試卷第=page11頁，共=sectionpages33頁試卷第=page11頁，共=sectionpages33頁專題03書面表達(dá)15篇(深圳中考真題+中考模擬)1．（2024·廣東深圳·中考真題）假如你是李華，你的作品在“theBeautyofNature”主題攝影展上獲得了一等獎(jiǎng)。你的英語老師邀請(qǐng)你在“英語一分鐘演講”上給同學(xué)們做分享。要點(diǎn)如下：1.拍攝的時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容；2.選擇這張照片的原因；3.參賽感受。Dear________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall!ThankYou!【答案】例文：Dearclassmates,MynameisLiHua,whoisinterestedinphotography.HereIwouldliketosharemypicturewithyou.ThepicturewastakenbymeinShenzhenonasunnymorninginApril,whichshowsabeautifulparkwithcolorfulflowersandgreengrass.Ifyouarecarefulenough,youwillalsofindafewbirdsjumpinginthegrassinthepicture.Howcutetheyare!ItissuchanicepicturethatIchoseitforthephotographiccontest.Actually,italsoshowsustheharmonybetweentheanimalsandnature.TakingpartinthiscompetitionmakesmerealizethebeautyofnatureandletusprotectourEarthtogether!That’sall!Thankyou!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為演講稿；②時(shí)態(tài)：以“一般過去時(shí)”和“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏信息，可適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，首先介紹演講的主題，即介紹自己在攝影展上獲得一等獎(jiǎng)的照片；第二步，介紹照片拍攝的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)以及內(nèi)容；第三步，闡述選擇這張照片的原因；最后，表達(dá)自己的參賽感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①beinterestedin對(duì)……感興趣②wouldliketodosth.想要做某事③harmony和諧④takepartin參加⑤realize意識(shí)到[高分句型]①ThepicturewastakenbymeinShenzhenonasunnymorninginApril,whichshowsabeautifulparkwithcolorfulflowersandgreengrass.（which引導(dǎo)定語從句）②Ifyouarecarefulenough,youwillalsofindafewbirdsjumpinginthegrassinthepicture.（If引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句）③ItissuchanicepicturethatIchoseitforthephotographiccontest.（sucha/anadj.+名詞+that從句）2．（2022·廣東深圳·中考真題）假定你是李華，你和同學(xué)們拍了一個(gè)畢業(yè)活動(dòng)視頻，打算做成視頻日志（vlog），參加主題為“青春飛揚(yáng)”的國際中學(xué)生vlog作品展。請(qǐng)給該視頻寫一段解說詞。內(nèi)容包括：1.海邊活動(dòng)：下午：①沙灘排球；②……；晚上：搭帳篷；聚餐和清理垃圾；分享會(huì)。2.活動(dòng)感言。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；4.條理清楚，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規(guī)范。參考詞匯：沖浪surf

帳篷tentHi,everyone!IamLiHua.It’smygreatpleasuretopresentmyvlogtoyou.LastSaturday,wewenttotheseasidetocelebrateourgraduation.Intheafternoon,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Somuchformyvideo.Ihopeyouhaveenjoyedit.Thankyou.【答案】例文Hi,everyone!IamLiHua.lt’smygreatpleasuretopresentmyvlogtoyou.LastSaturday,wewenttotheseasidetocelebrateourgraduation.Intheafternoon,wehadabeachvolleyballgame.Then,weenjoyedthefunofsurfinginthesea.Beforedark,wepickedupthelitteronthebeach.Howmeaningfulitwas!Atnight,weputuptwotentsandhadapicnic.Thefoodcookedbyuswassodelicious.Finally,allofussharedourfeelingsaboutthisfantasticexperience.Notonlycanitpromoteourfriendship,butalsoitleavesusavaluableexperience.Somuchformyvideo.Ihopeyouhaveenjoyedit.Thankyou.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇解說詞，屬于演講稿寫作；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：文章開頭以及要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，按照提示的要點(diǎn)逐點(diǎn)闡述，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接短文開頭，引出話題；第二步，根據(jù)提示的要點(diǎn)介紹在海邊的活動(dòng)，包括下午和晚上的具體活動(dòng)，要列舉具體的事例；第三步，抒發(fā)活動(dòng)帶來的感悟并書寫結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①pickupthelitter撿垃圾②notonly…butalso…不僅……而且……[高分句型]①Howmeaningfulitwas!（how引導(dǎo)的感嘆句）②Thefoodcookedbyuswassodelicious.（過去分詞作定語）③Notonlycanitpromoteourfriendship,butalsoitleavesusavaluableexperience.（部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)）3．（2024·廣東深圳·三模）深圳中小學(xué)已獨(dú)立開設(shè)勞動(dòng)教育必修課，假如你是校學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，請(qǐng)代表廣大學(xué)生給校長寫一封關(guān)于提升勞動(dòng)教育課程的信件，談?wù)勀銓?duì)開設(shè)勞動(dòng)課程的建議和理解。要點(diǎn)提示：1.課程內(nèi)容建議：①……

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③……2.開設(shè)課程的意義：（至少寫3點(diǎn)意義）。要求：1.必須包含以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；4.條理清楚，行文連貫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，書寫規(guī)范。提示詞：開設(shè)run；課程course；木工woodworking；屋頂農(nóng)場(chǎng)rooftopfarm；光榮的gloriousDearheadmaster,IamLiHua,thechairmanoftheStudentUnion.Iamwritingto______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Dearheadmaster,IamLiHua,thechairmanoftheStudentUnion.Iamwritingtosharesomesuggestionsonrunningthecourse.First,theschoolcanofferpaper-cuttingandwoodworkingclasses.Second,wecanbuildarooftopfarmononeofthebuildings,andteacherscanteachushowtoplantvegetablesandfruitsinthefarm.Finally,holdingsomecompetitionslikecookingcompetitionwillbeanicechoice.Wecanalsoinviteparentstojoinintheseactivities.Throughthiscourse,westudentscannotonlylearnsomelifeskillsbutalsotakepartinsocialactivities.Meanwhile,ourschoollifewillbecomemorecolourfulandmeaningful!Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，并突出重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，點(diǎn)明主題，表明寫信的目的是提供一些開設(shè)課程的建議；第二步，具體介紹課程內(nèi)容的建議；第三步，介紹開設(shè)課程的意義。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①holdsomecompetitions舉辦一些比賽②takepartin參加③invitesbtodosth邀請(qǐng)某人做某事④meanwhile同時(shí)[高分句型]①Second,wecanbuildarooftopfarmononeofthebuildings,andteacherscanteachushowtoplantvegetablesandfruitsinthefarm.(and連接的并列句)②Finally,holdingsomecompetitionslikecookingcompetitionwillbeanicechoice.(動(dòng)名詞作主語)4．（2024·廣東深圳·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，結(jié)合自己小區(qū)的實(shí)際，以“Buildingagreenercommunity”為題，用英文寫一份倡議書。參考詞匯：垃圾分類sortouttherubbish；電動(dòng)車motorbike小區(qū)的現(xiàn)狀1.亂扔垃圾；2.亂擺放單車和電動(dòng)車；3.樹倒下了，沒有去維護(hù)、種植。具體提議和做法1.垃圾分類，扔到正確的垃圾桶；2.單車和電動(dòng)車擺放到專門地方。……(自行補(bǔ)充一至兩點(diǎn))號(hào)召和呼吁小區(qū)是我家，每個(gè)人行動(dòng)起來，共建綠色小區(qū)BuildingagreenercommunityAsweallknow,greenmountainsandclearwaterareasgoodasmountainsofgoldandsilver.ItisimportantforeveryonetoprotecttheenvironmentandbuildabeautifulChina.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:BuildingagreenercommunityAsweallknow,greenmountainsandclearwaterareasgoodasmountainsofgoldandsilver.ItisimportantforeveryonetoprotecttheenvironmentandbuildabeautifulChina.AndIthinkfirstweshouldbuildagreenercommunityfirst.Ourcommunityhasmanyproblemsnow.First,itisnotasgreenasbefore.Manypeoplethrowrubbisheverywhere.Second,somepeopleputbikesormotorbikesastheylike,soourcommunitylooksamess.Then,afterthetyphoon,manytreesweredown.Butwedon’trepairthemorplantmoretrees.Itistimeforustotakeactionandsolvetheseproblems.First,we’dbettersortouttherubbishathome,thenweputtherubbishintotherightrubbishbinsinourcommunity.Ithinkitiseasyforustodothat.Second,wecanfindanareaandletallthebikesandmotorbikesbehere.Pleaseputourbikeormotorbikeintherightareainorder.Third,treesareveryimportanttoourenvironment.Weshouldplantmoretreesandtakecareofthetreesthatweredownonthetyphoon.Thecommunityisourhome.Everyoneshouldtakeactionandbuildagreenerandmorebeautifulcommunity.Let’slookforwardtoagreenercommunity!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏表格中信息提示的內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并且突出寫作的要點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹小區(qū)現(xiàn)狀；第二步，介紹關(guān)于創(chuàng)建綠色社區(qū)的具體提議和做法；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)希望有一個(gè)綠色社區(qū)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①takeaction采取行動(dòng)②important重要的③lookforwardto期待[高分句型]①AndIthinkfirstweshouldbuildagreenercommunityfirst.(賓語從句)②Weshouldplantmoretreesandtakecareofthetreesthatweredownonthetyphoon.(定語從句)5．（2024·廣東深圳·三模）很多同學(xué)在暑假期間做過多種多樣的創(chuàng)意性作業(yè)，如海報(bào)，小調(diào)查，Vlog制作等。創(chuàng)意性作業(yè)可以幫助同學(xué)們發(fā)展多種能力。最近，校英文報(bào)開展以“MyCreativeHomework”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你寫一篇文章，講述自身經(jīng)歷，并提出合理建議。內(nèi)容：1.讓你印象最深刻的一次創(chuàng)意性作業(yè)（內(nèi)容、收獲）；2.對(duì)創(chuàng)意性作業(yè)的建議（形式或內(nèi)容、理由）；3.呼吁同學(xué)們重視創(chuàng)意性作業(yè)。要求:1.80-120詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱；3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使語句通順、條理清楚、意義連貫；4.書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔。MyCreativeHomeworkDuringthesummervacation,manystudentscompletedavarietyofcreativeassignments,suchasdesigningposters,conductingsurveys,andmakinglogs.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MyCreativeHomeworkDuringthesummervacation,manystudentscompletedavarietyofcreativeassignments,suchasdesigningposters,conductingsurveys,andmakinglogs.Doinghomeworkhelpsustopracticeandusewhatwe’velearnedinclass.DoingcreativehomeworkmakesusmoreinterestedinEnglish.Onceourteacheraskedustowritealettertoaforeignfriendofhers.WeweretoldtointroducetheMid-AutumnFestivalintheletter.ItnotonlyhelpedmeimprovemywrittenskillsbutalsoprovidedagoodchancetospreadChinesetraditionalculture.Inmyopinion,it’salsoagoodchoicetodrawmindmaps.Ithelpsustohaveabetterunderstandingofthelessons.Besides,wecanlearntowatchEnglishmovies,sincemostofuslovemovies.Creativehomeworkisofgreatvalueforus.Let’stryourbesttodomorecreativehomework.Ihopewe’llbecomesmarterbydoingcreativehomework.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：主要時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)；③提示：根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，點(diǎn)明自己觀點(diǎn)；第二步，描述自己經(jīng)歷；第三步，提出呼吁和希望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①notonly...butalso不僅……而且②Inmyopinion在我看來③ofgreatvalue很有價(jià)值[高分句型]①Doinghomeworkhelpsustopracticeandusewhatwe’velearnedinclass.（what引導(dǎo)賓語從句）②Ihopewe’llbecomesmarterbydoingcreativehomework.（省略that的賓語從句）6．（2024·廣東深圳·一模）學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)正在招募志愿者，為外國來訪學(xué)生展示傳統(tǒng)手工制作(如剪紙、風(fēng)箏、燈籠等)，以弘揚(yáng)中華傳統(tǒng)文化。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你用英語給校學(xué)生會(huì)寫一封自薦信，在信中說明你申請(qǐng)成為志愿者的理由以及你的優(yōu)勢(shì)。內(nèi)容提示：1.你申請(qǐng)志愿者的理由；2.你的優(yōu)勢(shì)；3.你當(dāng)選之后的打算。參考詞匯：傳統(tǒng)手工制作traditionalChinesehandicrafts要求：1.結(jié)構(gòu)完整，要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.表達(dá)通順，語言規(guī)范，書寫清晰；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)的人名、校名等信息；4.詞數(shù)80—100詞。文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearSir/Madam,IamLiHua.LearningthattheStudentUnionislookingforvolunteers,I’mwritingtoapplytobecomeavolunteer._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearSir/Madam,IamLiHua.LearningthattheStudentUnionislookingforvolunteers,I’mwritingtoapplytobecomeavolunteer.ThereasonwhyIwanttobeavolunteerofyourprogramisthatIloveChinesecultureverymuchandIwanttospreadChinesecultureandmakepeoplefromothercountriesknowmoreaboutChina.Besides,IcanhaveachancetocommunicateinEnglishwithothersandmakemorefriends.Ihavemanyadvantagestobeavolunteer.First,IamverygoodatEnglish,soIcantalkwiththemveryeasily.Second,Iamveryoutgoing.Icanhaveabettercommunicationwithforeignstudents.What’smore,Ihavesimilarworkexperiencesasavolunteerinotheractivities.IthinktraditionalChinesecultureisimportantanduseful.Iamgoingtoshowthetraditionalhandicraft,suchaspapercutting,kites,lanternstospreadthetraditionalChineseculture.IfIhavethechance,Icanmakevideostotellinternationalstudentsthehistoryofkitesandteachthemtomakekites.I’msuretheywillbeveryinterestedinit.I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；。③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中每一項(xiàng)內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹你申請(qǐng)志愿者的理由；第二步，描述你的優(yōu)勢(shì)；第三步，最后介紹你當(dāng)選之后的打算。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①what’smore而且②suchas比如③beinterestedin對(duì)……感興趣[高分句型]①ThereasonwhyIwanttobeavolunteerofyourprogramisthatIloveChinesecultureverymuchandIwanttospreadChinesecultureandmakepeoplefromothercountriesknowmoreaboutChina.（why引導(dǎo)定語從句，that引導(dǎo)表語從句）②IthinktraditionalChinesecultureisimportantanduseful.（省略引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句）③IfIhavethechance,Icanmakevideostotellinternationalstudentsthehistoryofkitesandteachthemtomakekites.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）7．（2024·廣東深圳·二模）按要求寫作短文。為了貫徹落實(shí)習(xí)近平總書記關(guān)于教育、體育的重要論述，深圳市教育局印發(fā)了《深圳市加強(qiáng)和改進(jìn)學(xué)校體育工作的實(shí)施意見》，要求從2024年1月1日起，義務(wù)教育階段學(xué)校每天開設(shè)一節(jié)體育課。假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Peter對(duì)此十分感興趣，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封郵件，介紹“每天一節(jié)體育課”的實(shí)施情況，內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn):1.每天一節(jié)體育課的意義；2.介紹你校體育課的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；3.你對(duì)保持健康的其它建議(不少于兩條建議)。要求：1.80詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；4.標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，書面整潔。參考詞匯：每天一節(jié)體育課政策ThepolicyofdailyPEclassDearPeter,KnowingthatyouareinterestedinthepolicyofdailyPEclass,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doyouhaveotheradvicetokeephealthy?Hopetohearfromyousoon!YoursLiHua【答案】例文DearPeter,KnowingthatyouareinterestedinthepolicyofdailyPEclass,I’mwritingthisemailtotellyoumoredetails.Asweallknow,healthisthemostimportantthinginourdailylife.It’snecessarytospendenoughtimeexercisingoutdoors.Itissuchagreatpolicythatweallbenefitalotfromit.Inmyschool,wedomanyactivitiesinPEclass.Forexample,wewillrunorplaybasketball.Inordertokeephealthy,Ialsoeatmorevegetablesandfruitseveryday.Besides,IwillsleepearlytomakesureIhaveenoughrest.Doyouhaveothersuggestionsonkeepinghealthy?Hopetohearfromyousoon!YoursLiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹學(xué)校“每天一節(jié)體育課”的實(shí)施情況，以及對(duì)保持健康的建議。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹每天一節(jié)體育課的意義；第二步，介紹你校體育課的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；第三步，介紹你對(duì)保持健康的其它建議。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①spendtimedoingsth.花費(fèi)時(shí)間做某事②benefitfrom從……中獲益③inorderto為了④makesure確保[高分句型]①Itissuchagreatpolicythatweallbenefitalotfromit.(such...that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句)②Inordertokeephealthy,Ialsoeatmorevegetablesandfruitseveryday.(動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語)8．（2024·廣東深圳·二模）為促進(jìn)學(xué)生身心健康成長，深圳市中小學(xué)正在全面推行“每天一節(jié)體育課”。假定你是學(xué)校英語報(bào)小記者，請(qǐng)就你校體育課開展情況完成一篇新聞報(bào)道。要點(diǎn)：1.描述學(xué)校體育課開設(shè)情況：①上課頻率②上課形式③活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；2.介紹一項(xiàng)最受同學(xué)們歡迎的體育活動(dòng)；3.總結(jié)同學(xué)們的感受及看法（分別至少寫1點(diǎn)）。要求：1.要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；3.條理清晰，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規(guī)范；4.詞數(shù)80左右（開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。參考詞匯：體育PE(PhysicalEducation)DailyPEClassesatOurSchoolToimprovestudents’health,primaryschoolsandjuniorhighschoolsinShenzhenhavehadadailyPEclasssincethebeginningofthisterm.Inourschool_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DailyPEClassesatOurSchoolToimprovestudents’health,primaryschoolsandjuniorhighschoolsinShenzhenhavehadadailyPEclasssincethebeginningofthisterm.Inourschool,studentsalsohaveaPEclasseveryday.BesidesthreeregularPEclasses,studentshaveonemusic-basedexerciseclassandonesportsgameclasseveryweek.Theycanjoinincolourfulsportsactivities,likebasketball,tabletennis,ropeskipping,swimmingandkungfuatschool.Amongthem,oneofthestudents’favouritesportsisbasketball.Notonlycanitofferstudentsachancetocommunicatewithteammatesinsports,butitalsohelpsimprovetheirlearningefficiencyafterplayingbasketball.“I’mgladthatthedailyPEclassesenrichmyschoollifeaswellasreducemystress.”saidLiuXiaojun,aneighthgrader.AndmoststudentsholdthesameideaasLiu.Theythinktheyaregoodfortheirphysicalandmentalhealth.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇新聞報(bào)道；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，條理清晰，語句連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，描述學(xué)校體育課開設(shè)情況；第二步，介紹一項(xiàng)最受同學(xué)們歡迎的體育活動(dòng)；第三步，總結(jié)同學(xué)們的感受及看法。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①joinin加入②communicatewith與……交流③learningefficiency學(xué)習(xí)效率[高分句型]Theythinktheyaregoodfortheirphysicalandmentalhealth.（賓語從句）9．（2024·廣東深圳·一模）隨著5G、大數(shù)據(jù)、物聯(lián)網(wǎng)、人工智能等的廣泛運(yùn)用，我們的生活將發(fā)生翻天覆地的改變。假設(shè)你是陽光中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你校英語報(bào)正在舉辦主題為“Ourlifein20years”的征文比賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇征文，要點(diǎn)包括：1.高科技的廣泛運(yùn)用將使我們的未來生活越來越智能化；2.暢想未來生活在以下方面的變化：①出行方式；②智能家居；③……3.中學(xué)生應(yīng)努力學(xué)習(xí)，更好地迎接未來的智慧生活。寫作要求：1.80詞左右(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù))。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱。3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使語句通順，條理清晰、意思連貫。參考詞匯：家用電器electricalappliance

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無人駕駛交通工具self-drivingvehicleOurlifein20yearsWhatwillourlifebelikein20years?Withoutdoubt,ourlifewill______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Ourlifein20yearsWhatwillourlifebelikein20years?Withoutdoubt,ourlifewillbecomemoreandmoreintelligentwiththerapiddevelopmentandwideapplicationofhightechnology.Therewillbelotsofdramaticchangesinourlife.Firstly,travellingaroundwillbemucheasier.Wecangoanywherebyself-drivingvehicle.Subsequently,ourhomewillbemorecomfortable.Robotsandsmartelectricalappliancescanworkautomaticallyandprovidepersonalizedservicesfortheowners.Moreover,schoolswillhaveahigh-techmakeover.WithsmartschoolsystemandtechnologiessuchasVRglasses,learningwillbecomeafunexperience.Theremarkablechangesin20yearsarenotjusttheabove.Asstudents,weshouldstudyhardforthefuturesmartlife.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般將來時(shí)”為主；③提示：根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作，可適當(dāng)增添細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫，注意無單詞及語法錯(cuò)誤。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹未來的生活將是什么樣的；第二步，具體介紹未來生活的變化；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表達(dá)中學(xué)生應(yīng)努力學(xué)習(xí)，迎接未來的智慧生活。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①moreandmore越來越……②subsequently其次③providesthforsb提供某人某物[高分句型]①Firstly,travellingaroundwillbemucheasier.(動(dòng)名詞作主語)②WithsmartschoolsystemandtechnologiessuchasVRglasses,learningwillbecomeafunexperience.(with表伴隨)10．（2023·廣東深圳·三模）隨著社會(huì)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)日益激烈，中學(xué)生的壓力也日趨增加。對(duì)于中學(xué)生早上的進(jìn)校時(shí)間是否應(yīng)該被推遲到八點(diǎn)，大家各抒己見。你認(rèn)為推遲入校時(shí)間的做法好不好？你覺得最合理的入校時(shí)間是幾點(diǎn)？請(qǐng)以“Whenshouldschoolbegin?”為題寫一篇短文。要點(diǎn)：1.中學(xué)生是否有充足的睡眠？2.你是否贊同進(jìn)校時(shí)間推遲到八點(diǎn)。（寫出至少兩點(diǎn)理由）要求：1.語句通順，意思連貫，可根據(jù)提示適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得提及個(gè)人身份的相關(guān)信息，如人名、校名或地名等；3.詞數(shù)80—100，開頭結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。詞匯：推遲putoff；合理的reasonableWhenshouldschoolbegin?Recently,thelatestsurveyreleasedbytheChinaYouthResearchCentershowsthat_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Whenshouldschoolbegin?Recently,thelatestsurveyreleasedbytheChinaYouthResearchCentershowsthatmiddleschoolstudentshaven’tgotenoughsleepeverynight.Theissue“Whenshouldschoolbegin”hasarousedtheconcernofsociety.Frommypointofview,startingtheschooldaylatercouldbenefitstudentsalot.Myreasonsareasfollows.First,sufficientsleeptimeenablesstudents’bodiestogetenoughrest,whichisgoodfortheirhealth.Second,alaterstartcangivestudentsmoretimetoeatbreakfastathome.Finally,italsomeansthatlessonsfinishlatersothatparentscanpicktheirchildrenupontheirwayhome.Inbrief,delayingtheschooldayishelpfulnotonlytostudentsbutalsototheirparents.Ithinkthatschoolbeginningateighto’clockeverymorningisreasonable.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇議論文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步，整體說明中學(xué)生是否有充足的睡眠；第二步，介紹你是否贊同進(jìn)校時(shí)間推遲到八點(diǎn)并給出理由；第三步，最后總結(jié)文章。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①frommypointofview在我看來②begoodfor對(duì)……有好處③inbrief總之[高分句型]①First,sufficientsleeptimeenablesstudents’bodiestogetenoughrest,whichisgoodfortheirhealth.（which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）②Finally,italsomeansthatlessonsfinishlatersothatparentscanpicktheirchildrenupontheirwayhome.（sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句）11．（2023·廣東深圳·二模）

假如你是李華，在端午節(jié)來臨之際，你們學(xué)校將舉行“傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日進(jìn)校園（WelcomeChineseTraditionalFestivalsintoOurCampus）”之端午節(jié)慶祝活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英文給你的外國朋友Alex寫一封電子郵件，邀請(qǐng)他參加這次活動(dòng)。要點(diǎn)：活動(dòng)時(shí)間與地點(diǎn)6月2日下午2:00-5:00；學(xué)校大堂活動(dòng)內(nèi)容1.觀看關(guān)于端午節(jié)歷史文化的短片2.學(xué)做香囊，學(xué)包粽子3.品嘗各種美味的粽子4.……（請(qǐng)你自己補(bǔ)充，至少一個(gè)活動(dòng)）活動(dòng)意義……（請(qǐng)你自己補(bǔ)充，至少兩點(diǎn)）要求：必須包括以上全部要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。1.標(biāo)點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)確，書面整潔；2.80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞匯內(nèi)；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。參考詞匯：sachet香囊，rice

ricedumpling粽子DearAlex,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearAlex,IknowyouareinterestedinChinesetraditionalculture.DuringtheDragonBoatFestival,ourschoolwillholdanactivitycalled“WelcomeChineseTraditionalFestivalsintoOurCampus”at2:00-5:00p.m.onJune2ndintheschoolhall.First,wewillwatchashortfilmaboutthehistoryandcultureoftheDragonBoatFestival.Andthenwewilllearnhowtomakesachetsandricedumplings.Atlast,wewilltasteallkindsofdeliciouszongzi.Wewillwatchthedragonboatraces,too.

Wealllovethefestivalbecauseit’sagoodchancetolookbackonhistoryandawonderfultimetogettogether.Ihopeyoucancometocelebrateitwithus.I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般將來時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，必須包括以上全部要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。直接說明活動(dòng)主題，并交代時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；第二步，具體闡述活動(dòng)內(nèi)容。按照時(shí)間先后“first…；then…；atlast…”詳述活動(dòng)計(jì)劃；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。希望Alex能接受這次邀請(qǐng)參加這次活動(dòng)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①beinterestedin對(duì)……感興趣②lookbackon回顧③allkindsof各種各樣的④lookforwardto盼望[高分句型]①Andthenwewilllearnhowtomakesachetsandricedumplings.（疑問詞+不定式）②Wealllovethefestivalbecauseit’sagoodchancetolookbackonhistoryandawonderfultimetogettogether.（原因狀語從句）12．（2023·廣東深圳·二模）假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Tony即將在暑假來深圳研學(xué)旅行。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示給他寫一封郵件，幫助他適應(yīng)在深圳的生活。內(nèi)容提示：（1）歡迎他來深研學(xué)旅行；（2）你的建議：學(xué)習(xí)一些中國習(xí)俗，如使用筷子等；購物時(shí)可以使用移動(dòng)支付；……（3）你對(duì)他的祝福。要求：（1）80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；（3）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；（4）標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，書面整潔。參考詞匯：研學(xué)旅行studytrip

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