Unit1TeenageLife

Writealetterofadvicegenerationgap(代溝)withparentsbeingaddicted（上癮的）

totheInternet/computergamesgreatpressure（巨大的壓力）fromheavyschoolworkfeelinglonelyandisolated（孤立的）conflicts（矛盾）betweenfriends/classmates

highexpectations（期待）fromparentsandteachers......

Asateenager,whatproblemsdoyouhaveinyourdailylife?Lead-incontents目錄精準(zhǔn)審題，謀篇布局頭腦風(fēng)暴，遣詞造句斟酌詞句，妙筆生花銜接過渡，斐然成篇一、精準(zhǔn)審題，謀篇布局第一步

精準(zhǔn)審題，謀篇布局1、明確體裁話題2、確定時(shí)態(tài)人稱3、布局文章框架4、列出核心要點(diǎn)第一步

精準(zhǔn)審題，謀篇布局明確體裁話題確定時(shí)態(tài)人稱建議信；如何適應(yīng)新環(huán)境一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；第二人稱為主第一步

精準(zhǔn)審題，謀篇布局3.布局文章框架稱呼DearXXX,（頂格）首段：對(duì)收到信進(jìn)行反饋；安慰對(duì)方；想給建議引出后文中段：建議1/2/3+原因/結(jié)果尾段：希望我的建議可以幫到你；期待你的來信落款

Yours,（右對(duì)齊）XXX4.分析題目，列出核心要點(diǎn)1.指出問題所在2.提出擺脫困境、適應(yīng)環(huán)境的建議二、頭腦風(fēng)暴，遣詞造句SusanLuo,anadviserforteenagers,hasreceivedaletteraskingforsomeadvice.problemadviceWhohasaproblem?__________What’stheproblem?______________Whogivesadvice?__________What’stheadvice?1._________________2._________________3.______________________________ChenLeiPlaygamesSusanLuotalktoyourfriendtrynewhobbiesdiscusstheproblemtogetherRead&UnderstandIknowwhatTheproblemis.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.Thisismyadviceandreason(s).

Ithinkmyadvicewillhelp.

Readingfortheorganization頭腦風(fēng)暴收信反饋分析現(xiàn)狀，安慰對(duì)方想給建議，引出后文首段不要太擔(dān)心面臨同樣的問題進(jìn)入高中感覺不好不適應(yīng)高中生活假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Peter作為交換生來到中國(guó)不久，總感覺很難適應(yīng)新環(huán)境，寫信向你尋求建議。請(qǐng)你用英文給Peter回郵件。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：(1)表示理解；(2)提出建議（不少于2點(diǎn)）。DearPeter,A.KnowingthatyouhavecometoChinarecently,I'mwritingwithdelighttoshowmywarmwelcometoyou.B.Knowingthatyouhavedifficultyinadaptingtoanewenvironment,I'mwritingtooffermyadviceasIunderstandhowyoufeel.SentenceBrespondstothewritingtask.

假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Peter作為交換生來到中國(guó)不久，總感覺很難適應(yīng)新環(huán)境，寫信向你尋求建議。請(qǐng)你用英文給Peter回郵件。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：(1)表示理解；(2)提出建議（不少于2點(diǎn)）。DearPeter,

Knowingthatyouhavedifficultyinadaptingtoanewenvironment,I'mwritingtooffermyadviceasIunderstandhowyoufeel.GreetingBeginningThen?BodyThecontentofistogiveadvice.假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Peter作為交換生來到中國(guó)不久，總感覺很難適應(yīng)新環(huán)境，寫信向你尋求建議。請(qǐng)你用英文給Peter回郵件。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：(1)表示理解；(2)提出建議（不少于2點(diǎn)）。DearPeter,

Knowingthatyouhavedifficultyinadaptingtoanewenvironment,I'mwritingtooffermyadviceasIunderstandhowyoufeel.A.First,you

aresupposedto(應(yīng)該)

getusedtolifeinChina.B.First,you

aresupposedto

makemoreChinesefriends.C.First,you

aresupposedto

makemoreChinesefriendswhowillhelpyouwheneverintrouble.Tip1:Adviceshouldbespecific.假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Peter作為交換生來到中國(guó)不久，總感覺很難適應(yīng)新環(huán)境，寫信向你尋求建議。請(qǐng)你用英文給Peter回郵件。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：(1)表示理解；(2)提出建議（不少于2點(diǎn)）。DearPeter,

Knowingthatyouhavedifficultyinadaptingtoanewenvironment,I'mwritingtooffermyadviceasIunderstandhowyoufeel.First,youaresupposedtomakemoreChinesefriendswhowillhelpyouwheneverintrouble.A.Besides,it'sagoodideato

knowtheenvironment.B.Besides,it'sagoodideato

takepartinsomeactivities,whichwillhelpyougetusedtothelifehereeasily.C.Besides,it'sagoodideato

readmoreChinesebookswheneveryouareintrouble.specific假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Peter作為交換生來到中國(guó)不久，總感覺很難適應(yīng)新環(huán)境，寫信向你尋求建議。請(qǐng)你用英文給Peter回郵件。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：(1)表示理解；(2)提出建議（不少于2點(diǎn)）。DearPeter,

Knowingthatyouhavedifficultyinadaptingtoanewenvironment,I'mwritingtooffermyadviceasIunderstandhowyoufeel.First,youaresupposedtomakemoreChinesefriendswhowillhelpyouwheneverintrouble.A.Besides,it'sagoodideato

knowtheenvironment.B.Besides,it'sagoodideato

takepartinsomeactivities,whichwillhelpyougetusedtothelifehereeasily.C.Besides,it'sagoodideato

readmoreChinesebookswheneveryouareintrouble.specificconvincingTip3:Adviceshouldberelevant(相關(guān)的).Writealettertooneofthem,draftyourletteraccordingtotheoutlinebelow.Shareyourletterwitheveryone10september2020DearXuTing，Youwrotethatyoufeellonelyafterschool.

Iunderstandhowyoufeel.Ithinkmaybeyoushouldjointheafter-schoolclass,becausetherearealotofstudentslikeyou.Youcandiscussanythingwiththemorplaysomegames.I'msurethatyouwillfeelmorepleasedinsteadoffeelinglonely.Bestwishes!LiHuaWritingPracticee7d195523061f1c03a90ee8e42cb24248e56383cd534985688F9F494128731F165EE95AB4B0C0A38076AAEA07667B1565C446FC45FF01DFB0E885BCDBDF3A284F3DB14DA61DD97F0BAB2E6C668FB4931DED5FAA0CB712CCE3A8845E13BB5882E1352BF22D26