.請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，對(duì)以下段落進(jìn)行評(píng)估，并指出其優(yōu)點(diǎn)和不足。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：-內(nèi)容豐富（1-2分）-結(jié)構(gòu)清晰（1-2分）-語法正確（1-2分）-詞匯豐富（1-2分）-語言表達(dá)（1-2分）段落：Lastweek,Iwenttothebeachwithmyfamily.Wespentthewholedayplayinggamesandswimmingintheocean.Itwasasunnyday,andthewaterwasveryclear.MybrotherandIbuiltasandcastle,andwewereveryproudofourwork.Intheevening,wewatchedthesunsettogetherandenjoyedadeliciousmeal.Itwasoneofthebestdaysofmylife.二、英語寫作中的常見錯(cuò)誤及修改要求：本部分主要考查學(xué)生對(duì)英語寫作中常見錯(cuò)誤的識(shí)別和修改能力，要求學(xué)生能夠根據(jù)錯(cuò)誤類型對(duì)句子進(jìn)行修改。1.根據(jù)以下錯(cuò)誤類型，判斷以下句子是否存在錯(cuò)誤，并指出錯(cuò)誤所在。a.主謂一致錯(cuò)誤：Thestudentsareenjoytheirholidays.b.時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤：Shegoestotheparkeveryday.c.介詞錯(cuò)誤：HelivesattheNewYork.d.代詞錯(cuò)誤：Shesaidthatheisagoodteacher.2.請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下錯(cuò)誤類型，對(duì)以下句子進(jìn)行修改。錯(cuò)誤類型：時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤原句：Iwillgotothestoretomorrowandbuysomeapples.修改后的句子：Iamgoingtothestoretomorrowandbuysomeapples.四、英語寫作中的連貫性與銜接詞的使用要求：本部分主要考查學(xué)生對(duì)英語寫作中連貫性和銜接詞的應(yīng)用能力，要求學(xué)生能夠運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~使文章內(nèi)容更加流暢。1.選擇正確的銜接詞填入空格中，使句子連貫。a.Theweatherwascold,________wedecidedtostayindoors.b.Iwasfeelingtired,________Idecidedtotakeanap.c.________Iarrivedattheairport,theplanewasabouttotakeoff.d.________themoviewasboring,Istillwatchedituntiltheend.2.根據(jù)上下文，選擇合適的銜接詞填入空格中，使段落連貫。a.Wewereallexcitedtogoonvacation.________wearrivedatthebeach,thesunwasshiningbrightly.b.________Isawtheadforthenewrestaurant,Idecidedtotryitout.c.Ihadnevertriedskydivingbefore.________Ididit,Iwasscaredbutexhilarated.d.________theteacherexplainedtheconcept,everythingbecamecleartome.五、英語寫作中的觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)與論據(jù)支持要求：本部分主要考查學(xué)生在英語寫作中表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)和提供論據(jù)的能力，要求學(xué)生能夠清晰、有邏輯地陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)，并使用合適的論據(jù)進(jìn)行支持。1.根據(jù)以下觀點(diǎn)，選擇合適的論據(jù)填入空格中。觀點(diǎn)：Regularexerciseisbeneficialforourphysicalandmentalhealth.a.Tosupportthisview,wecanmentionthat________.b.Anotherpointtoconsideristhat________.c.Furthermore,________isastrongargumentforthebenefitsofregularexercise.d.Lastly,________canbeaconvincingreasonwhyexerciseisgoodforus.2.請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下觀點(diǎn)，寫一段話，表達(dá)自己的看法，并至少提供兩個(gè)論據(jù)。觀點(diǎn)：Socialmediahasbothpositiveandnegativeimpactsonsociety.Ibelievethatsocialmediahasbothpositiveandnegativeimpactsonsociety.Onepositiveaspectisthatitallowspeopletostayconnectedwithfriendsandfamily,eveniftheyarefarapart.Forexample,Icaneasilyvideochatwithmygrandparentswholiveinanothercountry.Ontheotherhand,socialmediacanalsobeasourceofstressandanxiety,aspeopleoftencomparetheirlivestoothers'perfectimages.Thiscanleadtofeelingsofinadequacyandlowself-esteem.Therefore,itisimportanttousesocialmediaresponsiblyandmaintainahealthybalancebetweenonlineandofflinelife.六、英語寫作中的句式多樣性與語法正確性要求：本部分主要考查學(xué)生在英語寫作中運(yùn)用不同句式和保持語法正確性的能力，要求學(xué)生能夠使用多種句式使文章更加生動(dòng)，同時(shí)確保語法無誤。1.選擇正確的句式完成以下句子。a.Itis________thatweshouldtakecareoftheenvironment.b.________Iheardthenews,Iwasshocked.c.________sherealizedhermistake,sheimmediatelycorrectedit.d.________thesunset,theskyturnedabeautifulshadeoforange.2.請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下句子，使用不同的句式進(jìn)行改寫，保持語法正確。原句：Thebookwaswrittenbyafamousauthor.改寫句子：a.Afamousauthorwrotethebook.b.Thebookwaspennedbyarenownedauthor.c.Thisbookisauthoredbyawell-knownwriter.d.Thebookistheworkofadistinguishedauthor.本次試卷答案如下：一、英語寫作中的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)解析1.C.Thestoryisinterestingandthegrammariscorrect.解析：根據(jù)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，故事內(nèi)容有趣且語法正確，符合高分要求。2.段落評(píng)估：優(yōu)點(diǎn)：內(nèi)容豐富，提到了去海灘、玩耍、游泳、建造沙堡、觀看日落和享用晚餐等活動(dòng)，描述了愉快的經(jīng)歷。不足：結(jié)構(gòu)不夠清晰，沒有明確的段落主題句；語法上存在一些小錯(cuò)誤，如“spendthewholedayplayinggamesandswimmingintheocean”中的動(dòng)詞形式應(yīng)保持一致。二、英語寫作中的常見錯(cuò)誤及修改1.a.主謂一致錯(cuò)誤：Thestudentsareenjoytheirholidays.解析：主謂一致錯(cuò)誤，應(yīng)改為“Thestudentsenjoytheirholidays.”b.時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤：Shegoestothestoreeveryday.解析：時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤，應(yīng)改為“Shegoestothestoreeveryday”或“Shegoestothestoreeveryday.”c.介詞錯(cuò)誤：HelivesattheNewYork.解析：介詞錯(cuò)誤，應(yīng)改為“HelivesinNewYork.”d.代詞錯(cuò)誤：Shesaidthatheisagoodteacher.解析：代詞錯(cuò)誤，應(yīng)改為“Shesaidthatheisagoodteacher.”2.修改后的句子：Iamgoingtothestoretomorrowandbuysomeapples.解析：將原句中的“will”改為“amgoingto”以保持時(shí)態(tài)一致，并添加了“and”以連接兩個(gè)動(dòng)作。四、英語寫作中的連貫性與銜接詞的使用1.a.Theweatherwascold,thereforewedecidedtostayindoors.解析：使用“therefore”表示因果關(guān)系，表明天氣冷是決定留在室內(nèi)的原因。b.Iwasfeelingtired,soIdecidedtotakeanap.解析：使用“so”表示結(jié)果，表明感到疲倦是決定午睡的原因。c.AsIarrivedattheairport,theplanewasabouttotakeoff.解析：使用“as”表示時(shí)間上的同時(shí)發(fā)生，表明到達(dá)機(jī)場和飛機(jī)即將起飛是同時(shí)發(fā)生的事件。d.Althoughthemoviewasboring,Istillwatchedituntiltheend.解析：使用“although”表示讓步關(guān)系，表明盡管電影無聊，我還是看完了它。2.a.Wewereallexcitedtogoonvacation.Consequently,wearrivedatthebeach,thesunwasshiningbrightly.解析：使用“consequently”表示結(jié)果，表明因?yàn)榕d奮，所以我們到達(dá)海灘時(shí)陽光明媚。b.AsIsawtheadforthenewrestaurant,Idecidedtotryitout.解析：使用“as”表示時(shí)間上的同時(shí)發(fā)生，表明看到廣告后我決定嘗試新餐廳。c.Ihadnevertriedskydivingbefore.Nonetheless,Ididitandwasscaredbutexhilarated.解析：使用“nonetheless”表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，表明盡管之前沒有嘗試過跳傘，我還是做了，并且感到害怕但也很興奮。d.Oncetheteacherexplainedtheconcept,everythingbecamecleartome.解析：使用“once”表示時(shí)間上的條件，表明一旦老師解釋了概念，一切就變得清晰了。五、英語寫作中的觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)與論據(jù)支持1.a.Tosupportthisview,wecanmentionthatregularexerciseimprovescardiovascularhealth.解析：提供論據(jù)支持觀點(diǎn)，說明定期鍛煉對(duì)心血管健康有益。b.Anotherpointtoconsideristhatexercisecanreducestresslevelsandimprovemood.解析：提供另一個(gè)論據(jù)，說明鍛煉可以降低壓力水平并改善情緒。c.Furthermore,regularexercisehasbeenlinkedtoareducedriskofchronicdiseasessuchasdiabetesandheartdisease.解析：提供進(jìn)一步的論據(jù)，說明定期鍛煉與降低慢性疾?。ㄈ缣悄虿『托呐K?。┑娘L(fēng)險(xiǎn)相關(guān)。d.Lastly,exercisecanenhancecognitivefunctionandimprovememoryandconcentration.解析：提供最后一個(gè)論據(jù)，說明鍛煉可以增強(qiáng)認(rèn)知功能，改善記憶和注意力。2.示例段落：Ibelievethatsocialmediahasbothpositiveandnegativeimpactsonsociety.Onepositiveaspectisthatitallowspeopletostayconnectedwithfriendsandfamily,eveniftheyarefarapart.Forexample,Icaneasilyvideochatwithmygrandparentswholiveinanothercountry.Ontheotherhand,socialmediacanalsobeasourceofstressandanxiety,aspeopleoftencomparetheirlivestoothers'perfectimages.Thiscanleadtofeelingsofinadequacyandlowself-esteem.Therefore,itisimportanttousesocialmediaresponsiblyandmaintainahealthybalancebetweenonlineand