第第頁仁愛科普版（2024）七年級(jí)下冊(cè)英語期末復(fù)習(xí)：寫作指導(dǎo)學(xué)案寫作技巧：審題認(rèn)真審題是寫好作文的前提，一般地，審題包含兩個(gè)要素：審要求、審主體信息和要點(diǎn)。1.

審要求：明確寫作要求以確定寫作對(duì)象、體裁、主題，選定要使用的人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)，此外，要注意詞數(shù)要求；2.

審主體信息和要點(diǎn)：總覽題目要求，劃分信息和要點(diǎn)，特別是圖表信息。

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謀篇布局：列提綱、分段落在全面審題、充分理解題目的基礎(chǔ)上，可以著手準(zhǔn)備進(jìn)行寫作，寫作以說明性寫作為主，主要讓考生介紹某些東西、對(duì)某些現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行描述或?qū)δ承﹩栴}進(jìn)行答復(fù)。與故事類不同，說明性寫作意味著段與段之間的內(nèi)在聯(lián)系相對(duì)松散，可以根據(jù)需要將整篇作文分為若干個(gè)段落，不同段落各有側(cè)重，最后形成一篇完整的文章。(三)

檢查優(yōu)化正如中考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)所述，要拿高分作文，文章須得語句通順，意思連貫、流暢，所以檢查優(yōu)化很重要。1.優(yōu)化句子在有把握的前提下，要靈活變換一些詞匯和句式。2.巧用過渡句優(yōu)化過渡句能起到承上啟下，達(dá)到上下文連貫的作用，如本文中可用HereI’vegotgoodnewsforyou.或Hereisapieceofgoodnews.作為過渡句。此外，在寫作過程中，我們也經(jīng)常用Letmetellyousomethingaboutit./NowI’llshowyou…/Letmesharethegoodnewswithyou.等來作為過渡句。結(jié)尾句應(yīng)簡(jiǎn)明扼要，再現(xiàn)主題。如IhopeyouwillcomeandexperienceChineseWushuculture./IhopeyoucanalsoenjoyChineseWushuculture./Wouldyouliketocomeandjoinus？等。2.得體運(yùn)用連接詞常見的連詞有and（并列），however（轉(zhuǎn)折），while（對(duì)比），because（因果），if（條件），so….that/such…that（結(jié)果），sothat（目的），evenif（讓步）等。此外，作文中常用的起始連詞有atfirst，firstofall,inthebeginning；歸納有g(shù)enerallyspeaking；遞進(jìn)有besides，what’smore/worst；表歸納總結(jié)的連詞，有inaword,allinall等。（四）再次復(fù)核，規(guī)范書寫文章初稿擬好之后，要檢查格式、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)、大小寫、較長(zhǎng)單詞的拼寫、習(xí)慣用語、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等是否正確，關(guān)聯(lián)詞使用是否恰當(dāng)，詞數(shù)是否符合要求，是否存在中國(guó)式英語等。要規(guī)范地寫好每個(gè)字母、單詞、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)以及大小寫，保證卷面整潔。七下話題必備1．購物是我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪幸豁?xiàng)重要的活動(dòng)，人們幾乎每天都要買東西，但怎么合理購物，理性消費(fèi)，做一個(gè)聰明的購物者呢？假如你們的?？⒄Z專欄正在以“HowtoDoShoppingWisely?”為題開展征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)寫作要求，結(jié)合自身實(shí)際談?wù)勀闶侨绾温斆鞯刭徫锏?。HowtoDoShoppingWisely?BeforeshoppingMakeashoppinglistMakeshoppingplansDuringshoppingBecarefulThinkagainOthers…寫作要求：(1)文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，書寫規(guī)范；(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)本人姓名或校名；(3)詞數(shù)70個(gè)左右(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。參考詞匯：first第一；second第二；lastbutnotleast最后同樣重要的是【答案】例文：HowtoDoShoppingWisely?Shoppingisanimportantactivityinourlife.Buthowtoshopwiselyandbeasmartshopper?Herearemyways.First,Ialwaysmakeashoppinglistbeforegoingshopping.IwritedownwhatIneedandonlybuythingsonthelist.Itcanhelpmesavetimeandmoney.Ialwaysmakeaplan,too.Iknowhowmuchmoneytopay.Second,Iamcareful.Icheckdifferentshopstolookforthebestprice.AndIthinkagainbeforeImakepayments.Lastbutnotleast,ifwecansharesomethingwithourbrothersorsisters,thereisnoneedtobuyit.Let’sbeasmartshopperanddoshoppingwisely!2．如今，很多人喜歡在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上點(diǎn)餐。老師要求你們?cè)谙轮芤坏挠⒄Z課上就互聯(lián)網(wǎng)點(diǎn)餐這一現(xiàn)象，談?wù)勊睦c弊。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)寫作要求，談?wù)勀愕目捶?。OrderingFoodOnline,GoodorBad?Advantages(優(yōu)點(diǎn))方便(convenient)快捷，品種多樣，節(jié)省時(shí)間……Disadvantages(缺點(diǎn))塑料包裝袋(plasticbags)對(duì)環(huán)境(environment)不利，經(jīng)常吃外賣食品(takeaway)對(duì)健康不好……Youridea……寫作要求：(1)文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，書寫規(guī)范；(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)本人姓名或校名；(3)詞數(shù)70個(gè)左右(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))?！敬鸢浮坷模?/p>

OrderingFoodOnline,GoodorBad?Nowadays,manypeoplelikeorderingfoodonline.Isitgoodorbad?Somepeoplethinkit’sgoodtoorderfoodonlinebecauseitisconvenientandfast.Itcanhelpsavetime.Also,thefoodischeapanddelicious.Besides,wehavemanykindsoffoodtochoosefrom.However,otherpeoplehavedifferentideas.Theysayeatingtakeawaytoooftenisbadforhealth,becausetakeawaymaynotbefreshfood.Andtheplasticbagsofthefoodarebadfortheenvironment.Ithinkwecanorderfoodonlinesometimes,butnottoooften.3．如何做一個(gè)聰明謹(jǐn)慎的購物者是我們需要掌握的一項(xiàng)重要的生活技能。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合下面的圖示信息，以“HowtoBeaSmartandCarefulShopper”為題，向?？挠⒄Z專欄投稿分享一下如何成為一個(gè)聰明謹(jǐn)慎的購物者。寫作要求：（1）文中須包含以下圖表中的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；（3）詞數(shù)65詞左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。【答案】例文：HowtoBeaSmartandCarefulShopperIt’sgreatfunknowinghowtobeasmartandcarefulshopper.Letmetellyousomethingaboutit.Wecanmakeashoppinglistandonlybuythethingsonthelist.Whenwebuythings,wecanlookforthingsonsale.Wecanalsocheckdifferentshopstolookforthebestprice.Beforemakingpayments,weneedtocheckthepriceagain.Ifwecansharesomethingwithourbrothersorsisters,thereisnoneedtobuyit.Let’sbeasmartandcarefulshopper!4．水是我們生活中最常見的東西，也是我們生活中非常重要的東西之一，所以我們要節(jié)約用水，保護(hù)水資源。假如你們?？挠⒄Z專欄以“家庭節(jié)約用水”為主題開展征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)寫作要求，結(jié)合自身實(shí)際談?wù)勀愕恼J(rèn)識(shí)和做法。HowtoSaveWateratHomeTheimportanceofwatervaluable(珍貴的),useful,weuseitto...Howtosavewaterathometakeaquickshower,uselesswater,turnoffthetap...寫作要求：(1)文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，書寫規(guī)范；(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)本人姓名或校名；(3)詞數(shù)70個(gè)左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。參考詞匯:firstofall首先;then然后;intheend最后;usedwater用過的水【答案】例文HowtoSaveWateratHomeWaterisveryvaluableanduseful.Weuseittodolotsofthingsinourlife.Itisimportantforustosavewater.Howtosavewaterathome?Firstofall,weshouldtakeaquickshowerbecauseituseslesswater.Thenturnoffthetapwhenwebrushourteeth.Intheend,remembertowaterplantswithusedwater.Itcanmakefulluseofwater.Intheseways,wecansavealotofwater.Let’stryourbesttosavewater.5．水在我們的生活中非常重要，水資源非常珍貴，所以我們應(yīng)該節(jié)約用水。假如英語口語課上，老師要求你以“ActNowtoSaveWater”為題，談?wù)勆钪欣速M(fèi)水的現(xiàn)象和節(jié)約用水的方法。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)寫作要求寫一篇英語短文，為你的口語課做準(zhǔn)備。Problemsofwastingwatertakeabathdrip(滴;漏)fromthetap…Waystosavewatertakeaquickshowerfix(修理)寫作要求：(1)文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，書寫規(guī)范；(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)本人姓名或校名；(3)詞數(shù)70個(gè)左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))?！敬鸢浮坷腁ctNowtoSaveWaterWaterisveryvaluable,butmanypeopleoftenwastewaterintheirdailylife.Forexample,somepeopletakeabathforalongtime.Somepeopleoftendon’tturnoffthetapwell,sothewaterdripsfromthetap.Sometimespeopleusetoomuchwatertowashclothes.Thenwhatshouldwedotosavewater?First,weshouldtakeaquickshower.Second,weshouldturnoffthetapwellafterweuseit.Ifthereisatrip,fixit.Third,whenwedosomewashing,weshoulduseaslittlewateraspossible.Waterisreallyimportanttous.Let’ssavewaterfromnowon.每年4月22日是世界地球日。你校英語社擬開展以“Let’sProtectOurEarthTogether”為主題的英語演講活動(dòng)，向全校師生發(fā)出共同保護(hù)地球的倡議。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇70詞左右的英語演講稿。注意事項(xiàng)：1.必須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名、校名和地名?！敬鸢浮坷模篈sweallknow,theearthisourhome.Weshouldprotectit.Athome,wecansavewaterandturnoffthelightswhenleavingrooms.Atschool,makingapostertocallonmorepeopletoprotecttheearthisagoodidea.Also,wecanreusepaperbecauseitisaneffectivewaytolowerenergyconsumptionduringpaper-makingprocesses.Inthecommunity,weshouldsorttherubbishtomakeourenvironmentclean.Let’stakeactiontoprotectourearthfromnowoninordertocreateasustainableandbeautifullivingenvironmentforfuturegenerations.Thankyouforyourlistening.7．假如你是康康，你和家人上周去了山上露營(yíng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)寫作要求用英語寫一篇短文，介紹你的旅行經(jīng)歷。WhendidyougothereLastweekendWheredidyougocampingInthemountainWhodidyougowithMyfamilyHowdidyougothereBycarWhatwastheweatherlikeItwassunnyandwindyWhatdidyoudoSetupthetent,gotwater,cookedlunchandwentfishingHowwasyourtripWonderful寫作要求：(1)短文需要包含表格中所提示的全部要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，書寫規(guī)范；(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)本人姓名或校名；(3)詞數(shù)70個(gè)左右。【答案】例文ATriptotheMountainLastweekend,Icampedinthemountainwithmyfamilybycar.Theweatherwassunnyandwindy.First,whenwegotthere,Ihelpedmyfathersetupthetent.Then,wefoundabigriver.Thewaterwasclean,sowegotsomewater.Next,wehelpedmymothercookandhadlunchtogether.Thefoodwasdelicious.Later,Iwentfishingwithmyfatherandgotalotoffish.Finally,wereturnedtoourhome.Thetripwaswonderfulandwewerehappythatday.8．好的團(tuán)隊(duì)要有團(tuán)隊(duì)精神。每位成員都應(yīng)該積極參與團(tuán)隊(duì)活動(dòng),互相幫助。假如你是小組在組織活動(dòng)時(shí),遇到個(gè)別組員不積極參與的情況,你會(huì)怎么辦?請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容提示,寫篇短文,提出合理建議。BuildingBetterTeamworkTheproblemsometeammembersarenotactivein...Usefulsuggestions●communicate(交流)with...;●setsometeamrulestogether;●discusstheproblemswith...;Buildingbetterteamworkisimportantinstudents’dailystudy.Butsometeammembersarenotactiveinactivities.Asateammember,Iwilltrytohelpothers.First,IwillcommunicatewiththeteammembersbecauseIwanttofindouttheirdifficulties.AndthenIwilltrymybesttohelpthemoutofthedifficulties.Second,tomaketheactivitiesgowell,wewillsetsometeamrulestogether.Third,Iwilldiscusstheproblemswithmyteacher.Myteacherwillgivemesomeadviceonhowtosolvetheproblems.Finally,Ithinkitisimportanttocareforeachother.Andeveryoneshouldtrytomaketheteambetter.9．假設(shè)你叫李明,你打算向某學(xué)生英文網(wǎng)站投稿,介紹你學(xué)校的校規(guī)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖內(nèi)容提示,用英文寫一篇短文。注意:1.可在思維導(dǎo)圖內(nèi)容提示的基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)拓展信息；2.語句連貫,詞數(shù)80左右。MySchoolRulesHi,I’mLiMing.I’dliketointroducemyschoolrulestoyou.First,wemustarriveontimeforclassesandneverbelate.Weneedtofinishourhomeworkcarefullyeveryday.Second,wemustwearschooluniformsonweekdays.Thiscankeepuslookingtidy.Third,weshouldbepoliteandrespectourteachersandclassmates.What’smore,wemusttalkquietlyinthelibraryandmustn'trunintheclassroom.It’sveryimportanttofollowtheschoolrules.Theycanhelpusmakeourschoollifesaferandbetter.10．假如你是Alice,這周日你約了在你校學(xué)習(xí)的英國(guó)交換生Helen去一座新公園游玩。你在預(yù)約門票時(shí)看到了公園的一些規(guī)定。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示寫一封郵件,將這些規(guī)定告知Helen。要求:(1)要點(diǎn)齊全,語句通順,語法正確,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;(2)詞數(shù)70左右。參考詞匯:walkdogs遛狗;ridebikes騎自行車DearHelen,Howareyou?We’llgotothenewparkthisSunday.Therearesomerulesinthepark.Letmetellyouaboutthem.First,wecan'twalkdogsinthepark.Second,wemustkeeptheparkclean.Third,theparkisopenfrom6a.m.to10p.m.Fourth,don’tswimintheriver.Finally,wecan’trideourbikesinthepark.Thosearetheparkrules.Weallneedtofollowthem.Whataboutmeetingatthebusstopat9a.m.?Writetomesoon.Yours,Alice11．在你的學(xué)習(xí)生活中，你一定做過很多讓自己感到幸?？鞓返氖虑椋鐜椭鷦e人、讀書、做志愿服務(wù)等。請(qǐng)以“______makesmehappy”為題，根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)和要求用英語寫一篇短文。提示詞：dogood做好事

helpothers幫助他人

dosports做運(yùn)動(dòng)

workhard努力學(xué)習(xí)要點(diǎn)：1.什么讓你快樂；2.在生活中你是如何做的。要求：1.參考要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；4.詞數(shù)不少于70?！敬鸢浮?/p>

HelpingOthersMakesMeHappy

Helpingothersmakesmehappybecauseitgivesmeasenseofpurposeandfulfillment.WheneverIassistsomeone,whetherit’shelpingaclassmatewithhomeworkorvolunteeringinmycommunity,Ifeeladeepsenseofjoy.Ibelievethatsmallactsofkindnesscanmakeabigdifferenceinsomeone’slife.

Inmydailylife,ItrytobeattentivetothosearoundmeandofferhelpwheneverIcan.Thisnotonlymakesothershappybutalsobringsmegreatsatisfactionandhappiness. 12．假如你是李華，你所在的陽光社區(qū)將于下個(gè)月開放社區(qū)圖書館，現(xiàn)面向全社區(qū)招募志愿者。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英語寫一封自薦信。內(nèi)容需包含：1.性格特點(diǎn)：樂于助人，做事細(xì)心；2.愛好：熱愛讀書……3.你對(duì)志愿工作的看法：……注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右?？蛇m當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.郵件已給出的部分，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?！敬鸢浮坷腄earSir/Madam,I’mLiHua.I’mwritingtorecommendmyselfasavolunteerofthelibraryinourcommunity.I’malwayswillingtohelpothers.Whenmyclassmateshavetroublewiththeirstudies,Ioftenoffermyhelppatiently.Also,Iamacarefulperson.Ialwayspayattentiontodetails,soIcanorganizeactivitieswell.Ilovereadingverymuch.Ioftenlosemyselfindifferentkindsofbooks,likeexcitingnovelsandinterestingsciencebooks.Icansharemyfavoritebookswithcommunitymembers.Ibelievebeingavolunteerisagreatchancetohelpothersandimprovemyself.Itcanbringjoytoothersandmakemegrowatthesametime.Therefore,Iamwillingtospendmyfreetimedoingmeaningfulthingsforourcommunity.IwillbethankfulifIgetthechance.Yourssincerely,LiHua13．五一勞動(dòng)節(jié)“MayDay”即將來臨，一位名叫Jack的交換生將在假期來到成都，并住在你家。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片信息寫一封信，簡(jiǎn)單介紹一下你自己和你的生活方式，及家庭規(guī)則。以便Jack能了解你，從而更快適應(yīng)這里的生活。要求：1.內(nèi)容須包括提示的所有信息，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；2.不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱等個(gè)人信息；3.詞數(shù)80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)?！敬鸢浮縖范文]DearJack,MayDayiscoming!Iamveryhappytohearthatyou’llcometoChengdu.Letmetellyousomethingaboutmyselfandmyfa